AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

Tang Pingping explained:

"She was bullied by her stepmother's family and turned into a dull and dark Cinderella. Although she was given pills and could turn back into a cute little girl after taking them, the total amount of pills was limited.

“Her parents didn’t leave her the formula, and one day she’ll run out of pills and never be the cute little girl she is again.

"Time has carved indelible scars on her body. Years of miserable life have destroyed her body when she grew up. Her future is destined to be bleak, destroyed at the hands of her stepmother and her family.

"And even if she leaves with the prince, the prince only likes her as a cute little girl. He must spend 12 hours a day, and he will be very tired of her changing back to her original form...

“So, I think this is a very sad story, because even if the stepmother’s family is punished, her life is ultimately ruined.

"That's why the author called her 'Cinderella'. She will always be Cinderella, not Cinderella."

The more she spoke, the more sympathetic crying sounded in her voice.

The classmates in the classroom listened quietly.

Li Suyi nodded gently: "That's very good, sit down.

"I believe everyone will be deeply impressed by Tang Pingping's understanding. I won't make any comments for now, but will ask a classmate to share his thoughts.

"Tang Ping."

Chapter 29 Complete Story Line

Tang Ping stood up in confusion.

Just as he was about to follow the script for the answer given by the AI, Li Suyi said quietly:

"When some students were crying just now, I saw that Tang Ping couldn't help but burst into laughter.

"So, may I ask, classmate Tang Ping, what part of this piece of "Cinderella" made you happy?"

Uh... Tang Ping opened his mouth.

Can I say that I was amused by the retarded answer given by the AI.

"I remembered something happy?"

"You said it smoothly too?" Li Suyi asked.

"Well..." Tang Ping shut up, thinking, and remained silent.

Li Suyi sighed softly, raised her hand slightly and pressed it down, about to signal him to sit down...

Tang Ping said:

"I couldn't help but laugh out loud because I remembered some of the rumors about this fairy tale on the Internet..."

He briefly summarized Qiao Yinque's remarks.

After the students listened, many of them whispered, chuckled and agreed, feeling that these statements made sense.

There are also many people who shake their heads and think that there is something wrong with people who seek reality in fairy tales.

Li Suyi listened quietly and allowed the students to discuss for a minute before making a booing gesture.

She looked at Tang Ping and asked:

"What do you think of these comments?"

Tang Ping spread his hands: "Teacher Li, I laughed."

He brushed off the problem.

In fact, although he wanted to give Qiao Yinque a big blow, he also admitted that some of what Qiao Yinque said did make sense.

For example, "ID card" has a preface that doesn't match the subtitles at the end.

When he asked the AI ​​to write it, he didn't notice the contradiction in the context, and for some reason, the editor didn't notice it when he was reviewing and proofreading the manuscript.

As a result, after it was printed and published, Qiao Yinque caught bugs in the plot and pointed them out, and it was already too late to get it right.

I can only lament that although AI has optimized and upgraded the writing module, it still makes errors and confusion from time to time.

Li Suyi nodded, thinking she understood Tang Ping's point of view.

She motioned Tang Ping to sit down and said slowly:

“I didn’t pay much attention to the Internet, so I didn’t know there were these claims.

“But here, I want to say that these remarks are wrong as they come out.

"As for why, let's talk about it slowly."

After she finished speaking, she paused, and with a clear gaze on the podium, she noticed the small movements of a classmate in the corner.

The classmate carefully hid his cell phone behind the books on the second base. The camera on the edge was exposed and he quietly pointed it at the podium.

She seemed to rarely do this, her body was stiff and her movements were unfamiliar, and her facial muscles were obviously tense.

"..."

Out of her duties as a teacher, Li Suyi should immediately confiscate her cell phone, or at least hint to the classmate to put it away.

But she paused for two seconds, and the person who did this secretly turned out to be the Chinese class representative who had been studying seriously...

Maybe I want to record the next explanation and read it over and over again in case someone doesn’t understand.

Li Suyi temporarily suppressed the instinctive impulse to perform her duties, pretended not to notice the small movements of the Chinese class representative, and started her own explanation.

“I have always believed that an excellent story should be read by people at different levels and gain something from it.

“‘Cinderella’ definitely fits my point of view.

"Although it may be out of fear that parents will lose control of their emotions when telling fairy tales and that children will not understand the full version, they chose to publish both the children's version and the adult version at the same time - the children's version is used to tell stories to children, and the adult version is used It's up to parents to see for themselves.

"But in general, the children's version has only abbreviated and modified the ending to make it easier for children to satisfy, and the plot remains consistent with the adult version.

"As for its plot, although I thought it was a bit weird at first glance, after thinking about it deeply, I really appreciated it."

Li Suyi turned on the projector and played the PPT.

"Just like the later period of "The Emperor's New Clothes," the early stage of "Cinderella" also left a deep impression on me.

"At the beginning of the story, the author uses words that seem to be plain and straightforward, but are actually detailed and can arouse emotions. It implicitly stimulates the reader's perception, making people can't help but quickly become involved, and feel a mixture of sadness and anger for Cinderella's experience.

"When the stepmother bullied Cinderella, she drank water from the toilet, raced with people and cars... Those harsh and exaggerated unreasonable demands seemed ridiculous. How could anyone do this?

"However, the whole family's unscrupulous bullying of Cinderella was torn apart even more bloodily. It made people feel that it was obviously unreal and absurd, but it also felt that in the illusion, an extremely surprising and delicate reality was constructed, which was chilling...

"Then I hate my stepmother even more. I just saw many classmates gnashing their teeth. Don't worry, it's my first time watching it too."

There were several chuckles in the class.

