The results of that book were really good, and many people were looking forward to it at the time, especially the first 30 words or so. I can say that I was quite satisfied with the writing.
But after all, I lacked experience, and the outline of the book was too rough. Later, it went further and further away, and I became more and more unable to write it. To be honest, it started at the beginning and ended at the end.
Maybe it's because of this that my brother has never had much confidence in his ability to write long novels.
Later, two books were published one after another. One of them was discontinued due to some three-dimensional reasons. As a result, I couldn’t write the feeling when I picked it up again, so it was discontinued.
The other one is purely a routine exercise book. That book also mentioned this in the acceptance speech, but as I wrote it, I discovered an important problem.
It’s really not interesting to write this kind of routine writing. After practicing for a while, I started to deviate from the outline and write in my own style. But the basics were already the same. I changed my ideas midway and it just ended up like that. Finally, I thought I thought, forget it, start a new book, and write it as you want from beginning to end.
In addition, some readers who have followed me closely may know that in addition to these ones, I have also written some openings that I only wrote a few thousand or even thousands of words before deleting. In fact, they were all written with feelings. If something is wrong, I can’t write anymore.
To be honest, for some of these books, I don’t think it’s because I really can’t write them, but because I don’t have confidence and am confused. I don’t know whether I should continue writing, and I don’t know if anyone will read them. In the final analysis Still lack of experience, still afraid, lack of self-confidence.
I was confused for a while, but finally made up my mind, no matter what, just return to my original intention and write in my own style.
Then, there was such a book.
Speaking of this book, it’s quite interesting. In the beginning, I actually wanted to write a crazy protagonist.
But, I don’t want to write a protagonist who just looks crazy but is actually very sane.
But if we write about a true mental illness, where the protagonist cannot take care of himself, how should we tell the story?
The idea at the time was, ah, why not just deploy a female protagonist at the beginning and let the female protagonist take care of the male protagonist.
Yes, the original idea was a combination of a crazy hero and an evil witch.
Then, the one who was stabbed by the goblins in the prologue was naturally our unlucky male protagonist.
As a result, I later wrote the prologue and then the beginning, but it still didn’t feel right.
Everyone has also seen the situation of Li Mi. In this state, being the protagonist?
Then we can directly turn it into a heroine novel.
The brother thought that he was not good at writing female protagonists, so after thinking about it, he made a decision.
The roles of the male and female protagonists were directly swapped, and it became what it is now.
Of course, the protagonist’s golden fingers and growth focus have also become new.
It's just that I really didn't expect that the person who was stabbed in the prologue would have a different gender, which would make things look a bit different to some people.
So now I have changed the prologue a little bit to avoid people saying that I found inspiration in butter...
Whose butter is used to poke boyass with goblin sticks? Even if it's not butter, it's oil.
However, it seems that this prologue has been screenshotted and posted on the forum because of the suspicion of abusing girls.
kindness……
I always feel that if the genders were swapped, would it be...
Forget it, it doesn’t matter, just do whatever you want, it won’t affect us anyway.
After talking about the current situation, let’s talk about the follow-up.
As for the outline of this book, I have only written the first volume in detail so far.
The first volume has a total of five sections. As of the time it is released, our outline plot has probably reached the end of the second section. The existing follow-up outline can at least support us to four or five million words. Moreover, if we write quickly After that, I will also take time to design the outline of the second volume in advance, so you don’t have to worry about the plot.
If I have to say something that would be a bit watery...
Yep.
As I said before, the original protagonist was actually a crazy male hero, so the initial outline design did not take the alchemist's ability growth into consideration too much.
But now that our protagonist has become an alchemist, the situation is different. It will be necessary to add a part about the protagonist's growth and research on his own abilities to the original outline plot. If this part is not handled well, it will become a little lengthy. , I hope everyone will bear with it. After all, serialization cannot really be perfect.
I would also like to give you an overview of this book. I am ambitious. If I could, I would love to write about 500, [-], [-], [-] million words.
But ambition is there, confidence is something else.
