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When he first started working as an editor, he focused on being warm, cordial and sincere, caring about each author's situation, adding a cute emoticon to every sentence he posted, maximizing friendliness and minimizing aggression.

As a result, the senior author assigned to him thought he had no qualifications and did not take him seriously;

The new authors I have discovered by myself are very happy when talking and praising them. If they criticize a little tactfully, they will immediately fall out and say, "What do you mean?" and leave in despair.

At that time, Li Aojie didn't understand and felt aggrieved.

The senior editor comforted him. He was not the only one. Every editor would go through this painful road from enthusiasm to indifference.

Later, Editor Jie Ao became Editor Jie Ao (already blackened).

Li Aojie continued typing.

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "To sum up, I have answered your question in detail. Now it is my turn to ask you a question - when do you plan to submit your article to me?" 』

Tang Ping thought for a few seconds and finally sent "Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf".

Submissions are accepted immediately.

Four 5 minutes later.

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "Is your fairy tale... a little too metaphorical, or written a little too dark...?" 』

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "Just tell me if you can pass." 』

Li Aojie rubbed his frown.

Type slowly on the keyboard with one hand.

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "Wait a minute, I'll think about it again, I'm not sure." 』

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "I feel like you are writing a very new kind of fairy tale, with a kind of beauty like a big...magic leaf." 』

It doesn't look like it was written by a normal person.

No matter how you look at it, it feels like the author has grown up.

Li Aojie slid the mouse wheel and repeatedly reviewed several key plot points.

The plot itself is not complicated, and the several story lines are so intertwined that they are easy to distinguish.

The several principles I want to express to children are well integrated into the story. As long as you are interested in this story, it is difficult not to remember it after reading it and listening to it.

What I want to express to the adults...

You can still pass the trial.

It means that the possibility of being watched and reported by parents or friends is greatly increased. Even if the report cannot be made, it will still be troublesome and may cause him to receive a few more criticisms from the leaders.

"Is it so difficult to decide?" the maid who applied his face next to him asked in surprise.

She rarely saw Li Aojie, who was always decisive, struggling for more than three minutes.

Although this was because she had taken care of all the trivial matters for Li Aojie, otherwise this person would have been struggling with the food delivery software for half an hour just whether to order takeout or eat in the cafeteria for lunch.

Li Aojie put down his left hand, shook his head and said:

"He is bold and unrestrained in all aspects. It can be seen that he wrote three fairy tales in a row, each one is better than the last. His ambition is extremely expanded, and he wants to touch something difficult to control.

"But it is difficult to control, which increases risks. Should I take this risk? It is safer to let him write an article. I am hesitant."

The maid thought for a moment.

Ask: "Does it look good?"

Li Aojie stood from the perspective of an editor and discussed it objectively and sternly:

"Apart from metaphors and functionality, this fairy tale will throw up a small suspense every few paragraphs, such as whether grandma will be eaten by the big bad wolf, creating tension and advancing the plot...

"The intervals between suspense are just right, and the rhythm is well controlled. It can be seen that his writing skills are indeed skillful.

"In the family line, the black uncle is actually the father, and he is a tanned father. There are twists and turns, unexpected and reasonable, and the design is very clever...

"It can leave a very deep impression on readers who have finished reading it, sublimate the story, and increase praise.

"But the only fly in the ointment is that in the ending, Little Red Riding Hood says 'Welcome home' to her father. Although it is meaningful, it is really difficult for children to understand:

"A story that was so bizarre and fantastic at the beginning ended with no explanation of what happened to the big bad wolf and grandma. It ended in such an inexplicable way."

The maid listened patiently to what he said, and then said in a dull tone:

"I don't understand this, so I can just tell you whether it looks good or not."

"Whether it's for adults or children, there are some good-looking and eye-catching features, but there are also some points that are obviously deducted."

Li Aojie rubbed his eyebrows again:

"Otherwise I wouldn't be so entangled."

Care, care, care, you really gave me a problem.

The chat box lights up red.

As soon as he complained about Guan Ai in his heart, Guan Ai sent a message.

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "If there is no sound yet, I will take a shower first." 』

bath--

Li Aojie's hand rubbing his brow suddenly stopped.

A burst of inspiration, like static electricity, penetrated from the fingertips between the eyebrows and shot into the cerebral cortex.

Crackling!

He immediately put down his hands and started typing as if he were bursting with beans.

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "Teacher Guan Ai, do you think people can become clean after taking a bath?" 』

Tang Ping frowned and narrowed his eyes: "?"

What the hell is wrong?

Discussing philosophy, with or without soap?

He thought for a moment and answered carefully.

You need to be vigilant when camping in the wild. Friends take turns guarding the camp: "The physical dirt can be washed away, but the psychological dirt cannot be washed away?" 』

This is it!

Li Aojie's eyes flashed and he typed without hesitation.

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "I want this manuscript!" 』

what?

Tang Ping was stunned.

What is the connection between deciding to submit a manuscript and physical and psychological cleansing?

