I am more than Qigu Baijia

When Shiyu was in a daze, Hachiman expressed another conjecture of his.

"How, how did you see that..."

This time, Shiyu was really shocked.Are you a superhuman? !Or is it a detective? !Shi Yu was surprised, she is a new author.She didn't expect Hachiman to be able to deduce this just by reading her light novel.

"Actually, what I look at here is not only the writing, but also the illustrations."

Hachiman looked at Shiyu with a surprised expression on his face, and he planned to explain to Shiyu how he came up with these things.

"The writing in this book is very good, but unlike those authors who have been writing for a long time, it is still a bit immature. However, in other situations, these can also happen. So the writing is actually not the main thing I can tell that the author is a newcomer The writer's reason."

"Could it be... because of the illustration?"

Listening to Hachiman's words, Shiyu was gradually attracted by Hachiman's words.She couldn't help but continued following Hachiman's words, and then she mentioned the illustration that Hachiman had just said.

emmm... I remember that my illustrations at the time were decided by my editor Ms. Machida Sonoko... Shiwa remembered that she didn't pay much attention to this matter at the time, and Ms. Wanzi also took the initiative Help her contact the painter.

"Well, illustrations are actually very important to light novels. Some novels are completely useless, but because the illustrators make the illustrations very attractive, the novels are immediately popular. Ah... However, this is just an example, but it also shows the importance of illustrations to light novels."

Hachiman made a gesture of pushing his glasses.If he were to wear glasses and hold a pointer in his hand, he would be a typical teacher image.

"Could it be that I... no, no, is there something wrong with the illustrations in this book?"

Shi Yu almost revealed that she was the author of this book.

"The problem is a bit serious. The illustration is actually not bad, but in this book, there is a sense of disobedience. I think the illustrator who drew the illustration for this book probably didn't understand the author's intention. feelings to express."

When Hachiman said this, he felt a little irresponsible of the illustrator.It’s okay if the illustrator doesn’t understand the emotion the author wants to express.But there is another possibility that the illustrator didn't read the book carefully at all, and just finished it hastily, which is a bit bad in nature.After all, there are all kinds of illustrators.

"Like here, when Sayuka is with the male lead, Sayuka should show shyness and inner anxiety. But the illustrator directly drew the appearance that Sayuka fell in love with the male lead directly."

Hachiman opened the book and flipped directly to the position he had just seen.There happened to be an illustration on it, and Hachiman pointed to the illustration on it to show Shiwa.

"Hmm...It really feels like this when you say that."

Shi Yu looked at the above illustration, and then carefully considered Hachiman's words, and she also felt that there was some truth to it.

"If it's an old writer, they generally wouldn't make such a mistake. I also speculate here that this writer has a high chance of being a newcomer writer."

Hachiman clarified his thinking to Shi Yu, if he really thinks according to what he said, it will indeed make sense. ....... This junior is a bit powerful. Could it be that his dead fish eyes were trained in this way?Shiyu looked at Hachiman's dead fish eyes and thought so.It has to be said that Hachiman's dead fish eye has no regard for lying down again.

"Student, you are really amazing... Could it be that you know this very well?"

Shiyu praised Hachiman, and she also really felt that Hachiman's brain is really flexible, and she can figure it out.Otherwise, you have a good understanding of the light novel world.

"It's a little involved, and maybe it's because I'm also thinking about the story now."

Hachiman didn't expect to be praised by Shiwa, he just expressed his own guess.

"Eh?! Is my junior also writing light novels?"

When Shiyu heard what Yawata said, she became interested.She looked at Hachiman, looking curious.

"No, no, it's just helping my friend think about the plot of the comics, but it's kind of similar."

Hachiman saw Shiyu looking over curiously, and approached slowly.He couldn't help but look away at Shi Yu, and his face was also flushed.Too, too close... Hachiman feels that his mind is a little confused now.

"Is that so..."

Shiyu seemed to see Hachiman's embarrassment, the expression on her face gradually became a little more interesting, and a slightly black-bellied smile appeared on the corner of her mouth.

"Schoolmate... You are not looking at me, thinking about something H in your heart."

Shiyu looked at Hachiman with a dark smile, and she found that the junior in front of her was really interesting.The expression on her face when being teased by her is even more interesting, and she can't help thinking of wanting to tease Hachiman.

"Ahem... Senior sister, what are you talking about? I, I didn't think about that kind of thing to senior sister."

Hachiman couldn't help taking a step back while talking, and Shiyu was also directly amused by his actions.

"Ahem, let's not talk about this for now, senior sister, do you know when the second part of this book will be released?"

Hachiman quickly changed the subject, he felt that it would be too dangerous to continue the conversation.

"I......"

Shiyu listened to Hachiman's words, and she slowly said such a sentence.

