The target is light novel master

Ying Lili smiled and continued to turn the page, ushering in the climax of the story.

This sentence may have a certain deep meaning, but based on her understanding of her childhood sweetheart, you will not understand the work until it reaches a certain level, so don't think too much about it and get to the point.

At the beginning, it is a simple self-introduction.

His name is Cai Yueang, and he is an ordinary high school student with extraordinary wrist strength. After buying instant noodles in a convenience store, he inexplicably travels to another world.

"It's such a perfunctory way of time travel... It's not reincarnation, it's not soul wear, but wearing it? It's not summoned, so isn't it the way of 'summoning the brave'?"

At the beginning, I didn't surprise the girl with twin ponytails, so I continued to read.

According to his description, Cai Yueang's life did not immediately have extraordinary talents or invincible gold fingers like other traversers and reincarnations. He was just an ordinary person who stepped into another world and then had nothing to do. That's it, although I am very curious about this world, but I can't do anything when I am not familiar with the place of life.

Although it is useless, it is clear that the appearance of the newcomer has been noticed, and then he was blocked in the alley.

Just when he was being robbed and was about to resist, the beautiful silver-haired half-elf girl who was called the source of all evil finally appeared in sight...!

184 The first is Cai Yueang who committed the crime of arrogance

"Huh? From the looks of it now, this protagonist is mediocre, with no special features, and this seemingly unattractive character creation, what is Qian Yu thinking!"

Ying Lili muttered while turning the pages.

But this is just the beginning, and the personality charm and shaping issues are just talking, maybe it was set up on purpose?

……

In order to repay the help of the silver-haired half-elf girl, the protagonist Cai Yueang decided to help her find the lost property.

It's more or less a bit of a sensuality.

During the itinerary, he helped the lost child find his mother, and also talked with a girl named 'Shatila' about the half-elf. Because of the time traveler, the two sides have different cognitions, forming a wonderful misunderstanding. Let the relationship between the two get closer invisibly.

In this section of the story, Izumi Gao once again demonstrated his writing ability improved through training, and wrote the emotional interaction between people in a delicate and moving way.

In addition to increasing interaction, there is another particularly important reason for inserting such a plot in the middle.

After all, some things are extraordinarily precious only after comparison.

After a slightly warm exchange, the plot immediately ushered in a huge turning point.

Cai Yueang took the lamp and entered the dim hut.

The corpse in the pool of blood...

The joking voice suddenly sounded from behind...

Before seeing the appearance of the other party, he entered the fear of dying.

The touch of the pen tip instantly mobilized the readers' emotions.

This scene vaguely brought them back to that day—the day when Mami-senpai passed away suddenly.

"hold head high……"

Then the silver-haired girl who came in to investigate also fell to the ground without accident.

"Wait for me, I will save you!"

Cai Yueang looked at the silver-haired girl beside her, and clenched her hand tightly, as if he had some sense of déjà vu, and said such words.

In a blink of an eye, it was back to that moment in the afternoon.

……

"Ah?"

"Wow, I was scared to death! He died so quickly! How could it be so fast! Even Qian Yu, you have to say hello! It seems that you have returned to the past time, some kind of time-based ability Is it? It doesn't look like a completely useless setting."

Ying Lili exclaimed, then looked down and immediately breathed a sigh of relief, and began to analyze on her own.

After reading "Magic Girl Madoka Magica", it is not difficult for readers to understand what happened, and even guess the theme of this light novel, could it be the different world version of Akami Homura and Madoka?

In order to save the silver-haired girl, then the protagonist starts the story of reincarnation?

……

Of course, Izumi Chiha's design here is slightly different from the original work. The original Nayue Ang realized that he had the ability to go back to the past after dying several times. It is true that it is a bit late.

But here he is set as the protagonist to realize this, in order to confirm this possibility, and also for the badge, he went to the hut again.

Of course, although the plot design has been slightly changed, the result will not change. Cai Yueang did not change the previous result, and died again under Elsa's hands. The only difference is that the person who died is different.

Feelings of depression and despair rushed over in an instant, and even made Cai Yueang think of giving up.

After all, he is just an ordinary person, not as powerful as he imagined, why must he let himself suffer like that?

However, when he glanced at the profile of the silver-haired girl passing by, he gave up that thought again.

"Sure enough, it's for sex, right? I always feel that the protagonist is not as charming as I imagined. He is really just like an ordinary person, except that he is a little stronger."

Ying Lili began to complain mercilessly again.

But seeing this, she was not disappointed, because judging from the current plot, it was finally not that kind of shoddy work in another world, but had a certain core and persistence.

As long as this is the case, readers will continue to look at the name 'Izumi Takashi'.

When we got here, everyone understood.

Obviously, this is not the story of Long Aotian. Although the protagonist has special abilities, his combat power is still not enough. Only by thinking can he be saved.

Everyone didn't feel the aggrieved, because old readers are used to the suffering in "Demon Slayer: Blade" and "Magic Girl Madoka Magica", and now this level is just trivial.

……

Elsa is very powerful, so we can only unite and defeat each other with everyone's strength!

Cai Yueang learned to think.

However, he still underestimated Elsa's fighting power.

Everyone is still not an opponent.

This time, the despair was even worse.

