Details determine success or failure.
It was this insignificant little detail that gave Walter an unexpected surprise after he realized it.
Most of the works do not bear close scrutiny.
But Su Nian's current situation rules this out.
There is a long-lasting ancient palace fighting TV series in China called "Legend of Huanhuan", and its excellence has always been talked about.
Even when faced with the in-depth digging of countless people out of boredom, there are not many loopholes.
Even with new interpretations, some people will continue to think that humans' development of "The Legend of Huan Huan" is less than 1%.
That play is just one example, but there are many classic literary masterpieces that have this quality.
Some people can even become a Redologist by studying Dream of the Red Chamber, one of the four great Chinese classics, and make a living from this book and giving lectures everywhere...
If Su Nian can maintain his current level, the story of "Paradise in the Past" will remain outstanding after it has gone through the test of sedimentation and the public.
Well, let’s not talk about those famous works that are exactly the same as national-level stuff.
At least there is no problem in it becoming a phenomenal work in the eyes of young people.
Everything depends on how Su Nian performs in the future.
[“The Eighth Herrscher’s power will no longer affect me. Let’s start our counterattack.”]
[“Ah, Kevin… you know, this is what I dislike most about you.”]
[“You don’t have to take everything on your own shoulders, really. Even if you don’t trust Mobius, you should trust your old classmates more.”]
【“Su…?”】
[“The counterattack has already begun?”]
This time it was not Kevin’s own solo show, so Su Nian chose to give more shaping to other people.
At this time, most of the Thirteen Fire-Chasing Heroes have joined the Fire-Chasing Moth.
In this incident, there was Mobius who led the operation, Su who fused with the psychic Honkai beast, and Alicia who took care of everything in an orderly manner when Kevin was away.
This passage seemed to come alive, revealing a glimpse of Alicia's lively and playful personality.
And the most distinctive one?
But nothing was as easy as Alicia made it seem.
The Eighth Herrscher caused quite a lot of casualties, and the cunning Herrscher would never sit still and wait for death.
[The Honkai beast that Su fused with was the emperor-level Honkai beast, Mayuli, who had lived half his life with the Eighth Herrscher. As a result, Su became a spiritual perception fusion warrior.]
[At the last moment before the drug called "Mental Shackles" is about to lose its effect, all sensory fusion warriors use the observation hub to sneak into the dream of the Eighth Herrscher to find the location of the Eighth Herrscher]
[Su's mentor, Dr. Spasi, the founder of the Fifth Science Department, and most of the researchers have not heard of the victory.]
[When Su sent his consciousness into the Herrscher's dream in order to find the Herrscher's trace, he was attacked by the cunning Herrscher who had never expected it.]
[Before the man took on the mental shackles, the Eighth Herrscher had already taken control of his body and interfered.]
[But at the last moment of his life, he still tried his best to restart the observation center, so Su was able to return to reality, and the Candle Moth was able to locate and capture it. ]
Collapse, Herrscher...
The words that were once unfamiliar to Su are now devouring the civilization of this generation.
Honkai Impact 3 is not a worldview created just to create enemies.
Every growth...seems to come at a price.
[Although there is still hope at this time, sacrifice is inevitable, and because of the sacrifice, Su fell into a depressed state. ]
[Kevin did not try to comfort Su, but only stated the threat of collapse to civilization. Su's former best friend had a stern expression on his face that he had never seen before.]
They don't have much time to be depressed, as collapse will continue to occur and threaten the civilization of this generation.
At this time, Kevin's heart had gradually frozen due to various reasons.
He is no longer the naive boy he was when he was studying at Chiba Academy.
Instead, he became a warrior.
[“If you don’t want his sacrifice to be in vain, stand up and continue fighting”]
[“Humanity will definitely defeat the Honkai... no matter what the cost.”]
[Su took over his mentor's duties and took over the Fifth Science Department. ]
[At this point, the Herrscher was destroyed, and the Fire Moth officially named this disaster.]
【The eighth collapse ends.】
Su Nian stretched lazily, and the general process of the eighth collapse was introduced.
If anyone was watching, they would never have guessed what consequences the Eighth Herrscher had brought besides the destruction he caused.
This outline gives so much information that everyone present has to digest it.
The time that Su Nian had written before was only based on Kevin's perspective.
The roles of the characters have also been simplified, so even if there are problems he can modify and improve them at any time.
But in this section, since Kevin is not the protagonist, Su Nian describes the other people in great detail.
Their charm was only slightly revealed.
But these characters' facial expressions are very distinctive.
No one's settings overlap, and no one is marginalized.
"If this section is a little more detailed, it can be regarded as a main text developed in the form of a group portrait." Otto mentally imagined the network of relationships among the characters that appeared in this section.
