AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

"Ah, a girl protagonist, but a fairy tale theme that boys prefer?" Chen Xiao opened his mouth wide.

What kind of top-level understanding is this?

"Is this because we didn't find the right audience?" a colleague asked.

The types of fairy tales that little girls generally like to read are the heroine's sweet love, wonderful fantasies... and the like.

The type of fairy tales that little boys generally like to read is one in which the hero fights bravely and responds to the enemy wittily... and the like.

The protagonist is a little girl, but the little boy wants to fight. At first glance, it seems that he wants to eat both the little girl readers and the little boy readers. I want them all.

But in fact, little girl readers will dislike the combat-oriented content, and little boy readers will dislike the little girl protagonist.

On the contrary, it is not flattering on both sides.

Yan Yao nodded: "If you put aside the content of the story, it is indeed true."

Chen Xiao: "What if we don't put aside the content of the story?"

"...Huh." Yan Yao took a deep breath.

She suddenly raised her arms in the air, and shouted loudly in front of the shocked eyes of all her colleagues in the magazine:

"The caring teacher is a god among gods!"

All magazine employees: "..."

A silence.

"Click"

It sounded like a dislocated jaw.

Chen Xiao raised his hand and lifted his chin that was about to fall.

And in the center of everyone's attention, Yan Yao realized that she couldn't help but do something in her excitement.

Her face turned red.

The crimson color spread all the way up from his neck, and in just a few seconds, his face turned red and his ears were boiled.

She put down her hands stiffly, lowered her head, her expression was flustered but she tried to keep herself calm, and she quickly explained with a slight tremor in her voice:

"Teacher Guan Ai, he has achieved an almost perfect combination of all aspects and achieved a balance that I am very satisfied with.

"In this story, I saw the young love, the mature cold outside and the hot inside, the humor, the clever warning, the wonderful tactical changes, the rich combat types...

"Although Snow White and her killer have not revealed their feelings for each other so far, based on the various signs of the Snake Line, I believe that they will reveal their feelings and come together in the finale."

Chen Xiao: "...Sister Yan Yao, you don't need to explain so much. We haven't watched it and don't know what you are talking about."

"In short, Teacher Guan's "Snow White" is very exciting and I think it can perfectly cover all audience segments!"

"Then why don't you let us see it?" A colleague was puzzled.

If it were so wonderful, why would I still be so melancholy and insomniac?

Shouldn't he be so excited that he couldn't sleep all night?

and many more.

I haven't expressed my feelings yet...

season finale?

Yan Yao's tone became disappointed again: "Because he hasn't finished writing yet."

Everyone: "..."

"You guys should get off work first. I want to talk to Teacher Guan Ai."

Yan Yao turned back to face the computer screen, the blush on her face never going away.

After the sudden brain twitch, she didn't know how to face her colleagues at the magazine.

She has worked hard to maintain a cold image for several years...

It must have been because it was too late and because I ate too much, all the blood was supplied to the stomach, and my brain was too dizzy, which is why I had a brain twitch.

definitely is!

Several colleagues looked at each other again and again.

"It's already here, and it won't take more than a few minutes."

Yan Yao: "But if it gets darker, I won't be able to catch the last subway."

"What's the big deal? Doesn't Lao Chen have a car?"

"Sister Yan Yao, let's talk first. We'll go outside to smoke a cigarette. When we're done, we'll get off work together. Let Lao Chen take us home while you take the passenger seat."

Chen Xiao looked bitter: "That's my wife's exclusive seat. She doesn't let other girls sit."

Colleagues spread their hands:

"What should we do? Sister Yan Yao is sitting in the back row with us gentlemen?"

"No, the back row is very crowded."

Chen Xiao gritted his teeth and stamped his feet: "Then let her sit in the passenger seat!"

Yan Yao was sent home first, and then some older men peeled two whole oranges and ate them to cover up the smell of perfume.

Check again to make sure there are no long strands of hair or the like missing on the passenger side.

In the end, if you still cheat, just tell the truth.

The worst I can do is to finish the task tonight... work hard!

They discussed, scattered cigarettes, and walked out of the magazine.

Give Yan Yao time to chat with Teacher Guan Ai.

There is also a quiet space for one person.

Chapter 37: Courage Testing Day, April 4th

The magazine office, which had become empty, was still filled with the smell of barbecue fireworks.

Yan Yao listened to the footsteps and discussions of her colleagues fading away, and heard the clear click of the lighter. She seemed to have lit up a cigarette and talked about the past.

She whispered a "thank you" that only she could hear, took a breath, and hovered her hands above the keyboard.

Type quickly.

