my reborn girlfriends
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Having been with Lin Wan for nearly three years, Su Qianqian, who knows more about Lin Wan's life style than Fu Yun and Miao Jia, will definitely not just believe in Lin Wan's online love as Fu Yun said so naively.
If Su Qianqian encountered this kind of thing in person, she would definitely ask Lin Wan in person, but now, she can only learn about the situation from Fu Yun first.
Miao Jia: "Sister Qianqian, you don't know, after you moved out of the dormitory, Sister Wan seems to be a different person."
Su Qianqian: "What kind of reform?"
Since the atmosphere between Lin Wan and Fu Yun and Miao Jia is not as strange as before, talking about her in private doesn't have to be as much of a concern as before.
Because of what happened just now, Su Qianqian was very curious about what happened to Lin Wan during the few days when she moved out of the dormitory.
Miao Jia: "Sister Wan has stayed in the dormitory these days without class and stared at the computer with a smirk and a daze. We went out to dinner and apologized to us during the dinner."
Su Qianqian: "..."
This is not Lin Wan.
Su Qianqian: "Then Jiajia, you were bought by her like this?"
Miao Jia: "That's not the case. I just feel that Sister Wan has changed for the better. She is no longer as annoying as before."
Su Qianqian: "According to what you said, Jiajia, I'm not the only one who feels this way."
Miao Jia: "Miss Qianqian also noticed?"
Su Qianqian: "Yes."
As early as last Friday, Su Qianqian faintly felt this way through Lin Wan's clothes.At that time, she was a little uncertain, but she didn't see her on the weekend, and when she met again on Monday, she didn't pay attention to this aspect, and she didn't realize it again until Miao Jia mentioned it.
What impressed Su Qianqian the most was the change in Lin Wan's temperament.
In the past, Lin Wan's temperament belonged to the kind of deliberately pretending coquettish, this kind of temperament is very eye-catching to most men, but for women, most women don't like to get along with such a same-sex person.The reason why Su Qianqian was able to talk to her was that she knew some of Lin Wan's secrets.
However, now, although Lin Wan's temperament has not changed much from before, Su Qianqian is keenly aware that now Lin Wan no longer has the coquettishness that was deliberately artificial.Now, she naturally exudes the unique charm of women all over her body.
If it was said that coquettishness was just eye-catching for men before, then the charming temperament she exudes now is deadly poison.At the same time, this kind of temperament will not be as annoying and offensive to women as before.
Bai Xiaosheng's post on the school forum clearly explained this point.
Miao Jia: "Sister Qianqian, you should have read the post about Miss Wan posted by Bai Xiaosheng on the school forum."
Su Qianqian: "Well, I see, what's the matter?"
Miao Jia: "It's a fact that Sister Wan fell into online dating after she woke up. What should we do?"
Miao Jia, the youngest in the dormitory, cherishes this special relationship with roommates very much.
Their dormitory does not have the hierarchical relationship of other girls' dormitories. Except for Lin Wan, who likes to be alone, the other three people in the dormitory used to have a very good relationship.Even Lin Wan, in the final analysis, both Fu Yun and Miao Jia did not want to take a step back for some reason, resulting in a much stranger relationship than other people.
Su Qianqian: "It's not easy, just wait until I ask Wanwan tomorrow to find out in person."
Su Qianqian: "Fu Yun and Jiajia, the fundamental reason why you dragged me into this discussion group in the middle of the night is because you want me to come forward."
Miao Jia: "Hey hey."
Fu Yun: "Daughter-in-law was guessed by you."
Fu Yun, who has been diving since Miao Jia joined, suddenly joins in with a fake corpse.
Su Qianqian: "If you can't figure it out with your little thoughts, it's better to buy a piece of tofu and pretend to be dead."
Su Qianqian: "It's getting late, you guys should go to bed early too. As for Wan Wan, leave it to me tomorrow."
Miao Jia: "Yeah, good night Miss Qianqian."
Fu Yun: "Good night, daughter-in-law!"
Su Qianqian: "Good night."
After chatting with Fu Yun and Miao Jia, Su Qianqian put her phone on the bedside table.After reapplying the mask, she gradually fell into a state of distraction looking at the ceiling carved with exquisite patterns.
There is such a chance to choose to repent, and I must firmly seize this opportunity, not only to redeem what I owed my brother, but also to make my friends around me no longer be dragged by her like they used to be.