Li Aojie didn't explain much and went directly to the next topic.

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "I think there are many areas that need to be polished, but it will not affect your plot, and at the same time try to retain your personal style of writing." 』

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "I expect to finish the workload tonight through overtime work. I will send you the edited manuscript tomorrow. You can sign the contract if it works." 』

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "Is there anything else? If not, I'll end the topic."Too much time is wasted and the work will never be completed. 』

Chapter 71 I can’t tell the difference, I really can’t tell the difference (4 words)

"???"

Tang Ping was even more confused.

I got up violently when I got up from the toilet, and the blood supply to my brain was temporarily insufficient. My vision went dark and I was hallucinating?

What Editor Jie Ao meant by this was not that he, the author, was asked to stay up all night revising the manuscript, and then he, the editor, would go to work tomorrow and wait for the review...

But he, the editor, works overtime all night to revise the manuscript, while the author only needs to get up tomorrow morning and wait for review?

Tang Ping slapped his forehead and pondered for a few seconds.

He lowered his head and stretched out his two hands to distinguish carefully:

The left one is just the left hand, the right one is just the right hand.

After searching online, it is indeed the case.

Very good, there is nothing wrong with the brain.

Tang Ping typed.

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "You mean, you, the editor, will revise the manuscript tonight, and I, the author, will review it tomorrow?" 』

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "What's the problem?" 』

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travelers take turns guarding the camp: "...No problem, no problem at all. I think it will work like this!" 』

You need to be vigilant when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "But I am surprised. This is not consistent with what I heard. I thought you would reject my manuscript dozens of times and let me slowly revise it. I will not submit it until I am absolutely satisfied with it." . 』

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "You must have heard about it from one of the writers of Tiger, Green Dragon, and White Snake."This is something they can do, are qualified to do, and have to do to a certain extent. 』

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "What do you say?" 』

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "They are the editors with the best performance, the richest resources, and the largest number of writers. Two-thirds of the well-known writers in the agency are with them." 』

Fairy Tale Empire editor Jie Ao: "There are too many people, and works that are not absolutely excellent will naturally be looked down upon. If they are not revised to perfection, they are not qualified to be published. It is also impossible to have the energy to help slowly revise each article one by one, and to be able to revise at once." The direction has been completely benevolent and righteous. 』

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "But a small editor like me is different. There are very few authors who can provide stable contributions. You are the best one I know. I will naturally make time to help you revise the manuscript. This is also one of the editor's duties." one. 』

Tang Ping was stunned for a moment.

Be obedient, speak truthfully and sincerely, and don’t treat him as an outsider at all...

But looking back, it seems to be like this every time, what can I say?

You need to be careful when camping in the wild. Travel friends take turns guarding the camp: "Okay, I won't disturb you anymore. Come on, I'm going to take a shower and go to bed." 』

Fairy Tale Empire Editor Jie Ao: "Good night.If you have an idea for a new work, you can send it to me after tomorrow and I will discuss the idea with you. 』

End the chat.

Li Aojie opened the desktop note and added new revision work after the existing but unfinished work.

The maid next to him looked at his stained cheeks and couldn't help but ask:

"Don't you tell him that you were beaten by a writer for 'working in a factory'?"

That's what happened this afternoon.

A great writer was assigned to work in a factory and was wronged in the factory. When he came back, he learned that it was Li Aojie who made the suggestion. He angrily walked into the editorial office and punched him head-on without any explanation.

The glasses flew off and fell to the ground, with one lens shattering.

"What's there to say."

Li Aojie focused on his work and his voice was calm:

"'Working in a factory' is definitely a good thing. The feedback from many writers proves that when they enter there, it is like entering a bathhouse, washing away the dust from their bodies and blooming the light of their souls.

“But it is undeniable and inevitable that there will be arrogant writers who are completely unable to accept the terrible low-class life there, regard working in a factory as a shame in life, and do irrational things in anger.

"But I am not qualified to say anything wrong about them, because they are the ones who work in the factory. They eat pig food that is unpalatable, sleep on extremely uncomfortable hard beds, and sometimes their hands and feet are rusty and injured by needles, without even saying a few words. Not to mention comfort, the team leader might scold the fabric and ruin it...

"And I just sit comfortably in the office, sitting on this [-]-dollar ergonomic chair, eating fresh and balanced meals, drinking hot coffee, stretching in the gym, and sleeping on a soft bed...

"I don't understand the injustice they suffered at all, so I have no right to look down on them."

The maid listened silently and whispered:

"He said, 'It's easy to talk about something', and he muttered so much..."

It’s just that I care about it and want to say it in my heart.

……

On the other side, the girls' dormitory.

After taking a shower, Ye Menglan applied body lotion and carefully applied vitamin cream to her feet, then wrapped them layer by layer with plastic wrap.

After sleeping like this for a night, your feet will become whiter, tenderer and more delicate. Over time, your little feet will become crystal clear, delicate and pleasant.

Hooking your toes is extremely tempting.

"Oh, it's so tiring for girls to work hard to look good."