AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

This ability to mobilize emotions is at least an order of magnitude stronger than during the "Emperor's New Clothes" period!

The author whose pen name is "Guan Ai" still has a rather redundant writing style.

But this redundancy affected the perception in "The Emperor's New Clothes", but in "Cinderella" it was more eye-catching!

Chapter 21 The whole network is hacked?

In the early stage, he used meticulous line drawings to describe Cinderella's tragic situation in a restrained and non-sensational way, making it difficult for every reader with a tender heart not to be extremely angry at the culprit stepmother...

Qiao Yinque recalled her inner feelings when she read each paragraph, and the more she thought about it, the more her eyes beat and her heart skipped a beat.

My writing skills have improved so much!

It's just like the protagonist in a long martial arts novel, who was originally ordinary and failed to succeed, but suddenly gained the skills passed down by the master.

Did someone help me?

Otherwise, with the level of writing shown by "Care" in "The Emperor's New Clothes", how could an author have made such astonishing progress in just half a month!

"Impossible, absolutely impossible. It's obvious that he didn't become stronger on his own."

Qiao Yinque said to himself:

"The magazine must have wanted to make this story as high-quality as possible, so they spent a lot of money to find a literature teacher or professor, and asked them to help polish the writing..."

The hand that hit the table no longer hurts much.

Qiao Yinque leaned back on the chair, raised her head, and took a deep breath.

Lean over and continue reading.

Soon.

Qiao Yinque has finished reading the ending.

But she couldn't calm down for a while. Under her dull expression, there were two-way doubts about her and the author's "care".

She questioned herself because the development of the story could not be said to exceed her expectations every time, but at every major turning point in the plot, it was far from what she expected.

Cinderella wants to participate in the show, but there is a drug that can make her childhood smaller?

The two daughters can't fit into the glass slippers, but the stepmother is cruel enough to make her daughters cut off their feet to fit into the shoes? ?

Faced with the protection of the prince and the astonishment of her stepmother and family, Cinderella slowly twisted half of her mouth? ? ?

Aren’t you a professional author? Why didn’t you think of any of them? ? ! !

The doubts about the author's "care" are also due to the fact that it is far from what she expected.

It’s understandable to use rejuvenating medicine.

But what about cutting off the feet to fit the shoes?Aren't you afraid of scaring children with such a cruel and thrilling plot?

And at the end of the story, what does it mean when you twist your lips?

Didn’t you really think that the number of words was enough when you were writing, "Ah, I don’t want to write anymore, just finish it and play games", and then just messed up a few words?

Aren’t you afraid that readers will want to punch you after reading this?

There was a storm in Qiao Yinque's brain.

If "care" were right in front of her, she would want to grab his collar and shake him wildly. While shaking, she asked angrily:

"Does anyone write fairy tales like this? Huh?

"I asked you if there is anyone who writes fairy tales like you!

"You write fairy tales like this to apologize to parents and children across the country!!"

But as she thought about it angrily, Qiao Yinque gradually couldn't help it and laughed out loud, "Haha."

That's great, isn't it.

A fairy tale is not written like a fairy tale at all, and it is even unfinished.

The foundation is as empty as a loft in the sky. The root is broken and the tail is rotten. It is not very convenient to spray it.

Moreover, there is a fatal BUG!

Qiao Yinque repeatedly read the relevant paragraphs from "ID card" to "The prince is looking for someone".

There is a big problem with the plot here. When the author "Guan Ai" wrote the previous and later plots, there might have been a gap of one day, which made it impossible to connect the previous and later logics reasonably.

But neither the author nor the editor, nor even the master who helped polish the article, noticed it.

No, the master has probably discovered it, but he only uses money to do things, and only pays for polishing, so he only uses polishing power.

"This is writing, Mr. Guan Ai."

Qiao Yinque chuckled, picked up a pen on the table, and turned it around leisurely.

“As an author, if you can write important plots in one go, it’s best to finish them in one go.

"Otherwise, you can't guarantee that the next time you write, you will be able to enter the same state, find the same logic, and write a suitable follow-up article."

These are the words of experience of the old author after suffering losses.

Obviously, Mr. Guan Ai, the new genius fairy tale writer, also wants to experience this loss.

Qiao Yinque took out her mobile phone and first made an outline of the next actions, what position each account stood on, and what type of words they said...

After confirming that it was correct, she nodded with satisfaction and began to switch accounts quickly and skillfully. With the power of one person, she became an army of trolls and blacklisted "Cinderella" on the entire network.

Preemptive strike!

She first created an atmosphere in which "Cinderella" had poor reviews, so that when readers who liked it went online and wanted to share it, they would fall into self-doubt and shrink back when they saw the negative reviews flying all over the place.

Others who don't care about "Cinderella" will only receive the message that the story is terrible, and will naturally no longer be interested in it.

The last time she hacked "The Emperor's New Clothes", she suffered from a latecomer disadvantage. This time she will definitely win everything!

