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"Don't you think it's childish?"

Chapter 153, Childish ([-])

"childish?"

Hearing this sentence, Chiba was slightly taken aback.

"That's right, it's childish."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said.

"Although I don't deny that Xia Shizi's first love metronome is a little flawed, but if I use the word childish to express it, I think it's a bit too much."

Hearing Kasumigaoka Shiyu's words, Chiba shook her head.

"Isn't it? Isn't that often said in the comment section on the Internet?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at the phone screen again, and said calmly.

"Well, if you are serious about the comment area, you will lose. How many people leave a message in the comment area before reading the book? I usually say something like this without even reading the book. Treat it as a joke, of course, if it offends me, I will say some bad things~"

Qianye shook her head, apparently disapproving of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's words.

"According to your tone, you should be a very loyal reader of Xia Shizi?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was silent for a while, and then asked.

"Faithful, well, it's okay, after all, this book is both emotional and reasonable, and I still like it."

Chiba hesitated for a moment, then nodded.

"By the way, I remember correctly."

Chiba looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu.

"Speaking of which, I remember that you are also a novelist, right?"

"Huh? How do you know?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was slightly taken aback when he heard these words.

Chiba thought for a while, then looked at Kasumi Hill Shiyu.

"Didn't you say you were looking for some inspiration in that restaurant last time? I remember I asked you and you told me yourself."

"The first time we met was to ask a girl such a shameful thing, it seems that I have to re-mark Chiba's first impression."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu glanced at Qianye with some vigilance.

Chiba: ...What is shame... Your words are easy to cause misunderstandings!

"Yes, I am a writer, and I have a showdown."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said very calmly, and there was no change. Anyway, listening to his tone, he didn't associate himself with Teacher Xia Shizi.

"...Kasumigaoka-san, the way you speak is really interesting..."

Chiba's eyelids twitched slightly.

"Really? Thanks for the compliment."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu accepted this sentence very naturally.

Do you really not understand what I mean, or do you pretend that you don't understand what I mean...

"This love metronome is also over."

"Well, it's been a while since it was over."

Chiba nodded.

"Although there have been some controversies about this book on the website, in my opinion, it's actually pretty good, although the ending is indeed a bit rough."

The rough reason is that Qianye naturally knows what's going on. In order to start a new book as soon as possible, and Xia Shizi's status is a bit offline at the end of this book, after the quick end, it became like this.

"Some people say that this book is ruined by the ending. As a loyal reader of Xia Shizi, what do you think?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at him curiously.

"There is a reason for the ending, it's just..."

Chiba turned her head to look at Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

"I don't agree with what you said, Kasumigaoka-san."

"Do you disagree with what I said?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu also looked at Qianye with some doubts.

"This book is good, at most there are some flaws, why is it ruined, in my opinion, even if the ending is written a little hastily, but this still cannot be denied that this book is a good book. The status of this good book, after all, compared to other books in the industry, Love Metronome leaves them far behind. If this book is ruined by Love Metronome, then other books What is it?"

Qianye smiled slightly and said, now he is more and more doubtful whether the Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu in front of him is one of those writers on the Internet who hate Xia Shizi. After all, she always It's like picking a bone.

However, Qianye just didn't care too much, after all, this can also prove that Xia Shizi, who looks like a student, is very good.

"You are quite optimistic about the love metronome."

Although hearing Qianye's words felt good in my heart, Kasumigaoka Shiyu still responded with a flat face.

"After all, it is a good book, and of course good books will support it."

Seeing Kasumigaoka Shiyu's reaction, Chiba became more convinced of her guess.

"This book is only able to convince readers like you who like to read it. Those who don't like to read it may not necessarily have such an evaluation."

"When a thousand people read Hamlet, they have a thousand different ideas. Why do they think so much, as long as most people who have read the book agree? Why change yourself for those few people? What do you think? After all, the results of this book are also there, and jealousy is also not possible. It is better to think about improving your writing level, this is the right way."

Alas, after all, she is still young, and I also understand that Kasumigaoka Shiwa, as the beautiful girl in Toyosaki School, is their number one age, so she naturally has her own pride, when she sees another person who is better than herself , there will naturally be some such mentality, and Chiba will not say too much.

"Okay, let's stop here first. I only have one point. The Love Metronome is definitely a good book. Not to mention anything else, let's talk about it from the most intuitive aspect. The Love Metronome can obtain the current Such a good sales volume has already determined many issues, so, Kasumigaoka-san, please stop talking about it."