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Chapter 71

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"I think the author's second book should come out soon. After all... she has people who like her books as much as you are supporting her."

Shiwa smiled at Hachiman, not like the smile he saw when he saw something interesting just now, but an extremely sincere smile.Shiyu is very glad that she came to this bookstore again today, and very glad that she met Hachiman.

Originally, when her new book was released, she was in this store to observe the release of her new book.The result was very disappointing for her. She found that almost no one bought the book.

In the following days, she often went to this bookstore.However, this book seems to be ignored by others, and no one cares about it.She also gradually changed from disappointment to numbness.She was sad, but it didn't help.

Today, she came to this bookstore again.She met Hachiman and met people who looked at her works.This is the first time she has been praised by readers, and the first time she has renewed hope.

"Well... I will always support it."

Yawata sensed that something was wrong with Shiyu's mood, she must also like this book very much, probably a true fan of this book.She must be worried about the popularity of this book now.And now that I see someone who loves this book as much as I do, my mood will improve a bit.

"Well, that, in fact, you can directly add the author's Line on the Internet. Then tell her directly the suggestion you just made. I think she must be the type who is easy to talk." (Line is an online chatting software)

Shiwa expressed an idea to Hachiman.Although she already knows the suggestions that Hachiman just said, if she suddenly corrects it in the second part, it is estimated that Hachiman will realize that she is the author himself.She didn't want to tell Hachiman about this, not because she didn't trust Hachiman.It's just that her bad taste broke out, and she wanted to know Hachiman's expression after she finally knew that she was the author.

At that time... That scene will probably be very interesting... When Shiyu thought of this, she couldn't help showing some smiles on her face.

"Oh~ By the way, there is such a way, I didn't even think of it..."

Hachiman scratched his head in embarrassment, he felt that when facing Shiwa, he would always feel a little bit tied up.Difficult, could it be... Is a girl like senior sister my strike zone... Hachiman looked at Shiwa in front of him, her figure is not only tall but also plump, her legs The black silk made Hachiman a little fanciful.

Hachiman quickly looked away, lowering his head to hide the blush on his face.No, no, no, I'm a gentleman, how could I think such a thing about senior sister.

"That, that... I'm about to go back..."

Yawata looked at Shiyu carefully, he was reciting Buddhist scriptures in his heart now, as if he wanted to calm down his mood.

"That's right...Student, do you want to add my email address, so we can discuss this book in normal times~"

Shiyu also felt that it was a bit late now, so she took out her mobile phone from her pocket.She shook her mobile phone at Hachiman, the pendant on her mobile phone was a small bell, because Shiyu shook the mobile phone, there was a crisp bell sound.

"Uh-huh!"

Hachiman was stunned for a moment, he didn't expect Shiyu to ask him for his contact information, because it was only the first day they met.Shi Yu's operation made him a little confused.

But Yawata didn't expect that his meaning to Shiwa was not so simple.He was the first reader to support and praise Shiyu. In Shiyu's current state of self-pity and self-pity, he brought courage and hope to Shiyu.

Hachiman took out his mobile phone and exchanged mailboxes with Shiwa.

"This is my first male number outside of my family~"

Shiyu put away her mobile phone, and she smiled at Hachiman mischievously.

"Then, then I'll go first, see you senior sister."

Hachiman didn't expect Shiwa to look very mature, and sometimes she would speak childishly, or as if she was teasing him.Moreover, he really couldn't handle Shi Yu's tone.So, he fled immediately.

"This junior is really interesting... Hikigu Hachiman... I remember you."

Seeing Hachiman's hastily running away, Shiyu couldn't help feeling a little funny.She breathed a sigh of relief again, as if the depression of so many days had disappeared at once.

She walked out of the bookstore slowly and took out her mobile phone, as if she wanted to contact someone.

"Miss Wanzi..."

The phone was connected, and a young female voice came from the opposite side.

"Shi Yu, you finally contacted me. Don't worry, I think your book is still very good. Although your book's grades are not very good, this time it's just because the publicity didn't work well. Don't worry. Blame it on myself..."

Wan Zi seems to be very concerned about Shi Yu's appearance, she gets along well with Shi Yu, and admires Shi Yu very much.So when she first knew that Shi Yushu's grades were dismal, she immediately called to comfort Shi Yu.Although it didn't work, it still showed her concern for Shi Yu.

"It's okay, I don't matter now, I really trouble you during this time."

Shi Yu thanked Wan Zi, after all, Wan Zi has been busy with many things for her during this time.

"Haha, these are nothing, as long as you are fine."

Wanzi seemed relieved, and she also understood Shiyu's behavior.Many writers have behaved like this before, and she was also afraid that Shi Yu would be like those writers.In this way, he fell into a slump and broke his career as a writer.

