Comprehensive comics: Sunlight heroine

Then, Yuigahama Yui noticed Yukinoshita and Sakurajima who looked calm: "Al? Am I the only one who doesn't know that Lin Xiaoxiao is a light novel writer?"

Yes, only you...

The four of them sat in the reception room for a while, and Machida Enzi came back with a smile.

"My colleagues in the editorial department and I took a brief look... The degree of completion is very high..."

"Isn't this good... My editor is you... Why bother with other editors..."

"It doesn't matter! The head of the editorial team of your work takes it very seriously, and also involves other editors in the discussion, and launches it as a star work of Immortal River Publishing House."

"The opinion of the editorial team is..."

"Very good. It has continued the quality of the first volume. Keep up the good work!"

Machida Enzi patted Lin Xiaoxiao's shoulder.

Lin Xiaoxiao looked ashamed. This was not his work at all. He was just a copycat trying to make pocket money.

Next, Machida Enko began to discuss the internship with four high school students.

Machida Enzi assigned different tasks to the four people based on their different situations.

Yui and Sakurajima are responsible for reviewing the manuscripts and selecting interesting ones from among the many manuscripts.This way you won't be bored and you can learn what kind of works are suitable for publication.

Lin Xiaoxiao and Yukinoshita Yukino were assigned more important tasks to help the authors under Machida Enko revise their manuscripts.

This requires Lin Xiaoxiao and Yukinoshita Yukino to put forward their own opinions and help the author make the manuscript more interesting.

The four of them were all satisfied with the assigned work.

Among them, Lin Xiaoxiao is the most satisfied, because the author he and Yukinoshita Yukino want to help is teacher Kasumi Shiko.

Teacher Kasumi Shiko is Kasumigaoka Shiu, a third-year student at Sobu High School!

This is also Machida Enzi's intention, so that students from the same school will not be embarrassed.In addition, Lin Xiaoxiao and Kasumigaoka Shiu's light novels are of the same type, so they can learn from each other.

Sakurajima and Yuigahama helped Machida Enko review manuscripts in the editorial office.

Lin Xiaoxiao and Yukinoshita were in the discussion room, assisting Kasumigaoka Shiyu in revising the manuscript.

Kasumigaoka Shiha has voluptuous and plump curves, long and straight black eyes, dark red eyes, and a tall figure.She wore a white headband and a blue dress. Under the skirt were smooth and delicate black stockings.She has a quiet and decent image, and is an out-and-out beauty.

Yukinoshita Yukino was immediately surprised when she saw Kasumigaoka Shiu.

"Kasumigaoka-senpai, you are actually a light novel writer!"

Although Yukinoshita Yukino and Kasumigaoka Shiu don't know each other, they know each other.

A girl with the best grades in the second grade and a girl with the top grades in the third grade. Coupled with their beautiful appearance, both girls are celebrities in Sobu High School.

"Senior Yukinoshita, are you too?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also covered her mouth in surprise.

Lin Xiaoxiao glanced at Yukinoshita, then at Kasumigaoka...

One is a beautiful girl in black stockings, and the other is a beautiful girl in black pantyhose. I really want to hold both girls in my arms...

Yukinoshita smiled sheepishly: "I'm not, I came to Fusukawa Publishing House for an internship."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu leaned towards Lin Xiaoxiao: "Classmate Lin Xiaoxiao, what about you?"

Yukinoshita was stunned for a moment, had Kasumigaoka Shiyu already known Lin Xiaoxiao?

Yukinoshita looked at Lin Xiaoxiao and found that Lin Xiaoxiao was staring at Kasumigaoka in awe.

Yukinoshita slapped Lin Xiaoxiao hard on the back: "Lin Xiaoxiao, quickly put away your astringent eyes, it's so rude!"

Lin Xiaoxiao reacted and immediately sat upright: "Like Yukinoshita, I also came here to intern at Fusukawa Publishing House."

At this time, Machida Enzi appeared at the right time.

"This is Lin Xiaoxiao, the author of "Chitose-san in the Marble Soda Bottle". I believe you already know that."

"Yes, "Chitose-san in the Marble Soda Bottle" is the hottest new book on the market right now, I already know that."

"This is Yukinoshita Yukino. She and Lin Xiaoxiao came to the publishing house for internship together. She has a wealth of reading. They will complete this discussion on my behalf. I believe they can help you complete it better. "Metronome of Love" Volume [-]."

"Yes, I understand."

Then, Kasumigaoka Shiyu bowed to the two of them: "Then, Mr. Lin and Mr. Yukinoshita, please give me your advice."

Yukinoshita Yukino smiled bitterly and said: "Lin Xiaoxiao, it seems that we have a heavy responsibility..."

Lin Xiaoxiao chuckled and said, "Yes, let's work hard together!"