Novel is like walking a tightrope. Suddenly one day a certain plot of a certain book makes a major design error, and the book collapses. You must have seen many situations.
Being able to write a long story without breaking down throughout the entire process is, at least in my opinion, very difficult.
I can only do my best, I don’t know if I can do it.
Of course, as long as there is no similar collapse of the sky, this book will never be a failure, so you can rest assured.
As for actually writing a similar story about Heaven Falling...
Without my pigeons, the brothers would disperse on their own.
Okay, here’s a post-release review. The word count is almost as long as one chapter update, so I won’t waste any more nonsense.
Brothers, see you tomorrow.
Chapter 57 The tattooed man did not escape death after all
After mastering alchemy proficiently, the so-called spiritual power and magic power are no longer strange and mysterious to Lu Lin's perception.
There is no essential difference between these two things and your lung capacity, which determines how far you can run in long-distance running and how much air you can blow out. They just have different functions.
After gaining the ability of an intermediate alchemist, Lu Lin's first feeling was that both abilities had been greatly improved.
When he was refining King Gulan's Useless Sleeping Spring, Lu Lin's mental power was almost squeezed to the limit. If he refines it again now, the pressure on his mental power should be much less.
Of course, mixing a big tank for six hours should still be as tiring as possible.
In addition, what has been improved is the knowledge of various material processing. Lu Lin is now thinking about how to process the materials that have been processed before. Compared with before, Lu Lin will drill out more details in his mind. Please note that if you refine primary potions in the future, you should be able to produce high-quality potions.
As for the new recipe…
Ok.
As before, it does not come with the ability. It is estimated that you still have to complete subsequent tasks to get it.
Thinking of this, Lu Lin's consciousness turned to the task box in his mind.
At this time, previously completed tasks have been replaced with new tasks.
[The Path of the Sage·The Journey of Sail: The First Crew·Stage [-]]
[Task goal: Collect 20g of black grass extract (0/1), 100g of cinnamon pulp (0/1), 300g of Candymo limestone dust (0/1), 1000g of velvet grass pulp (0/1), and animal bones. 2kg of bone meal (0/1) 10kg of pure swamp mud (0/1) Complete corpse of a junior warrior (0/2)]
[Task reward: Carlton Blood Abyss’s Brilliant Red Stone*1]
Just as Lu Lin guessed, after the cross-stage mission is completed, there will be a series of welfare missions. Last time it was "The First Alchemy", and this time it is "The First Crew Member".
I just don’t know what this “first crew member” refers to?
Do you really want him to refine a crew member?
I can’t understand the mission rewards. They seem to be some kind of high-end gems?
I don’t know what it is for, but based on previous experience, the rewards given by tasks are basically the same.
"Speaking of it, this should be an intermediate formula. It's quite complicated." Lu Lin looked at the formula carefully. "The first two are not cheap, but they are both available, and the latter ones are very common, nothing more. A little more..."
Ok……
Ok?
Something seems wrong.
Wait a minute!
The intact corpse of a junior warrior?
Why do you still need to use corpses?
And he also needs the corpses of soldiers. He is busy running away now. Where can he find the corpses of soldiers?
wrong……
Lu Lin frowned, as if he thought of something.
At this time, Lan Jie, who was dragging his suitcase, walked out of the room. Seeing Lu Lin frowning, he asked in confusion: "Huh? Boss, what's wrong with you?"
"You are so quick to change your words," Lu Lin's mouth twitched, "I suddenly remembered something. Think about it, have you forgotten something?"
"What did I forget?" Lan Jie was stunned, "What?"
"Hint," Lu Lin raised a finger, "Brother Tattoo."
"Ah!" Lan Jie clapped his hands, and the suitcase in his hand fell to the ground with a bang, "Yes! And those two bastards! Why did I almost forget about them!"
"What do you mean? While the town is still in chaos, let's kill them?" Lu Lin asked.
"Okay, go now, I know where those two bastards will be," Lan Jie gritted his teeth.
"Okay, I'll help you, but remember to leave their bodies intact." Lu Lin also stood up, "I'll be useful later."