It wasn't until the next reincarnation, the appearance of Juggernaut Reinhardt, that the death reincarnation could be broken.

Facing the powerful Juggernaut, even Elsa was no match, and eventually fled.

Cai Yueang, who rescued the silver-haired half-elf with bruises all over his body, only made one request in the end, and that was to know the other party's real name.

"My name is Emilia."

A reassuring smile appeared on the girl's face.

It was not until the end of the first volume that readers finally learned the real name of the silver-haired girl.

……

"It's just so-so. I can only say...it's not bad. After making me wait for so long, I'm finally not disappointed."

This is Ying Lili's feeling after watching it.

Personally, this evaluation is already quite high.

There is nothing to be picky about the writing style, and it can be considered top-notch among other world works that do not pay attention to this aspect of ability, especially the empathy aspect is very real, such as the description of the protagonist when he died, there is really a sense of immersive fear, It's like actually experiencing death.

What she didn't know was that for childhood sweethearts, this was also a unique experience, so it was extra real.

"The plot design is not bad, and it has its own characteristics. The story of reincarnation and salvation is indeed quite attractive, but it is not easy to write it well, especially for the main character. Qian Yu doesn't know if he can grasp it. stay..."

This is the only thing Ying Lili worries about.

The reincarnation story in "Magic Girl Madoka Magica", although Izumi Chiha wrote it in a little more detail, but in fact the causal relationship during that time is very easy to describe, but in the new work, it must be considered rationality to some extent up.

Ying Lili's vision has also improved.

She was right, this was indeed almost the only difficulty Izumi Chiha had when creating this work.

"In other words, he can't grasp it. Why do I worry so much? This is his work, so he should care about it himself, and there is no need for me, an amateur, to remind... If the sales are not as expected, you should cry What he wants is himself, let him show off there one day!"

Ying Lili was talking to herself, showing a smug smile of gloating.

185 The Old Thief Who Never Forgets His Original Heart

When I saw Cai Yueang and Emilia both going to die...

"Senior really does not forget the original intention."

Ke'er Nayuta supported his forehead with a doting tone.

Now, she will no longer be shocked by such a plot, unless the death is special enough to compare with Ba Mami's...

As for now, this is what everyone thinks is the routine operation of an old thief, and it can't scare anyone anymore!

What's more, this time it looks like a knife, but it's not.

At the end of the first volume, after experiencing the ups and downs of the story, it finally ushered in a perfect ending.

"However, although the predecessor described the fear of death very well, there is another point that is easier to ignore, right? From the reader's point of view, the actions taken by the protagonist are all reasonable, but in the eyes of others who do not retain reincarnation memories, Then it gets subtler..."

Kaner Nayuta can already imagine that the future storyline will inevitably have such a sense of division.

But what she can think of, the senior should be able to think of it, right?

"Hmm... I suddenly want to chat with senior."

Twirling her chin with her fingers, the silver-haired girl couldn't hold back her thoughts after thinking about it.

……

"This style of different world, although the time system setting is very novel and rare, but it seems to be quite retro from the description? It always feels like some kind of fantasy epic story, paved with blood and heroism, and There is a huge difference between the current mobile phone hero, system player and other world Long Aotian's works... Mr. Izumi is really tough, but this time everyone should have expected that with the teacher's style, he prefers to challenge higher difficulties. So it was no surprise.”

Wu Geng Liuli slowly closed the work called "re. Life in Another World from Zero", thinking about it thoughtfully.

"Unfortunately, with Izumi-sensei's way of writing, I can't gain experience at all."

She sighed again.

Teacher Izumi told himself that as a light novelist who is about to embark on a career path, he must improve his ability, be good at learning the characteristics of the other party, and obtain what he needs from it.

Recently, with the support of Nayuta, she has purchased many works from different worlds, which has improved her appreciation ability in this area.

But obviously, this level is too high for her for the time being.

"This book is..."

Wugeng Liuli re-entered the research stage, and then picked up a work called "The Dark Fairy of Explosive Flame".

"Is this the No. [-] work on the ORICON chart?"

After reading the first volume, Wugeng Liuli scratched her head with a strange expression.

Because of the good sales, she ordered a set, but there was nothing worthy of her eyes.

Well, not at all.

This is a complete piece of rubbish!

"Or is it that my eyes are high and my hands are low?"

Wugeng Liuli was a little worried that he had this problem, so he asked people in the industry.

Izumi Takashi: Is there a possibility that it is just so 'garbage'?

Black Cat: But its sales volume is quite good, and it even topped the ORICON ranking list!

Izumi Takashi: If it was the black cat before, you would definitely think that this is the toilet paper work, but now you are caught in a kind of thinking limitation.

Izumi Takashi: As I told you before, it’s actually not that difficult to make a debut and have a certain amount of sales. As long as you can barely read the writing and add good-looking illustrations, you will have a chance to sell well. After all, there are no There is no shortage of "little white readers", you only need to grasp the market and please them to live.

Izumi Takashi: But there will be such a consciousness, which also shows that Black Cat has begun to look at problems from the author's world. It seems that the day of debut is not far away!

Black Cat: Thank you teacher for your blessing and clarification.

"I see."

Wugeng Liuli nodded, and then looked at "The Dark Fairy of Explosive Flame".

"This Mr. Yamada can sell well with such works, so can I do it too?"