Kasumigaoka Shiu was very satisfied with Machida Enko's arrangement. She knew that Lin Xiaoxiao and Yukinoshita were both excellent people and would definitely be able to give appropriate opinions.

The sales volume of the first volume of "Metronome of Love" was not very good. If the second volume of "Metronome of Love" is not improved, it will be cut in half.Therefore, Kasumigaoka Shiyu attaches great importance to this discussion.

99. Late at night, ask Yuigahama Yui to sleep together

Kasumigaoka Shiyu sat down in front of Lin Xiaoxiao and Yukinoshita: "Then... let's officially start!"

Yukinoshita had not read "Metronome of Love" yet, so she held the first volume and read it beside her.

Lin Xiaoxiao has read it. How can I say it, it's okay... The writing is good and the story is okay, but it's just not the type that Lin Xiaoxiao likes to read...

Lin Xiaoxiao only likes to read Liu Beiwen, and pure love stories like "Metronome of Love" are not his cup of tea.

"Then let's talk about it. Do you have any troubles about the second volume of "Metronome of Love"? Tell me, I've already read the first volume!" Lin Xiaoxiao asked seriously.

"Editor Lin, can you tell me your thoughts first?"

"It's not bad...it's better than most love stories on the market. I don't think the sales are going to increase because the publicity isn't good enough."

"This opinion...I heard you say it last time."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu is also very helpless... She has no conditions to promote her novel. Even if she knows the crux, there is nothing she can do. She can only work hard to write the novel well, believing that gold will always shine.

"Then, tell me about the confusion you are encountering now!" Lin Xiaoxiao looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with a serious expression.Lin Xiaoxiao looked very serious, but in fact he was really admiring Kasumigaoka Shiyu's beautiful face openly.

Kasumigaoka Shiu is so beautiful and feminine. She is only in her third year of high school, but she is already very well developed. I really want to fuck her.

Xia Zhiqiu knew nothing about Lin Xiaoxiao's YY, and smiled very gratefully at Lin Xiaoxiao: "Okay!"

This smile is so great, I really want to see her smiling at me like this in bed.

Lin Xiaoxiao felt that he really had a criminal tendency and really wanted to commit a crime against Kasumigaoka right now.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded, and then fell silent...

Lin Xiaoxiao didn't say much about this and just sat like this.After admiring Kasumigaoka Shiu's face, he then continued to admire Kasumigaoka Shiu's good figure.

These big breasts, the cup size should be at least D.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu knew nothing about Lin Xiaoxiao's rape, and she was still organizing words to explain her difficulties in writing.

On the side, Yukinoshita was concentrating on reading the first volume of "Metronome of Love" and had no time to stop Lin Xiaoxiao's obscene behavior.

"About "Metronome of Love", what I wanted to write was about love, about a pure love. However... after the first volume, I found that I wanted to continue writing, but I couldn't. There is nothing easy to write about, so... I'm stuck!" At this time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu expressed what she was confused about. "So much so that I racked my brains to write out the content of the second volume, but I'm not satisfied with it!"

"That's it. I understand why you can't write the next content, so... you haven't actually been in love, have you?" Lin Xiaoxiao looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu and asked, although it was a question, but her tone was Very sure.

"Yes, so what's the problem? Can't I write emotional novels if I haven't experienced love?" After hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly became dissatisfied. Obviously, Lin Xiaoxiao's words made her She was very unhappy.

"No...that's not what I meant!" Lin Xiaoxiao immediately shook his head, "I was just guessing, and judging from your appearance, it is indeed true. You have not been in love!"

"And then?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu continued to ask.

"So... you can learn about what love is like, such as observing the students in your school who are in love, or watching some movies and novels about love... In this way, you can at least enrich your knowledge. Experience, at least in theory, can enrich your content!" Lin Xiaoxiao gave his own advice.

"And then? That's a good suggestion. Any other good suggestions?"

After Kasumigaoka Shiyu heard this, her beautiful legs in black stockings were raised casually, her beautiful eyes full of anticipation.

"So... I want to know where are you stuck?" Lin Xiaoxiao looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu and asked.

"Where are you stuck?" After hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu felt helpless, "I wrote that Nao and Sayuka have confirmed their feelings for each other, and then... I don't know. How should I continue to write, after all...if the relationship is really confirmed, then...the rest, I really don't know how to write!"

"Have you confirmed your feelings for the other party?" After hearing this, Lin Xiaoxiao couldn't help but nodded, "Fortunately, you haven't written that the other party has become a boyfriend and girlfriend. Otherwise, if you want to continue writing, Then it won’t be easy to write, but it’s not a big problem…”

Lin Xiaoxiao thought for a moment. Kasumigaoka Shiyu did not disturb Lin Xiaoxiao at this time, because she knew that the other party was thinking, and when thinking, he needed to be quiet.