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The Yewo faction's gambling house exploded.
This is the second place that exploded in the town today, but because the scene in the first place was so violent, no one cared about the explosion here at all, and just regarded it as an ordinary gang fight. No one to talk to.
The members of the Yewo faction inside the gambling house were all killed.
As for the person who took action...
Lu Lin did help a little bit, but 90.00% of it was Lan Jie who killed it all alone.
Maybe he remembered his eldest brother's hatred again, or maybe he was too frustrated when dealing with Sebuike before. When he arrived on the territory of the Night Snail Sect, this buddy was immediately jealous.
Lu Lin finally understood why he could still securely occupy the position of deputy leader of the Zhengwo sect despite being quite a few years apart from his eldest brother.
Except that the force of swinging the sword is not as powerful as that of his elder brother, in other aspects, his sword skills are not inferior to his elder brother in any way.
I am afraid that compared to his elder brother, his swordsmanship talent is even better.
And with such sword skills and Lu Lin's assistance, killing these minions was as easy as killing chickens and dogs.
When his elder brother gave way to the tattooed brother, the other party had to rely on a curse to have a chance to attack.
Now Lan Jie comes to fight for his life. The legendary tattooed heroes of the Night Snail Sect were stabbed through the heart by both of them before they could even go through ten rounds.
Moreover, this was because Lu Lin told him that he wanted the two people's corpses intact, otherwise he might have chopped them into pieces a few rounds in advance.
Looking at the corpses on the ground, Lu Lin touched his chin and asked: "Is it true that there are so many people in the Killing Night Snail Sect? As you said before, these people are all closely related to the locals..."
"There will probably be chaos for a while," Lan Jie slowly wiped the blood on the knife, "but anyway, these bunch of bitches are not good people, and when my eldest brother died, these bunch of bitches were dancing happily. I I have long wanted to kill them all.
"I used to do it, and I was afraid that they would come to trouble me later. Now I am not afraid of the barefooted ones. I will kill them as soon as I kill them. After we leave, it will be useless even if they are angry to death. If I really can't stand it, just let me They can go home and vent on their own walls."
"That's right," Lu Lin nodded, "You killed most of the people, and there is still some time. You can collect some trophies. Just divide it between the three of us later, and then go say goodbye to your brother, and then take the Come find me at my house with your things, oh, by the way, help me buy some things before you find me..."
With that said, Lu Lin took out the notebook and pen contained in the black crow robe bag, wrote down the alchemy materials he needed in the notebook, tore off the page and handed it to Lan Jie.
Lan Jie looked at it and said with a somewhat embarrassed expression: "Well, I don't seem to understand..."
"It's okay. You can just take the underground treasures and give them to Sister Ajuan. These things shouldn't be difficult to buy," Lu Lin said, turning to the next page of the book and writing down the name of fire dust explosives on it. The formula and a series of things that need to be paid attention to when refining, then tore out the page and handed it to Lan Jie, "Together with this, please help me tell Sister Ajuan to thank her for taking care of me during this time. Then, say hello to all my friends who care about me."
"Well, I understand," Lan Jie nodded, "Then you are now..."
"I'll carry these two bodies back first," Lu Lin said. "Also, both I and Li Mi need to go home, take a shower, change clothes, and have a good rest."
Chapter 58 What happened to the reckless man?The reckless man slept soundly
The second day, afternoon.
"Come on, one last bite..."
"Well……"
Tanumi opened her mouth and ate the last spoonful of stewed rice.
After Lu Lin picked up the napkin and wiped the corners of her mouth, she got up and went to bed as usual.
"Um...Boss, I've always wanted to ask, what is the relationship between you and Miss Li Mi?" Lan Jie, who was squatting aside, asked doubtfully, "They look like a couple, they don't seem too similar, and they look the same." Not like brothers and sisters…”
"Well, I'm actually not sure..." Lu Lin sighed, "I have to say, maybe she's close to her guardian? She's mentally traumatized, and I don't know what to do, so I can only temporarily Take care of her."
"Psychological trauma? What is that?" Lan Jie looked even more confused.
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