My chastity can't be taken lightly by a dog

This bottle of imported juice was purchased by Ayase after she received the manuscript fee from the publishing house, and then went to the supermarket to "spend a fortune" to buy it. Later, because of many things, she didn't care about drinking it, so she kept it in the refrigerator until today. .

"Really?" I don't know if it was intentional, but the black cat poured the last bit of the bottle into his cup, and after drinking it slowly, he said, "It tastes good."

"..." Ayase looked at the black cat who raised her eyebrows speechlessly, and didn't know what to say, so she got up helplessly and went to the refrigerator to take out another bottle and put it on the coffee table.

Although Ayase, as a new author, Dengeki Bunko's royalties are not as much as those of the long-established masters, but they are still higher than ordinary rookie authors. I was about to meet in order to buy computers and mobile phones. The small coffers at the bottom are also refilled, so naturally they don't care about this small amount of money.

While drinking the juice, Ayase roughly told the story of Nishengya Morinatsu.

Unexpectedly, the black cat smirked, raised an eyebrow at Ayase and asked, "So you were nosy before?"

"...You can't call me meddling in your own business," Ayase said with a sneer, "I just happened to see it, and then I just helped out."

"Really?" The black cat twitched the corners of its mouth, did not continue the topic of whether Ayase was meddling, but silently poured himself another drink.

Noticing that the black cat was about to drink up his own juice again, Ayase quickly found a topic and found something for her to do, "By the way, did you read the correction suggestions written by Editor Fujin earlier?"

As soon as Ayase talked about the novel, the black cat immediately put down the juice in his hand, put on a serious expression, and took out a stack of printed manuscripts from the bag beside him.

Originally, the appointment with Ayase today was to discuss writing matters, and the black cat was naturally prepared, and handed one of the two copies to Ayase, "Well, some revisions have been made as suggested gone."

"Huh? Are you moving quickly? It's been less than a week." After admiring Black Cat's efficiency softly, Ayase took over Black Cat's revised novel and flipped through it page by page.

After a long while, Ayase closed the copy in her hand, looked up to meet the black cat's eyes with mixed expectation and anxiety, and said, "I've roughly finished reading it all..."

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There were some things in the morning, and I didn't touch the computer, so there was no update at noon.

I'm so sorry [bow

By the way, there is nothing to complain about in the last two chapters.

Are all your complaints focused on my PS? ? ? [question mark face

Chapter 170: Teacher Ayase's Private Lesson

After closing the manuscript, Ayase looked at the black cat who was holding his breath waiting for his evaluation, and said with a serious expression, "I probably finished reading it..."

Then he was not in a hurry to speak, but picked up the juice and took another sip, until the black cat had well-shaped veins on his forehead, and then said calmly: "...compared to before, it has improved a lot."

Hearing Ayase's comment, Black Cat breathed a sigh of relief, and the uneasiness in his eyes faded a lot, "Really, does that mean there is still a problem?"

"Uh... let's not talk about other issues for now," Ayase recalled the plot just now, and asked a little speechlessly: "What's the matter with the ending where everyone died?"

"Huh?" As if he didn't expect Ayase to ask such a question, the black cat tilted his head and said, "Didn't you teach me this?"

"Hey, hey... When did I teach you this kind of knot to cure depression..." At this point, Ayase suddenly remembered that the black cat in front of him had read the script of "Magic Girl Madoka Magica", and paused for a while. After a long while, he said without confidence: "Then... that can't make people feel sullen after seeing it like this..."

The black cat raised its eyebrows, noncommittal to Ayase's words, "Except for this?"

Since I read the script of "Madoka" last time, Black Cat, who feels that he has opened up a new world, is running all the way in the direction of "Soldier of Love", and many inspirations that he has never had before are gushing out like a fountain.

Coupled with Fujian Gangchang's previous modification suggestions, Black Cat feels as if he has achieved a breakthrough like a new life.

