The harem party doesn't deserve to read books, right?

Geng Xizi bent down and lowered her head until Makoto Amano could see the depth of her chest with just a glance.

Now that he has revealed this to request, he...

It seems that it should not be rejected.

"Then can they go together?"

Boys should also pay attention to safety when walking outside alone.

Makoto Amano intends to let Yukino and the others follow along, lest he be eaten by these big sisters who look like wolves and tigers.

"Of course, I was going to invite all of you."

After hearing Makoto Amano let go, the seniors showed happy smiles.

"Then hurry up, I want to eat a seafood feast!"

After saving the drowning Yumiko Miura and preaching to Kazutsu Yukino, Makoto Amano was really hungry.

"You guy, you are obviously a junior, you have a thick skin."

"But I don't dislike such a junior at all~"

"Especially Amano-senpai is so handsome!"

"Okay, please restrain yourself, we're just going to eat and sing, and we're not doing superfluous things."

"Yes, Minister!"

It seems that their youth festival has not yet come to an end.

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Chapter 170 The second advantage is her 【4K】

"How about it?"

"..."

Machida Sonoko looked at the manuscript in her hand, then at the girl in front of her who was silently sipping a glass of juice, her expression gradually became strange.

In normal times, when has this girl not dragged on to a dead end?

Until the last night of the deadline, this guy is never "willing" to submit a manuscript.

This time...

So fast?

Not long after the third volume was written and published, a lot has been written in the fourth volume.

Moreover, in terms of quality, it is not much different from the hot volume [-] that has been sold recently. Generally speaking, there should be no more incidents of being cut in half.

"Ms. Xia Shizi is still in school right now?"

And it's still the third year of high school, if you want to continue your studies, now is the busiest time.

"Ah."

The rosy lips let go of the straw, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu raised her head in confusion, and looked at the young female editor in front of her.

The purpose of her coming today is to discuss the writing of novels with the other party. Why did the topic suddenly turn to the matter of going to school?

"Then... won't you delay your studies? I remember Teacher Xia Shizi said that she plans to go on to higher education, right?"

Although Machida Sonoko was very happy that Kasumigaoka Shiwa was so active in writing manuscripts, she didn't want to affect her studies.

Most of the writers of novels these days have a dead end. If they can succeed in their studies, there will be another way out in the future.

"I'm planning to go on to higher education, but I've already been recommended for admission."

"Admission recommendation?"

It was only then that Machida Sonoko remembered that this girl also has the attribute of a schoolmaster.

"Which university?"

"Waseda."

"……That's very good."

Thinking of my hard work in high school, I have just been admitted to a qualified university, and while this girl is writing a novel, she has also received an admission recommendation from the top ten universities in China in advance. She is really popular.

"It's almost like the heroine in a light novel..."

Machida Sonoko couldn't help muttering in a low voice.

"what?"

what role?

Because the female editor's voice was too low just now, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't hear it very clearly.

"No, it's nothing, I just didn't expect Teacher Xia Shizi to be so powerful..."

"sharp?"

Speaking of this, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu remembered that there was another student in the school who was recommended for admission by the University of Tokyo, and he was still a sophomore.

So, she didn't think she was powerful at all.

Besides, I'm here to discuss novels today, so why are you talking about some of these things?

Do all current editors fish like this?

"Ms. Machida, I haven't answered the question just now. Is there anything that can be improved in this newly written manuscript?"

Thinking of Amano Makoto and Yukino's evaluation that day, Kasumigaoka Shiyu became a little anxious.

Because of the content of the newly written fourth volume, it made her a little bit difficult.

She clearly has a well-thought-out plan, but as she read the newly written content, she suddenly felt that it seemed to be worse than the third volume, but she didn't know which aspect to improve.

So I wanted to ask the editor's opinion.

"Improvements? I think... Teacher Xia Shizi writes according to this pace, and the publication of the next volume will be no problem."

Sonoko Machida wanted to make some suggestions, but after thinking about it, she was still worried that it would be self-defeating, which would make the girl in front of her lose her confidence in writing.

The first novels of new writers should be written by their own talents.

Anyway, the current quality is pretty good.

