The target is light novel master

'What's the matter with this proud determination? '

Seeing her performance, Aki Shino couldn't help complaining in his heart.

Those who didn't know thought Izumi-sensei belonged to Senshou-mura Masaru-sensei.

"The idea of ​​a work does not need to be so great. Pain and real growth are also characteristics that attract people to read. Others are not good enough to control, and they will be easily backlashed. But if it is Mr. Izumi, then It's different."

Senshou Murata continued to speak.

"Is it because Mr. Izumi is too proficient?"

Aki Shino couldn't help laughing.

The origin of the name of the old thief Hequan only needs a little understanding now, and she recognized this name without exception.

There is one thing to say, although I like Teacher Izumi's works very much, but this undoubtedly made her scarred. I don't know how many tears shed because of Teacher Izumi...

"Although there are some deviations, it can be understood in this way."

Senju Murura nodded.

"If Mr. Izumi heard that Mr. Muramasa could understand him in this way, he would probably be overjoyed. He would regard Mr. Muramasa as a confidant, right?"

Aki Shino thought about it for a while.

"Can you become a bosom friend?"

Qianshou Cunzheng's eyes lit up, feeling a little excited.

"As expected of Mr. Izumi's number one fan."

Seeing her expression, Aki Shino propped his chin with one hand, showing a gentle smile.

194 will not disappoint Mr. Izumi!

"Ahhh, my blood pressure is getting high! It's too outrageous for Lem to execute the protagonist himself? This reminds me of when Akami Homura executed Madoka, it's also a similar story. wonderful?"

"The first volume starts to abuse, and the second volume continues to abuse... Sure enough, the ability to return from death is good. The old thief had to think about how to proceed with the plot before, so don't worry about it now. You can abuse hard! Everyone's scalps are numb!"

"This volume made me a little scared... not only is it a suspense drama, but it has also become a horror novel, which makes people frightened."

"Huh? Strange, Rem was cursed to death, that is to say, someone else cursed the protagonist?"

"It's a little uncomfortable to watch, so aggrieved! Xiao Meiyan didn't suffer so much at the beginning, right? But she hasn't achieved her goal yet."

"No way, Cai Yueang is just an ordinary person, and it's not the setting of Reinhardt before, so there's no way to push it across. What's more, if it's so powerful, wouldn't the ability of death return be just a display? Then it's the same as the work. It doesn't fit the purpose."

"It seems that the old thief wants to write a growth story of ordinary people struggling to survive... Well, compared to today's trends, it is another kind of special."

"This kind of feature is not easy to write, and only a master of swordsmanship like the old thief has the courage to try it."

"Cai Yueang finally decided to go back and save Rem, it's right to repay the grievance with virtue."

"Upstairs, I think it's more lustful!"

"Could it be that Nai Yue Ang is another kind of truth, goodness and beauty similar to Madoka? (laughs and crying) (dog head)"

"Before, I was wondering why Cai Yueang didn't tell the truth, so it would be easier to pass the test... Now it's all right, the explanation will come soon."

……

The appearance of the second volume has shocked many people, but because the resistance has gradually increased to the ancients, after a little discomfort, they are thrown into the discussion of the plot.

Out of trust in the old thief, they will not choose to give up because of such pain points.

[From the current plot, it can be deduced that the ability of death return is probably related to the witch, because Beatrice said that Cai Yueang has the breath of a witch, and there is only one jealous witch Shatila, it is difficult I don't think there is any relationship between it... and it is also the witch's breath that makes Lei Mu identify Cai Yueang as an enemy. I think there is also a hidden story here, which is intertwined and connected, and it moves the whole body. I think this That's the real point of the story! 】

[So it's not because Mr. Izumi's level is out of balance and he writes such a way of handling it, but because he just wants to write an 'interesting' story... Huh, bad taste!Later, I will pour bitter water on the teacher himself, and let him have a headache! 】

Mafuyu Shiina once again expressed her thoughts on her blog.

Compared with the plot of the first volume, the content of the second volume is even more explosive. Whether it is from the perspective of abusing people, or from the design of the plot, or the vivid emotional expression of the characters, they all describe Just right.

"It hurts! It hurts so much! It hurts through the sky!"

"When Mafuyu-chan said that, the plot suddenly made a lot of sense."

"The disgusting old thief is still roaming around in this world! I suggest Mafuyu-chan launch a jihad to defeat the old thief!"

"The old thief abused Mafuyu thousands of times, and Mafuyu treated the old thief like first love~ It turns out that you are the one who loves Mafuyu so deeply!"

……

"Uh……"

Izumi Chiha scratched her head.

I had a rare chat with Mafuyu for half an hour just now, but it was more about expressing my emotions than chatting.

This is not the first time we have met. After all, there are quite a few people who read his novels in the friend list. Except for Sagiri, Eirari, and Takasago Chie, who would go crazy in reality, the others only It is possible to speak out through the channel of the Internet.

To a certain extent, they represent the feelings of many readers, so he will listen carefully and then...do not change anything.

Now that the main line and theme have been established, it will be too late to change the appearance, otherwise it will become a completely different situation.