"Other aspects... To be honest, although your setting collection is much simpler than the original one..." Ayase shook the first two pages of the manuscript, and said rather helplessly, "But there are still a lot, you just Can't you try to slowly explain the world view in the main text of the novel?"

"I tried, but..."

Seeing that Black Cat was frowning and looking embarrassed, Ayase re-opened Black Cat's novel and turned to a certain plot to give her an example of "how to explain the world view without trace in the plot".

In order to listen to Ayase's explanation more conveniently, the black cat sat next to Ayase very naturally. Following the black cat's movements, a burst of gardenia fragrance spread to the tip of Ayase's nose.

"Eh?Did the black cat wear perfume today?I haven't smelled it on her before..." Ayase, who was giving an example, glanced at the black cat, and saw that she was listening to his explanation attentively, so she stopped thinking about it.

After giving Black Cat a few examples in a row, Ayase stopped, giving her time to digest and absorb, and by the way, enjoy Black Cat's "Are you really only 14 years old" eyes for a while longer.

At this time, she also received a text message from Senxia, ​​saying that she had arrived at her door, and there was a knock on the door.

Asking the black cat to think about what he just said, Ayase got up and went to the entrance to bring Morixia in.

This was the first time Ayase saw her again after persuading Mori Xia to write a novel with herself that day.

Today's Senxia is not wearing the middle school clothes like before, but very beautiful casual clothes, light-colored pantyhose and high-heeled short boots, and the upper body is also a light blue sweater, which is the same as Kirino's daily wear Shibuya style.

"Excuse me." It's just that I met Ayase twice and had an in-depth exchange with Ayase. Morixia, who came to Ayase's house for the first time, was still very reserved.

Very kindly said that it is good to treat this place as his own home, and Ayase brought Morixia to the living room.

The black cat in the living room was still looking down at the manuscript in its hand, frowning as if thinking hard.

So Ayase motioned Mori Xia to find a place to sit and at the same time poured her a glass of juice, then quietly went to the black cat.

Sensing the movement next to him, the black cat first looked up at Morixia who was sitting on the sofa stiffly, then turned to Ayase next to him and said, "I have figured it out just now, do you have any other questions?"

Now that the black cat said that it has digested the content just now, Ayase naturally mentioned the other problems she found, and at the same time gave some more suitable examples for modification.

It is also fortunate that Ayase already has experience in writing three volumes of light novels. Using these experiences and integrating the usual techniques used in many novels she has read in her previous life, she explained the major problems that still exist in the Black Cat novels. Seven or eight.

"...Probably that's it. If these things are solved, at least it will be a past work that can be read." The dry-mouthed Ayase picked up the cup and took a sip of the juice. He stared at himself reverently.

"Huh? I'm sorry I was too involved in what I said just now."

"No, no, it's okay, I just know you are so good, Ayase." Mori Xia blushed slightly and praised Ayase, and then asked a little coyly, "Then, that, where do I start to learn?"

Seeing that the black cat has no problem in a short time, Ayase thought for a while, got up and walked out of the living room, and said to Morixia at the same time: "Well, wait for me first!"

After a while, Morixia saw Ayase walking back with a stack of books.

"Okay, that's it! Let's start with reading!" Plopping the book on Morixia's lap, Ayase clapped her hands and said.

"Reading?" Senxia rested his index finger on his lips, looking at the pile of novels on his knee in bewilderment, "Shouldn't I try to write first?"

"Wrong, if you want to write a good novel, you must first read many excellent works, and experience the plots in various novels, that is, to draw materials!" Ayase said without blushing.

Seeing Morixia nodded half-understanding, the black cat couldn't help complaining about Ayase's behavior, "Aren't what you said all the author's excuses for delaying the manuscript? Taking materials?"

"..." Ayase, who was complained by the black cat, sneered for a while, and then said seriously: "No, I have read the things written by Morixia, so I think she should read other people's light novels first to understand light novels. The style of the novel is more suitable as the first step."

Seeing that what Ayase said made sense, the black cat nodded and stopped talking, and Morixia, who didn't understand anything, would not refute Ayase's opinion, so he quietly read the book.

