People in the original god, the innkeeper, oppressing his sister

Speaking of it, it has something to do with my coding speed, because I often get stuck on the deadline and cannot hand in the manuscript, so I often talk about some useful but generally useless nonsense.

For example, in the chapter on conspiracy theory, do you think it is useful? It is somewhat useful, but not to the extent that it takes up an entire chapter. Once there are more chapters of this type, the rhythm will slow down.

To be avoided in the future.

Then there are some interesting attempts in the writing process. Of course, this is for me, because I have never used it.

For example, the chapter of Gu Bai’s diary, I’m actually quite satisfied now, it’s located after the chapter of Grilled Fish with Iron Sword for Free, because of the writing problem, I need a chapter to finish and spread out the clues.

If you write from the conventional third perspective, the constant transitions and memories will be very annoying. In the form of a diary, the narrative is free on the whole, and everyone looks fresh (it should be), and you can play some jokes, until now I also think it's a good try.

The one that is not sure is the chapter on Ms. Alice’s bomb shop. For the lessons learned, refer to the above-you can write funny things and funny memes, but these things can’t occupy all your space, especially if the readers don’t know what they are for. when.

I did encounter some problems at the end. First of all, after entering the ruins, I felt that the response from the interim posts was not very good. It happened that a friend mentioned that he liked to see the daily life in front of the city, so his mentality was not stable, and the whole process ended in a hurry. Of course the food is the original sin, if the writing is better, there will be no such problems.

In the chapter of leaving the city, there are actually three lines buried, the nun, Kaiya, and the fools, but as mentioned above, if the mentality is not stable, the plot of the nun and Kaiya is directly cut off, and the entire exploration of the ruins chapter In fact, it is incomplete.

Fools and the abyss are indispensable. Friends who have read the last chapter should know that the story line of the first volume revolves around this.

From the Chapter 1 system presenting the Wufeng Sword, to being blown away, then to being inserted into a dragon, and then being picked up by Yingmei, and then the resulting butterfly effect caused changes in the original plot. This line went fairly smoothly. , but there are also many problems, so I won't repeat them here.

Speaking of it, one of the reasons for the slow pace of the first volume is also due to the fact that there are too many holes to dig. It is really addictive to dig holes with threads. Md, I must have been a mole in my previous life, and I like digging so much.

But fortunately, they have all been taken back. If they haven’t been taken back, it means that they will be used in the future. Although I personally have the suspicion of watery words, I seldom write useless waste pens. Well, it should be, suddenly I feel guilty .

Let's talk about the next style.

I actually wanted to ignite the volume of the temple, but in the end a pile of non-combustible objects came out, alas.

The rest is a relatively relaxed and warm daily life, which I prefer to write.

Then try to be a little more funny, I'm actually not very good at making jokes, I'm currently working on it.

Fortunately, the last point is to round up. I am quite satisfied with the two chapters of Night Mond and Wind and Narrative Poetry, but the style seems to be different from the ones on the list. I hope you like it.

Thank you again for your support, votes and rewards.

Next, we will enter the persecution of Yingmei volume!

Finally, let's end this single chapter with a question.

That is--

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Why is everyone in the book review area discussing the first X master outrageously?

Longqitan under the Moon: Chapter 40 version update

Such a powerful secret technique!

hateful……

Is my journey coming to an end?

I really want to shout Noelle to save me, but unfortunately the girl is not here.

Gu Bai closed his eyes unwillingly, his breathing gradually became deeper, and his consciousness became blurred.

So he simply turned over and continued to lie in the quilt seal.

He squinted comfortably for a while, but for some reason, suddenly a voice of "Gu Bai, do something serious" sounded in his heart today, he struggled for a long time, and finally sat up from the bed.

"What are these fools doing all day long..." Gu Bai rubbed his hair and sighed in distress, "It will be uncomfortable if you don't do something."

Anyone who looks at the moon and drinks wine, and is feeling emotional, suddenly a beam of fire bursts from his eyes, will not be in a good mood.

The crowd of fools must be suppressed at any time, and it is impossible not to suppress them!

The violent explosion made the entire knight group tremble. At that time, he happened to be by the window, which happened to be the closest one.

It took me a long time to slow down.

A certain person who didn't know that he had unintentionally brought the entire crowd of fools was greeting the lady's family with a sad face.

He got up from the bed, and after a simple wash, he was going to have a look at the Goethe Hotel.

Speaking of which, after the explosion last night, everyone subconsciously turned their attention to Keli, and they were relieved when they found her beside her.

The little guy showed an aggrieved expression, and then everyone ran out in a hurry.

Except for those who were drinking in the banquet hall, and the knights who were patrolling outside, almost everyone rushed to the scene immediately. He thought about it at the time, and felt that he would not be able to help if he continued to stay, but would only add to the chaos, so he simply went back to sleep.

After reminiscing, Gu Bai put on his clothes and walked out of the room, the entire knight group was silent.

As for Yingmei, he glanced at the closed door next door, not knowing what they were doing again.

Running to the cafeteria to find something to eat, Gu Bai went downstairs with a piece of fisherman's toast in his mouth. A knight named Edward was standing at the gate.

"Is it convenient to say why?"

Gu Bai greeted and pointed in the direction of Goethe Hotel.

