"What about the sense of immersion? What about resonance? What about Goldfinger? You write a fantasy theme, and the protagonist doesn't even have Goldfinger. What do you want to do? To imitate the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Shield Brave?"
"The protagonist's motives for doing things are also not clearly explained, and there is a lack of logical connection." Yukinoshita added.
"What about your emotional pull? What about the villain's foreshadowing? What about the hatred pull?" Tsukigawa Hiiragi said:
"You haven't even learned anything about excellent works. You're writing a piece of cake! It's like using it as toilet paper and it's going to hurt your butt. This is sandpaper, sandpaper!"
"I also think that novels should be an entertainment product, not a place for you to vent your emotions." Yukinoshita Yukino added quietly.
"That's right, who do you want to attract with a strong sense of literary youth? They are here to relax, not to hear you vent your negative emotions. You really think you are a depressed little prince. You have a secondary disease and need to be cured. !" Yuekawa Hiiragi said.
……
"The summary is that a 30-year-old person who is doing nothing will most likely imagine himself to be a writer - even though you are not yet 30 years old." Yukinoshita Yukino said.
"While I was thinking about venting my emotions through writing, I was also imagining that I could pick up money with a sack." Hiiragi Tsukikawa nodded, agreeing very much.
After an operation that resembled a couple's mixed doubles, Zaimokuza Yoshiki's novel was sprayed all over his body.
Ishiroha blinked her beautiful eyes, looked at Yukinoshita Yukino and Tsukigawa Hiiragi, and was amazed, "I didn't expect Tsukikawa-kun and Yukinoshita also have quite a lot of insights into novels."
"Is it really that bad?" Zaimokuza Yoshiki broke his guard instantly.
"Xiao Yukino, Tsukigawa-kun, there's no need to be like this... I think the writing is pretty good..."
Yuigahama Yui held the stack of novels and smiled.
"Really? I knew I would have readers. Tell me, where is the best place to write?" Zaimokuza Yoshiki immediately became energetic and couldn't wait to ask.
"Eh? This..."
However, Yuigahama Yui was stuck at this time.
She thought for a while, then hurriedly picked up the other person's novel and read it.
"I think... Zaimuzha-san's writing is very sincere!"
She held it in for a long time and finally found a suitable word.
However, Zaimokuza Yoshiki was already in tears.
"I will come back! I will come up with better works next time!"
He almost ran away, leaving a harsh word that didn't sound like a harsh word and ran out of the classroom.
Everyone looked at the leaving figure of Zaimokuza Yoshiki.
"I didn't expect that you might be able to agree with me on some aspects." Yukinoshita Yukino took a sip of the coffee on the table and glanced at Tsukikawa Hiiragi with admiration.
That look is saying, it’s rare for me to look at you in the eyes today, so be grateful!
"Huh, when it comes to novels, I'm a professional!"
Tsukikawa Hiiragi crossed his arms and ignored it.
When it comes to novels, Tianchao Net is ten years ahead of the world in terms of novels. The remaining Long Aotian Shuang novels that were published ten years ago are still being published in other countries.
And even for Long Ao Tianwen, many of their authors can write toilet paper that hurts even when wiping their buttocks. For example, the particularly aggrieved "The Rising of the Shield's Grandson" started with Golden Finger and chose to be someone else's grandson.
From Tsukikawa Hiiragi's point of view, this novel by Zaimokuza Yoshiki is, without exaggeration, not even considered toilet paper, and has no entertainment value.
"It's rare to see you two have the same opinion." Shizuka Hiratsuka looked full of smiles, and by the way, he gave Tsukikawa Hiiragi a meaningful look.
"How's it going? Are you a little interested in Yukinoshita?" Shizuka Hiratsuka put her arms around Tsukikawa Hiiragi's shoulders and whispered softly in his ear.
The moist hot air tickled Yuekawa Hiiragi's ears, and the unique fragrance of a mature woman was intoxicating.
"How is that possible? Now we just have a common topic." Yuekawa Hiiragi shrugged.
"Teacher Hiratsuka, please don't behave like this in the activity room."
Yukinoshita Yukino looked at Shizuka Hiratsuka and said, "The teacher's behavior can also be regarded as sexual harassment of students."
"I don't know how many boys in this school are eager to be near me."
In public, Hiratsuka Shizu couldn't communicate further, so he could only stand up angrily, "And you have to ask the other party's opinion."
She looked at Tsukikawa Hiiragi, "Tsukikawa-kun, do you hate being approached by me?"
"I think teachers should abide by teacher's ethics." Yuekawa Hiiragi said seriously.
"You bastard!"
Hiratsuka Shizuka put her hands on her hips and just wanted to punch him.
I have never seen him so upright and upright in daily interactions.
"Ahaha, I think Mr. Hiratsuka must be very popular too."
Yuigahama Yui is still smiling.
It's just that she was a little puzzled.
Doesn’t Tsukikawa Hiiragi have a girlfriend?Why are you still so close to Hiratsuka Shizuka?And the relationship has become much closer.
Tsukikawa-kun isn't really a scumbag, is he?But why haven’t I heard of him looking for a girlfriend before?In the eyes of the outside world, he used to be more like a frigid prince.
From not being interested in women, to turning into a scumbag in less than a month?Is it too fast?
Yuigahama Yui doesn't believe it too much.
"The next step should be to discuss school friendships."
Yukinoshita Yukino said seriously.
Chapter 81
After getting rid of the extra trouble of Zaimokuza Yoshiki, it was time to talk about business.
"That's right, Seaside Comprehensive High School plans to hold a Christmas festival together with our school."