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119 Lin Wan's Smile Is Gradually Disappearing
Is this the original version of Mo Bullying Youth and Poor?
After reading the chapter transmitted by Xia Ji Banxian, Su Yue fell into thinking.
Don't bully the young and the poor with regard to web literature, Su Yue, as a reader, of course knows the status of this book in the earth's web literature.However, because it didn't suit his taste, Su Yue only read three chapters from the time the book appeared to before he traveled.
This penguin netizen named 'Xia Ji Banxian', when he sent this idea to Su Yue, Su Yue once thought that this person was the deity, but when he actually saw the plot of the text later, his suspicion became more and more serious. Low, until now, Su Yue is more willing to believe that this is a coincidence.
Although Su Yue has never read the original work, but according to the information he heard from other channels, although the characters in this novel of "Mo Bullying Youth Poor Net" are somewhat templated, the plot can be described as climaxing.
For those new readers who are new to the field of online literature, such themes and plots are definitely masterpieces in their hearts.
But combined with other people's evaluation of this work, the more Su Yue read it, the more he felt that the book he was reading now was far from the book he remembered.
The first time Su Yue heard about the creative setting, he thought it was that book.But after reading the first three chapters, he realized something was wrong. After reading Chapter 4, he was sure that it was just his unilateral thinking.
Asakusa: "How to say..."
Qian Yue: "Half Immortal, your style is not suitable for writing such a subject."
The more he looked at it, the weirder it became. In the end, Su Yue planned to persuade him, a book friend, to think about a new subject.
Don't look at this world's Internet literature has not yet appeared similar to Mo bullying young people and poor people, but even if someone thinks of it, it is still difficult to write well because the subject matter is not too innovative.
For such a subject matter, let alone Xia Ji Banxian, even if Su Yue were to write it, he might not be able to guarantee that the plot he wrote would be as enthusiastically sought after by readers as it is on Earth.
After all, in the field of online writing, every author has his own style of writing. A special style of writing will leave a deep impression on readers and at the same time limit the author's inability to be good at certain subjects.
Su Yue could tell that this Xia Ji half-immortal, like him, liked to pay attention to characters.For the plot, most of the time is for the characters.
This kind of style is destined to make her unable to write a plot like Mo bullying the young and poor.
Xia Ji Banxian: "Please tell me what kind of subject matter I am suitable for writing?"
The expected reply, when Lin Wan saw this, the heart that was hanging in the air in Lin Wan's heart finally fell.
When she first thought of using this method to get close to Su Yue, Lin Wan didn't consider that she would do so rashly. What should she do if something unexpected happens?In her opinion, the reborn she does not say she is omnipotent, but most of the things are not difficult for her.
But as the writing continued, Lin Wan realized that she was racking her brains just to write something simple, and what she wrote in the end was almost unreadable.Fortunately, this is only close to Su Yue's media. If it is uploaded to the Internet, she will probably be sprayed to death.
Asakoshi: "Your writing style is good at describing characters and paying attention to details. You can use these two aspects to consider the subject matter."
Leaving aside all factors that can intuitively affect the judgment, purely from the quality point of view, Xia Ji Banxian's previous fan BL articles and these chapters still have very outstanding advantages.
Perhaps women are more sensitive to emotions than men. The characters written by Xia Ji Banxian are very delicate, and they will definitely satisfy readers who like to interact with characters.
Xia Ji Banxian: "Is that so... completely clueless..."
In the final analysis, it was just Lin Wan's idea to get close to Su Yue. If Lin Wan really wanted to choose this way to go to the dark, even if she wanted to, it would be useless if she couldn't get in.
Don't let Lin Wan learn slowly, what she lacks most now is time, and she doesn't have much time to waste on learning and researching how to start writing this kind of thing.
Of course, if Su Yue taught her personally, let alone learning to write, she would have to fight through even a sea of swords and fire.
This is totally a dream...
Lin Wan just thought about it, and didn't expect that Su Yue would teach her to write in person.After all, not to mention that Su Yue is now facing the college entrance examination, after the college entrance examination, he still has a lot of plans, and in terms of his character, he will not waste much time on her.
Qian Yue: "I have a few ideas here that are quite suitable for your writing style and subject matter, do you want to hear them?"
So far, Su Yue has passed the class that needs to rely on creativity to make a living.
Because of the time travel, Su Yue started early and had a solid foundation.As long as he continues to write according to the current style, there will be absolutely no phenomenon that no readers will read it.
