The target is light novel master

But after giving the address, in addition to receiving these items, she also received a laptop.

If a worker wants to do a good job, he must first sharpen his tools, which is why Kaner Nayuta sent this computer.

This kindness is too great, although it is nothing to Nayuta, but to the black cat, it is a matter of giving charcoal in the snow.

Black Cat: Thank you!I will never forget this kindness!

"If you want to thank you, thank you senior! If there is no senior, I wouldn't be where I am today, and I wouldn't be able to help you..."

Kaner Nayuta smiled knowingly after seeing this news, and said while typing.

……

After this day, another three weeks passed in the blink of an eye, and the time had come to the end of the semester. After the next spring break, it was time for him to be promoted to Third Miss.

"Ah, this year is going to pass again. Thinking about it, it's pretty fast."

Izumi Chiha stretched her waist and said with emotion.

"Yeah, time flies so fast, I feel like this year is coming to an end..."

Nishikino Maki also spoke slowly.

She glanced sideways.

Except for the entanglement with Izumi classmate at the next table during that time, there are no memorable episodes in my mind.

Reading and studying, going to cram school, and going to the music room to play the piano in the afternoon, there is almost no spare time, so it is natural to feel that time is flying fast.

"By the way, Mr. Nishikino, weren't you interested in the whereabouts of those two songs before? Did you try to play "White Album"?"

Izumi Chiha spoke up.

When "White Album" first came out, he mentioned this matter to the other party.

"I don't play games, especially this kind of beautiful girl games... It's so weird, I really don't understand, there are people who like that kind of thing."

Nishino Maki shook her head lightly.

Izumi Chiha looked at her slightly.

Did your answer reveal something?

"How do you know it's a beautiful girl game?"

Under his sight, Maki Nishikino was like a frightened deer, with a blushing face, and said without saying a word: "I didn't come to play on purpose! I was just a little curious, so I took a look at the game process, Not much in-depth..."

"Yes, it's just out of curiosity, but I'm also a little curious, that is... what does Xikino-san think of this game?"

Izumi Chiha suddenly smiled.

"Also, it's okay... The picture is pretty good, but the main plot is so weird, it makes people feel panicked, is it true that galgames are all games of this type?"

Nishino Maki asked very puzzled.

"Of course not, it's just that the style of this game is like this, and there are other styles besides..."

He replied.

"oh oh."

Nishino Maki nodded.

"By the way, I'm still a little concerned. On the labels of those two songs, I should be 'Nishimino', so you are Izumi the highest, right?"

She stares.

The production staff's annotations will only be at the end, which seems to reveal something, but...

Girls are more concerned with another matter now.

160 Things about finding out that your neighbor is a famous light novelist

"Yeah, what's the problem?"

Izumi Chiha tilted her head.

"It's a big problem!"

Nishino Maki pursed her red lips.

She has always felt that the classmate next to her is not an ordinary person... In other words, it seems normal that the guy who hangs out with that guy Sawamura is not an ordinary person?

But what she didn't expect was that it was so abnormal.

This is her first time playing this kind of game, so she deliberately searched for the strategy in advance, so as not to understand anything, but saw some 'strange' comments on the webpage.

Among them, the two names Hequan Gaoge/Old Thief caught her attention.

It is obviously related to the surname of Izumi.

And now that he has been recognized by the other party, doesn't that mean...

"Are you still a good light novelist?"

Nishino Maki asked in a firm tone.

"It seems to have been exposed! But please don't tell me, Mr. Nishikino, I like a peaceful daily life."

Izumi Chiha was not surprised, and pretended to joke.

"I saw it from the comment section, you are very famous! Although your reputation seems to be not very good, but I checked, the sales volume is very high, the light novel you wrote..."

Nishikino Maki's tone was faint.

Although I am not an expert, but after seeing the data, I don't think it will be an easy thing to do.

"Average..."

He waved.

Nishikino Maki treated her differently.

I didn't expect Izumi to have such a side, what a surprise...!

A light novelist who debuted in middle school, this was an eye-opener for her.

It also made her more interested.

What kind of work did this deskmate write that filled those people with righteous indignation?

Why don't you go to the bookstore if you have time?

You don't have to buy it, just get to know it.