"I suddenly want to try writing an original novel." The black cat suddenly closed his manuscript, and looked at Ayase unblinkingly with his scarlet eyes wearing colored contact lenses.

"Uh, write, it's very simple!" Ayase said indifferently.

"...It's just simple for someone like you whose debut work is on the bestseller list. 』Although Black Cat really wanted to say this, but considering that Ayase said this to encourage himself, he finally endured it and talked about the idea of ​​the new novel, "Speaking of which, I also want to write this time. What about magical girl novels..."

When he said the words "magic girl", a happy smile suddenly appeared on the black cat's face, "That woman's favorite, magical girl..."

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Come out to the person who said in the post that "smiling with squinting eyes makes you think it's funny"! ! !

Made! !When I squint my eyes now, I subconsciously think #funny! ! !Pills! !

Let’s make two changes today~ I’m going to sleep. The current time is 22:46, and I’m just right to sleep~

good night

Chapter 170 The Magical Girl Described by Black Cat

"Huh? Magical girl?" Thinking of the things that Black Cat has been exposed to related to magical girls recently, besides Kirino's favorite "Meruru", only "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" is left, plus Ayase suddenly had a bad feeling about the black cat's trembling smile, "Uh... what kind of magical girl? Love and justice?"

"Tch, how could it be that kind of magical girl who plays like a child?" The black cat twitched the corners of its lips, and glared at Ayase with "Are you an idiot?" The expression, "Of course it is the type that can sublimate the soul like "Magic Girl Madoka Magica."

"..." Looking at the black cat immersed in fantasy, Ayase suddenly felt that it might be a wrong decision to let her join the production of "Magic Girl Madoka".

"What's the matter with you?" Seeing Ayase looking at him silently, the black cat asked in confusion, and then said without any notice: "Do you have any extra pens and paper here? Give it to me, I want to record Come down now for inspiration."

After receiving the pen and paper from the depressed Ayase, the black cat lowered its head and began to write vigorously, with a sickly smile on its lips while writing, "Heh, heh, heh heh~"

Shivering, Ayase decided to ignore the black cat, but looked at Morixia.

The famous beauty Yin Susu said it well, the more beautiful a woman is, the more she will deceive others.

Dansheng Gu Morixia is undoubtedly a beautiful woman, or a beautiful girl, so when she played the role of "Master Morixia", she was so quiet when she was flipping through the books in her hand. She was completely carved out of the same mold as the middle-aged girl Mori Xia who Ayase had met before.

"How's it going?" Ayase looked at the novel in Morixia's hand, and found that there was only a thin layer left in the unread part of the first book. She didn't expect her to read it so quickly.

"There is an elf whispering the contents of the book in my ear, since..." Dansheng Gu Senxia probably hasn't fully graduated from Secondary School, subconsciously said halfway, then suddenly realized, and then she blushed and coughed lightly With a sound of reorganizing the language, "Well, I read faster."

Ayase blinked, pretending that she hadn't heard Morixia's previous high school two bursting words, and nonchalantly began to ask Morixia about her reading experience.

Seeing that Ayase pretended not to hear, Morixia suddenly felt a lot less awkward, and couldn't help but bring a little intimacy when talking with Ayase, and she didn't have the kind of upright sitting when she first arrived at Ayase's house. I'm stiff.

After chatting with Ayase for a while, Morixia still asked her what she should write in a worried tone.

Regarding Morixia's question, Ayase had expected it, and told her with a smile that she would just continue to write according to her "Dark Canon".

"...After all, the story in that dark scripture is what you want to write."

Seeing that Morixia seemed to be getting something, Ayase didn't say anything else, and seeing that it was still early, she suggested that Morixia write an outline first and take a look.

After Mori Xia nodded in agreement, Ayase got up and took Mori Xia to her bedroom, saying that she would not be disturbed there.

"...Okay, you can use the pens and paper on the table as you like, try to write first, and I will come up and call you later when I have lunch."

