My chastity can't be taken lightly by a dog

If it weren't for a game that writes RPG and reads as Gal to support me, as long as I travel through various anime worlds and collect CGs in exchange for resources, my wife would have starved to death a long time ago!

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Then, I really like Sister Ba Mamei!And he is also a member of Bamamei Senpai Protection Association!It's not bullying her!

In the end, I just pouted pp ah hello!What are those people who take essential oils trying to do? ! !

Update at seven today!Absolutely no pigeons

Well, to prove my sincerity, and to give myself some motivation.

10 minutes every night after seven o'clock, and a new chapter will be added after that...

I will set this flag here!I don't believe I can't finish writing before seven o'clock!

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Ms. Brown was not stingy with her appreciation, and gave extremely high evaluations one after another.

The plot is good, the rhythm is cohesive - but it doesn't work.

Any age group can have fun digging out of it - but no.

The theme is healthy and upward, which is in line with DreamWorks' animation film development strategy in recent years-but it doesn't work.

No matter how high Ms. Brown gave "Frozen", the final twist pushed Ayase, who had just entered heaven, to the edge of hell.

"Unfortunately, after my discussion, we can't choose this excellent script." Although the tone was tactful, Miss Brown announced the decision neatly, without any signs of hesitation.

The chair rubbed against the floor making a screeching sound, and Ayase stood up abruptly.

"Why?!" Hearing this unexpected ending, even Ayase couldn't keep calm, and the voice of surprise resounded throughout the editorial department.

Miss Brown didn't mind her impolite behavior, and seemed to be able to understand Ayase's current mood.

Shrugged, giving Ayase enough time to calm down.After her violently heaving chest calmed down, Miss Brown continued to speak: "Although I personally like your script, but... the dialogue of the characters is always missing something, as if they are interacting for the sake of interaction. Although the art It's higher than reality, but it's always based on reality. The only problem with this script is that there is a lack of connection between the dialogue and the psychology of the characters."

"In other words, it's the plot, not the characters, that attracts me to read." Miss Brown said sincerely, "There is no problem with light novels, after all, narration and psychological descriptions can be added. But if it is made into an animated film, in addition to the limited action expressions and tone, we must not add a lot of narration to destroy the coherence of the picture."

In live-action movies, actors can use subtle facial and body movements to convey the character’s psychology with their superb acting skills—in fact, this is also an important factor that distinguishes actors from good or bad. character soul".

But animated movies are different. Its characters can't express "people's hearts" through various indescribable small movements like real people.Most of the time, exaggerated techniques are used to highlight one or two expressions. Although this can build the backbone of the character, the filling of the details—that is, to make the character "popular" is more based on dialogue and interaction. achieved.

Seeing Ayase bowed her head and remained silent, Editor Tomi couldn't stand it any longer, and said in a voice of relief: "After all, Mr. Shenyuki is still too young. After two years of rich experience, it is not easy to try to enter the film and television industry." Late."

"Yes, I think so too. After all, the core of this script has been telling about "sincere feelings."However, if you put aside the written description and only look at the dialogue between the two sisters, except for a few punchlines, most of them fail to express sincere emotions, and are more like machines. "Miss Brown nodded approvingly, her tone was unaffected, "If you wait two years for this script, Mr. Shen Xue has more social experience, and there will definitely be further improvement. "

After all, Ayase doesn't have the time-traveling benefits with excellent memory. She just remembers the general plot of "Frozen" and a few sentences that impressed her deeply.The overall dialogue was written by her based on the plot, but she did not expect that Dream Workshop had such high requirements for the script.The writing skills she usually accumulated through light novels are completely useless at this time.

As for the sincere feelings - until now, apart from the physical relationship with Yan Ye and Airi, Ayase really has no feelings that can be unforgettable.

And in his previous life, he was just a nerd with no girlfriend or boyfriend.Although there is an older sister, and the relationship with her is very good, but the relationship between the two is an ordinary life of ordinary people, without such a dramatic and magnificent relationship.

After giving Ayase time to digest, Miss Brown hesitated for a moment, looked at her deeply for a long time, and then made up her mind to continue: "Actually, even if this script is sold to some film companies now, there will definitely be a market. It's just that ...I think this script has the potential to hit the Oscars, so I sincerely suggest, Mr. Shen Xue, that you seal up this script first, and then improve it again when your social experience improves."

