I, Hikigaya, am just a light novelist.

Just look down and you’ll know!

The answer was soon revealed. The tide in front of me was indeed a shadow, a special shadow.

"Is it just a fake?"

Ying Lili pouted.

Then they are not real childhood sweethearts!

But soon she was attracted by this cute shadow tide. Although it was a shadow, it also inherited the advantages of the original figure.

I held my breath and watched the desperate scene at the end of the film.

"Oh my God, this memory-reading trick is too bad! This villain is too strong! And he can still think of ways to deal with it."

Yinglili was shocked.

Are you sure you don't want to kill the protagonist with this way of writing? Isn't this too hellishly difficult?

But even facing this situation, she still has hope.

After all, the protagonist is still the protagonist. If the story wants to continue, something unexpected will inevitably happen.

Sure enough, the next moment the heroic big sister appeared on stage!

The rescue was successful!

The story stops right here.

It does not end with a desperate ending, but with a new hope. This not only gives a sense of expectation, but also makes readers feel less depressed.

However, the overall story still gives people a depressing feeling.

After reading it, Ying Lili decisively logged on to the website and issued her own critical comments.

19 Skill: Divine Eye!

Childhood Sweethearts: The Time Loop is a more difficult setting to write about, so there are very few in the industry. I like this story very much, and the Shadow Disease setting is also pretty good, adding variety to the story. As for some shortcomings, Considering that the author is a newbie, this is understandable. The most important thing is that Chao is very cute and I like it very much!Although it is a shadow, it seems to be from the side of the protagonist group. It is rare to see this type of work. I hope the author can continue to work hard in the future, as long as he can maintain the level of the opening chapter. In addition, please urge me to update more. !Update the second volume soon!I can not wait anymore!

Yinglili is very anxious, because the update speed in the industry is unpredictable. If it is a new work, it will be a little more diligent. Generally, one volume will be updated every three or four months. If it is in the middle and late stages, some people will write new works at intervals. More than half a year is very possible!

There is a role in urging manuscripts at this time, because when a newcomer first debuts and his creative desire is the strongest, when he becomes an old man, it is really easy to put it aside, and urging manuscripts has no effect at all, and it is useless even to send a razor blade.

However, her account was not specifically certified as 'Eri Kashiwagi', so this comment was quickly submerged in the comment area and was not seen by Hikigaya Hachiman.

……

Everything is moving in a good direction. Although the increase in sales has entered a steady stage and is far from the results created by Ms. Yamada, Hikigaya Hachiman is already satisfied.

Because everyone’s reviews are very good, even if I think there is something wrong, I will use words of encouragement.

This shows what?

This shows that perhaps due to audience issues, "Summer Returns" has not received enough attention, but the quality of the work itself is not bad. If there is an opportunity to increase exposure in the future, such as animation, it may explode. possible.

This is thanks to the fact that the story of "Summer Returns" itself is great. Otherwise, with his average talent and only good writing skills, it would be difficult for him to achieve such results from the beginning.

If you don't fail several times, I'm afraid it won't be successful.

Therefore, under such pressure, he must seize this luck so that his abilities can one day be worthy of such an excellent story.

Only then can he be considered a truly powerful writer.

Spring break, only two or three days left.

After Hikigaya Hachiman paid attention to the sales a few times, he no longer cared about it, but focused on the second volume of Summer Reappearance.

In fact, he is not just thinking about the content of the second volume now. He has been thinking about and describing it some time ago.

His goal is to maintain the same speed of updating one volume in three months as Ms. Yamada. When it comes to online serialization, this speed is definitely not good, but when it comes to the light novel industry, this speed is basically top-notch. , except for those who update several copies at the same time, few people can compare with it.

While he was busy, Miss Yamada suddenly sent a message.

Yamada Fairy: Why didn’t you tell me?

I:? ? ?Ms. Yamada, what are you talking about?

Yamada Fairy: Are you pretending to be stupid?Idiot Hikigaya, isn't your "Summer Again" released?

Me: So that’s what I’m talking about.

Me: So why did you tell Ms. Yamada specifically?

"Of course it is..."

Yamada Yao was stunned for a moment and stopped talking.

There seems to be no reason that can be explained.

When this happened, it was actually a difference in personality between the two, and the girl quickly figured it out.

One has a lively and cheerful personality and likes to share his joy, while the other is more reserved.

Yamada Fairy: Okay, there really is no reason.

Me: Besides that, does Ms. Yamada have any other ideas?I don't think you're just coming to me about this.

Yamada Fairy: To be honest, I'm a little impressed by you.

"Oh?"

When Hikigaya Hachiman saw this sentence, he couldn't help but sit up straight and his eyes became serious.

He had thought that it might take a long time before he could see Miss Yamada speaking like this, but he didn't expect that it would come so quickly.

