The target is light novel master

Therefore, in order to make Xiazhiqiu Shiyu go further, she felt that she should do something.

As an editor, it is actually difficult for her to provide any constructive advice on improving the quality of the author's own works, so the only people she can rely on are the other two authors who are in charge of her.

But today, Mr. Izumi happened to bump into him, so he simply asked him directly.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu patted the stack of printed documents in front of her, which Machida Sonoko specially printed out from the Internet when discussing with her.

Otherwise, browsing from the Internet is really too slow.

"This is my work. The famous Mr. Izumi probably hasn't read it, right? So please review it carefully."

Putting a high hat on him in the words is obviously a way of raising first and then lowering. If what he said is not standard, it must be a 180-degree turn of irony.

"it is good."

Izumi Chiha sat across from her without changing his face, and then flipped through the works.

Of course, the serialized content on the Internet is not too much, there is only one volume, about [-] words, but it took him more than half an hour to finish reading it all.

"From the perspective of attitude, there is no perfunctory."

At this point, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded secretly.

But attitude is attitude, whether you can understand it is another matter.

If you can't give her a convincing suggestion...

For this kind of person who is so famous, she must be able to say something that makes the other person feel ashamed.

'Well... well written indeed! '

This is Izumi Chiha's first feeling after reading it.

From the first volume of "Love Metronome", he saw a lot of things. The first point is of course the writing style of the other party. This is the most intuitive place. Frankly speaking, it is three points better than him now!

Compared with the self who just debuted, that has an overwhelming advantage.

As expected of a genius!

The starting point is different from ordinary people.

Of course, in terms of light novels, writing alone is not enough, just as comics cannot rely solely on drawing skills, the core of the story and the shaping of the plot are the real focus.

In this regard, just from the first volume, it is not bad!Not only is there no lack of imagination, but the degree of imagination!

So how is he going to pick a thorn?

"Teacher Izumi, please speak, I will listen carefully."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression also became a little more solemn.

She is not so arrogant that she really thinks that she is an invincible genius as soon as she debuts. Compared with the performance of Qianshou Village Zheng that she knows, she is really far behind... So although she looked down on the surface just now, she actually had to treat her Izumi Takashi's name aroused importance.

"The writing is very good, the progress of the story is okay, and the dreamlike atmosphere created also makes readers have sweet thoughts. Pure love is 100%... It is indeed a work that can win the fantastic award!"

Izumi Chiha smiled slightly, and her mouth was full of praise.

"???"

Machida Sonoko looked confused.

Teacher, I asked you to criticize me!

Let you work hard to educate Xia Shizi!

Let her know that the sky is high and the earth is thick...

Why are you so full of praise after reading it?

154 I will surpass you, old thief Izumi!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu narrowed his eyes slightly, and did not relax his vigilance.

These words sounded like a tribute to what I said just now, so...

"but……"

Izumi Chiha's expression turned cold.

The turning point she had been waiting for had finally come.

"Indeed, regardless of other things, the "Love Metronome" written by you, Xia Shizi, is really good, but it is limited to the story content of one volume! If it is going to be officially serialized, then its flaws are very big! Even It can be said to be full of flaws."

He said sharply.

"Why do you say that?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu would not be directly frightened by his sensational speech, what she needed was real insights to make her change her mind.

"First of all, Teacher Xia Shizi has never been in love, has she?"

Izumi Chiha didn't answer the question instead.

"This...it's not true, but it's not a rare thing, right? If you haven't been in a relationship, it doesn't mean you can't write light novels with romantic content, right? As far as I know, many light novelists are still single Right?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes flickered.

"puff!"

Machida Sonoko couldn't help laughing.

"?"

She looked suspicious.

"Ah, I remembered that when Izumi-sensei submitted the manuscript for the first time, what he showed me was the original manuscript of "White Album", and he also said something similar... It seems that the two of you have something in common. .”

Machida Sonoko explained why.

"boring."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked away.

