With such an attack, Mu You trembled again, and then there was some golden liquid on the ground...

"I, I've grown up...so, so, signs...started to develop..."

"what!"

Mu You suddenly felt something, and then hurriedly clutched her skirt, blushing as if she could bleed... She, she's incontinent!

This this…

"I'm sorry! Big Brother! Woo!!!"

Mu You turned around and ran away, too ashamed to see anyone.

Only Qin Bai was left with a bewildered expression, and the corners of his eyes twitched slightly.

But this child was scared to pee, oh no, he has grown up now... It should be said that this girl...

This is really...

Helpless, after Qin Bai cleaned up the puddle on the ground with a cleaning talisman, he could only continue walking towards Xiayue Dojo.

But when he came to the upper level of Shengxi Pavilion, he looked at the entrances of the dojos and fell into confusion for a while.

But suddenly, she saw a very cute little girl walking out from the door of a dojo.

Qin Bai hurried over and asked softly:

"Dare to ask this little sister..."

"Who do you call little sister?" The girl glared at Qin Bai angrily.

"Hmm... this junior sister..." Qin Bai said tentatively.

And the little girl's eyes became complicated, and many expressions flashed across her face for a while, either guilty or angry, and finally sank down, puffing her cheeks, this appearance should not be too cute: "Well, you have to ask What?"

"I want to ask, where is the Xiayue Dojo?"

"Xiayue Dojo... I just came out there, what are you doing?" The girl crossed her arms and raised her eyes to watch Qin Bai.

"I'm here to find my master." Qin Bai smiled.

"Oh~ look for me... Master! It seems that you are my junior brother?" The girl immediately walked around Qin Bai, and then touched his wrist: "Hey, not bad, this is the practice The Void Realm is complete, it’s very powerful.”

"See, I've met... Senior Sister."

Qin Bai called out this title with some difficulty.

It is really difficult to call someone who is so much younger than me a senior sister.

"Well, this senior sister shouted well, come with me."

The girl led Qin Bai all the way into Xiayue Dojo.

In the dojo, a beautiful female practitioner is arranging the blanket on the throne in the dojo.

Seeing Qin Bai and the girl coming in at this moment, she was taken aback for a moment, then smiled and walked over:

"Junior brother Qin... finally met."

"Senior Sister Hua." Qin Bai also greeted.

This female cultivator and he are both disciples of Xiayue Yaoxian.

But...he is a direct disciple, and this Senior Sister Hua is only a registered disciple.

"However, Junior Brother Qin, why did you come to the dojo? This is very strange." Senior Sister Hua was a little surprised.

"Well... I'm here to find Master." Qin Bai said softly.

Now Senior Sister Hua suddenly showed an even more surprised expression, and she turned her eyes to the little girl next to Qin Bai who kept blinking at her: "Master, isn't it next to you, Senior Brother Qin?"

Qin Bai: "?"

"Hua Yunxin, you have no eyesight!! You really deserve to die!!" The girl immediately sent a voice transmission to Senior Sister Hua, cursing.

And Senior Sister Hua just opened her eyes and covered her mouth, as if she suddenly understood something, she just wanted to open her mouth to explain something temporarily...

But Qin Bai had already looked towards the girl beside him.

Seeing Qin Bai looking over, the cute girl turned her head away stiffly.

For a moment, Qin Bai was dumbfounded:

"Master... Master?!"

——The end of this volume

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end of volume summary

After thinking about it, I decided to write a summary at the end of the volume, mainly to list some main plots, and then ask you how you feel, so as to avoid making mistakes or writing too much in the future.

(or should it be called a questionnaire...)

[ps: If you don’t want to see me forcing Lai Lai, you can also skip and read the text of the next new volume]

[The following may be a bit long to force Lai Lai]

This volume is mainly about the relationship between the mother and daughter of "Jiang Qianning" and "Jiang Shenpan".

And then perfected Nan Ruyan's follow-up relationship line.

The emotional line towards Mu You also began to develop a little bit.

The first is Jiang Qianning's emotional line, from meeting for the first time with a purpose, to falling in love with the protagonist, to being too deceitful to cheat too much, and finally to becoming a soul body and resurrecting, and achieving a positive result.

Personally, I think it's pretty perfect, and there are ups and downs in the plot. The climax from the death of the world in the book back to reality, I think, the writing is okay... (weak)

Jiang Shenpan's words... It's a bit hasty. One is that "widow" and "empress" are two very different people. I have dealt with the process of combining the two into one person. In the end, I barely used her in the book. Having regained memory, it took 90 years to perfect the blend of personality.

Then I have not dealt with Jiang Shenpan's motivation for doing things well. From an outsider's point of view, it is Jiang Shenpan who robbed. It was supposed to be the female emperor's domineering cross-robbing and anti-killing... Actually, I can deal with it now that I think about it. , For example, it can be written that the formation of Xuyangzong was snatched from the ancestors of the empress, and the empress came to snatch it back, so that there is actually a motive, and it will not make the empress look like a villain.

So in fact, the widow in the book world actually looks a little more fragrant than the real empress?

But for the plot of Jiang Shenpan, I wonder if I can improve it later, but maybe there is no room for her.

(This book is expected to be written to about 100 million words, and it will be finished in about one month next month)

There is also the plot of the dark side of Xu Yangzong, which is the "Holy Maiden Exchange Meeting". I wrote it in, but at least I killed everyone in the end, and I had a good time, but I don't know if I have a good time, whether this depressive feeling is directly proportional to the refreshing feeling of the elders like tulle...

