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For example, after successfully defeating the Evil Queen, the seven gourd babies evolved and grew into adults.
Snow White and the seven gourds... the beautiful boy, held a collective wedding, one wife and seven husbands, and lived a happy life one day, one week, from then on?
Otherwise, the author Guan Ai is always obsessed with writing about mothers and children, and why would he make all seven gourd babies so cute?
"It shouldn't be so cruel...even if he wants to write it, the editor probably won't allow him to write it."
Li Suyi thought.
Or maybe you reluctantly agree to write it, but you can’t write it so obviously and you have to write it in a very obscure form?
In any case, this time "Snow White and the Seven Calabash Babies" is a purely commercial fairy tale that is purer than the original "Snow White".
There is not much depth in it, nothing obscure, and it highlights the fantasy elements that are very attractive to children.
The little gourd babies save their mother one by one.
After saving one round after another, who knows how hard it is.
... Such a plot satisfies the little boy's heroic dream.
Moreover, the rescue object of this heroic dream is still my dearest, nearest and favorite mother.
Li Suyi sighed and rubbed her temples in distress.
She could already imagine her son saying to her seriously after listening to the story:
"Mom, I will definitely protect you!
"So when were you taken away?
"I will definitely skip school right away to save you!"
...the scene.
Was that to save her?That clearly means he doesn’t want to go to school!
Li Suyi sighed, feeling a little sad again.
"While still well written, the strength of 'Care' hasn't faded.
"But why does it give me a vague premonition?
"Is he going to lose his initial spirituality and depth and become a steady and simple commercial fairy tale author?"
The debut work "The Emperor's New Clothes", although the writing is very green, the spiritual plot of weaving clothes in the air is very eye-catching.
"Cinderella" looks relatively ordinary at first glance, but upon closer consideration, it sends chills down your spine.
And now...
Li Suyi shook her head and sighed.
The number of writers she admires may soon be reduced by one more.
Although this day will come sooner or later, I didn't expect it to come so quickly this time.
but……
Why did Guan Ai write a variation of "Snow White"?
I have thought of several developments, and I think each one is very good. It would be a pity not to publish it so that readers can see it?
I didn't have any new inspiration, but since I had become the only writer who could write "The Dove of Peace" and had to bear the burden of the magazine's rise and fall, I simply changed "Snow White" and wrote a more commercial fairy tale to deal with it. One issue?
No longer satisfied with staying at the small magazine "Dove of Peace", he felt that "a man was born between heaven and earth, how can he live in depression for a long time under human beings!" He decided to run away.The magazine was caught off guard and could only take out the scrap manuscript of "Snow White" and rewrite it as a new work for one issue?
Li Suyi fell into a long exam.
She always felt that things were not that simple.
Perhaps, there is another possibility.
Her eyes flickered slightly and she softly uttered two words:
"Reincarnation."
The stepmother treats her stepdaughter badly, but the stepdaughter defeats her stepmother when she grows up.
Fate like Snow White reappears over and over again.
Assuming that none of the above three possibilities are true, the author's concern is not only for pure business writing, but also for depth and expression.
The most likely thing is this possibility!
As for whether it is.
Only time can verify it.
……
Time flies and it’s Thursday, May 5th.
The 70th issue of "The Dove of Peace" was successfully released, and this issue contains "Snow White and the Seven Calabash Babies Part [-]".
Many people bought the magazine immediately and read it all in one go after half a month of suspense.
Naturally, this also includes Li Suyi.
At the end of the story, the seven gourd babies merge into one and become...the gourd prince?
Suppress the evil queen within her body.
Live a happy life with Snow White.
Li Suyi was shocked!
Unable to move.
It was as if my virginity had been taken away again.
Although in the original text, it was not written so clearly, it was just mentioned in one sentence and no emotional factors were involved.
But as long as you are an adult, how can you not see that there is something fishy and greasy about it?
As a Chinese teacher, Li Suyi has a sharp eye with her rich experience in writing assignments.
She could tell at a glance that several sentences at the end were obviously changed later and had a strong third-person flavor rather than the author's personal handwriting.
This third person is undoubtedly the magazine editor.
Obviously, when the magazine faced the ending written by "Guan Ai", it was afraid and had to make changes.
"'Care' is about seven gourd babies turning into one, living a good life with Snow White, and even suppressing the evil queen in his body, so that the queen can see how happy his life with Snow White is..."
