Adventures in Yuanshin Land with Ying

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Being dragged by Ying to run across a large mountain area, Lin Mo was already exhausted at night.

I don't know how many Qiuqiu families were affected by the disaster today, Ying's fighting style was extremely violent today, Huang Xing directly slapped his face.

At night, Lin Mo dragged his exhausted body to say goodbye to Ying, and returned to his room.

Lin Mo felt uncomfortable lying on the bed for a while.

Thinking about it carefully, from Mond's tent to Liyue's single room, it seems that she is always by her side when she sleeps.

It's a bit awkward to lie in the same room by myself now, it's quite embarrassing to think about it.

Lin Mo turned over and planned to write some manuscripts.

At this moment, the sound of knocking on the door sounded.

"Huh? Who is it?" Lin Mo went to open the door with some doubts.

Opening the door, Xing Qiu, the handsome young man from the day, was standing at the door.

"Xingqiu? Do you have anything to do with me?"

"Actually, I still have something to trouble you, teacher, after the signing in the morning. I just didn't bother you when I saw that the teacher had something to do, but I couldn't help it so I came here."

"I want Teacher Lin Mo to read my article for me." Said Xingqiu took out a novel and handed it to Lin Mo.

The name printed on the book is - "Shen Qiu Picking up Swords".

Lin Mo happened to be unable to sleep either, so he called the other party into the room.

Xing Qiu sat beside Lin Mo's bed and sat side by side with him, somewhat cautiously waiting for Lin Mo's evaluation.

"So that's it, is it a martial arts novel?" Lin Mo flipped through Xingqiu's works.

The illustrations are very exquisite. Lin Mo feels that even artists in his own world rarely can achieve this level in terms of illustration level alone.

but...

The plot is very old-fashioned, and the setting is so weird that it doesn't look like a martial arts book.The protagonist is set to be the young master of the Feiyun Chamber of Commerce, but he didn't write any shopping mall plots, and he doesn't know how to use family power, which is basically a useless setting.

If you want to evaluate, it is probably:

[The protagonist of the urban son-in-law article, because he was slapped by his father-in-law, his anger soared from the spot. 】

Probably this type of text.

"The setting...is very fresh." Lin Mo commented with a subtle smile.

Xing Qiu showed a wry smile.

"Mr. Lin Mo, although I am very happy that you can affirm my work, the publisher doesn't seem to think so."

"They say the setting is too outrageous, the plot is too corny, and no one will like it."

Lin Mo nodded slightly: "Well, it's very objective."

"Huh? What?"

"Nothing, nothing."

Lin Mo also accepted the publisher's statement that there were not many problems with Xingqiu's writing style, but it was a bit literary.

The key problem is that his story is too flat.

"I think you need systematic education, and you still have good literary skills." Lin Mo planned to be more tactful, after all, he was his first fan.

In fact, a common mistake made by newcomers is that there are no conflict points and main lines in the article, which will cause the article to become very dull.

Although it is old-fashioned to pretend to be forceful, it also depends on how it is used.

If you teach Xingqiu more relevant knowledge, maybe he can write a good article in the future.

Lin Mo suddenly had an idea.

"By the way! Xingqiu, I hope you will join our [Fourth Natural Disaster] adventure group as the honorary recorder of our group. What do you think?"

"Recorder?" Xingqiu repeated in doubt.

"Yes, I will teach you the skills myself."

Lin Mo thought very simply.

Since there is no problem with Xingqiu's writing style, should we try to get him to help serialize some novels?

After Fischer, isn't there a new honorary member?

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1. Ahem, newcomers and new books, please support, please follow, please collect, please subscribe.If you want to make complaints, you can also contribute, and the author will have fun.

2. One of the most interesting things about Xingqiu's story is that his book Liyue is not very popular locally, but Dao Wife is very good.Why do I think I don't need to say it?

3. Daozuma Leishen is confirmed, I will show you a picture (doge

Chapter 21 Lin Mo's Little Thoughts

In the early morning of the next day, Lin Mo brought Xing Qiu to the dinner table.

"Ahem, members." Lin Mo cleared his throat: "This is the new member I recruited yesterday, Xingqiu. You have met before."

Pimeng and Ying, who were eating breakfast, showed surprised expressions.

Paimon frowned and asked, "Captain, I have a question."

"Huh? What's the problem?"

"This Xingqiu...where did you sleep last night? Why did you show up together?"

Lin Mo showed a puzzled expression: "Where to sleep? Where else can I sleep?"

"Of course I slept in his house, can I still sleep in my room?"

Paimon breathed a sigh of relief.

Ying interrupted Lin Mo's conversation with her hand, and asked, "Lin Mo, I think we need to consider whether letting him join the adventure group will affect his life."

Lin Mo froze for a moment, then nodded.

"That's right." As he said that, he turned his head to look at Xingqiu: "Xingqiu, what kind of job do you usually have?"

