Best Old Times: Lin Luoxue's Salted Fish Cousin

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The logic of the story does not make sense, and the characters are inconsistent, which is not a problem.

The story of the hero and heroine is dog blood, which can be tolerated.

But in the whole script, there are no paragraphs or even blank spaces. A piece of paper is densely packed with words.

Saw and he was vomiting.

Add to that the smelly, long, boring dialogue throughout.

At this moment (ahfd) Lu Qiaochuan just felt that he couldn't help but want to vomit blood.

Turned.

It was found that Ren Yifan was in the same state as him.

His face was pale, and he felt very exhausted.

"how is it going!"

Zhong Zhongbai looked at the two excitedly: "Which part of my script do you like?"

Ren Yifan looked at Lu Qiaochuan, wanting to see how he would answer.

"All!" Lu Qiaochuan gritted his teeth and said these two words.

no way.

He used to be honest too, and then he paid the price for it.

And this price is still fresh in his memory.

Ren Yifan looked at Lu Qiaochuan in shock, and only had two words in his mind: awesome!

Realizing that Zhong Bai was looking at him, Ren Yifan held back his nausea and said, "I like the beginning and the end of the plot."

In fact he just wanted to say the end.

However, such disgusting emotions are too obvious. For the sake of my own life, I should say more at the beginning.

"Haha, me too, me too."

Zhong Tiantian really thought that he really liked his script, and said excitedly: "Tell me, which part it is specifically."

"To be precise, it's the part after the end of the play." Ren Yifan still spoke his mind.

After the play.

Then there is nothing left.

Zhong Bai also understood his meaning now, and sneered: "No matter which part of the script you have ignorant doubts, you can raise them."

Zhong Bai gritted his teeth: "I won't kill you!"

Ren Yifan frowned and couldn't help it: "You asked me to say this!"

boom!

Lu Qiaochuan pressed his arm and warned him with his eyes [Brother, don't take me with you if you want to die. 】

Ren Yifan: [Don't you feel sick? 】

[Disgusting is better than death. 】

Lu Qiaochuan forced a smile and looked at Zhong Bai: "What he said is that there is no doubt."

"How about this, just tell me your first impression after reading the script." Zhong Bai happily described: "After reading it, do you have the feeling of trembling and goosebumps all over your body?"

Lu Qiaochuan and Ren Yifan looked at each other.

Nod.

This feeling is very obvious, and it is also accompanied by a strong desire to vomit.

But they didn't say it.

Zhong Bai excitedly said: "Let me tell you, this feeling is called shock!"

Ren Yifan couldn't help complaining: "We are usually called despair."

"Believe it or not, I'll kick you to death!" Zhong Bai gritted his teeth and prepared to kick.

Lu Qiaochuan hurriedly adjusted.

"Be merciful, if he dies, your hero will be gone."

Ren Yifan:! ! ! ! ! !

Zhong Bai: "It's just fine if it's gone, you can take my place."

When Lu Qiaochuan heard this, he couldn't let Ren Yifan die.

The three of them were in a mess all of a sudden.

............

Afternoon drama club.

Xu Lianqiao came to the drama club with a new advertisement.

Glancing around.

"Where's Li Shuci?"

The vice president, who was squatting beside him and painting the tree, turned his head and said, "It seems that the matter of changing the script hasn't come yet."

Xu Lianqiao nodded.

"Okay, everyone, look here, and I have one thing to say."

"Advertisers have new ideas for our ad words, so we have to change them."

"It's the advertisement that changed, not the advertiser, right?" the vice president said anxiously.

"Correct."

"That's great, otherwise my LOGO would be useless." The vice president was still holding a paintbrush in his hand and almost threw it away.

They've been through this before.

The most annoying thing is that everything has been done for the props, and all kinds of advertising placements have been done. Finally, a new advertiser came and everything had to be changed.

At one point it even nearly spoiled the show.

So at this time, the president of the drama club must keep in touch with the sponsors' resumes, and they can't let them change their minds temporarily.

A man next to him asked: "Didn't you just change it two days ago?"

Xu Lianqiao: "Yes."

"This has been changed three or four times, how can I rehearse?" A woman next to the boy asked contemptuously.

Xu Lianqiao said flatly: "Ad placement is one of the basic skills of an actor. Do you have any opinions on this?"

"I didn't mean that." The girl quickly changed her words: "I don't have any objection to our changing the slogan, but I just think there is something wrong with our script."

After listening to the script, Xu Lianqiao looked at her with his arms around his shoulders.

"What do you think is the problem?"

"The lines in the script are too long." The girl looked at Xu Lianqiao: "And the ending is a little less explosive."

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Xu Lianqiao didn't answer right away, but looked at the boy who had just spoken.

"What do you think?"

The two of them are the two backbones left by the previous president of the drama club, and they usually work together.

Xu Lianqiao wanted to know their current attitude.

"I don't think it matters." The boy didn't express his attitude clearly.

The girl looked at Xu Lianqiao even more contemptuously.

I would like to see how the new president will solve this problem.

Xu Lianqiao took out her phone and called Li Shuci: "Shuci, I heard you're going to change the script again? Don't worry ~ apologies."

"I think the script is well written, but we have to take care of the actors' emotions."

The hero and heroine listened and smiled contemptuously.

Xu Lianqiao said directly: "In the script, you cut off one-third of the lines of the first female lead and gave it to the second female lead, and then increased the second female lead's lines by one-third."

"President, that's not what I meant." The heroine immediately became anxious when she heard this.

Two-thirds of her lines were cut, and that's still a fart heroine!

Isn't that a female second?

And she has to read the advertisement, and it will look like a human advertisement at that time, who would like to read this.

"I mean, I'm afraid that if the advertisement words are changed, my own words are too long, and I'm afraid I won't be able to remember them at that time."

Xu Lianqiao hung up the phone and chuckled lightly: "That's right, so I just need to memorize the advertisement words now."

"Oh!~"

Seeing Xu Lianqiao being so stubborn, the heroine was also angry.

"Let me tell you Xu Lianqiao, I, Zhang Lian, have been in the drama club for so long, and I have never been so angry!"

"According to your arrangement, there is only one third of my lines left, and I have finished rehearsing now, and I am going to leave."

Zhang Lian was holding the bag, shaking her arms and preparing to leave.

Xu Lianqiao was not used to her either.

"Everyone here, who is willing to play the heroine?"

In the next second, all the girls raised their hands.

You must know that the position of heroine is not good, but no one will give up whenever there is an opportunity.

Zhang Lian laughed outright.

Before Xu Lianqiao finished speaking, he said again: "Who has memorized all the heroine's lines now, please raise your hand."