The target is light novel master
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Sayuri Sawamura saw that he didn't like this, so she waved her hand in disinterest and let him in.
28 has a fever
"Dong dong dong..."
"Yinglili, I'm coming in."
Knocking on the door, Izumi Chiha chose to push the door and enter.
On the big bed on one side, the blond girl's head was covered by a quilt, a wet towel was stuck on her forehead, her cheeks had a sickly flush, making her look weaker than usual.
After hearing his voice, the girl slowly opened her eyes, turned her head slightly, and silently looked at him sitting beside the bed.
"Here's a handout for you."
Izumi Chiha lifted the thing on the handle and put it on the bedside table.
"You put it there."
Ying Lili replied calmly.
Seeing her pretending to be calm, Izumi Chiha couldn't hold back anymore.
"Ha ha……"
laugh out loud.
"What, Qianyu, what are you laughing at! Didn't you see that he was sick!"
Ying Lili took that smile as a mockery.
"If you don't listen to the old man's words, you will suffer in front of your eyes...Didn't I remind you before? Who told you not to wear more, now it's all right, and you caught a cold again, isn't it your own fault?"
Izumi Chiha clicked his tongue.
"Does it have something to do with this? Didn't I wear the same clothes as everyone else? As a result, only I got sick. It must be because of my innate constitution. Other than that, it doesn't matter."
Ying Lili began to quibble.
"Forget it, anyway, it's pointless to be entangled in this kind of thing. After all, Ying Lili is a person who suffers from a short memory."
Izumi Chiha spread her hands.
"You really want to be beaten, you! If I'm not sick now...cough cough, I will cover your head with a quilt and beat you hard."
Ying Lili raised her fierce little canine teeth.
"I think you should recover from your illness first? Your whole body is already burning red."
He laughed again.
Ying Lili's skin as white as jade was now dyed a light red, not only her cheeks but also her earlobes, it looked like she was in a state of 'shyness' all the time.
"It's almost over, I can go to school tomorrow, don't worry about it! Baga!"
Ying Lili grumbled and glared at him.
"Really? You won't be trying to be brave again."
Izumi Chiha took a look at her.
"Of course not! The temperature has already dropped, if you don't believe me, try it yourself..."
Ying Lili denied.
"Then let me see..."
As he spoke, Izumi Chiha reached out and lifted the towel off the girl's head, and covered her forehead with his palm, feeling her body temperature.
Ying Lili's expression changed slightly, and she almost couldn't help but raised her head and bit his finger.
I'm just talking, why did this guy Qian Yu really do it!
Although it's not like it hasn't done something like this before, it was only a few years ago...
"Well, it feels like the temperature is almost normal."
Izumi Chiha made a judgment, and then he glanced at the towel in his hand, and asked again, "Should we change it?"
"Um……"
She responded in a low voice, and lifted the quilt up with both hands to cover the lower half of her face, not as pretentious as before.
Izumi Chiha only thought that it was because she was sick, so her energy was lower than usual, and she had no energy after making a fuss just now.
So, he went downstairs, adjusted the temperature of the towel to a suitable temperature, and covered the girl's forehead again.
"Then, Ying Lili, then I'll go first."
Izumi Chiha made a tentative sentence.
"Come on, don't disturb my rest."
Ying Lili responded.
"it is good."
Before Izumi Qianyu left, she turned her head and left a sentence, "By the way, Yinglili, don't be too aggressive, especially in terms of body. As for other people's opinions, it really doesn't matter that much..."
He was just talking casually, and he didn't want his words to have any impact on Ying Lili.
After all, as a childhood sweetheart, how stubborn a girl is, I have already experienced it very deeply.
When he pushed the door and walked out, Ying Lili lifted the front of the quilt, revealing a pretty face the size of a palm.
She bit her lip, looked at the warm light shining in from the balcony, and finally choked out two words from her mouth.
"Crap."
……
"Aunt Sayuri, I'm going back."
"Did you go back so early? Don't you want to chat with Ying Lili for a while longer?"
Sayuri Sawamura's eyes were meaningful.
"If we continue talking, it will disturb Yinglili's rest."
Izumi Chiha replied.
"If Ying Lili is in a good mood, her body can also recover quickly."
Sayuri Sawamura joked.
"..."
Three black lines seemed to appear on Izumi Chiha's forehead.
Finally, after playing tricks on him, Mrs. Sawamura let him back.
……
"Before you know it, almost half a year has passed, and it's already December..."
Izumi Chiha returned home, glanced at the time, and suddenly let out a sigh.