I heard him continue to say: "This is really not a problem, but it is a problem for you now! Because Teacher Xia Shizi's fantasy of girls' love does not contain other impurities, creating a very high purity... But after the accumulation It’s too boring to write down! Don’t you really feel it? You should have thought about the content of the second volume, right?”

That gaze came over.

"Ok?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes became a little dignified.

This question really hit the point, and she couldn't help thinking for a while.

Being a wise person, she understood what he meant.

After finishing the first volume of "Love Metronome", she felt a sense of fatigue. Every time she fantasized about the content of the second volume, she was always unsustainable and could not go as smoothly as before.

She understands that if she bites the bullet and writes it down, it will definitely not be a work that truly satisfies her.

Why is this so?

It's very simple, because her accumulation is not enough.

She has never been in love, and the "love" in her heart is not enough to support more story development, so she can only spin around in a limited space, and then she will only be stuck in the mud, and every step is difficult!

Izumi Chiha actually made a similar mistake when writing "White Album", so he took it for granted.

If you want to solve the problem, you can only refer to his later practice and find the answer in other people's works.

"That's true."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu had to admit this.

The pride of a girl does not allow her to act bluntly on such professional issues.

"Mr. Izumi, you say that, it seems to be true!"

Machida Sonoko also understood after listening.

She always had a bad premonition before, but the perfect performance of the first volume made her ignore the past.

Now, I finally found the reason!

It has to be you, Mr. Izumi... Teacher!

Fortunately, the problem was found before the official publication, and it can be revised. If it is published, it will be difficult to operate. If it is not handled properly, there may even be a risk of cutting it in half.

This is not a joke.

It may not even wait until then.

Due to the decline in grades and the blow of a sense of gap in their hearts, there are not a few light novelists who directly give up on themselves.

"Is this enough?"

Izumi Chiha stopped talking and waited for the other party's reaction.

"This is indeed enough."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu gritted her teeth and said.

From the perspective of conception, she had a problem. After that, no matter how well she performed, she would be constrained a lot.

Therefore, there is no need to talk about the details.

"call……"

Kasumi Hill Shiyu took a deep breath.

She's not one to lose.

What's more, asking this question really helped her a lot, and it can be called the grace of regeneration.

So she stood up and said sincerely, "Mr. Hequan, thank you for your guidance."

Seeing the girl's softened attitude, Izumi Chiha felt instantly relieved.

"Ahem, Mr. Izumi, since you raised the question, is there a way to solve it?"

Machida Sonoko reminded from the side.

"Oh, it's actually not difficult. You just need to refer to other works, such as anime, light novels, games, or even TV dramas. As long as you pay attention, you can solve many problems."

He reacted.

"I got it."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's wine-red pupils fell on his body, as if to engrave it firmly.

She not only remembered the method and kindness, but also this face!

"Editor Machida, the previously agreed time is temporarily void, please give me another month of preparation time, I am going to rework the content of the first volume!"

Kasumigaoka Shiwa turned her head to Machida Sonoko and said firmly.

"I just like the enthusiasm of the teacher! I will communicate with the publishing house to get enough time."

Machida Sonoko nodded in agreement, and then teased, "If the time is extended, I really can't achieve the achievement of 'all the authors under me made their debut in middle school'. Teacher Xia Shizi will be in high school soon, right? It's a pity~"

"That's right, Mr. Nayuta's age is indeed..."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu stared blankly.

Sure enough, the world is huge!

One day you will meet great people.

……

After dealing with the affairs and with a new goal, the girl took the elevator downstairs.

When she walked to the street, she suddenly looked up at the sky with a thoughtful expression.

The experience of this day may be very important to her future career.

Not only did she receive help, she realized her 'weakness', but also inspired her to fight even harder.

It turns out that writing novels is not as easy as she imagined before, and it is not easy to reach the top by writing casually.

Just wanting to surpass the person just now is not a simple matter.

"By the way, what is the game that Machida-san recommended just now? It seems to be called "White Album" or something? Let's order online later."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu put aside the distracting thoughts in his heart, and re-focused on the road of self-improvement.