For DreamWorks Studios, ordinary gold-making animated films are also important, but they are far inferior to works that can aspire to the top awards in the industry.The former DreamWorks has a large number of first-class screenwriters who can produce two or three films every year, while the latter requires the flash of inspiration from top editors, as well as seamless cooperation in animation, music, and dubbing.

In other respects, the top management of DreamWorks believes that it does not belong to the old rival Disney.But in recent years, an important reason why they have frequently failed in the industry awards is that they lack a top editor's script.

And Miss Brown sees hope in Ayase's script, and it only takes two years... No, for this amazingly talented person, it may be a shorter time.Ayase can take this script to a whole new level.

"If Mr. Shenxue is willing to hand over the script to Dream Workshop as the first choice after perfecting the script, we are willing to pay a certain amount for it now." After careful consideration, Miss Brown gave such a favorable condition, even Fu Jiangang Chamdo was a little surprised that the other party saw Ayase's script like this.

Of course, in addition to the mentality of being a dead horse as a living horse doctor, Miss Brown is more concerned about the face of her old classmate, the editor-in-chief.Thinking of the date with her old classmate tonight, Miss Brown was in a particularly good mood.Even Ayase, the exclusive author who signed a long-term contract with Dengeki Bunko, was given some preferential treatment.

But more importantly, "Frozen" and the previous "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" made her feel that Ayase has investment value, and Dream Workshop also has special bonuses to motivate those creators with potential.So even if she is on the board of directors, Miss Brown is not afraid of being accused of using power for personal gain.

"Sorry, let me think about it again." Ayase stood up in a daze, and when she was about to walk out, she still did not give up and asked: "By the way, you will not return to the United States until Saturday, right?"

Although she didn't know why Ayase was so determined to go back to the United States with them, Miss Brown nodded to confirm, and at the same time kindly reminded: "However, if you want to go together through me, at the latest at four o'clock tomorrow afternoon, we will The statistics are over."

Ayase didn't know how she returned to school in a daze. Fortunately, the school gate opened at noon, so she didn't need to climb over the wall.Otherwise, with her current state of mind, nothing might happen.

"Don't understand people's hearts...?" Ayase showed a wry smile of despair, and pushed open the wooden door of the dormitory.

The same dormitory, the same atmosphere, and the same people...

Suddenly, Ayase was like a traveler walking in the desert, who suddenly found an oasis when he was hungry and thirsty, and his eyes showed a longing light.

Author's message:

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2017年4月26日19:00:49

Hahahahaha! ! !I finished! ! ! ! !

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啊，这是二次施工的PS，写在2017年4月26日19:13:42

In addition to explaining the reasons why Ayase was rejected, this chapter also points out the current shortcomings of Ayase, especially the inner growth. If Ayase goes so smoothly all the way, it is difficult to write truly wonderful works. All kinds of experience are needed to precipitate the masterpieces in the memory of the previous life.She is now more like a copy of ingenuity than a creation of the soul.

Afterwards, you should be able to guess from the sentence at the end, who else's plot is paving the way for this chapter... Next is Queen's Time.

In the end, there are still some foreshadowings of emotional changes, but they are just two or three sentences, so there is no need to elaborate.

Generally speaking, there are a lot of narration in one chapter, but there are scattered transitional chapters at various points.

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Just like a traveler who lost his way in the desert, when he was thirsty and thirsty, he finally saw an oasis.Ayase saw Shokuhou Misaki who was taking a nap in the dormitory, his eyes showed hunger like a hungry wolf.

Hearing the sound of the door opening, Shokuhou Misaki opened her eyes and looked towards the door, and then she saw Ayase staring at her with green eyes, feeling a little hairy in her heart for no reason.

"Shokuhou-san!" Ayase called out to the blonde queen very rarely, even Shokuhou Misaki himself was a little surprised.

"Yes!" Because being called by his name was too sudden, Shokuhou Misaki subconsciously sat up straight, and shouted out as if being called by a teacher to answer a question.

In just a moment, she realized that this is not a school, and Ayase is not a teacher.However, her body's conditioned reflex was far faster than her thinking, and it was too late to interrupt her embarrassing reaction, and her voice echoed in the dormitory.

"Aragaki-san!" Shokuhou Misaki smiled extremely coldly, looked at Ayase with unfriendly eyes and said, "You suddenly called me so loud, what, what, what, what?"

