I, Hikigaya, am just a light novelist.

……

Occasionally leisurely sunbathing, or soaking in the open-air bathhouse to rest. In such a pleasant and busy rhythm, nine days passed in the blink of an eye.

On the tenth day, which is the last day, everyone’s work of faith has been completed, and now it’s time for tasting.

In the living room, Hikigaya Hachiman and Gogen Ruri each sat on a separate sofa chair, while the other three people sat on the sofa. This distribution was to avoid discordant disputes.

"I'll come first."

Wu Geng Liuli was the first to speak and put several printed copies of the novel on the table.

Everyone take a copy and read it.

At this point, her breathing suddenly became erratic.

Among them, the weakest self should be the one who desires and cares about this evaluation the most.

"The evaluation starts with me and proceeds in order."

After everyone finished reading, Fairy Yamada began to lead the continuation of the meeting.

"First of all, I think your writing is still mediocre and lacks spirituality, such as these points... but your basics are pretty good, and it can barely be considered an advantage."

Miss Goblin first started her critical comments.

This is not in a critical manner, but simply speaking the truth.

So this time, Wu Geng Liuli chose to accept it humbly.

Next, Sentomura Sei and Kani Nayuta saw similar problems, but the suggestions they gave were different, which made her feel that she benefited a lot.

Hikigaya Hachiman's eyes narrowed.

The two novels before him have basically explained the problem, so he needs to look at the problem from different angles.

So he thought for a while and said, "I think it's time for you, Liuli, to change your mentality."

Um?Why do you say that...I am in a good state of mind. "

Wu Geng Liuli was puzzled.

Although she is a mediocre light novelist, she has not been cut off in half at least, and the royalties she has received are quite considerable for someone from an ordinary family like her.

"I'm not saying this... I mean that you are now bound by the 'framework'. The real reason is that your mentality has not changed, just like when you first debuted, which also led to your ' Evolution' has been slow."

He analyzed it with his own eyes and came to a conclusion.

As the saying goes, writers of our generation need to be confident. If we are not confident enough to write articles that cannot even satisfy ourselves, how can we satisfy others?

Of course, this is just an idealistic statement. In fact, no matter how confident you write the article, it will not be recognized by everyone.

However, this statement is indeed useful, and the current Wugen Liuli indeed lacks this mentality.

125 Hikigaya is testing

Hikigaya Hachiman can see Ruri's shortcomings in this area, mainly because the two are familiar with each other.

In addition, his start was not as smooth as others. He also experienced certain psychological changes in the process of building self-confidence, so he was better able to grasp the influence of mentality.

"Are you saying I lack confidence?"

Wu Geng Liuli's eyes changed, thinking about this statement.

She indeed lacks self-confidence, because she was originally just a person who couldn't even pass the final review of the Newcomer Award, and she relied entirely on Hachiman's help to stand on such a stage.

Looking at the people in front of her, no matter whose sales volume is far greater than hers, how can she have confidence?

But she also wanted to understand that true self-confidence comes from the heart, not from comparison.

"Hachiman, I kind of understand what you mean, thank you."

She expressed her gratitude for this, her eyes shining.

"I hope you can become stronger."

Hikigaya Hachiman sends his blessing.

He also watched Liuli grow up all the way, and he would also feel a little gratified to see him become a talented person.

"It's my turn next, and I'm going to shock you!"

Fairy Yamada confidently raised the printed novel in his hand.

Hikigaya Hachiman and others started reading.

The content of the story is not complicated, and is even surprisingly simple. It can be said that it has consistently continued the style of Miss Goblin, pulling out the harems in "The Dark Goblin of Fire" one by one, and bringing them into reality, such as fireworks displays. Such confession events create a harmonious and beautiful harem atmosphere.

"It's really boring, too childish, and all the female characters have empty minds and no ideas of their own."

"There are so many girls together. The subject matter alone makes people uncomfortable. It turns out that you are doing this kind of style. It's really unexpected."

"Miss Yamada's style is still the same as before. She is as flattering to your readers as ever. She actually imagined such a future. Those who didn't know it thought it was created by some disgusting fat nerd."

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Just when Miss Goblin looked embarrassed and wanted to fight back, she heard him continue.

"Really, don't you all like it? I think it's good. A future where everyone can be happy and a simple life is enough... But maybe this is the difference between different perspectives?"

Hikigaya Hachiman then added an explanation, trying to keep his expression normal.