Unexpectedly, the young knight shook his head in embarrassment, and whispered: "I don't know, I ran out to drink last night..."

"Okay... where did Miss Ying go early in the morning?"

"Oh, I do know that. Head Qin suspected that the explosion was related to the battle in the temple. This morning, he organized a team to search the other side, and the traveler followed suit."

"What a model worker."

Gu Bai sighed with emotion, waved his hand and continued to move forward.

The location of the hotel is still very close to the Knights. After walking a certain distance, you can see the broken walls and ruins. In the scorched black, half of the entire building is gone. There are many knights and onlookers standing around, busy cleaning up. on site.

The only thing that is a bit out of place is that each of them looks happy, and today is a good day.

Seeing this, Gu Bai sighed a little.

"It was blown really hard..."

he said to himself.

"Yes."

A voice next to him chatted with him like this.

"These fools are really restless. It's a good time to kill yourself."

"really."

The voice continued to echo.

"Uh, why does it sound familiar to me?" Gu Bai turned his head to look, his eyes widened and he took a step back, "Damn it!"

A green bard was standing there with a look of emotion on his face.

"Why are you here?"

"Did we know each other... I remember, it seems that we met in the tavern that day." Wendy was a little puzzled, "And to be precise, I just happened to see you sitting next to you, and it's not even considered meeting." superior."

"If I remember correctly, you bet with your friends how many drinks I can have?"

"Yeah." Gu Bai nodded honestly, "I didn't expect to meet again, I think we are destined."

"Also, I bet thirty cups."

"Have eyesight!"

"But I drank 35 cups~"

"...let's do something right."

"Hey, you don't know me well at all, you are slandering me by talking nonsense like this!"

Both of them were bored, so they just squatted on the side of the road and chatted.

"Besides, I've been very busy recently."

"You?" Gu Bai hehe, he would rather believe that Wendy fought Barbatos than such crazy talk.

"What kind of look is that? It's very annoying. Well, I have to sing during the day and work part-time at night. I'm almost exhausted every day."

"Part-time job?" Gu Bai expressed doubts again, who in Mond can let this part-time job?

"That's right, it was a part-time job. I didn't have enough money for drinks that day, so I was arrested by the boss and stayed in the store to work to pay off the debt. Now my official status is the bartender and resident poet of the angel's gift."

"It sounds so miserable, meeting is fate, how about I buy you a drink."

Gu Bai started to get close, using the Barbatos trap.

Surprisingly, this trick failed.

"That's not necessary. I'll accept it. Our boss is rich, and we drink wine for free. It's an employee benefit."

"alright."

Gu Bai had nothing to say.

He fumbled in his pocket, took out a business card for a long time, and handed it to the bard in front of him.

"I run a hotel. If you are fired one day, you can consider coming to me. I just need a resident singer. The treatment is the same. Maybe I can meet some old friends then."

Wendy was confused by his words, but she still smiled and said: "Thank you, Stranger, by the way, I have to go, or my boss will come looking for someone again later."

"Okay, see you later, little sister."

"Pfft... I'm a man! You won't always think of me as a woman, will you?"

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry." Gu Bai said sincerely, "I made a mistake, bye, may the wind god fool you."

As soon as these words came out, Wendy looked at him even more strangely, then waved her hands and walked away.

It was obviously a very pleasant thing to say such words to Fengshen himself, Gu Bai laughed on the spot for a long time, and then his attention was attracted by a howling sound.

It turned out to be Goethe, that is, the owner of the Goethe Hotel.

"It's gone, it's all gone...you stupid fools..."

As a future innkeeper, he inevitably feels a bit sad.

Thinking about being blown up by a group of turtle grandchildren after my hotel opened, the mentality will only explode, and I can't wait to send people to the west with a fire.

Gu Bai stepped forward to comfort the old man, and seeing the furniture being rescued by the knights, he suddenly had a bold idea.

"Old man, do you sell this furniture?"

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the other side.

Stepping into the dark and gloomy temple again, maybe because she was shocked yesterday, Yingmei felt a bit dull.

I can't feel any tension at all...

If she is a player's girlfriend, she will definitely sigh "This man is so strong, I want to send 648 and take it home!" at this time.

It's a pity that she is not, she is just a simple and ordinary girl.

The main reason why he became a fool yesterday was that apart from being shown off by the other party, Ying noticed that the person named Gu Bai didn't have God's Eye at all.

She can use elemental power herself. Although there is no definite answer yet, there is a high probability that it has something to do with her being a person outside this world.

But what happened to the other party?

There are still many similar questions, such as why she has to hire someone to escort her to the Seven Heavens God Statue when she is so powerful. She has been thinking for a long time but there is no result.

It's a pity that she ran out with the knights after the explosion yesterday, and forgot to ask Mr. Gu's address, so she had to wait until she got back to find a chance to ask.

Thinking of this, Paimon's voice suddenly came from next to his ear:

"Ying, look what I found, it's actually a piece of paper..."

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After the outline, there will be another chapter today, but it will be later.

Push another book.

"Yuanshin, sister Hutao is a bit strange"

My name is Hu Tong, the chief cremator of the Hall of Remains, and I am the adopted son of the previous generation of hall masters.