"I'm fully motivated now, and I'm going back to prepare for the second part now."

Shiyu felt that after she heard Hachiman's words, she didn't have any thoughts of giving up.

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At night, Hachiman was using the computer in his room, and he was about to check the information on "Love Metronome".

"Well... I remember... it seems to have been written by..."

Hachiman directly flipped through the book he bought, and he looked at the last author mark.

"...Xia, Xia Shizi!!!"

Hachiman was stunned, he didn't expect that the system asked him to find the author of the light novel.

"Then what should I do now..."

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Chapter 72 Chatting on the Internet

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When Hachiman first saw the author of "Love Metronome", he refused... oh, no, he was confused.

It never occurred to him that the son of the system was waiting for him here.Hachiman couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief, since the task became easier after letting him know the direction.The task of the system is to let him find Xia Shizi, so he only needs to go to the Internet to directly search for Xia Shizi's information.

Afterwards, with some hacking, tracking and other skills, you will be able to grasp Xia Shizi's whereabouts.Of course, if Xia Shizi has a fan meeting or something like that, Hachiman doesn't need to bother.It's enough to approach her directly in the name of a fan. Anyway, the system is talking about looking for her, not other weird things.

"emmm... no author details... not even gender..."

Hachiman was a little speechless at this time, since the authors of light novels are always so capricious... But at least there is the author's official Line number on it.Hachiman plans to add her as a friend directly, and talk to her about his suggestion... By the way, see if he can ask for any information that is useful for the mission.

"Well... Anyway, let's try to add one to her first."

Hachiman directly tried Kaka Shiko's friend on Line, and he was about to read the light novel written by Zaimoza to pass the waiting time.As a result, before he picked up Zai Muzao's light novel, the notification sound that the friend was successfully added came out.

"Okay, so fast..."

Yawata was frightened by Kasumi Shiko's speed, the time between the two was not more than ten seconds... She couldn't be lazy and fished... Hurry up and write for me what!Hachiman felt a little pain in his kidneys, it couldn't be that Xia Shizi was waiting for him in front of the computer.

emmm... I have to say, Shiwa is waiting for Hachiman right now.Ever since she got home for dinner, she has been sitting in front of the computer, waiting for her true fan.

Finally, let Shiyu wait.She quickly accepted Hachiman's friend application, and waited for Hachiman's suggestion with some trepidation.After all, this is different from the one in the bookstore just now. This is her listening to readers' suggestions as an author.She was also a little excited, a little excited and nervous.

With a sound of "ding dong", Shiyu realized that Hachiman had sent her a message.

[Are you fishing now? ! 〕

Shi Yu was a little confused, she didn't expect that the first sentence that Yawata sent was this.She was a little speechless at first, why did she fish for it? !Then she seemed to realize something. Under normal circumstances, no one would agree to be friends so quickly. emmm... I shouldn't have been so deliberate... Shiyu began to regret it, and was also said by Hachiman that he was fishing.

[Sorry, I was just joking, I hope you don't mind. 〕

Originally, Hachiman would not be so willful, he usually speaks in a very polite tone to strangers.However, after Shi Yu said that Xia Shizi was actually very easy to talk to today, he became a little fussy.Hachiman always has a feeling that Shiyu knows Xia Shizi, and feels that Shiyu is quite familiar with Xia Shizi.Could it be...they know each other?After guessing wildly, Hachiman shifted his focus to Line.

[It's okay, I won't mind, that... have you read my book? 〕

Although Shiyu knew the answer to this question, but now she is not Hachiman's Shiyu-senpai, but the street... no, not the author of the street! ! !It's the new writer Xia Shizi!

[Well, I like your book very much, I know you are a new author.But I feel that your book is better than some so-called masters, and it is completely in my strike zone.If you're a girl, maybe you're my type. 〕

Hachiman can say some flirtatious words on the Internet, but if he is allowed to say these words in reality, he may not be able to say these words, most of the time he will feel shy and unable to continue speaking halfway through.

Pfft... Is this really the shy junior in the afternoon... Even Shiyu couldn't help complaining, what is this.... The contrast is cute ......

〔Thank you for your support, my reader number one. 〕

With a smile, Shiyu sent a message back to Hachiman.

〔Eh? !Could it be that I am the only reader who added you...]

Hachiman was a little speechless, he knew that Xia Shizi's book might not be very popular, but he didn't expect it to be so...

[Reader No. [-]...you seem to have said something that should not be joked just now. 〕

Shi Yu in front of the computer has now emitted a black aura, her face has turned slightly red, and she has been muttering to herself.Well... this is what people often call blackening.

[I'm sorry, but I believe that your book will be popular!You are the first author I fell in love with. 〕