(In addition, it is possible that such a plot is put in this book, it is indeed a bit bursting and tastes strange, if you think it is not good, then I will pay attention to it in the future)

Then, to the perfection of Nan Ruyan's emotional line.

I think Nan Ruyan should be regarded as the one with the most complete emotional line and character creation in this book.

From "brother Qin" to "master" to "husband", this process should be relatively complete.

And in terms of her portrayal, I wanted to make her more independent, but it was unavoidable... she could only rely on the help of the protagonist sometimes. If you want to make progress, it can only be an event similar to "help" between the two. Other things are a bit hard to think of with my little head.

Then there is the question of the integrity of the character's emotional lines. Since I have just transitioned to writing this kind of "harem of pure love", the emotional lines in the first volume of the early stage are very sloppy.

It probably started from Han Xiaorui and gradually improved and perfected it, including plot conflicts and the like... In the early stage, I wrote too plainly and too studly, but there is no way, so let’s just leave it at that, and it’s okay to change it. It's possible, I can only say that I have accumulated experience for the next book.

And Nan Ruyan can write more perfect, I think, it has to be because of a big change, before the change, not only the character design of the protagonist collapsed, but it is impossible for Nan Ruyan to be as independent as now, the initial idea , she is not Nan Ruyan, she is just "Ning Ruxue", a pure vent.

But after being severely scolded once, I was somewhat enlightened.

When writing a text, there must be a story first, a person first, and then it is awkward.

In the end it was Twilight.

This role, what do you want me to say, then I will post a picture.

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This is the end of forcing Lai Lai. If you have any opinions on the plot of Xuyangzong or the heroine's relationship line, you can also force Lai Lai here, and I will watch it carefully.

Then what to write in the next volume.

Rebels, rebels, rebels.

Filial piety goes bad, or filial piety goes bad.

Then there will be a new heroine (the last one)

The master and the new heroine will collect it in the plot of obtaining the fire

Then the next volume is Shaking M Muyou and Qingyue Sword Fairy are really fragrant... and then it is almost over.

Xia Yueling: Master, you?

(Speaking of Xia Yueling... I feel that Yueling is the second most complete emotional line. The character creation may be average, because the character design is relatively common, but I have to say, I think it is very fragrant, with a cold face Tie Tie...I can't bear to blush...hehe...)

Finally, I would like to ask the question of updating.

I’m really sorry for this, because of my poor self-control and the same hellish schedule as Sadako, my daily update time is very hellish and unstable... I really can only try my best, because my schedule is a reincarnation.

That is, it wakes up at six o'clock in the morning, and then counts back a few hours every day, the next day is 12 o'clock, the third day is 15 o'clock, the fourth day is 18 o'clock, the fifth day is 20 o'clock, 24 o'clock, 2 o'clock in the middle of the night, 4 o'clock in the middle of the night, and then 6 o'clock in the middle of the night, so that the cycle continues...so sometimes this update time is...

Don’t ask me why my work and rest are not stable, I have tried it, and it will fall in a week at most.

By the way, I just woke up at 3:[-] in the morning and went out to have Malatang for breakfast with my friends ()

But I have updated 17.4w words so far this month, not many, but not many...

Well, the complete bullying is over.

265 Lolita Shizun is cute

"Master? Where is Master?"

At this moment, the little girl was still pretending to be stupid, looking around.

But just based on the girl's nonsense, Qin Bai can already confirm with 90.00% confidence that this is his master, but he doesn't rule out the possibility that his master has a younger sister or something.

"Isn't it right here?"

Qin Bai tugged at the girl's ear.

This immediately made the girl fly into a rage, and she glared at Qin Bai ferociously: "What are you doing, a traitor! Respect the teacher, respect the teacher! What have you learned! How can you treat the master like this!!"

"Now you will admit it?"

Qin Bai chuckled suddenly.

The Xiayue Yaoxian who looks like a girl should be Xiayue Yaotong. She glared at Qin Bai angrily, bit her rosy lips, and stomped her naked jade feet a few times. In the end, I could only sigh.

At this moment, the childishness on the girl's body suddenly disappeared a lot, and that ethereal feeling of immortality hit her a little bit:

"Retreating for the teacher...some accident happened, and it turned out like this, but it can't be regarded as a bad thing at all. My current cultivation is only at the Yuanying state, but as long as I rebuild the body state, I can complete it. Once I transform into a second-grade pharmacist, then I can be considered a half Mahayana cultivator!"

Qin Bai couldn't help but said: "Master, if you want to rebuild the body state, wouldn't it take a long time?"

Xiayue Yaoxian shook his head: "It won't take long. If I'm lucky, then I can return to the physical state in just one day. Even if I'm unlucky, it will take ten years at most before I can return to the physical state." Composite Realm, and has the medicine particle means that can threaten the Mahayana Realm."

"So I said... this can't be regarded as a bad thing at all, but there is one more bad thing, that is, the current appearance of the teacher, the reshaping of the cultivation base, and the reshaping of my body to the point where I was young. In order to recover, you can change back."

Xiayue Yaoxian sighed, with a depressed expression on her face, she has become such a child with such a strong person, and she really loses any dignity when she walks out!

My apprentice dared to pull my ears!

"Oh~ then, Master, your cultivation base is equivalent to losing all of it?" Qin Bai suddenly smiled and said.

"It's not all lost, there's Nascent Soul Realm cultivation..." Xiayue Yaoxian answered here, her face suddenly changed, her well-proportioned but slightly chubby jade legs took a few steps back: " You, what do you want... Let me tell you, I am your master, uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

While speaking, Qin Bai pinched Xiayue Yaoxian's face and rubbed it wantonly.

"Rebel!!"

"Master is so cute~"

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