AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

In order to determine how she felt when she roughly saw which episode.

As he watched, Tang Ping suddenly noticed:

The editor-in-chief of Yaoyao, for some reason, has a strange feeling that she has nowhere to put her little hands.

From time to time, he looked very serious. He kept grasping the air with his left hand, flicking it with his fingertips, and pushing it left and right, as if he was clearing the air.

Tang Ping looked confused.

Editor-in-chief Yaoyao, what are you doing?

Did you eat mushrooms just now that were not cooked?

Yan Yao carefully reviewed "The Princess and the Pea".

The twists and turns of the plot, including the screening competition, show off Teacher Guan Ai’s bizarre brain circuitry as always.

This kind of strange idea cannot be thought of by ordinary people.

But apart from that, both the characters and the ending gave Yan Yao a rough reading experience.

The prince is just a zombie tool man with no self. The queen initially thought he had some skills, but in the end she was just "dissatisfied with the king."

The king wanted to kill the female beggar, and Princess Tequila and the female beggar fought bravely. We thought we were about to enter the climax of the story, but it ended abruptly.

Without even a turn of the camera, in just a few sentences, the past was covered up perfunctorily, and it entered into a free-choice ending like "Whatever you think, I haven't figured it out yet anyway."

This is an unfinished first draft.

Yan Yao made a conclusion.

Although there are unique whimsical thoughts about Teacher Ai in the first draft, they are not as full as the previous stories in the selection competition.

Teacher Guan Ai probably just had an inspiration. After writing the inspiration down, he was too lazy to write more and finished the work in a hurry.

This is the norm for many writers. When writing the essence of inspiration, they use their pen to write the essence of inspiration. After writing, they put down the pen with "Ah, it feels so good".

Manuscript?

What manuscript.

I wrote this story just to have fun.

What, you said you have to write the entire story before you pay the royalties? (Looks at wallet)... Then I'll try harder (reluctantly picks up the pen again).

Yan Yao recalled the female beggar playing the game, saying that the instantaneous 359/360 frames were too laggy to play.

She always felt that Tang Ping wrote "Princess and the Pea" just to write this gag.

However, considering the rich content of Teacher Guan Ai's works, this may not be the reason. It's just that the story skeleton has just been completed and the flesh and blood has not yet been filled in.

Yan Yao thought, raised her head and looked at Tang Ping.

Tang Pingzheng turned sideways and asked Qiao Yinque in a low voice:

"Did you just eat fungi?"

"No, why do you ask?" Qiao Yinque was very surprised.

"Otherwise why is her hand moving out of control?" Tang Ping said, imitating Yan Yao's left hand and shaking it around, as if she had Parkinson's disease.

"This...I don't know. Maybe it's simulating playing the piano, or controlling the rhythm, like waving a conductor's baton?"

"Trash, what use do you have?"

"??Can you say that again?!"

Yan Yao: "..."

"that."

She laughed and cried, calling Tang Ping's attention back:

"You've only written half of "The Princess and the Pea", so I can't comment on it.

"So I will only share some of my doubts and speculations, hoping it will be helpful to you."

Tang Ping was slightly startled when he heard this.

Half a head?

Although the AI ​​took a big detour, it made up for the plot of "The Princess and the Pea".

Yan Yao collected her thoughts and said:

"First of all, there is the prince. He often appears in the plot of questioning the subjugated princess one by one and selecting each round, but in the end he did nothing and his role was gone.

"The second is the queen. She planned the selection competition and listened to politics behind the curtain in the dark. It seemed that there was a deeper plot line, but in the end she just said that she was not satisfied with the king's actions, and the scene was gone.

"Then there is Princess Tequila and the beggar girl. Their fates intersect at the end, but there is no point of intersection in the front. Even if they meet by chance, it feels a little abrupt to me.

"And the two people rushed towards the king, and then the ending was changed, and the entire process in between was hidden...

"Maybe you are still hesitating, which ending to write?

"Different endings lead to different process directions, so you can skip it for now and complete the process after the ending is decided?"

After Yan Yao finished speaking, she paid attention to Tang Ping's expression.

Tang Ping: "..."

AI, come out.

explain explain.

AI:

"There is an old saying in our motherland, you can't have your cake and eat it too."Speed ​​and quality are not mutually exclusive either. 』

“With limited resources, it’s impossible to do it quickly and well. 』

"This is an objective law and unfortunately it cannot be changed. 』

Tang Ping: "..."

No wonder the AI ​​output was so fast this time, so fast that he could barely catch up when he read.

I thought I was just fishing to save computing power, but my hidden strength exploded at critical moments.

It turns out that a large number of logical operations have been abandoned, and the progress of each process has been accelerated by compressing the number of operation steps.

AI: "And the request you gave me was to write a short fairy tale. As I started writing, I almost exceeded the estimated number of words, so I had to end it in a hurry. 』

Tang Ping: "..."

Turns out it was my problem.

That's fine.

He suppressed the strange emotions in his heart and said to Yan Yao:

"Does editor-in-chief Yaoyao have any suggestions?"

I can't answer this question.

So throw the question back!

When Yan Yao heard this question, she knew that her guess was correct.