In this way, some interesting ideas that Su Yue thought of before have been kept in his computer.If he didn't think that Xia Ji Banxian was interesting, it would probably take a long time for these ideas to see the light of day again.
Xia Ji Banxian: "Is it okay to be bigger?!"
Just when Lin Wan was about to give up this path and think of other ways, Su Yue's message made her a little unbelievable.
Su Yue actually taught her himself? ! !
Is this a dream?
Qian Yue: "Of course, I don't need these ideas very much now. Instead of letting these ideas lie in my computer, I might as well let Banxian see if you can carry them forward."
This is only a small part of the reason, and most of the reason is that Su Yue wants to see the ideas he thought of being written out and what the plot will be like.
In the words of a great internet writer.
If I can persist in writing for more than ten years, it means that I have a great love for writing, love writing and love reading.
And the master of Internet literature who said such impressive words is none other than him.
Xia Ji Banxian: "Yeah, the older you are, the older you say, I will definitely study hard."
If Lin Wan didn't seize this opportunity that came to her door, Lin Wan could really buy a piece of tofu and kill her.
Su Yue's message just now, in Lin Wan's view, is like a gold medal for avoiding death.In the future, even if she does something that causes the relationship between the two to fall into a cold war, she can use this identity to speculate whether Su Yue has calmed down.
No, let's wait until he calms down and calms down.If you calm down, then take the initiative to apologize and reconcile.
In addition, there are many magical effects.
【Linglong】[-]
At this moment, Lin Wan felt that the goddess of love was on her side this time.
Asakoshi: "Recently, I thought of a particularly interesting subject."
Qian Yue: "In recent years, the Internet has not been popular for the rebirth of the male protagonist to make up for regrets. If you write a book about the rebirth of the female protagonist in the opposite direction, the effect will definitely be leveraged. Plus..."
Lin Wan's smile was gradually disappearing.
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120 I might be a fake time traveler!
Su Yue must have noticed something, right?Test yourself with information like this?
Before Lin Wan knew Su Yue, she didn't have much contact with the Internet.After getting to know each other, they only get along on business trips, and occasionally mention it when they are bored.
At first, Lin Wan thought that the Internet was just a way for the poor to spend time on entertainment. How many truly rich people would choose to do this?However, time travel, rebirth, and systems in the network are simply impossible to happen.
Until she herself was reborn from the future to the present, Lin Wan had to think that perhaps such a thing really existed in this world.
The speaker has no intention, the listener has the heart.
Su Yue didn't know that his casual words made Lin Wan fall into deep thought.
Qian Yue: "Half Immortal, what do you think of this idea?"
Now Su Yue thought that if the other party wanted to write this idea, then he would seriously teach the other party what to pay attention to when writing online articles.
After all, if the other party agrees.Then the relationship between him and the other party can also be regarded as a relatively special custom-made text relationship in online texts.
However, unlike most custom-made texts that require payment, this one can be read for free.
Qian Yue: "Half Immortal?"
Xia Ji Banxian: "Ah?!! Uh! Sorry, I was just thinking about something and lost my mind."
Xia Ji Banxian: "Great idea, the bigger it is, can I write this idea?"
Facing the sudden confusion in her mind, Lin Wan forced herself to calm down.Even if Su Yue really intends to probe, then he will take corresponding actions in the future, and then she will have time to make countermeasures.
Asakoshi: "Of course, this idea needs to be written with a delicate style like yours. If it's someone who pays attention to the plot, I won't tell them."
Xia Ji Banxian: "Yes, I will work hard!"
In the end, no matter whether Su Yue did it on purpose or not, Lin Wan chose to seize this opportunity.
At this point, Lin Wan knew that even if Su Yue knew that she was a reborn person, he would not threaten her with it.In this regard, Lin Wan has great trust in Su Yue.
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It's all this time... Why hasn't Xiao Yue woke up yet?
After making breakfast and waiting for Su Yue to get up and go downstairs to taste, Su Qianqian was very puzzled when she saw the clock time on the wall.
It's almost seven o'clock now. Normally, Su Yue had already had breakfast and was ready to go to school at this time. However, today, Su Qianqian didn't even see his shadow.
If you don't get up, you'll be late...
After waiting for three or four minutes, Su Qianqian decided to go upstairs to see her younger brother.
"—Boom boom boom."
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