For example, Xia Shizi who was helped by him.

If he gives advice to the other party after the first volume of "Love Metronome" is released, no matter how much he changes, he will not be able to break through the innate shackles. The first volume will become a hidden danger and create a sense of separation from the following plot.

But now, the popularity of "Love Metronome" is quite strong. Obviously, although everyone likes the content that was serialized at the beginning, everyone has accepted the revised content.

Of course, this is also inseparable from Xia Shizi's own efforts.

Considering that he is going to school, he can still exceed the progress of the normal serialization time. Judging from the original manuscripts sent to him twice, his enthusiasm and perseverance are also very amazing, not necessarily inferior to him.

Similarly, another apprentice, Wu Geng Liuli, although his aptitude is mediocre, has also been promoted rapidly after putting in his efforts, and finally reached the position of No.1, which is expected to be published.

Just a week later.

Wugeng Liuli finally received contact from editor-in-charge Kaguragawa Iris.

"We can consider preparing for publication."

"Great! It's finally here! The great journey of the Night Demon Queen is about to begin!"

Wugeng Liuli was so excited that she couldn't help herself, she jumped up and said a second line in her mouth.

"Strange Miss Liuli."

"Miss Liuli?"

The two sisters showed puzzled expressions.

"Ahem, it's none of your business, you go watch your TV."

Wugeng Liuli coughed, then showed her majesty as a sister, and pointed at the TV.

Wugen Liuli entered her room, and then sent the news to Ke'er Nayuta and Izumi Chiha.

Izumi Takashi: Well, congratulations on your debut!But this is also expected, and the road ahead will be more difficult. Don't think that you can sit back and relax after making a successful debut. The risk of being cut in half still exists.

"Thank you, Mr. Izumi, for your teaching, I will keep it firmly in mind."

Wugeng Liuli replied like this.

The road in the industry is really walking on thin ice. If you are not careful, you may overturn. This is the lesson left by the predecessors. She will not ignore the past with arrogance.

She will cherish the opportunity she finally got!

Nayuta: Congratulations, Miss Black Cat~ Although there were twists and turns, she still made her debut successfully. I hope that Black Cat can fulfill our previous agreement by then!

"Of course I will fulfill my promise, and I won't disappoint Nayuta and... Izumi-sensei."

Wugeng Liuli smiled calmly after seeing Nayuta's news.

195 Teacher Eri Kashiwagi, You Don't Want to...

Summer vacation is slowly passing by.

Izumi Chiha played games with his sister every day to relax, and while conceiving the third volume, it didn't have the slightest influence.

This kind of simple and pure happiness always makes people linger.

At this juncture, for those ACG fans like them, the Summer Comic Con, one of the two most important events every year, is coming again.

The difference from previous years is that there are four people in this year's summer comic exhibition, and the two extra are Kaner Nayuta and Wugen Liuli.

……

"Let's go quickly, if you wait for the next shift, there will be too many people, it will be crowded to death!"

Early in the morning, Ying Lili, who was disguised, came to the door of Izumi's house, and then called him.

"Aha……"

Izumi Chiha yawned and walked out of the door lazily.

"Looks like you haven't woken up, stayed up late? Isn't today's event already agreed? Look at you, don't fall asleep halfway through the walk!"

Ying Lili looked suspiciously.

"I had so much fun playing with Sagiri yesterday, I accidentally passed the early morning."

Izumi Chiha opened her mouth to explain.

"Stay up late and play games? Heh."

Ying Lili showed an indiscernible smile, as if she understood something.

It was finally replaced...

"It's not long since the summer vacation, Ying Lili has never been here, what are you busy with?"

he wondered.

"What else can I do? I'm busy with work."

The girl pouted.

In her heart, this may be the last time for Eri Kashiwagi to shine, so she is more diligent than in previous years.

"Do you want to be together after that?"

Izumi Chiu said again.

"Well, it's not impossible, if I happen to be bored..."

The girl looked 'reluctantly'.

……

In order to prevent overcrowding, the two of them got up earlier today than before, but the other two who were participants got up earlier.

Before dawn, Gogen Ruri took the tram from Chiba to Tokyo and arrived at Nayuta's residence.

"Black cat, I have two sets of cosplay costumes here, one is the magical girl Akami Homura, and the other is after becoming a demon, which one do you like?"

Kaner Nayuta held up two sets of clothes and asked with a smile.

"It's still about magical girls, but what about that... How is it different from sexy lingerie! How dare I go out!"

Wu Geng Liuli blushed and complained.

After all, this is reality, not Two-dimensional. There are very few people who dare to dress so boldly, and her personality is actually conservative.

"Candy, but I'm not suitable for this style, so by the way, give this set to the black cat, maybe it will be useful one day..."

Kanarnayuta joked in a tone of voice.

"Nayuta...!"

Wu Geng Liuli's gaze became fierce.

Suddenly came a message prompt.

"Ah, we have to hurry up, senior and Ying Lili have already set off."

Ke Er Nayu took another look at the phone, then raised his head and said, "I'll help you change the black cat."

"it is good."