This is a temptation!

"Is this what senior thinks?"

But Nayuta frowned.

"I see. Is this why all the demihuman books are sold?"

Qianshou Village Zheng is thoughtful.

"Make everyone happy, oh, you are so philanthropic."

Wu Geng Liuli's smile was a little playful.

If there was only one person who was surprised, it was Miss Goblin.

This sentence is undoubtedly a recognition of her.

"Hmph, Hachiman, you still have a good eye."

Touching his cheek with his fingers, the Yamada fairy laughed several times proudly, then turned to look at the others.

"You guys really don't understand. Since it is a fantasy world, there must be things that reality cannot ask for. Such a happy ending is what readers want!"

In this regard, the other three people were too lazy to express their opinions, lest Miss Goblin become even more proud.

Then came the main event.

Next comes the area of ​​real quality.

Kanayuta took out the story he had written with his seniors.

Through her own pen and ink, reality plus a part of fantasy allow her to describe the past, present and future of her predecessors.

After reading it, everyone was silent.

Despair, hope, longing, frustration, outlook, step-by-step emotions, ups and downs, and the various changes in life can't help but fascinate people.

But compared to the quality of the work, what everyone is more concerned about is...

"Is this the story of Teacher Ke'er and Hachiman? Are there so many?"

Wu Geng Liuli asked in surprise.

"This must be all made up."

Qian Shou Cun Zheng gritted his teeth and said.

"How can it be that Xiu Xiu is even more explicit than what I wrote?"

Yamada Fairy muttered to himself unwillingly.

"Nayuta."

Hikigaya Hachiman's voice dropped.

"Here, senior!"

But Nayuta suddenly sat upright.

"You add too much fuel and jealousy. Although I do care about your condition, when did I greet you in the middle of the night, tell dirty jokes, and even..."

He paused here.

"Let me help senior vent his anger."

But Nayuta gave a very untimely and kind reminder.

"Ah, I'm sorry, senior, Nayuta has imagined such a scene, and added it by the way. This can also enrich the character creation..."

Hearing this explanation, his face turned darker.

"Taking off steam? What a shameless slut."

Qian Shou Cun Zheng lowered his forehead and scolded.

"Your face is red, Miss Qianju, can you imagine it?"

But Nayuta turned his head and whispered in her ear.

"what!"

Qianju Cunzheng immediately became uncontrollable with his hands and feet, and his face turned red.

"Ahem, that's almost it. Let's make a good evaluation first."

Hikigaya Hachiman coughed twice and changed the subject.

Regarding the quality of this novel, everyone undoubtedly gave the highest praise. It can be said that there is no way to criticize it. However, from the ideological level, Mr. Crab was criticized a lot.

Next it was the turn of Qianju Village to conquer.

There is nothing new in the plot, and it is even a bit simple. The male and female protagonists in it are completely in contrast to her and Hachiman's current situation in terms of identity, and then tells the story of the two confessing their love for each other.

Obviously she is not as good as Mr. Crab in this aspect of writing, but her feelings are more pure and beautiful, completely a fantasy of adolescence. If compared, it is similar to Kasumi Shiko's first version of "Metronome of Love".

"Here comes another person who borrows books and confesses his love."

Wu Geng Liuli curled her lips and frowned inadvertently.

"Tch, you guys have the nerve to accuse me! It's all your fantasy! It's not based on reality."

But Nayuta looked scornful.

"Haha, you are really good at dreaming. It seems that reality is too cruel to you."

Yamada Fairy played an AOE.

"For you, Cun Zheng, this description is flawed, but the sincerity of this creation is enough to make people unforgettable..."

When it came to the book review session, after Hikigaya Hachiman expressed his approval, Senjumura Sei immediately covered his cheeks shyly.

This soft girl look is when Cun Zheng is most attractive.

"Okay, it's time for today's highlight! Hachiman, show us your work! We've been looking forward to it for a long time."

Yamada Fairy waved his hand, his eyes full of anticipation.

The demeanor of the others was roughly the same.

126 "Summer Returns" that suits everyone's wishes will be discussed later

"take it."

Hikigaya Hachiman distributed several copies of the "Summer Returns" Gouichidan novel he had copied to everyone one by one.

Without saying a word, they entered a reading state.

……

"Shio, come with me to Tokyo."

A week after the summer celebration ended, Netdai Shinpei took the initiative to invite after some thought.