She held her smooth chin with the back of her index finger and said thoughtfully:

"From the extra ink you added at the end, you should be more hopeful that, regardless of success or failure, Princess Tequila and the female beggar escaped, survived, lived in seclusion, and lived a happy life together. ?

"This is indeed a happy ending that is more in line with the atmosphere of a fairy tale. If this line is taken, I personally suggest that you consider combining the plot lines of the two princesses and the prince and queen, so that they can jointly oppose the tyrannical king.

"The prince could be unbearable to be manipulated, and the queen could be scheming and premeditated. This screening is actually not to find the princess who has perished, but to find the righteous person who meets their requirements...

"Wait, how about adding a touch of fantasy to the story?"

Tang Ping: "Fantasy color?"

Yan Yao nodded.

Fantasy colors!

When she watched "The Princess and the Pea", she always felt something was wrong.

If you think about it carefully, it just lacks a touch of fantasy!

It can accurately find a single frame of a ghost picture in a movie, and it can be painfully stuck by the frame rate change of 359/360. It can also be stuck uncomfortably by a pea separated by twenty mattresses and twenty quilts. It was judged that they were not round grains but wrinkled grains...

It’s fantasy enough!

But because the whole story operates within a seemingly normal reality framework, it becomes not fantastic at all, but only feels outrageous.

If you add a bright fantasy color to the background of "The Princess and the Pea".

The original awkwardness will be perfectly integrated!

After listening to Yan Yao's suggestion, Tang Ping fell into thinking.

It seems that this is indeed the case?

The original version of "The Princess and the Pea" was so exaggerated for the heroine that she could even feel a pea under dozens of mattresses and quilts. If I remember correctly, it was intended to satirize the weakness of aristocrats.

In "The Princess and the Pea" written by AI, the princess turned into a subjugated princess. The female beggar could not be called "weak", but she was very strong-willed.

At this time, if you look at the exaggerated sensitivity, it will look weird.

"Speaking of which, the fantasy color of your fairy tales has always been very light." Qiao Yinque said thoughtfully.

Fairy tales written by normal fairy tale writers must have a strong fantasy color.

Animals can talk, toys come alive, ghosts scare people...

Everything you need is whimsical.

But in Tang Ping’s writing:

"The Emperor's New Clothes" has no fantasy color at all, it is purely about the heroine tricking the emperor with her cleverness and wit;

The only fantasy color of "Cinderella" is the rejuvenation drug, for which a medical research setting is also added. The color is not strong, and it is simply a plot twist tool;

The fantasy color of "Snow White" is stronger than the previous two works, and a plot-promoting tool called "Magic Mirror" is used.But other than that, there’s not even a hint of fantasy...

Qiao Yinque has not seen "Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf", but as Tang Ping's fourth fairy tale in a sequential series, it is likely to have a stronger fantasy color.

As for how rich it is...

Anyway, Qiao Yinque felt that based on Tang Ping’s realistic fairy tale writing style, the content of this fairy tale is likely to be:

A heroine called "Little Red Riding Hood" was abandoned or lost for some reason and met a big bad wolf.

But the big bad wolf did not eat her. Instead, he treated her as a child, breastfed her with his own breast, fed her meat, taught her how to hunt, and helped her find herbs when she was sick...

Over time, a deep bond developed between man and wolf.

Until one day, a hunter may have discovered Little Red Riding Hood, mistakenly thought that she was going to be eaten by a wolf, and then shot the big bad wolf.And Little Red Riding Hood doesn’t want them to kill the big bad wolf, so she works hard to protect it and her alien adoptive mother;

It may also be that Little Red Riding Hood's original parents found her, recognized her by her red hat, and hoped to take her home.And she has long been accustomed to living in the wild with the big bad wolf. She doesn't want to go back, so her parents want to kill the big bad wolf...

There is a high probability that it is the latter. This way it can describe the conflict between the biological mother and the adoptive mother, and the painful choice of the child caught in the middle. It is very deep and suitable for families. It is one of the themes that writers love to explore.

If it’s a little more twisted, you can also write that the biological parents were afraid of being eaten by the big bad wolf, so they took the initiative to drop Little Red Riding Hood as bait and escaped alive;

In order to feed Little Red Riding Hood, the Big Bad Wolf killed and ate many people, and robbed many things from humans. He was full of evil, and everyone had to kill him.

Between such a twisted relationship between good and evil, Little Red Riding Hood finally made her choice after a battle and a full mental struggle...

That's the end of the story.

"boom"

Qiao Yinque gently gave herself a brain break, ending the explosive spread of thoughts.

She would stop torturing her brain cells and think of a suitable ending for such a twisted fairy tale.

As for the fantasy aspect of this story?

Maybe it's because the big bad wolf adopted Little Red Riding Hood and didn't eat her...

"After imitating your writing logic, I already understand the plot of your "Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf"." Qiao Yinque said to Tang Ping.

Tang Ping came back from his thoughts: "Huh?"

"Of course, it doesn't rule out that I guessed the wrong position of the big bad wolf. Maybe its position is not the adoptive mother, but the knight who protects the princess."

Qiao Yinque thought to himself: