All the contract girls want to marry me

She set her sights on the dock. The workers and robots cooperated very well to load and unload goods with the highest efficiency.

The efficiency is indeed very high, but something seems to be missing.

She turned around slowly and prepared to leave.

But the moment she turned around, her body became completely stiff and her whole person instantly became petrified.

She turned her head sharply and stared at the young man sitting in a daze at the corner of the pier.

Her soul was trembling, and her tears could no longer hold back.

Although her strength was gone and her eyes were blank, Sistine recognized him.

She appeared in front of the young man like lightning, hugged him into her arms, and could no longer be separated.

"Welcome home, Matthew."

(End of the book)

I have finished this review#

When I wrote these words, my mood was complicated.

Is this the end?

In 7 months, I wrote this 150 million-word story and shared it with everyone.

In September, it coincided with the anniversary of the Hedgehog Cat website. There was a coding event. I tried my best and luckily got third place. I also gained some valuable exposure, which helped this book cross the [-] mark. , all the way up.

The third code word activity includes screen push, getting enough daily sales and a large bookshelf, these are top recommendations.

When I was confirmed to have received these two recommendations, I was very happy, thinking that the performance of this book would be bright.

However, what comes with the recommendation is the refresh of Silence Warlock.

Re-order explosions, add new explosions, and get no feedback from readers.

There was no feedback for a whole month. I didn’t know how to write it. I was completely confused.

I can't stand it any longer.

Both data and mentality exploded, and the last volume became more and more strange.

During the period of silent reading, I repeatedly went back and reviewed the previous chapters, and it was really hard to finish them in words.

To be fair, the concept of this story is not novel, and the world view is not interesting.

What I wrote was a very orthodox story, but I was well prepared.

Before opening the book, I was full of expectations.

But after I opened the book, because I chose to put it on the shelves first and then hit the rankings, I didn’t see feedback from readers until it was put on the shelves.

This time difference leads to a subtle difference between "I think" and "readers want to see".

This gap may not be huge, but this subtle gap makes the book hit a dead end from the beginning.

The most controversial among them are the two female protagonists who appeared in the early stage.

Diana, a female knight who believes in the Holy Light, is serious and rigid, adhering to principles without losing flexibility.He received religious education since childhood and was brainwashed by the Holy See.

Shirley is a talented girl from an ordinary family.Somewhat solipsistic, but also well-intentioned.He received religious education since childhood and was brainwashed by the Holy See.

These two characters are very important throughout.

I aspired to flesh out the protagonist by portraying the transformation of these two girls who were brainwashed by religion.

However, I fail.

The original intention of this idea is good, but the execution is not very good.

The reason is simple, times have changed.

It is very difficult to grasp such a long-term transformation and growth, and readers’ recognition of the writing method of promoting desire first and suppressing it is getting lower and lower.

There is heaviness everywhere in our lives, so why bother finding happiness in this crappy novel?No one likes a heavy story.

Although the book is overall light-hearted, the flaws in the characterization of Deanna and Shirley are fatal.

Before writing novels, I loved watching TV, including cross talk sketches and other programs that could bring happiness to people.

Looking back, it seems that starting from a certain year, the cross talk sketches suddenly became unsightly.

Are actors not as good as before?There is definitely this factor.

Is the script not as good as before?More or less.

But I feel that compared to the past, today's cross talk sketches are more preachy and less original in trying to make the audience happy.

For professional actors, if they try hard to amuse the audience, can they not do it?

Of course they can do it, they are professionals after all.

The reason why cross talk sketches are not good to watch is because they do not try hard to make the audience laugh, but also because they want to educate the audience.

Teachers Zhao Benshan and Chen Peisi have said more than once in interviews that sketches are meant to make people happy.

If there is no happiness, no matter how good the idea is, no matter how high the intention is, what is the use?

Everyone is very tired. You have to be educated after watching a sketch. Will readers still spoil you?

When I mention this, of course I am not criticizing the sketch actors, but self-criticism.

Readers don't like female characters who murder male protagonists, and they don't like female characters who are real and ferocious.

And I just wrote it.

People who are brainwashed by religion are indeed like Deanna and Shirley, and that’s okay.

The question is, why write this?

For the sake of so-called truth, it is arrogant and stupid to reduce the reading experience of readers.

Everyone knows that XX is not delicious, but it is still served. It is normal for readers not to like it.

Readers are lovable and real.

This book's results are not satisfactory, which is normal.

During the serialization period, I wanted to cut it off more than once, but I persisted.

In my opinion, free chapters are advertisements for the ideas and writing of the book.

If readers like it, they will continue reading.

If the author can accept the results, he will continue writing.

The acceptance speech is a contract, the contract where the story officially begins, and the completion speech is the end of this contract=.

A novel is complete only if it has a final reflection.

Being able to finish the book basically as expected seems to be a good job.

But if you think about it carefully, there is nothing to be proud of when the story is completed. It is natural that the story should have an ending.

Being able to write works that readers like is something to be proud of.

When I was finishing this book, I thought a lot and figured out a lot.

When writing a new book, I will learn from the lessons of this book and try to write a book that brings joy to readers.

Finally, my new book has been released. Interested readers can take a look at the new book.

"This game is too difficult, make it easier"

Summary:

Facing the brutal and wild storm dragon, the players were weak and defeated.

What is your choice?

A. Practice skills hard, show off the giant dragon through manipulation and positioning.

B. Seek to form a team and bring good brothers to slay the dragon successfully.

C. Join the gold group and let the thugs take you through. If you don't move, he has to respectfully call you boss.

D. Abandon the pit decisively, and I will not play such a difficult game anymore.

Levi scoffed at the options.

The high difficulty level is a problem with the game. Wouldn't it be better if the difficulty level was lowered?

Look at me, isn't this the right way to play?

PS: I sincerely hope that everyone’s life will also start to be simple~