Of course, this certainly does not mean admitting defeat.

Seeing the Yamada fairy again typing: I can definitely see from the work how much effort you have put into it. In order to modify the first volume into what it is now, you should have deleted it more than once or twice, right?

Me: You can see this?

Yamada Fairy: Of course, I have the B-level skill 'God's Eye', and I can see through the essence of the work just once, including what kind of person you are. It was reflected in my heart through the lines!

"Ha ha."

Hikigaya Hachiman felt happy when he saw it.

Me: Ms. Yamada, you must not be in the second grade of junior high school yet, right?I kindly remind you that this is reality, not a game.

Yamada Fairy: This lady is not a chuunibyou!Forget it if you don’t believe it!In short, I am optimistic about you, Hikigaya, you may be someone who can stand shoulder to shoulder with me in the future!In the future, I will be waiting for you on the highest throne!

Me: It’s such an honor to be recognized by you, Ms. Yamada.

"Don't you feel embarrassed typing these words? Miss Yamada."

Hikigaya Hachiman's mouth twitched.

But to be honest, that thing called 'God's Eye' is certainly not a game skill, but it is also a real thing. It is obviously a talent that Miss Yamada said in an abstract form, a special talent that only geniuses have.

According to Ms. Yamada's settings, it is estimated that an ordinary person like him, in addition to a slightly stronger memory ability, must have all D-level skills, right?

Maybe he overestimated himself.

Get out of the bedroom.

"Komachi, I'm going out to buy a bottle of Coke. Do you want me to bring something?"

Hikigaya Hachiman passed by the sofa and glanced at his sister who was leaning on the sofa reading a book, so he took the initiative to speak.

"Two packs of potato chips, please, Onii-chan~!"

Komachi grinned, his beautiful little tiger teeth shining white and dazzling.

After walking out of the gate, Hikigaya Hachiman was about to walk to the street next to him. When he turned his eyes, he noticed a large truck of a moving company parked next to him.

"Is this a new neighbor?"

His eyes were questioning.

Also, the neighbor's house has been moving for two or three months, so it is normal for someone to move in at this time.

Don’t know what the new neighbor is like?

Soon, Hikigaya Hachiman put this boring thought behind him.

Normally, even the neighbors wouldn't know each other very well, as long as they're not the kind of weirdo who plays music at night.

20 new neighbors

After thinking about a certain plot in the second volume of "Summer Returns" for a while, I felt a little tired. After returning home after shopping, Hikigaya Hachiman did not enter the room. Instead, he chose to sit on the sofa and prepare to chat with his sister for a while. , relax your mood.

"Here, Komachi, the potato chips you want are all the flavors you like."

He handed over two bags of potato chips.

"Thank you Ernie-chan."

Komachi happily took it, then took out a piece of change from his pocket and said with a smile, "This is the errand fee for Onii-chan."

"No need, who wants this from you? As a brother, isn't this natural?"

After speaking, he raised his finger and then said something familiar, "Ah, what I said is very good."

"Yeah! This sentence scores a lot in Komachi's heart!"

Komachi nodded with satisfaction.

"Onii-chan, here's this bag of potato chips for you, I can't eat so much."

His sister gave him another bag of potato chips.

"Indeed, I'm a little hungry."

Hikigaya Hachiman suddenly felt this, probably because he consumed too much energy due to high-intensity brain use.

"Crack...knock..."

The two ate the potato chips at the same time and quickly eliminated them.

"Ha, Onii-chan, I finally understand why they call this the Fat Home Happy Water. If you stay at home all day, a bottle of Coke can indeed bring you satisfying happiness! Burp~ "

Komachi picked up the Coke and took a sip, then put it back again, then showed a satisfied smile.

"Komachi, don't say such things, brother, I will be worried."

Hikigaya Hachiman suddenly looked serious.

He doesn't want his sister to become as troublesome as some fuck girl.

"Ah, Onii-chan, that's not what I meant. Staying at home all day is the only one who can bear it."

Komachi then said with a smile.

Hiki Valley Hachiman: "..."

Don’t ask me for an example!

He silently took a sip of Coke, feeling the soda water pouring into his throat, gurgling, his body seemed to be revitalized, and he suddenly felt happy.

"Speaking of which, a new neighbor is coming soon, you know? Onii-chan."

Komachi brought up the topic again.

"Well, I saw the moving company's truck when I went out just now. They have already moved their things in. They will probably move in soon."

He replied casually.

"They seem to be a pretty good family, but it's a little strange."

Komachi continued.

"Ha ha……"

My sister seemed to have remembered something happy and laughed inexplicably.

"what?"

Hikigaya Hachiman looked confused.

As if to ask, how do you know?

"Onii-chan, you want to ask me why I think so, right?"

Komachi understood the meaning of his expression and explained.