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Very good!" ! ! 』

On the other side, Tang Ping, who squatted in the toilet for the last time before going to bed to avoid waking up late at night and ruined his sleep, was almost ready to leave the trap when he finally received the news.

If the document hadn't shown "downloaded by the other party", looking at the silent chat box before, he would have almost suspected that the editor-in-chief Yaoyao had gone home from get off work, but the computer was still on standby.

Very good...Tang Ping typed reply.

My cats and dogs are too fierce to touch, but you can touch my cow: "Is there anything that has not been written well or has a bug?" 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Well, if I have to talk about it...these two plots? 』

She sent screenshots of two plots related to Snow White’s broad-mindedness.

These are two plots that she doesn't quite understand, and she doesn't understand why they appear in fairy tales for children.

The change in the direction of the plot is relatively rigid, and it also somewhat destroys the beautiful character of the life-saving killer.

Even if there is some deep meaning in it, for example, the life-saving killer said "those who like big breasts and those who have big breasts are not bad people", it is to highlight the persona of a greasy-tongued uncle, using a greasy tone to express that he has no hostility towards Snow White, I think he said this on purpose Let Snow White hate him and not follow him...

Then you still can’t show it to children!

It ruins the fairy tale atmosphere too much and will be severely reported by parents!

Tang Ping had already guessed which two paragraphs it would be before editor-in-chief Yaoyao sent the screenshot.

Click to open it, sure enough.

Alas, AI.

He sighed and typed a reply.

My cats and dogs are too fierce and you can’t touch them, but you can touch my cows: “Indeed, it’s too much in the fairy tale. Let’s change it to something more harmonious before it’s actually released. 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Yeah, okay." 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "Teacher Caring..."

My cats and dogs are too fierce to touch, but you can touch my cows: "What's wrong?" 』

After Tang Ping asked, he saw Editor Yaoyao's input status showing "The other party is typing" from time to time.

It seemed that she was constructing a sentence that was difficult to say. She thought of several ways to express it, but still didn't know how to describe it correctly.

Fortunately, after nearly a minute, she still said what she wanted to say.

Editor-in-chief of Peace Dove Yaoyao: "Thank you very much for Teacher Guan Ai's trust. We will work harder!" 』

Gone.

The incomprehensible words made Tang Ping scratch his head.

What do you mean by saying this suddenly?

Shouldn’t it be me who really wants to thank you? You’ll be paid in advance without a contract, and you’ll get 1.5 times the royalties for double editions.

Even in the previous life, I had never heard of this kind of operation.

Tang Ping thought carefully about the possibility that editor Yaoyao would say this.

Suddenly, the finger that he was rubbing on his chin froze.

A very horrifying possibility formed in his mind.

Could it be that editors from other newspapers tried to woo him, but he firmly refused?

Being able to be used to thank him shows that the editor-in-chief Yaoyao knew about it.

This matter was actually a test. The editor of the friendly news agency who attracted him was a friend of the editor-in-chief Yaoyao. They discussed it together and tested his "loyalty"?

If this is the case, then you can understand why his contact information does not have any leakage angle, but the two editors were able to find it through "commercial secrets"!

……Do not.

wrong.

If that was the case, there was no need for editor-in-chief Yaoyao to thank him.

That would only make him confused and disgusted by the possibility of "testing his loyalty."

Keeping this matter in your heart is the best choice.

"So, the editor failed to win me over, and she found out?"

Tang Ping was thoughtful.

Type a reply.

My cats and dogs are too fierce to touch, but you can touch my cows: "Shake hands.jpg". 』

Editor-in-Chief of Dove of Peace·Yao Yao: "(Cheers to our friendship.jpg)"

After ending the conversation, Yan Yao turned off the monitor.

Seeing her smile reflected in the dark screen, she realized how joyfully she was smiling.

She finally understood why she couldn't help but raise her hands in a self-destructive manner and shouted "Care for the teacher, God of Gods!"

Not just because "Snow White" is really well written.

And because Teacher Guan Ai’s incomplete submission was like a big umbrella holding up in the wind and rain, it provided a safe corner for her who was stumbling with the wind, giving her peace of mind.

Obviously, I had to finish the entire story before giving it to her to read.

This time I sent it to her before I finished writing it. The meaning is self-evident.

Yan Yao packed her things, got up with her bag, turned off the lights, locked the door, and left the magazine.

Outside the office, colleagues were smoking cigarettes and bragging. One of them noticed the sound of her high-heeled shoes, and several people immediately took deep breaths on their cigarettes, burned them out and threw them into the trash can.

Those who lived far away had already left in advance or took a taxi, and the magazine reimbursed them.