The target is light novel master

"Then, everyone, let's evaluate my debut work! No matter how harsh my tongue is, I can accept it. I, Yamada Fairy, have a heart wider than the sea!"

Yamada Goblin showed a high-minded and open-minded look.

Everyone was silent for a while.

"Well, can I ask, what is Yamada-sensei's work...?"

Suddenly, someone reached out and asked.

Fairy Yamada opened her mouth slightly, like a dried salted fish, her fingers trembling and unable to speak.

The greatest humiliation is not being belittled, but being ignored!

"Ahem, this is actually quite normal. After all, even if you are a light novelist, it is impossible to read everyone's works, especially when the differences are quite large."

He coughed and smoothed things over.

Everyone understands this truth, but the Yamada Goblin who jumped out first still finds it hard to accept.

Now it's time to be a clown!

"I've seen Goblin's works, so let me give a sharp review."

Izumi Chiha continued.

Yamada Goblin immediately cast a grateful look.

This time I was saved again!

It would be too miserable if no one really saw it!

"The main plot of Fairy's "Dark Fairy Exploding Flame" is..."

He first briefly told everyone about the plot, and then made his real evaluation, "The words are poor, the writing style of elementary school students, the plot is old-fashioned, all the female characters are rotten for various reasons, and the structure of the plot is not mature enough. There is no way to put it together..."

Yamada Goblin immediately turned into a bitter face again.

But she also knows that this kind of evaluation is indeed true. For example, the problem of writing is a long-standing problem. In the past, she could quibble that 'it's just for readers to understand', but she is not allowed to do so on such occasions. She needs to accept it humbly. Let the exchange meeting continue normally.

"My suggestion is... you can extract more sentences to practice. In terms of plot structure, you can comprehensively analyze successful works and learn by yourself. As for xp like Quanluo, I think it is a bit too monotonous. You can consider foot control, stockings and other aspect."

Izumi Chiha made a comment that she thought was fair.

As soon as the words were spoken, the expressions of the others became strange.

"Is the senior a foot control?"

Kaner Nayuta's eyes sparkled, and he asked this question in a friendly manner.

"It seems that the scumbag's eyes often stay on my legs... Now the truth."

Leaning on the sofa cushion behind her, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu propped her chin with one hand, and lightly stroked her beautiful legs with her fingers, with a smile that was not a smile.

"Is that so?"

Qianshou Cunzheng's eyes were fixed, and he was thinking about something.

"What are you talking about! I'm serious! I'm just giving advice to the goblin, don't make trouble."

Izumi Chiha responded righteously.

"I have received all your opinions! However, the sacred world cannot be profaned! I can consider adding a little bit to what you said..."

After receiving the evaluation, Yamada Goblin thought for a while and responded.

"Hypocritical."

he choked.

"This is not hypocrisy! This is faith!"

Yamada Fairy responded loudly.

"In other words, don't you deny it?"

On one side, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu murmured softly to himself, and laughed even more happily.

……

Next it was Wugeng Liuli's turn.

She thought she would be the same as Yamada Fairy, or even worse, but what she didn't expect was that the teacher and Nayuta had both seen it.

She thought that after teaching the first volume of her debut work, the teacher didn't pay any more attention, but it didn't look like that.

Even Nayuta, who was helping her, paid close attention to her.

This is very gratifying.

Naturally, she benefited a lot from the advice of Izumi Takashi and Kanar Nayuta.

The third place is Xiazhiqiu Shiyu.

Although the sales volume is not as good as Yamada Fairy’s three-year debut, it is indeed a new star in the industry. Its debut work "Love Metronome" is very familiar to everyone present, which makes Yamada Fairy very envious.

Senju Village Zheng was recommended by other people because of club activities, Kaner Nayuta because of the skin of "Izumi's Supreme Disciple", Wugen Ruri because of "teacher-sister competition", Yamada Fairy learned about it from Sagiri .

What makes Miss Goblin even more jealous is that Xia Shizi's "Love Metronome" has been highly praised.

Although there are some suggestions, they are all broad and symbolic. This shows that Xia Shizi is already a mature creator, and what she lacks is accumulation and inspiration.

"Well...I see."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is still listening to everyone's opinions with an open mind.

Because she knew from the bottom of her heart that such treatment was largely due to the meeting on that day...

By avoiding detours and motivating her own potential in advance, Xia Shizi's performance far exceeds the original level of the same period.

The next three are over, and it's time to take stock of the top three.

Compared with the youngness of these three, the other three are the leaders in the industry today, they are already the top creators, and they have promoted "Undead River" from the status of one of the three major publishing houses to far surpassing other publishers. The degree of the two major publishing houses.

What worries them the most is...