Putting his hands behind his back, Xing Qiu said very proudly: "Going down the mountain to practice, the usual thing is to be a chivalrous man."

Lin Mo nodded: "Well, unemployed."

"Do you have Mora on you?"

Xingqiu thought for a while: "There are still some words about Mora, but in order to snap up "God of Cookery" and manage the Adventurer's Association..."

Xingqiu didn't go on, but everyone understood.

"That's fine."

Lin Mo was quite satisfied with this.

This kind of person who likes to be chivalrous and is still very poor is suitable for some side jobs at first glance.

Paimeng raised his forehead: "Is this kind of person really not going to starve to death?"

"Tsk." Ying clicked her tongue.

"How about this, didn't you ask me to teach you how to write a book? I happen to have a book here that needs you to write, so take it as exercise."

Lin Mo pulled out the setting collection of "The Little Master of China" and handed it over.

Xing Qiu took over the set book and began to look through it seriously.

"Is this... a story about cooking?" Xingqiu asked suspiciously.

"Yes, it's about the story of super chef Liu Maoxing."

Xing Qiu showed a troubled expression.

"But I haven't written this type of novel before."

"It's okay, everyone has a first time, just get used to it."

Lin Mo tried his best to fool him: "Look at the setting behind this."

He flipped through a few pages, and clicked on the setting column of the dark cooking world at the back.

"The confrontation with the dark culinary world, preventing the villain from gaining power by tarnishing the culinary world, isn't this also a manifestation of chivalry?"

Thanks to fans, Xingqiu, who has always been calm-headed, actually believed what Lin Mo said, took over the codewriter and started creating.

It was the first time I used it, and I still finished the plot of the first act after stumbling and stumbling.

Lin Mo took it and looked at it for a while.

Because he just told the other party what kind of plot to write, and there were no other requirements, so Lin Mo still looked like a martial arts book in the past.

Moreover, the cutscenes of cooking are very ordinary, even briefly.

Not writing about cooking in a cooking novel is as weird as if Apa tea is not prepared for the welcome ceremony, Judas does not bring Teresa when he goes out, and when Ying draws cards, it is as weird.

"You have to imagine a little bit outrageously and make the dishes more concrete. For example... make the dishes appear more gorgeously." Lin Mo taught carefully.

Lin Mo didn't intend to explain the specific extent, he wanted to see the limit of Xingqiu's imagination.If the brain hole reaches the level of "Spirit of the Halberd Eater", Lin Mo should consider letting him control it.

After all, if it is identified as ghs, it may be checked by the official water meter.

Xingqiu thought about it, and then started writing again.

After finishing writing this time, Lin Mo picked it up again and looked at it.

This time it's like that, I didn't expect that Xingqiu's talent is not bad.

Paimon came over and took a look: "The moment the lid of the pot was opened, a golden light shot into the sky... Isn't this too outrageous? Is it really possible for this kind of thing to happen?"

Lin Mo nodded in satisfaction: "Yes, this is it."

If a dish doesn't shine, it's not a good dish.

Unexpectedly, Xingqiu's outrageous talent for writing books just happened to realize this point.

Paimon's head was full of question marks: "Is this actually not wrong? Is this a cooking showdown or an elemental force showdown?"

Lin Mo didn't care about this at all, and continued to instruct Xing Qiu how to write.

But what makes him a little strange is that Xingqiu actually knows a thing or two about many dishes in Liyue, and he can even talk about high-end places like Yuehai Pavilion.

This is helpful to the development of the article.

The plot of the first act was quickly completed under the discussion of the two, and Lin Mo felt that it was very similar to the original work.

Just sanding and sanding is all it takes.

The two chatted and laughed with each other about the content of the story.

Ying looked at it, got up and left the table.

"I'm full." After saying that, she went straight back to her room.

Lin Mo noticed this for the first time and thought about it.

"I have some important things to do, Xingqiu, write them first." He ordered a few words, got up and left.

When he came to Ying's room, Lin Mo knocked on the door.

After getting a response, he opened the door and walked in.

At this time, Ying was watching "The Strange Tale of the Holy Grail of Tevat" and just glanced at Lin Mo who entered the room.

"What's wrong? Are you angry with me for recruiting members without authorization?" Lin Mo asked with a smile.

Ying didn't show any anger, but just shook her head: "It's the leader's right to recruit members, and I don't have any doubts about it."

She didn't look angry at all, it was more like she was having a fight.

Lin Mo's mouth curled into a smile.Although Ying has always been a black-bellied guy, sometimes he would get awkward because of some small things. When he beat Qiuqiu people, his angry and naive look was unexpectedly cute.

Lin Mo took out a book and handed it to Ying.

"Come on, this is for you."

Ying took it curiously, and looked at the cover without any logo, it should be just an ordinary notebook.