Ishiroha said, "But... I'm not familiar with this aspect of things, so I still have to trouble you."
Afterwards, Ichiroha briefly introduced the situation of this association to everyone.
"Hainan Comprehensive High School plans to make this sports meeting a profoundly meaningful event, and that's probably it." Ichiroha emphasized in the end.
"What is a profound and meaningful activity?" Yuekawa Hiiragi asked.
"Well... they actually haven't determined this yet." Isiroyu said.
"You want us to do this too?" Yuekawa Hiiragi quickly discovered the problem.
"Hey, they said they have been very busy recently, so they listed a document for us."
With that said, Ichiroha took out a printed document and put it on the table for everyone to see.
"They suggested making a large doll and placing it at the school gate. They also suggested renting some cute puppet costumes and letting [-] people wear the puppets to guide and introduce the guests."
"Of course, maid uniforms and the like must be avoided, and these vulgar things must not be used."
"This Christmas festival is aimed at all people in society. Not only students will come, but also their parents and family members, and maybe children, so free candies should be prepared."
"We should hang up banners and the like as much as possible, write various welcome messages, oh, and Christmas trees, um... it's best to put them up on the main roads."
"Also, when holding an event, go to the photography department to borrow equipment, which can be used to broadcast some public service announcements and the like..."
It roughly means——
It should be wonderful, grand, healthy, unique, eye-catching, and preferably have profound educational significance to people.
The more Tsukawa Hiiragi listened, the more he felt something was wrong.
"So, what are their specific plans? And what's the budget? What companies can they get to co-brand this Christmas festival? How much funding can they get?"
After Ishiroha finished reciting the document, Tsukigawa Hiiragi asked.
Everyone also looked at Yi Colorful Feather.
"This is not available yet..." Ishiroha said.
"Sure enough..." Yuekawa Hiiragi didn't feel strange.
In the original work, the student union of Seaside Comprehensive High School is basically a group of guys who only like to make demands and modify plans, but no one takes actual actions and demonstrates the feasibility. In the end, others have to wipe their butts.
But in this current plan, everything is just a general outline, and there is no way to start with the details.
For example, when placing a Christmas tree, the total length of the main road, how far apart one should be placed, and what items should be decorated on it, were not clearly investigated or written down at all.
Rather than saying it is an unsightly plan, it is more like a lofty outline of requirements.
It's like Party A's father asking for "colorful black", but Party A himself doesn't understand the reality, let alone do it himself.
"Does this mean that we are completely regarded as a subordinate unit of the Seaside Comprehensive High School Student Union?"
Yukinoshita Yukino's face remained cold.
It is said to be a friendship, but from the current situation, it seems that the tasks of the two schools have been assigned.
The student union of Seaside Comprehensive High School is responsible for planning and supervising the revision, and their student union and service club members are responsible for implementation.
Yukinoshita Yukino, who has always been strong, doesn't like to follow other people's orders, nor does she want to be someone else's subordinate, and she is indeed capable of doing this.
When seeing this high-minded event planning, Yukinoshita Yukino actually felt that Tsukigawa Hiiragi became a little cuter.
Of course!This is in comparison.
"I think this plan was hurriedly worked out in an hour just before the deadline."
Tsukikawa Hiiragi simply threw the document on the table, "It might even be stolen from the Internet."
The goal is very ambitious, to hold a vigorous Christmas social event, but the action is delayed.
"Ahahaha... They also said that this is just a draft, and the specific plan still needs to be discussed in person." Isiroyu said with a smile.
……
After roughly understanding the situation, today’s service department activities are basically over.
However, there has been little real progress.
With the sound of the metal clanking of the lock, Tsukikawa Hiiragi locked the door of the activity room.
"It is conceivable that this sorority party may be quite tragic." Tsukigawa Hiiragi said.
"It doesn't matter, we can just make a plan ourselves." Yukinoshita sighed.
Originally, the service club was just here to help solve some difficult problems, but now Iiroha couldn't make up his mind, and the student union of Seaside Comprehensive High School was in a mess again, so only the service club took action.
"I'm afraid that other people won't agree with your plan." Yuekawa Hiiragi said helplessly.
"Then convince them." Yukinoshita Yukino said.
He still had the same cold and confident tone, leaving no room for criticism.
Tsukikawa Hiiragi spread his hands.
Anyway, he couldn't persuade Yukinoshita Yukino.
The three of them walked along the corridor together.
Yuigahama Yui was walking, suddenly ran a few steps quickly, passed two people a few steps, and then turned around.
"Hey, let me tell you... now that we have three members in our club, can we also organize team-building activities in the future?"
While walking backwards, he said, "For example, we can go to Nagoya to play?"
"It's you who wants to go out and play." Yukinoshita Yukino sighed helplessly.
"Hehe~ Anyway, you see there are a lot of people in our club now, and the funds from our school have been saved and not spent..." Yuigahama Yui scratched her head.
"Misappropriation of public funds?" Yuekawa Hiiragi said.
"How can this be called corruption? This is called a normal outing of club members...well, a material collection activity!" Yuigahama Yui looked proud.
"It's not impossible."
Yukinoshita Yukino thought for a while, and then looked at Tsukikawa Hiiragi who was walking beside him, "What about you?"
She is not an unkind person. Although she is relatively cold by nature and very forceful in her actions, she also has a bit of a venomous tongue.
But it is still possible to tell the difference.
As long as it doesn't involve serious business, you can still make friends with Tsukikawa Hiiragi in private.
Of course, only friends, don’t think too much about anything else.
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