I am Lapland’s rat!

In the second volume, I adopted the linear structure of a general urban business article.I designed dual main lines, that is, the two lines of developing Silver Wolf Security and Texas Family Conflict alternately, while other plot lines serve as branches, leading from and extending from the main line.

So almost no one talked about water in the second volume.Really, although you may not pay much attention to it, but I read every comment and I can clearly feel this change!

But this kind of main plot structure also has disadvantages, that is, sometimes the plot is too tense and there is no time to be funny. When writing about daily life, you have to write every detail, which is really a gain and a loss.

Then there’s the characterization.

Character creation is really...

I feel that the characters in the second volume are not as well developed as those in the first volume.

There are many reasons for this. I think a big factor is that there are too many women to write about in the second volume!

I actually can’t write about women ahhhhhhhhhh QAQ!

Also, I can’t write villains either ahhhhhhhhh QAQ!

Really, especially during the first mid-term achievement exhibition, when four main female characters had to be described at once, I really felt like I was going bald thinking about it.

Moreover, the four female characters are mainly fan characters. For an author like me who wants to create characters, it is actually inconvenient to create three-dimensional fan characters because everyone has slightly different impressions of the characters. It is easy to feel that the description does not match the image in your mind.

(Although I didn’t portray the original character Sophia very well either)

The same goes for the villain. I want to shape the villain, and by shaping him, I can make him a decent person. On the other hand, if I don't write him as a decent person, I won't be able to write him as charming. I don't know why...

After writing a lot, I still feel that Coulson and Mosetti are very weak, and I cry.

The author is also biased.

Finally, let’s talk about the plot.

First of all, the plot of this volume has also undergone a major change, and that is the plot of Dorothy and the pioneer team.

Dorothy's plot was originally scheduled to take place after an achievement exhibition and before Jaston joined Silver Wolf Security. However, in order to prevent Eagle Horn from backstabbing, Dorothy's route was written first.

This actually doesn't seem like much at first glance, but a lot of the rhythm didn't connect in the mid-term, which was quite tormenting me at the time. Fortunately, it seems to have come around now, which is not bad, eh.

Another point is that the plot is actually very obvious. Some people said that the second volume and the later period were not satisfying enough.

It’s really not cool enough, because the cool point control has exploded ()

I definitely didn’t want to repeat the Mouse-slap-in-the-face routine in the first volume, so I planned to change the performance in a different form in the second volume and added the character of Lord Duck from the beginning.

How can I put it, the original intention is good, after all, until more than 100 chapters, the fun points provided by Duck Lord and other high-status people have replaced the previous plot of pretending to be a mouse and eating a tiger.

But the problem comes later.

As a result of Duck Lord's joining, everyone knew that Xiao Yin was the beast master.

Since Xiaoyin is the beast master, it is normal for the beast master to complete difficult tasks.

Although you may not understand it, what I mean is that the construction of Shuangdian requires "environmental imbalance".

Xiaoyin completed what he was supposed to do, and the environment was very balanced and stable, so it was cool to control the explosion.

Wen seems to look at the mountains and dislike the flatness.

……

Overall, the second volume definitely provided me with much more writing experience than the first volume.

The biggest gain for me is thinking about the plot structure.

As for characterization...

Everything will be fine when I get away from the great magician! ()

Thank you all very much for seeing this and listening to my scattered thoughts (actually, I mainly wrote them for you to read later when you are doing archeology)!

Then, next is the third volume, which is the information of the final volume——

In the first volume, Lapland summons up the courage to walk out of the stagnant Syracuse;

In the second volume, Lapland asks himself, rejecting other people's definitions of his life.

In the third volume, Lapland will travel with Texas to Cast Iron City, one of the oldest city-states in Colombia, where she will find a picture of her future.

So, what exactly will Lapland’s beliefs be?

Next time——

"The Man Who Seeks the Wilderness"!

duelstandby!

……

Isn’t this all the spoilers? Hey!

Okay, to be serious, the third volume will not be as long as the first two volumes. This book has 100 million words, which is already beyond imagination.

What, I can still write pretty well.

The third volume will have many familiar characters from the first volume, and there will also be new (old?) beast masters, so you can look forward to it.

In terms of plot, the arrangement of the third volume is of course different from the first two volumes, and the atmosphere will be a little more relaxed than the second volume. Similarly, the origin of Shushu and the foreshadowing in the first and second volumes that have not yet been collected, It will all be explained in the third volume.

(Isn’t this nonsense? Would anyone really leave the foreshadowing in the final volume!)

Okay, that's it, take a day off and see you on August 8nd.

(If you haven’t seen me on August 8nd, you’ll have to take two days off. I’m so sleepy, it’s time to go to bed QAQ)

★Volume [-]: The Man in the Wilderness★

Chapter 1 Wilderness

wilderness.

Synonymous with freedom.

In the past, people feared the wilderness because humans were born with a basic need to make their situation safe.In the era when the mobile city was just invented, when humans on this land mentioned the wilderness, they would suddenly think of the clouds of natural disasters that covered the sky, the endless killing of infected creatures, and the drastic changes, good and bad times. Bad weather always forces humans to adapt to it rather than the opposite extreme climate.

But now is different.

From the southwest to the northeast, large-scale mobile cities have risen from the ground. They are harbors that provide shelter from wind and rain for civilization, and they are also large prisons that humans have built for themselves.The engineers who designed these great creations in the past would never have imagined that in the words of poets and artists, the wilderness life that once required every effort to escape has become a symbol -

A symbol of transcending all the anguish and shackles of the world, liberating the soul and body, and gaining boundless freedom.