When the next book is about to come out, polish her up.

"Really? But..."

Don't have a review for me?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu frowned slightly, a little doubting the working ability of the female editor in front of her, but after thinking about it carefully, she didn't think that the other party was such a person.

At least some of the other party's usual suggestions are still very useful to her.

"My friend...readers have spoken out a lot about my problems."

After thinking about it for a while, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu still chose to speak clearly.

Describe in detail the comments Makoto Amano and Yukino made on her book that day.

"So that's how it is..."

Machida Yuanko nodded.

It seemed that she had underestimated the spirit of this new author.

"There are some. Teacher Xia Shizi's book has a good description of the character and expressiveness of the female characters, but it's just the description of the character's psychology, especially the description of love psychology..."

Speaking of which, she didn't see why the heroine fell in love with the hero from the book, it seemed like it was love at first sight?But it doesn't describe much.

"It's really weak."

Although the evaluations given by Mrs. Xia Shizi's two "reader friends" are somewhat critical, they are indeed on point.

Machida Sonoko was lost in thought.

"Then how can I write well in this aspect?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has searched many similar books for reference, but still feels that what he writes is just a little bit worse every time.

"Since Mrs. Xia Shizi already has an admission recommendation, isn't she busy in school now?"

Without rushing to answer this question, Sonoko Machida asked about the girl's private affairs again.

"well enough."

It's very free...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said in her heart.

She basically sleeps in class during the day, and then goes home at night to write a book slowly.

However, as an author, you can't talk too much in front of the editor, you have to leave some room.

Otherwise, there will be no excuse for procrastination in the future.

"Has Teacher Xia Shizi ever had a boyfriend?"

Machida Sonoko also picked up the coffee in front of her and took a sip.

"This one……"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face turned a little surprised, and a pair of pretty long legs wrapped in black silk began to tremble unconsciously under the table.

"Ms. Machida doesn't want me...to get a boyfriend...to collect information?"

She is not an experience school.

Never even considered the issue of communication.

Ever since she was a high school student, she has received love letters from boys every now and then, and she is so annoyed to death, not to mention the childish ones.

It made her have a troublesome and unreliable impression of the boys in the school.

"So, could it be... Teacher Xia Shizi, Shiyu has never dated a boy? This doesn't look like a girl who is already in her third year of high school..."

Because they were basically talking about private matters, Machida Sonoko began to call the girl by her first name to shorten the distance between the two of them.

"It's not that I can't find it, it's just that I don't want to talk about it."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu turned her head, and the straw on the cup was bitten flat by her teeth.

"I understand, I understand, I was also like this back then..."

Machida Sonoko seemed to be reminded of her high school days.

There is a slight light in the eyes.

"But then I realized how stupid it was not to have a relationship in high school."

In an instant, the female editor's face became gloomy.

It was as if he had been drained of energy all of a sudden.

"madness?"

Isn't it stupid to spend time on things like love?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu only has his own novel in his heart now.

"You don't understand. When you get to college, the boys who join the sorority are all there to play with... greedy your body. If you want to really find a boyfriend in college, it is much more difficult than in high school. I just... because I didn’t think about it in high school, and then I hated fellowship in college, and I didn’t want to settle down when I left the society, so until now I’m still..."

Sonoko Machida stopped her mouth at the end.

"In short, if you don't take good care of your youth, you will only get more and more sad in the future."

Machida Sonoko patted Kasumigaoka Shiwa's fragrant shoulder lightly with the mentality of a person who has experienced it.

"Is it bad to be single?"

Of course, Kasumigaoka Shiwa, who is still in her youth, can't empathize with Machida Sonoko's current depression.

"Single? Can you feel the feeling of going to an izakaya to drink alone, and then being looked at by others, especially lovers and couples? Do you know the loneliness when you go home every day and no one says 'Welcome back' to you?" Every time I go out to dinner with my colleagues, I see them all being picked up by their husbands, and I can only walk home alone... Do you know that feeling?"

"Miss Machida..."

Seeing the increasingly agitated female editor who had stood up from her chair, Kasumigaoka Shiyu had to remind her aloud.