Closing the door for Morixia, Ayase returned to the living room, and then saw the black cat staring at herself with a fiery look in her eyes that she had never seen before.

"Black cat, why are you staring at me like this..." subconsciously shrinking her neck, Ayase wondered if she had offended the black cat somewhere.

The black cat blinked its eyes wearing colored contact lenses, then picked up the densely packed paper filled with small characters, and said expressionlessly: "It's probably finished."

"So fast?" Praising the speed of the black cat, Ayase sat next to her, took the paper and read it.

First of all, before reading the content, Ayase secretly praised "good handwriting". Black cat's handwriting is very delicate.

Immediately afterwards, Ayase began to read the above content. Although from the strange smile and words of the black cat, Ayase vaguely had some bad premonitions, but after reading the story design at the beginning, it was obviously a bias After healing the traditional magical girl plot, Ayase's heart relaxed a little.

But soon, after watching the first episode, Ayase's face became more and more strange, and after watching the ending of the story, it has become very exciting.

Silently returning the manuscript in her hand to the black cat, Ayase poured herself a glass of juice without saying a word, and felt better after drinking it in one gulp.

——The magical girl story written by Black Cat is obviously a short story. If it is calculated according to normal commercial publishing, basically one volume is enough to accommodate all the content.

Of course, the problem with the story of the black cat is not the length. After all, there are not many light novels published as short stories, and independent stories under the same worldview can be serialized as long novels.

——What really makes Ayase dumbfounded is the content of the novel Black Cat.

Probably because of the rush of time, there are still many logical problems to be considered in the main content of the black cat, but the main storyline is basically clear.

It’s just that the main plot that has been sorted out now gave Ayase a strong sense of sight, and she felt that she had read another light novel with the theme of “anti-magical girls” “Magical Girl Raising Project” that she had read. of similar.

——With the sudden turning point of the plot, several beautiful magical girls were suddenly notified that only one of them could stay to become a real magical girl, so a group of magical girls started a seemingly safe ordinary competition, but then With the death of the eliminated, the ordinary competition gradually turned into a killing game like a battle royale...

"Um... let me ask a question." Just to be on the safe side, Ayase put down the manuscript in his hand and looked at the black cat. "Is this a plan to raise magical girls?"

"Magical girl raising plan?" Hearing Ayase say a term he had never heard before, the black cat frowned and repeated it, then shook his head, "What is that?"

"It's okay, it's okay." While asking the black cat, Ayase also searched the Internet with her mobile phone, and after confirming that the book "Magical Girl Raising Project" does not exist in this world, she said with a smile: "I just think the title of the book is very interesting. It fits your main line."

Now that Ayase has said so, after the black cat repeated the title of the book several times in a low voice, his eyes on Ayase became brighter and brighter.

"It seems to be a very suitable name for my novel." While nodding in recognition of the name, the black cat looked at Ayase with the eyes of a monster, "Are you really human? Just read a preliminary main line, and you can actually Come up with such an apt name."

"Hey, and you still have some logical problems, let me give you an example, you can refer to it..."

While recalling the setting and plot of the "Magical Girl Raising Project" before time travel, Ayase made suggestions on the problematic places in the main setting of the black cat.

The black cat looked at Ayase more and more surprised, as if she couldn't understand how she was able to discover her omissions one by one in such a short period of time, and she could also come up with better suggestions for amendments.

You must know that it is not difficult to find the problem. It is undoubtedly a very test of ability to be able to find out in such a short time and at the same time propose a modification plan.

At this moment, in Black Cat's heart, he even wanted to equate Ayase with a writing genius.

"...It's probably like this..." After roughly speaking to the black cat, Ayase's cell phone rang suddenly.

After Ayase took out her phone, the name of Editor Tomoken was displayed on the screen, "Hello? This is Ayase...what?...Okay...we'll meet and discuss in detail this afternoon."

"What's wrong?" Seeing that Ayase's face was a bit ugly, the black cat asked with concern.

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Chapter 170 Six "Railgun" Facing Rejection