……

in the room.

The pair of wine red pupils of the beautiful girl with long black hair and straight eyes were engrossed in the laptop in front of her, clicking the mouse again and again.

"This is "White Album"? The plot written by Mr. Izumi?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu listened to the ending song coming from the earphones, her expression became more and more exciting.

Her two-dimensional concentration is not high, but like many people, she grew up watching animation on TV, so when she grew up, she never played games like galgame, even manga and light novels. It is only recently that I have gradually understood.

But she can also feel that the quality of the galgame "White Album" is undoubtedly of a high level, and the performance of the main writer certainly plays an irreplaceable role.

Although it is indeed well written, this style is completely different from her "Metronome in Love".

So how is she going to study?

Aware of her own problems, she is working hard to rewrite the first volume of "Love Metronome", preparing to seek some answers from it.

A complete style change is definitely not advisable.

She didn't forget that when it was serialized on the Internet, the comments below, those people's favorite style was exactly her perfect love atmosphere now.

Therefore, the scope of changes should be within an allowable level.

After a month of persistent efforts, she finally completed the transformation.

Modified the progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, leaving a suitable room for the appearance of another heroine, so as not to prevent the popularity of the first heroine from being too high and reject the appearance of the second heroine.

She has restructured the next plot with reference to "White Album" and recently collected romance comics and light novels.

Try to make "Love Metronome" go on the road of driving high and high, instead of the illusion of castles in the air like before.

She handed the revised work to Sonoko Machida, and got her approval.

"Okay, it seems that you, Xia Shizi, have successfully brought into play your potential. You have revised your work very well, and you can properly meet the requirements for a long serialization... After a month, Xia Shizi will be able to officially debut."

Machida Sonoko said very satisfied.

"Well... But, I need a favor from Machida-san."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes were piercing.

"What are you busy with?"

Machida-en questioned.

"actually……"

……

Izumi Chiha had just finished taking a shower and returned to her bedroom. Just as she was about to check her phone, she saw a friend request - I am Xia Shizi.

Both belong to Miss Yuanzi, so of course there is no need to refuse.

After he clicked to accept, before he could ask 'why add me', the other side spoke.

Xia Shizi: I have humbly accepted Mr. Izumi’s criticism before and revised the first volume again. This time, I hope Mr. Izumi will give another evaluation!

"Yo, this is unconvinced, do you want to prove that you are here?"

The corner of Izumi Chiha's mouth rose, understanding her thoughts very well.

The last time she was belittled, she definitely couldn't hold back her face, especially for someone like her who hadn't experienced setbacks, so she had to express the breath hidden in her heart.

Izumi is the highest: As we all know, beautiful girls need to show themselves when they ask for help...

"Mr. Izumi, what an interesting person..."

After Xiazhiqiu Shiyu finished reading it, he smiled instead of being annoyed.

Xia Shizi: Really?This is the first time I have heard of such a statement, but it is indeed understandable, then let’s meet up, and I will satisfy your dirty and ugly thoughts, teacher~

Izumi Takami: I'm just kidding.

Izumi Chiha would not take it seriously. If she was deceived, she would naturally find a way to prevaricate. After all, she was just someone she met once, so how could she pay such a price for the novel?

What's more, he is a gentleman!

You won't make such a petty act!

Xia Shizi: Yes, that is really a pity.

Xia Shizi: In that case, Mr. Izumi, I hope to hear your golden words again.

Izumi Chiha received the document she sent and re-read the revised "Love Metronome".

During this month, Xia Shizi has indeed undergone a transformation. The story in the first volume is no longer as simple as before, but has become a little more complicated and deep, without being intoxicated in the atmosphere of "love" all day long.

This is undoubtedly a huge improvement.

After reading it, he found that there was really nothing to be picky about, so he replied:

Compared to before, Teacher Xia Shizi really listened carefully to her opinions. The two protagonists no longer seem like such fake things, and the changes in emotions have become rationalized... Teacher Xia Shizi is indeed a genius !

"After all, I am Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu..."

Seeing the reply, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help humming softly and boasting a little.

Suddenly, she reacted.

Why am I so happy!

It's just getting this guy's approval, but isn't that what it should be?

161 Goodbye, Izumi-san.