What would Kaner Nayuta and Senju Muramasa's highest suggestion to Izumi be?

290 This Should Be Called the Appreciation Session

It is true that even among the top three creators, there are high and low points!

Although Izumi Koko is already one of the most famous light novelists at the moment, and his fame is no less than that of many famous writers in the past, but there is still a gap compared with the first two who are beyond the era. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is a guide.

It's just that the truth is so, but people are more emotional creatures, especially women.

"In my eyes, Chiba's "Demon Slayer: Blade" is the reason for me to create it, and it is also the best light novel in the world. The same is true for subsequent works, so they do not have any flaws."

A faint smile appeared on Qianshou Village Zheng's face, as if thinking of the beauty in the world, he added by the way, "Well, it's in my heart."

The meaning of this sentence is very emotional.

Just like first love, it is an existence of ten thousand years at a glance. Izumi's highest work has a different meaning to her, so it is reasonable for her to draw such a conclusion, which is more acceptable to people.

This is the case with Senshou Village, and it is even more so with Kaner Nayuta.

The degree of her infatuation with Izumi Chiha is unimaginable to others.

"Senior has no real flaws in my mind, so whether it is in terms of conception, writing, plot, etc., the creation of senior makes me very excited... It can't be done! If I analyze it carefully, I will X tide of."

Putting his hands on his heart, Keer Nayuta's eyes were full of peach blossoms.

It's just a dirty joke, but it's not the first time, and everyone is not surprised by her performance.

"Sly, too sly! You two are too eccentric! Didn't you agree to make a sharp review?"

Yamada Goblin was the first to express his dissatisfaction.

"So Yamada-sensei, do you have any other opinions?"

The corner of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mouth curled up, and said when he saw this.

"It is true that there is no perfect thing in the world. I also want to hear the opinion of the goblin, if...it is reasonable."

Izumi Chiha smiled.

Although Nayuta and Senju Muramasa's comments made him happy, they were actually of little value.

"One thing is obvious, you guys have been called 'old thief' for so long, don't you have any idea?"

Yamada Goblin pointed at him angrily.

"So it's still this one."

Izumi Chiha sighed faintly, expressing a little disappointment.

"I thought Miss Goblin could put forward constructive opinions, boring."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu snorted.

"This is just a part of the author's writing style, the tendency of the style. It's a feature, not a defect. It's like the goblin himself likes GHS."

Wu Geng Liuli said abruptly.

"You...why are you all targeting me!"

Yamada Goblin choked, and then changed his mouth.

Oh, by the way, I forgot that this place is full of his fans!

"Actually, whether it's seniors or me and Qianshou Cunzheng, we don't really need advice. What's missing can be realized by ourselves."

But Nayuta made another round.

This is also true. For example, his own shortcomings are actually only compared to their shortcomings. Compared with the industry, he is already quite good, and he can see the way forward.

"Since there is nothing to suggest, what else can I say!"

Yamada Goblin pouted.

"Let me think about it... just treat it as an article appreciation!"

Kernayuta thought about it.

Yamada Goblin was a little confused.

"Ah, I forgot, Miss Goblin is from elementary school education."

Keer Nayuta acted like he just thought of it.

"...Nayuta, you are no better than me!"

Yamada Goblin stubbornly retorted.

"It's always better than Miss Goblin."

Kanji Nayuta went online with her.

"Hahaha……"

This classic "cultural contempt chain" dialogue performance amused everyone.

Back to the point.

Since no suggestion is given, it becomes an appreciation, and looking for flaws becomes a search for brilliant writing. This is nothing but bragging for the original author, but for others, it is a place to learn from experience.

The plots that everyone likes to read always have something in common. The level of writing can only be regarded as a bonus item. A suitable plot story can definitely help them get a high basic score!

For some stories, even if the author's writing skills are poor, it looks like it is produced by a newcomer, but he can't help but want to read it. This shows that an interesting or reasonable plot structure is also an aggressive direction.

What they use to appreciate is of course "Magic Girl Madoka Magica". Compared with the greenness of the debut work, this work is better for discussion, and they are all girls, and the acceptance of magical girls is also higher. .

Here, everyone asked a very interesting question.

such as.

"Teacher, why did you plan to sacrifice Mami-senpai? And also use such a wicked way of death... What is the difference between Yan Zhu's death and death?"

Of course, it was Wu Geng Liuli, the cutest apprentice who asked this question.

Others, except Yamada Goblin, have more or less considered this question in their hearts and come up with an answer.

"Although they were sacrificed by seniors, there is a big difference between Mami's death and Yanzhu's death. One is a more traditional routine, used to motivate the protagonist to fight, and the other is to set the tone of the work and give a shocking experience. The reverse effect of..."

After hearing this, Izumi Chiha explained.