The image of each person in his mind becomes three-dimensional.
The somewhat cold and arrogant Kevin, the beautiful Alysia like a flower, Su who just realized the cruelty of Honkai for the first time, the mysterious Aponia...
And the important role in the success of this operation, Su's mentor Spacey.
Even though he didn't know the facial features of these characters at this time, he did not get confused at all.
His genius brain accounts for part of the credit, but the rest comes from the story.
"Group portrait..."
Otto seemed to have thought of something.
Chapter 18, group portrait writing, everyone is the protagonist of his own story
The story never makes it clear who the protagonist is, Kevin has a lot of plot.
But as can be seen from this incident, others have also made a lot of efforts.
Although Su Nian did not describe in detail what happened in the dream or Su's mental state, this omission can be seen.
It is the part about Su that has been hidden.
There are also many details that must be displayed selectively.
"The Great Collapse event described by Su Nian is huge, but relatively few characters appear. There may be two possibilities. One is that there are too many characters and the length is difficult to control. Another possibility is that those people do not have a deep relationship with Kevin, so they are hidden in Kevin's character card."
Otto analyzed it and felt something was wrong.
They all subconsciously overlooked the most important thing, which was...
Who said Kevin is the protagonist?
Or... who said Kevin is the only protagonist?
When the word "group portrait" came out of his mouth, Otto suddenly realized how Su Nian wrote it.
This story is dedicated to the Thirteen Fire-Chasing Heroes, so it is completely possible to jointly construct the worldview in a group portrait way!
This can completely solve the problem of the worldview being too large without content to support it.
It also fits the description in the introduction that it is dedicated to the Thirteen Heroes.
"The story that has been forgotten in history... that glorious and brilliant era..."
If it is written in a group portrait format, there is no problem at all if there are multiple protagonists.
The program team also does not restrict the subject matter and format.
genius!
If he can have such control at such a young age, what else can he be called but a genius?!
The vast majority of works do not use the group portrait format.
Otto fell into a misconception at the first moment. When he read Kevin's story, he subconsciously regarded him as the only protagonist and did not even think of this method.
“If it’s presented as a group portrait, everything makes sense.”
"What did you think of again?"
Walter came over and looked at Otto's excited expression. He must have discovered something again.
Although Otto is full of bad intentions, his intelligence and talent are unquestionable.
Another judge, Eden, understood what Otto meant when he heard it. "Indeed, we have preconceived ideas. This is not a story that can be presented in an ordinary form."
Now it seems that only Walter is not very clear.
There are many types of group portrait writing, but Walter had never come across one.
"Let me introduce it. Group portrait creation does not just focus on one or a few characters. It reflects the world view and life from different angles. It describes the choices and fate of individuals against the backdrop of a huge era."
“The difficulty of group portraits does not lie in the individuals, but in the collision between the individuals and the background.”
"Su Nian created Kevin as just one of the most ordinary people in the world. Group portrait is a kind of performance art, and there are traces of it from the beginning."
Once this was revealed, the story instantly became several levels more amazing.
Su Nian's thoughts were also obvious. He did have ambitions.
This writing technique was used in another famous historical work by Shenzhou.
The scary thing about Su Nian now is not just his genius.
It is not about his quick ideas, wonderful stories, smooth connections... these are the things that reflect Su Nian's literary attainments.
He also has an extremely strong literary background.
As Eden said, the difficulty of this subject lies in the deeper collision between the individual and the background.
In this story, in a world that is collapsing, countless human beings are in danger because of the collapse.
And the protagonists of the story may be the Thirteen Heroes who Chase Fire!
"what?"
Hearing their analysis, Walter immediately understood.
Thinking about the various settings Su Nian had made before, he couldn't help but break out in a sweat.
Are the young people nowadays so evil? The older seniors are going to be depleted of gold coins!
Saving Kevin is all about more than just perfecting his life.
The student stage is also a portrayal of ordinary people under the collapse, a collision between ordinary people and the collapse, but in the face of the collapse they are just lambs to be slaughtered.
Every time Su Nian writes, there is a corresponding meaning, not just arranging a character.
This conjecture about group portrait writing is valid.
After careful analysis, I couldn't find any flaws.
How many surprises does Su Nian have waiting for them to discover? !
Thinking of this, Walter and Otto looked at Eden tacitly, and the thoughts in their eyes were self-evident.
Yiden had previously commented on Su Nian: "Although his works lack details..."
[I am dying of laughter. Their expressions…are they showing their thoughts written on their faces? ]
[People who study psychology are here, they must be thinking: Is this what you call insufficient details?! Because that’s what I think]
[Haha, maybe it’s because the requirements are too high]
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