The author "cares", this is the price you pay for being a villain!

……

"Ah, it's so annoying. Why did I search on the Internet and I didn't see it? There are so many black ones?"

At dinner time, Tang Ping was eating his third dinner while intensively searching for "Cinderella" on his phone.

I don’t know if my food luck is bad tonight, but I feel very unappetizing on both sides.

As for dinner, it was the first time that Tang Ping had a meal. As soon as Tang Ping took a piece of cold cucumber with his chopsticks and prepared to eat it, he noticed why the white cucumber seeds inside were moving.

I squinted my eyes and took a closer look, oh, it turned out to be white and tender little maggots.

The school is providing high-protein supplements to poor students. It’s a great idea!

Exchange meals.

For the second meal, Tang Ping carefully searched through all the dishes and confirmed that there was nothing suspicious, so he ate with peace of mind.

But as soon as the sizzling beef entered his mouth, the rancid smell forced him to spit it out.

Even if the meat at this stall is spoiled, you don’t know how to marinate it!

Exchange meals.

For the third time, Tang Ping changed to fried noodles, two eggs, and a hot dog. He thought that his luck was a bit evil, but it would be okay this time, right?

Good news, the fried noodles and eggs are fine.

Bad news, a piece of sack wire was found in the hot dog.

Tang Ping gave up struggling.

He took out his mobile phone and started searching for himself. He wanted to see that the 67th issue of "Dove of Peace" had been released for half a day. Except for the girls in his class who were "cheated! This is not a sweet love story at all!" "RNM, refund the money!"... …

What other comments are there.

Then you see:

"Is this really a fairy tale? 』

"I can't understand what the author is writing. Can anyone tell me what he wants to express? 』

"@ Guan Ai, why don't we write something that doesn't use our brains? This plot is written. As soon as you use your brain, I really want to laugh. 』

"..."

Such negative comments.

Tang Ping, who originally wanted to eat based on various comments, could hardly finish the last half of the plate of fried noodles.

He couldn't help but ask AI:

"Is this story really poorly written?"

AI:

"AI writes a book and brags about it: I think it's very beautiful. If you don't believe me, take a look and see - ah, the writing, ah, the characters, ah, the plot..."

Tang Ping was expressionless: "Ah, this idiot."

Chapter 22 Misunderstanding...?

Turning off the AI, Tang Ping sighed.

The stainless steel dinner fork in your hand is gently inserted into the ceramic dinner plate.

He had a vague feeling that something was wrong.

He has read the story "Cinderella" several times. Although he has some criticisms about some parts, overall, this is a fairy tale with outstanding highlights.

The most prominent highlight is the suffering Cinderella suffered in the early stage!

According to feedback from editor-in-chief Yaoyao, when members of the Peace Dove magazine watched "Cinderella", they generally had strong angry reactions to the depressing plot.

It is conceivable that after the magazine is released, readers will not only discuss the highlights with enthusiasm, but will at least be deeply impressed and have a certain desire to complain.

But looking at online comments, it seems that few people are discussing such a bright spot.

Occasionally, if there is any discussion, it will be suppressed for reasons such as "forcibly making people angry" and "the subsequent writing is too poor".

It's as if these people who gave negative reviews don't want others to know that "Cinderella" is a highlight.

"..."

Tang Ping frowned slightly, thinking of an unlikely possibility.

"Navy?"

Is there a certain force causing trouble online, confusing right and wrong, and targeting "Cinderella"?

but why?

He is not well-known, and "Cinderella" was only published in third-tier magazines that were only sold in the province. Who has no time to spend so much effort to target him?

Tang Ping couldn't understand.

He clicked on the user accounts that gave negative reviews one by one, and checked the accounts.

I found that each of them has their own life trajectory, which is completely different from the one that can be determined at a glance like the navy account.

"High-end navy? The price is much higher than that of ordinary navy."

Tang Ping vaguely remembered that the average navy paid a few cents per message, and they could only make money by brushing up the volume. The senior navy paid a few yuan or even a dozen yuan per message, just to appear as real as possible.

He took screenshots one after another, opened the chat software, and sent the pictures to editor-in-chief Yaoyao.

When I went to an electronics factory for an interview, my supervisor checked my academic qualifications severely: "Sister Yaoyao, can you read these remarks?"It always feels like someone bought the dark version of "Cinderella". 』

Editor-in-chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "? ? 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Wait a moment, let me take a closer look." 』

Editor-in-chief of Peace Dove Yaoyao: "It does look like a navy army. There are several IDs that I am familiar with. Last time I searched for the online reviews of "The Emperor丨's New Clothes", they were also messing around and blackmailing people. . 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Maybe there are some friends who don't want to see us (laughing and crying.jpg)."I will investigate the details. I’m sorry to have to worry about Teacher Guan Ai! 』

Is this really a professional navy? !

Although he had already guessed it, Tang Ping was still unavoidably surprised when he saw the evidence from editor Yaoyao.

He sighed in his heart that business competition is really cruel.