Li Suyi slapped her forehead, her eyes lost focus:
"Why am I having such a dream?"
She originally thought that she had used her best brainpower and wildest imagination to guess the plot of the author's care.
But I never expected that even after reaching this point, I still couldn't even see the tail lights of the author's caring brain circuit.
Is that actually written like this? It’s so crazy...
and many more.
Li Suyi's hand slowly slid down and paused.
Since the Calabash Prince has suppressed the Evil Queen in his body.
Is it possible that in a way that is not allowed to be spoken publicly, the queen was "inadvertently" transferred into Snow White's body, and after ten months of pregnancy, she was born again.
The Evil Queen opened her eyes dimly and saw the Gourd Prince and Snow White looking at her with joy?
"Snapped!"
The hand that just fell hit his forehead hard again.
Why is it exactly what the class representative Qin He said!
Could it be that Qin He knows "caring" better than he does?
Isn't she just a "caring" person? !lump
Once this terrifying and ridiculous idea was born, it immediately spread like seaweed in Li Suyi's mind.
Then I thought that I might have been bragging about her for so long before "caring for" my true love...
Alas! !
Li Suyi's scalp tightened.
Instinctively clasp your toes.
I was so embarrassed that I almost dug through the teaching building!
But that's wrong. If Qin He is "caring", then the promotion of "Dove of Peace" should be "genius beautiful girl writer", why is he just an ordinary "genius writer"?
Li Suyi is well aware of the urinary nature of traditional paper media.
They are very keen on young writers, which helps promote "genius beautiful girl writers" and "genius handsome writers"... these are very eye-catching points.
Whenever a writer's age exceeds the standard, for example, he accidentally passes the age of 24 or 5...
Then all these selling points will disappear.
Instead, there are "female writers with forehead wrinkles" and "male writers who are a little greasy"...
These points can’t be sold at all!
And "beautiful girl writers" are often more eye-catching than "beautiful boy writers" in most fields.
Therefore, as long as the author Guan Ai can claim to be a "beautiful girl", Li Suyi does not believe that the magazine Dove of Peace, which is almost bankrupt, will cling to publicity like a life-saving straw.
"But we still can't rule out the possibility that Qin He is 'caring'."
Li Suyi stood up and walked around the office.
How about calling Qin He and asking directly to the point in private?
No, no, now is the critical period when the college entrance examination is about to take place. Unexpected situations must not be caused to disrupt Qin He's review status.
No, no, precisely because we can't cause any unexpected situations, we should go to Qin He and get straight to the point!
Li Suyi paused.
What time is it now?
The eve of the college entrance examination!
On the eve of the college entrance examination, how can a student who has to rely on the college entrance examination to determine his future spend so much energy on writing fairy tales?
Even if you want to write, you should at least wait until the college entrance examination is over!
Wait, wait, is there a possibility that this is actually one of the multiple versions of "Snow White" when it was submitted?
It is normal to write several versions of a manuscript for editors to choose from. Qin He had finished writing "Snow White" and should have been concentrating on studying. She was very serious about reviewing it every day.
Think about it carefully, how can Qin He, a college entrance examination student, find the time to write fairy tales? There are so many words in each article... It seems that if it is spread out over ten days and a half, the average day is only one, two, three or four thousand?
An essay of 800 words is equivalent to 40 minutes, and a composition of 4000 words is equivalent to 200 minutes, which is equivalent to more than three hours.
I get home from school at ten o'clock in the evening, including the distance and taking a shower, it counts as one hour. I finish writing at two o'clock and go to bed at five o'clock and get up at five o'clock...
"Snapped!"
Li Suyi punched her forehead again.
What do you think so much about!
Just call Qin He to the office and ask, okay?
Li Suyi stepped forward and was about to walk out of the office door.
As soon as he stepped out, before he could fall, he was suddenly stopped again.
Wait a minute.
Even if Qin He is 99% likely to be cared about by the author.
Isn't there a 1% chance that Tang Ping is?
Qin He's "a kind of reincarnation" matches the author's caring writing ideas.
Tang Ping's "mother and son theory" is also correct!
Moreover, Tang Ping obviously has a deep understanding of the author's care, and every time he has unique and profound insights into his works, he hits the nail on the head.
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