I, Admiral, join the chat group

"My daughter is still cute and close to me."

Liu Shen, a ruthless person: "..."

Look what you said?

Food party.

Renn brought his parents and some people from his hometown to participate.

All the current chat group members are here.

They all brought some beings with whom they had a good relationship.

This is probably one of the few gatherings that brings together all members of the current chat group. It is unknown whether there will be such a gathering in the future, or whether there will be such an opportunity.

At least at the moment, they are all happy.

This day will also be remembered in the future.

"Everyone, meeting each other is a kind of fate. Fate brings us together. Let's raise a glass and drink together!"

"cheers!"

a feast.

Thousands of lights.

on the high platform.

under the stars.

Ren and Yakumo Murasaki stood together.

Liu Shen, the ruthless people took their children to play. They probably had psychological shadows and did not want their children to be taken care of by Ren, for fear that the children would have psychological shadows.

"They really want children." Yakumo Purple teased.

"Who?" Ren asked knowingly.

"That's a lot." Yakumo Zi complained: "You don't know how hard they work to have a child with you, each one is getting more involved than the other."

"There is nothing I can do. They are too weak. They are not on the same level as me. There is no way they can even have children."

Yakumo Zi rolled her eyes at him.

At this time, their lovely daughter staggered over and ran over. Ren squatted down and made a hug gesture. When her daughter rushed over, he picked her up.

Rub your face.

Then hold it high.

"Where should we go in the future?" Yakumo Purple looked up at Ren and asked.

"So many worlds are still waiting for us. I have become invincible below detachment, and I am invincible beyond detachment." Ren hugged Yakumo Murasaki, the main palace in his palace, and carried himself on his shoulders, born from Yakumo Murasaki. The lovely daughter came out and said, "Come with me to see our world."

……

My last chapter ended well, right?

There is no falsehood.

There is no pretentious bad ending.

It's just a pity that the pace of some of the previous worlds is too fast.

Otherwise it will definitely exceed 100 million words! ! !

There are also closing remarks later.

Free.

Closing Testimonials (Free)

It’s not long to write a fanfic if you add it to a chat group. I looked at other chat group stories, and most of them were not on the shelves. The ones that were on the shelves were basically all cut off. I couldn’t find any that had endings that I could learn from, so I accepted them.

I have experienced some things and some mental journeys, and I have thought about cutting it off many times, but there is a beginning and an end. At least the logic of writing is not so weird. To let myself go, I also want to write a chat group that is more relaxed and can communicate with each other on an equal footing, and give it an ending.

Many favorite worlds have been written about, but childhood is definitely more.

Rennes will definitely be transcendent in the future.

But I don’t want to write about the moment when he transcended. It’s better to stay at this moment, enjoy what you should enjoy, give up so many girls, run to transcend, and get together with four gays like Huangtian Emperor and Ye Tiandi. What kind of words? ?

……

The next book is about traveling around the world, an epic of Yan and Huang.

It's not the kind of low-end intrigue that starts when there is no guarantee of survival.

build up a team.

Upgrade text.

This is the book I want to write.

Let’s first reveal some of the characters and plot.

1. Human race: Mingye

Sex: Male

Hobby: Make yourself better

Introduction: An almost perfect hexagonal character. His force value has always been close to that of the protagonist. He has shortcomings, and he knows them himself. He constantly improves and corrects them. He has an inexplicable obsession with the protagonist. He is neither an enemy nor a friend. Foreign enemies come. Commit, unite.

He has a good temper, which is so good that it makes people helpless. His eyes are always gentle, his temperament is moderate, and his smile is like the spring breeze.

2. Human race: Wang Hao

Sex: Male

Hobby: following the protagonist

Introduction: Brother Xuan, I will hit you wherever you point me.

"If you invade our Yanhuang territory, Hao will attack and break it."

"Can you blame me? This time is always a high-end game. I get beaten every day. I am helpless and desperate!"

3. Human Race: Old Man Yanhuang

Sex: Male

Hobbies: Reading, killing enemies

Introduction: He has lived for more than a hundred years, and they don't know how much exactly. Before he traveled across the world, he killed thousands of enemies and participated in various battles. After the war ended, he removed his armor and returned to his fields. No one knows.

"Can't you stand such a little setback?"