Shokuhou Misaki spoke out a sentence that was almost squeezed out word by word from between the gaps between her teeth, and it was really difficult for her.

Ayase didn't seem to see Shokuhou Misaki's frightening appearance at all - rather, her eager eyes surprised Shokuhou Misaki.

"I want you!"

"Ah? What?" For the first time, Shokuhou Misaki didn't dare to meet Ayase's eyes.Ayase's scorching gaze, full of erosive power, almost penetrated her.

"I need you right now!" Ayase didn't realize that her words were full of ambiguity, and stared at Shokuhou Misaki even more fieryly.I just hope that the other party can quickly respond to her request.

Just when Ayase returned to the dormitory in a daze, and saw Shokuhou Misaki leaning on the chair, she had a flash of inspiration in her mind, and suddenly thought of a chance that might be able to overcome the difficulties in front of her.

Although she doesn't understand, someone understands!Like sister Misaka, wouldn't it be nice to borrow someone's heart?

And Shokuhou Misaki was exactly the "excuse" target she was following.

Shokuhou Misaki has always acted like a master of manipulating people's hearts, and the books she usually reads are also related to this.So Ayase, like a single-celled organism, made a simple inference of cause and effect:

Since it is possible to figure out people's hearts from dialogues, then conversely, given people's hearts, dialogues can also be designed, right?

Holding such a paramecium-like single-line thinking, Ayase threw herself in front of Shokuhou Misaki eagerly, and even made up the explanation in her head because she was too anxious, hoping that she would agree sooner.

"You..." Shokuhou Misaki looked at the agitated Ayase, and for some reason, even his voice trembled a little, "You, what are you talking about?"

Shokuhou Misaki panicked, she never expected that Ayase would suddenly say such "strange" words.Faced with such a "impact" speech, Misaki Shokuhou couldn't help but feel flustered.Even now, she can't care about Ayase making herself embarrassed just now, her vision is filled with Ayase standing in front of her...

"Of course it helped me complete this dialogue!" Just when Shokuhou Misaki was trying his best to suppress the panic and showed composure on his face, Ayase suddenly added as a matter of course: "Time is urgent, Shokuhou Classmate, I need your help right now!"

Although I don't know what Ayase wants from her.But Shokuhou Misaki felt as if he had been tricked, and laughed out of embarrassment. The laughter made people shudder, "Okay, very good, very good. What do you want someone to do for you? Xin, Yuan, Tong, study?"

Five minutes later, Ayase knelt down obediently on the ground.Having understood the ambiguity of what she said just now, she is now being forced to bow her head and reflect.

"Obviously you want to be crooked, and you blame me..." Out of the corner of my eye, I glanced at the graceful curve of the half of the calf dangling in front of my eyes, and the soles of the feet wrapped in white stockings.Ayase slandered their master, Shokuhou Misaki in her heart.Of course, intimidated by Shokuhou Misaki's majesty, Ayase didn't dare to speak out - Ayase only admitted that she was so subdued because she needed someone, otherwise she would never have done such a spineless cowardly thing.

The delicate arch of the foot is outlined by the thin stockings, the round toes are looming, and the slender veins on the instep can be vaguely seen.The white stockings that test the line of the legs are perfectly controlled by the legs of Shokuhou Misaki-because when she lowered her head, except for the floor, only the calves of Shokuhou Misaki dangling in front of her eyes, so when Ayase was bored, she thought about it randomly in her heart , "Well, it seems to be more sensual than Yan Ye's, probably the kind of plump and soft touch. 』

Just as she was thinking wildly, a light cough came from above her head, which made her shiver.Ayase thought she was sneaking a peek at Shokuhou Misaki, and the thing she was slandering in her heart was revealed.

But what Shokuhou Misaki said next made her breathe a sigh of relief, her sweet voice was the same as usual, as if the panic just now was just a hallucination, "I already understood the general thing, I really didn't expect Xin Yuan to have such a thing layer identity~"

With his legs folded together, Shokuhou Misaki looked down at Ayase condescendingly, with a playful look on his face, "A light novel author? Animation script? Movie script?"

All of a sudden, Shokuhou Misaki connected the events before and after, and figured out why Ayase had worked so hard to bring the computer to school some time ago, and why she had been typing in front of the computer all this time.

"It turned out to be work. 』Thinking of this, Shokuhou Misaki suddenly had a whim, and brushed the hair next to his ear, "Does Misaka know your identity?"