I remembered that I aspired to become a light novelist more than half a year ago. After some hard work, I wrote "White Album" and finally turned it into "Demon Slayer: Blade". From the beginning, I was full of confidence, but the result was quickly received setback.
After some unfavorable start, with Yinglili's help as the starting point, coupled with my own unremitting efforts
Under these conditions, his career path finally took a turn for the better.
As a light novelist who has just debuted, to be able to achieve such results should be considered average.
If you count age, at present, it can be said to be a first-class existence.
It is actually rare to see a creator who becomes popular at the beginning of the article. Unless he is very strong, the editorial department is extraordinarily optimistic, and given a lot of resources, it is possible for a volume to become popular and become popular all the way.
Therefore, after entering the industry and understanding the hardships of being a creator, he felt a sense of complacency about his current achievements.
If you can maintain the state, it is also good to maintain it according to the way other people write...
You don't have to work so hard, and you can have enough consumption.
"No... no!"
Izumi Chiha shook her head, pinching this dangerous thought away.
His goal is the master of light novels!The highest position in the industry!How can it be forgotten because of a momentary indulgence!
Therefore, he can only work harder and stronger than before to see a glimmer of hope to reach the top...
29 Arrival of the bottleneck period
Outside the window, a cold wind howled.
The people in the room were depressed.
Izumi Chiha had been sitting in front of the desk for several hours, typing several paragraphs of text on the keyboard with her fingers, and finally deleted it because she was dissatisfied.
"Hey……"
He could not help but let out a sigh.
Unexpectedly, the bottleneck period came earlier than expected.
Since finishing the second volume of "Demon Slayer: Blade" with all her heart and soul, Izumi Chiha has always felt powerless, and she can't find the entry point of the plot, and her heart is completely empty, without a place.
When writing light novels, especially such light novels, it is important to have a 'real feeling' and produce an immersive feeling.
For example, the novel depicts various desires such as passion and blood, troubled and lingering love, joy of harvest, and even ordinary daily joy.
Whether you can satisfy them and bring the same feeling to readers is the difference in the sense of substitution.
High-selling works usually have higher requirements for the sense of substitution.
For example, the works of the harem in another world satisfy the desires of the readers. They don’t need a good writing style, they just need to figure out what kind of ambiguous words make the readers think about it, and then match it with full of astringent illustrations, so that they feel a sense of substitution. Came up straight away.
As for the main line, it's very simple, just push and push all the way, and there are female subordinates, younger sisters, and even more outrageous ones.
In novels, mobilizing astringent desires is much easier than mobilizing other desires, and naturally the sales will be higher.
It's just that readers who like these works generally don't make high-profile appearances, so some people mistakenly think that there are fewer "harem readers".
This is an illusion.
So what kind of feeling does "Ghost Slayer: Blade" under his hands give people?
The first element, of course, is still blood, because the main theme is still a semi-kingly light novel of bloody fighting.
The second element should be regarded as healing. Both humans and ghosts have their own experiences, but they have embarked on different paths for different reasons.
The story of ghost memories is a more eye-catching feature in the work, and it uses simple techniques to give people an alternative sense.
Although the technique is simple and crude, whether it can be used well is actually a very painful question.
Wouldn't it be embarrassing if you narrated a long story and the readers were unmoved and even a little bored?
Therefore, it is an imperative process to tell the story well. If it cannot be done, the content of the third volume will greatly weaken the senses.
It's not that he didn't care about the previous memory processing, and he tried his best to complete it, but it was just unsatisfactory, because there were other explosive points that diluted the emotions at that time.
It’s only the second volume of Flower Street, the memory of the sixth brother and sister is a considerable focus, more important than the inherent memories before, especially comparing the situation of the sixth brother and sister with Tanjiro brothers and sisters, this can make people feel sad feel.
In addition, the emotional rendering before this was not so simple. In addition to the sadness of Tanjiro when Tanjiro was completely wiped out, the protagonist's side also had to think carefully about the passion of Yin Zhu to stand up again and set off a counterattack.
In particular, the detailed process and mental calculations of this battle are not sloppy, compared to the simple fighting process in the comics in memory.
In order to fill in the content, as the subject of light novels, he will definitely describe in more detail, such as the use of breathing techniques, which will test his ability again.
As a result, I didn't expect that one card would take a month, and the plot in my pen could progress to the first fierce battle between the sixth and the sound column.
Regarding the obsession and obsession between humans and ghosts, he felt that he couldn't write words that satisfied him for a while. After several deletions and revisions, he felt depressed for a while.
"What should we do to overcome this bottleneck period?"
Izumi Chiha said something to herself, a trace of confusion flashed in her eyes, and she became even more anxious in her heart.
According to this progress, what can he accomplish his goal?
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