"In those years of fighting, I was defeated all the way. Whichever army I joined was destroyed. Every time I crawled out of the dead. I was desperate, annoyed, felt that there was no hope, and felt that I was a dead man. Sangmen Xing, after getting to know it, I realized that this is exactly what happened! That feeling of despair is still suffocating when I think about it."

"Don't be proud of those who are more talented. Use hard work to make up for those who are less talented. At that time, there were people who were more powerful than me in the war, and there were people who were smarter than me. But in the end, I survived and went through decades of wars and great experiences. I survived hundreds of battles, big and small, and killed over a thousand enemies.”

4. Human race: Ye Yunyun

Gender: Female

Hobbies: Being the green leaf that sets off my friends

Introduction: She maintains a very good relationship with the protagonist, Ming Ye and others. She is also a strange woman who is dedicated to Yanhuang. She has only been a supporting role for her friends for too long. She has flaws. Her friends are her flaws, which makes her often because of Her friends were hesitant, and her childhood sweetheart's rebellion made her even more disappointed.

Elegant on all sides, good at dancing with long sleeves, able to make friends from far away and attack at close range

5. Human Race: Protagonist Lu Xuan

Sex: Male

Hobbies: Unknown past, he grew up with exaggerated combat power, like the reincarnation of an overlord, has a demonic side to his personality, which is deeply hidden by him, insists on training all year round, has a terrifying will, has amazing talent in combat, and can learn it once he learns it , the starting point of combat effectiveness is very high compared to ordinary people.

6. Human Race: Zhang Wenyuan

Hobbies: Teasing others and cultivating talents

Introduction: Wen Yuan is my favorite character, and even a brief introduction to him is not enough.

Five of the six characters above are relatively immature in the early stage and will gradually grow up.

This novel wants to write about some unique characters.

As for the plot, everything has two sides. It can’t be all good, and it can’t all be bad.

There are close to a hundred important characters, but I can’t possibly release them all.

It’s not a group portrait.

The main character is Lu Xuan.

The outline and details are close to [-] words.

The next book will not be as unprepared as this one, and will be updated frequently after it is released.

The title of the book is not included here. I can understand the pirated readers. Everyone comes here like this, but the recommendation is based on readers’ pursuit of reading and the ratio of collection to reading, not collection.

If you click on the author's profile picture at Qidian.com, you will know the next book, which will be updated on July 7rd.

Seeing that I have this book and it has a beginning and an end, I can give the little author a full subscription if I can.

Thanks~!

In fact, this book should write about some worlds in detail, but... after reading some reviews, I feel that the mentality is not stable and the pace is fast. Otherwise, it can be quite long, but at least it has a beginning and an end.

Summarize three reasons.

1. The fan value set is too high.

There is no way the previous argument is too serious.

2. Updates are too slow. Although there are [-] updates per day, there is only one chapter. Who can bear it once a day?

3. You cannot interrupt updates or ask for leave. This is too serious.

Another reason that is not too important is... when you write pirate fan fiction, don't you include pirates in the title of your book?

Which one is searched more frequently, General or Pirate?

Obvious.

……

The most important experience of writing a novel.

I had not signed a contract at that time, so I liked to come up with some gorgeous words, some writing about literary youth, incomprehensible things, and some many and many rare words. For this purpose, I learned hundreds of rare words.

When we are with some authors who are also unsigned, we all think that others have no vision, others do not understand us, we fall into self-pleasure, and we even brainwash ourselves.

At that time, I didn’t want to make any comments.

Now think about it, who are the most numerous people in the world?

It's the poor!

It's ordinary people!

Who cares about your rare words?

Who cares about your gorgeous rhetoric?

Who cares about you?

I read novels to relax! ! !

……

Some people want to be authors. Let me tell you my own point of view. When writing a novel, the first thing is to make it understandable to others, and the second thing is to write a story that people can understand.

……

I read the pirated reviews. I can understand it. What surprised me was the last chapter. The positive reviews far outweighed the negative reviews.

Two of my favorite comments.

[-]: I finally saw a normal protagonist from the beginning to the end. The current protagonist is either Guang Weizheng, who is fake and empty, which is too fake, or else he has incorrect views, which is extreme. It is easy for me to find a novel with a normal protagonist. ?

Two: There is a spirit in the author's novels, and a spirit revealed in the text. There are too many spirits and spirits in the author that the author does not have. Keep at it, and I believe you will stand out.

(This is really the best evaluation I think of the author, but I just jumped in and thanked this reader for his words.)