Ayase raised her head and nodded to Shokuhou Misaki.Because she was looking up, she saw that Shokuhou Misaki's chest seemed to be bigger than usual.

"Tsk, I already know." Shokuhou Misaki smacked his tongue boringly, and originally planned to use Ayase's identity to tease Misaka Mikoto.But then, another doubt came to mind, "How did Misaka-san find out the secret of Aragaki-san?~"

Judging from the fact that Ayase concealed even her roommate who lived under the same roof, Ayase would never take the initiative to tell Misaka Mikoto about this.

in other words……

Shokuhou Misaki narrowed his eyes slightly, recalling the scene of seeing Mikoto holding Ayase's arm one night, and the sad Shirai Kuroko two days ago.

"Uh, that's not the point." Seeing Shokuhou Misaki squinting at herself, Ayase said bravely, "Now the point is, please help me revise the character dialogue in the script, it's very important to me, please! "

Not to mention the tight time now, just because it involves "A Certain Scientific Railgun", Ayase doesn't want to elaborate on the specific process by which Mikoto knew her identity.

Judging from the current relationship, Shokuhou Misaki is not as easy to fool as Misaka Mikoto.

"Okay then, let's talk about Aragaki-san asking for help~" Shokuhou Misaki didn't continue to ask, but said in a sweet voice following Ayase's words: "I don't have any reason to refuse Well~ But..."

When the subject changed, Shokuhou Misaki saw Ayase's expectant eyes and laughed silently, "I was in a good mood at first, but because Aragaki-san rejected her, so..."

Shokuhou Misaki suddenly swayed his calf, and talked about an irrelevant topic, "I read it in a book before, and everyone has masochism hidden in their hearts~"

Ayase blinked, a subtle premonition welling up in her heart.

"I've noticed since just now that Aragaki-san seems to be staring at his legs~" Under the sweet voice, the bee sting carefully prepared by Shokuhou Misaki shines, "I heard that there is a kind of pervert... Hmm, does Aragaki-san want to be trampled on? Or..."

"How about a lick?" Shokuhou Misaki shook her calf again, her slender feet moved forward slightly, and the smooth white silk exuded a seductive luster under the light, "People's curiosity can only be satisfied when they are satisfied." Will be in the mood to help others~”

"So you already found out that I was sneaking a peek?" ? !This scary woman..." Ayase shouted crazily in her heart, seeing Shokuhou Misaki's half-smile expression, swallowed with difficulty

So, what is it...

lick?

Still don't lick?

Or is there a third option?

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Well, a little sleepy, I fell asleep halfway through writing...

Cough cough, but it's not too late, laugh.

好吧，现在2017年4月27日00:23:28 我用了二10分钟找合适的插图……

By the way, at the end of this chapter, I suddenly thought of a question.

In Super Cannon SS, how did Sister Pao ask the Queen to help modify other people's memories?What is the so-called abandonment of dignity?Think carefully...

In the end, I really want to be trained by the bee-eater queen... I really want to lick it

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10 minutes later……

Shokuhou Misaki's face was flushed with joy, and the corners of his mouth were raised in satisfaction.Her eyebrows were slightly raised, and she had a classic expression of trembling S, with her arms crossed in front of her chest, and she looked down at Ayase who was facing her in a "sitting" posture.

As for Ayase, she had a spoiled expression, her eyes were out of focus and she had nothing to love, and she muttered in a low voice, "Dignity... is gone... a terrible woman..."

"Hey, Aragaki-san, don't you want to make such an expression~ It looks like what happened to you just now~" Shokuhou Misaki deliberately shook his calf, and his delicate and slender feet shook back and forth in front of Ayase's eyes, " Besides, they didn’t force you~ it’s your choice, no~ is it~?~”

"Damn it." Ayase cursed in a low voice without hiding her anger.

I don't know who said it, but the wailing of the loser is the best compliment to the winner.Shokuhou Misaki didn't care about Ayase's cursing at all, instead he snapped his fingers with his right hand, gestured for a pistol, put his index finger in front of his mouth, and blew unnecessary gunpowder smoke.

"Although they chose to confess to you about the matter with Misaka-san, instead of..." At this point, Shokuhou Misaki curled up his toes seemingly unconsciously, and said sweetly: "Lick~people~home~I feel a little bit Disappointed. But you can barely satisfy people's curiosity~"