While Lin Xiaoxiao was thinking, Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but look at Lin Xiaoxiao. He was so handsome and exuded a lively aura all over his body.

"Could it be that "The Thousand-Year-Old Boy of Pinball Soda" was created by Lin Xiaoxiao based on his own personal experience? He has a very emotional scumbag temperament."

"Have it!"

At this time, Lin Xiaoxiao couldn't help but think of a good idea.

"what?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't expect that Lin Xiaoxiao would come up with an idea in such a short period of time. She couldn't help but curiously asked. She also wanted to know what Lin Xiaoxiao had done in such a short period of time. What good idea did you come up with?

Lin Xiaoxiao smiled at this time, "The first volume is finished, so let's add another woman to the second volume? For example, Naoto's childhood sweetheart, who grew up together, and then appeared in In front of him, two people also have feelings for each other, and then... triangle relationships, all kinds of complicated relationships, Naoto's indecision about getting stuck between two women...

Anyway, it is to make people entangled in all kinds of things. Don't settle the relationship so quickly, just let the three of them get into entanglement. You can do whatever you want. The novels you write can definitely be very attractive. If the second volume wants to be published, there is not much problem at all.

As for the content of the next few volumes, then it depends on your own kung fu and whether you can control it yourself. This is my suggestion... So... how do you feel? "

When Lin Xiaoxiao said this, he immediately looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, wanting to know whether she recognized such a suggestion.

After hearing Lin Xiaoxiao's suggestion, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was completely lost in thought. Her beautiful black stocking legs were casually raised from the left to the right.

"Add a new person? And then it develops into a love triangle? This is very common... When the plot can't progress, just add a new character." After hearing Lin Xiaoxiao's words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu fell into thinking and considered feasibility. "It is indeed a good suggestion, but it is also a difficult problem to write an interesting new plot after adding new characters."

This new character cannot be abrupt, it must be smooth, and the story must be interesting. It is far from as simple as Lin Xiao's novel.

At this time, Yukinoshita Yukino put down the book in her hand and put forward her own suggestion.

"Can I talk now?"

Yukinoshita Yukino looked at Lin Xiaoxiao and Kasumigaoka inquiringly.

Lin Xiaoxiao nodded: "Please do."

"Of course." Kasumigaoka looked friendly.

"I have roughly read through the content of the first volume and the first draft of the second volume. The writing is very good and the story is strong, but it lacks a sense of reality?"

"Reality?"

"It's like a love built in a mirrored pavilion, with a sense of unreality."

Hearing Yukinoshita Yukino's suggestion, Kasumigaoka Shiu sighed slightly. She had never been in love, and the love stories she wrote were all imaginary. There was a sense of unreality that was helpless.

"I understand, thank you for your suggestion, Editor Yukinoshita!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was silent for a while, and then said to Lin Xiaoxiao with bright eyes: "Editor Lin Xiaoxiao, please help me revise the second volume to eliminate the unreality in the story."

"Eh? Do you trust me so much?"

"That's right... Editor Machida and I have never been in a relationship. To be able to write such an excellent light novel as "Chitose-san of Marble Bottle", there is no doubt that you have rich emotional experience, please!"

Yukinoshita Yukino chuckled: "Lin Xiaoxiao, you are very good...how many girls have you ruined?"

"I didn't!" Lin Xiaoxiao would not admit that he had conquered many women.

Next, Yukinoshita and Lin Xiaoxiao assisted Kasumigaoka Shiyu in revising the content of the second volume. The main task was to enhance the authenticity of the story, and at the end, a new character was added to prepare for the subsequent third volume. Foreshadowing.

Just discussing like this, the day passed.

After work in the afternoon, the four of them sat together to discuss their experiences.

Yuigahama looked satisfied: "It's so fun to be a reviewer in the editorial department. You can see all kinds of weird submissions."

Lin Xiaoxiao couldn't help but pour cold water on Yuigahama: "That's because you are just doing an internship. If it were work, you wouldn't be in such a good mood."

Sakurajima was curious about Yukinoshita's feelings: "What do you think? Yukinoshita?"

Yukinoshita smiled and said: "It feels like a commission from the Service Department, to help a young girl writer revise his article?"

Lin Xiaoxiao looked at the three women beside him: "Are you going to go home for the night, or stay in a hotel near the Immortal River Publishing House?"

"Stay in a hotel. Commuting is a waste of time, and you have to squeeze into the subway with a bunch of people!" Yukinoshita hates crowded places the most.

"I think so too, let's stay in a hotel." Yuigahama also agreed with Yukinoshita.

Lin Xiaoxiao and Sakurajima looked at each other and naturally agreed with the proposal of staying in a hotel.

After dinner, we came to the hotel.

I chose an affordable ordinary hotel, and the hotel rooms are all double rooms with two beds.