Seeing Kasumigaoka Shiyu who was still about to say something, Chiba shook her head and said.

And when I heard these words, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression became more and more strange, and the eyes looking at Qianye became much softer.

This person... looks pretty good... After all, those words are very close to what Teacher Qianmu said, and he is also a person who really understands the book Love Metronome...

Forget it, let him pass the test...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu exhaled lightly.

Originally, I wanted to leave and go back to my home after today, and the idea of thinking about the plot by myself also quietly dissipated.

"By the way, if you are interested, I have some writing skills in my study, you can go and have a look, it must be of some help to you."

Well, after all, he is also a classmate who helps Xiaohui for free, so it's okay to help her a little bit.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu who heard this sentence had a strange expression on her face. As the teacher Xia Shizi, do I still need a reader to teach me how to write a book? Although Chiba's evaluation of the love metronome is indeed good, but it is only It's not bad.

I am Xia Shizi, and my goal is to pursue the imprint of the teacher. If you have my book in your study room that can improve my writing skills, then you are better than the teacher. I guess he regards me as some unknown Little writer.

"Hey, I understand. If I have time, I will go and have a look."

"Well, the upper door is not locked, so you can go in anytime you want."

Chiba nodded, the words have reached this point, it's up to you whether to read or not.

"It's time to eat, senior, Shiyu-senpai."

"coming."

Hearing Xiaohui's voice, Chiba also put the book in his hand aside, and stood up from the sofa.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu stood up and stretched, revealing her curvy figure.

"Have you ever written a novel, too?"

"I? Well, I did."

Well, if I let you know that I am Senki-sensei, will you be frightened to death~

"How's the result?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu asked curiously.

"It's just what I think, it's okay."

That's right, this is just what I think. After all, if others think it, then I don't know how to describe it.

"Is that so?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded, it seems that he is also a rush?

After all, I feel that this kind of statement is not a common phrase used by authors who are unwilling to admit their failures?

The two of them are like this, they are not on the same channel at all, chatting about what seems to be the same channel...

Chapter 154, Dating ([-])

"Goodbye, Yuichi-senpai, see you tomorrow~"

"Goodbye, see you tomorrow."

"Well, we may not see you tomorrow..."

Waving at Eirisu and Kasumigaoka Shiu, Chiba murmured.

"Senior, is there something going on tomorrow?"

Kato Megumi looked at Chiba with some doubts when he heard this sentence.

"Well, I remember that I told you, Xiaohui, that there is a person in our department who has a problem with his mind, and we will go to solve this problem tomorrow."

Chiba spread her hands and felt a little helpless.

"Is that so?"

Kato Hui nodded slightly.

"Tomorrow, I will only trouble Xiaohui to take care of Xiaoai."

Close the door, looking at Xiao Ai who has been playing all afternoon and fell asleep on the sofa, Chiba whispered.

"Well, don't worry, senior."

"Maintaining a good relationship with Xiao Hui ~ It seems that I did the right thing ~"

Gently wrapping her arms around Kato Megumi's waist, pulling her into his arms, feeling the soft and gentle touch, Chiba murmured.

"This is love~ It's not about maintaining a relationship~Senior~"

Buried her delicate head, which was slightly flushed under the rays of the setting sun, in Chiba's arms, Megumi Kato said full of attachment.

"Yeah...it's love."

Holding Kato Megumi's face with both hands, looking at the pupils like rippling autumn water in the setting sun, Chiba smiled lightly, bowed her head slightly, and bit her crystal red lips.

The dusk outside the window reflected the bodies of the two tightly embracing each other. The light of the afterglow seemed to bless the two and the love between them in this last moment of time. The soles of the two people's feet were slowly elongated until they entered the phantom that could not be illuminated by the afterglow...

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blah blah blah...

The white jade hand quickly typed a line of writing on the keyboard.

Lizi: (Is Qianshu not online this afternoon?)

Qian Shu: (There are some things in that family, I didn't have time to go online, sorry.)

Lizi: (call someone dear, and I will forgive Qianshu~)

Qianshu: (Dear.)

Pear: (so perfunctory~)

Looking at this sentence, Ying Lili can feel Chiba's coping style when Xiao Ai came to hug her today when Chiba was watching the love metronome.

Chiki: (... my dear~)

Pear: (That's right~)

"Hey, I just typed an extra symbol... I can't think of any difference from the previous sentence..."