Li Suyi switched to PPT and changed the topic.

"The story finally took a turn when the stepmother announced that she was going to participate in the party show.

"Cinderella opened the safe and obtained the magical medicine left to her by her parents, which could transform her back into a child and help her get out of the predicament she was in.

"But as Tang Pingping said just now, medicines are limited, and since her parents didn't leave any prescriptions, Cinderella will run out of medicines one day.

"Cinderella signed up for the show with her ID card. After taking the medicine, she relied on her cuteness as a child to easily win the favor of the prince on the show. However, she had to run away because the time limit was approaching. She accidentally lost a shoe and a bottle of change on the way. Little medicine...

"The blind prince found someone based on the shoes and the medicine to make him smaller. The cruel stepmother cut off the toes and heels of the two daughters just so that the younger daughter could put on the shoes. But after twice mistakenly thinking that the stepmother's daughter was Cinderella, , the prince finally saw the real Cinderella, and claimed that his stepmother and the others should pay the price..."

After Li Suyi briefly summarized the plot, she pressed her hands on the desk and looked around the class.

And deliberately controlled it, not paying attention to the mobile phone that the Chinese class representative was secretly filming.

"Students, I believe you must be full of doubts in your hearts. You feel that something is wrong in the second half of the plot. Why is it that everything seems to be full of contradictions and the logic breaks down?

"Why can't I find someone with my ID card? Wouldn't the blind prince let others look for Cinderella with his ID card?

"Why did the stepmother cut off her daughter's toes and heels? Even if the prince didn't realize he had brought her home at first, he could still return the goods?

"Why does the story end suddenly when Cinderella slowly crooks her mouth and smiles at the end of the story?

"Is the author writing blindly?

“It’s normal to have this kind of doubt, and I had this kind of doubt at the beginning.

“It wasn’t until I thought deeply that I suddenly realized that this story is not as simple as it seems.

"The story line I just briefly described is just its appearance, a incomplete appearance for children to see.

"Actually, it has an unwritten dark line. It requires careful consideration to discover, and at the moment of discovery, one instinctively exclaims, 'Dark, so dark! No wonder it's an adult version!'...

"The complete story line!

"As long as the complete story line is discovered, all the questions just mentioned will be solved!"

Tang Ping: "!!"

Teacher, what are you talking about? ?

Chapter 30 Is this something that can be said in class?

Li Suyi's expression was firm and convinced, and her eyes were full of light and shadow.

"Abandoning the incomplete appearance, "Cinderella" has a complete context. It is actually a very dark story.

"Cinderella has accumulated deep hatred for her stepmother and family after being bullied for many years.

"In these long years, it is impossible that she would not have opened the safe left to her by her parents in despair and helplessness.

“She already knew that there was a medicine to make her smaller, but when she opened it again in the story, she read the message her parents had given her again.

"But at this moment, let's not deduce it from the beginning, but use flashback and slowly tell it from the end forward..."

Li Suyi slowly recounted.

Although the inference she mentioned is slightly different from that of editor-in-chief Yan Yao, it is generally [-]% or [-]% similar:

Cinderella twisted her lips, indicating that all developments were under her control, and it was she who designed the stepmother to cut off her daughter's feet;

The prince pretended to be blind and unable to see the "red" glass slipper because he had evil intentions and deliberately ignored it;

The stepmother ruthlessly cut off her daughter's toes and heels in order to join the upper class. Blinded by desire, she would not hesitate to cut off the flesh, break the bones and bleed...

Going all the way back to the beginning, no matter how you look at it, it is a contradiction of AI logic, but it is rounded off into a dark and deep disability unique to adults.

After the round was completed, she also blew a wave of Tang Ping and said:

"I think Tang Ping has already thought of this complete story line, so he couldn't help but laugh when he remembered the comments on the Internet.

"After all, Tang Ping likes Heishencan very much. In the reading comprehension test paper a few days ago, you dared to write 'the little boy received money from foreign forces', didn't you?"

Li Suyi smiled and looked at Tang Ping.

The classmates exclaimed one after another, never expecting that "Cinderella" was actually such a story. None of them understood it, and no one understood "Cinderella" better than Teacher Li Suyi!

Oh no, Tang Ping can join the tie.

As the "protagonist" of half the class who was forced to give a point by the teacher and the whole class focused on, Tang Ping looked shocked at first, then looked like a question mark, and finally very dull, barely showing an awkward yet polite smile, and nodded gently.

As if to say, "Yeah, that's right, that's what I thought."

But in fact-

I'm not, I didn't, I didn't think about it at all!

Tang Ping could only sigh in his heart, maybe this is the Chinese teacher.

Even if the author only wrote two words: "Good night"

The Chinese teacher will also explain eloquently:

"The word "late" in "Good Night" indicates the time, which is reminiscent of the dark sky, symbolizing the darkness of society at that time.But people feel "safe" under this black sky, which reflects the numbness of the people...』

And if the author does not write a greeting, but only writes a simple statement: "The curtains are blue." 』

Chinese teachers will also say: "The blue curtains have a melancholic meaning, expressing the author's depressed mood at that time..."

Listening to the excited discussions among his classmates who suddenly realized something, Tang Ping sighed silently in his heart.

Perhaps it is because this time it is clear that some clips are indeed AI errors and omissions, rather than having any depth.

Although his ears were filled with praises such as "the author is awesome" and "the writing is so cool"... he could not feel much secret joy, only that it was very subtle and he couldn't laugh or cry.

Teacher, I'm so embarrassed that I'm standing in for someone else. Fortunately, I'm wearing hard carbon shoes, otherwise my toes would have dug out of three rooms and two living rooms...

But then again.