Not to mention the story of a rebellious young man who finally became one with the wilderness as described by a certain Victorian writer. Even in the popular literature of Colombia, it has become a common plot in novels that teenagers obtain treasures and wealth in the wilderness.

Although people know that there are still many people wandering in the wilderness today, they usually do not associate the symbols in literary impressions with those real people.

So the free return to freedom.

Natural disasters, wild beasts and evil men still embrace the wilderness.

……

“Descriptions of wilderness in different populations often appear to be in a superposition of the above two conditions——”

“However, as long as you purchase the Brulica portable camp bag, you can easily forget these worries and truly enjoy the freedom in the wilderness! The Brulica portable camp bag is small in size, quick to unfold, and has complete facilities. It also comes with a cross-plot communication terminal and a simple natural disaster monitor to accompany you through every day’s journey in the wilderness!”

"If you buy it now, you will get a folding surveillance tower and a fortification installation box for free! The first ten lucky customers who call in the communication will also receive what Brulica has prepared for you..."

"—"

Texas reached out and turned off the radio.

The passionate female voice playing on the radio stopped abruptly.

"What are you doing?" Lapland said with some dissatisfaction: "I also want to hear what other interesting philosophical lines she can say."

It was now a starry night, and under the slowly rotating bright starry sky, the camping fire in the center of the camp was beating easily.

The camping pot above the fire was covered with a lid, and behind the camp was a blue-black tent. In the bright yellow firelight, the tent had the shadows of two large girls printed on it.

Suddenly, the bright part between the two human figures was occupied by the shadow of a larger beast. For a moment, the light shining on the tent was almost completely blocked, and only some corners of the entire tent were still illuminated by the firelight.

"..."

Wu Xian squatted on the small table in front of the camping pot, facing the flames and camping pot close at hand, and looked at it.

"It doesn't seem to have any flavor. It's probably not yet cooked."

"Zhushu, I'm hungry."

After confirming that it was not yet dinner time, Wu Xian turned around regretfully and turned his attention to the two girls again.

At this time, the gray-haired girl on the left side of the line of sight moved the corner of her mouth and said:

"...I'm sorry, that's an advertisement I wrote."

"I just didn't expect it would be so embarrassing to hear something I wrote read out on the radio."

Laplande: "?"

The white-haired girl was stunned for a moment and winked cutely: "This... Brulica Company is your family's industry?"

"Yeah," Texas said.

Lapland only thought for less than a second before he put his hand down again and reached for the power switch of the radio.

Texas quickly reached out to stop him.

The two of them started to fight.

"..."

Wu Xian looked at this scene and felt a little hungry again. He couldn't help but look back at the condition of the camping pot.

Oh, it seems to have a bit of fragrance this time, it should be almost done.

Today's dinner is a feathered beast that Lapland brought back from a small forest.After Texas knocked it out with a spell, the feathered beast crawled slowly on the ground for two steps, and was disembowelled by Lapland with a sword strike.

Wu Xian felt that life in the wilderness was quite comfortable. After all, Lapland had already planned their escape. Now they brought more supplies than when they left Syracuse. They could even sleep in tents. It’s no longer two people squeezing into an off-road vehicle.

More than half a month had passed since they left Tremont.

For more than half a month, they were not just wandering around in the wilderness. The two of them went abroad directly to Casimir and watched a Cavaliers Championship playoff game in the border city of Casimir.

In such a short period of time, Lapland's criminal record in Colombia was naturally not synchronized with Casimir at all. What's more, after Lapland left, the convoy attack case was suppressed by someone who didn't know. The commotion did not reach the level of a nationwide manhunt as expected. Ordinary citizens may not even know about such a thing.

Originally, Lapland planned to leave Colombia directly after killing people and travel to other countries according to his own ideas.

However, when they stayed in Casimir for a few days to watch the game, a letter was delivered to Texas by courier.

To be precise, this is a letter home.

After leaving Colombia, the intercity network temporarily lost its effectiveness, and Salvatore had to use this ancient and traditional method to send letters to his granddaughter.

However, although this was a letter from a parent, Salvatore did not ask Texas to do anything, or reprimand her for brutally maiming her second uncle.

Salvatore simply said:

"Chelinina, I'm going to hold a dinner meeting on the 3rd of next month. Everyone will be back by then. If you and your friends' travel plans are not urgent, you can come home and have a look."

——Dinner party.

This noun combines "dinner" and "meeting". Texas explained that traditional Syracusans attach great importance to family gatherings at dinner, and the dinner party was a custom that Salvatore insisted on in his hometown after leaving Syracuse. But because Colombian society is too busy and there is no time to gather family members, it is a compromise between the conflicts between the two.

At the dinner, all members of the Texas family will gather together for a grand dinner.In addition to exchanging feelings, at the dinner, all family members can equally and freely exchange opinions and cooperate in various fields.

If there are some important matters that require unanimous cooperation within the family to be decided, then a vote will be held among all family members during the dinner meeting, and the results of the vote must be followed by everyone, including Salvatore.

Today, the dinner party is the most important family event in the large Texas family.

Chapter 2 Dinner

Of course Texas could choose not to go back.

However, when her journey with Lapland in Tremont ended, she also had new ideas about her family and her future.

"I can't keep escaping. Whether it's the fact that I don't want to be the head of the Texas family or various other things, I have to make it clear to my grandfather."

"No one can interfere with my freedom. Therefore, I must go back."

When the letter reached Texas in a hotel in the border city of Casimir, Texas said so without hesitation.

There is no doubt that after Mosedi's defeat, Salvatore must have something to say when he called Texas back.

Texas chose to go back, not as before, because she could not refuse Salvatore's request.