The bottom line is that Alicia’s character is well-developed.
Once Alicia has any flaw, it will be magnified infinitely and criticized.
Those guys who slandered and spread rumors that Ailishiya is a green tea are so short-sighted!
What Otto wanted to say was that Su Nian was very demanding of himself, not just about creating a good work.
I thought much more about the character Alicia that I wrote about than just that.
Parents who love their children will plan for the long term.
Although the relationship in this sentence seems a little off...but that's roughly what it means.
For some authors, their works are like their own children.
And Su Nian now revealed an idea.
Ambition!
They were right at the beginning. Su Nian had the ambition to turn this story into a masterpiece.
Now Su Nian has paid a lot for it and has seen some clues... no, it should be said that there are possibilities!
And the probability of success is not low!
This is not just empty talk, it is really possible.
Otto admitted that he had underestimated Su Nian. He originally thought that Su Nian needed more polishing, but now it seems that he was wrong.
guide?
Does Su Nian really need this kind of thing?
Ah, then his few advantages are gone, and he can only compete with Eden...
Cash ability!
Although Eden is an artist in the civilized world, she can be considered a wealthy woman.
But destiny is not bad at all.
They are a church with devout believers all over the world, and they are also a consortium. With Otto's vigorous development, the power of Heaven's Mandate cannot be underestimated.
Can have the strength to fight.
Otto is full of fighting spirit now. Eden just made an escape, so he must win back a game!
He won't lose again this time!
Walter's reputation is on the line.
Su Nian is still continuing. The writing of other perspectives has been completed, and now it will return to the perspective of Raiden Mei and Alicia.
[“I’m about to blush when Mei sees my youthful memories.”]
[“But I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t happy. After all, Mei said she wanted to know everything about me and wanted to develop a closer relationship with me, so of course I welcome that…”]
[Alisa continues to tease Mei, but when Mei is about to get to know Alisa, the typewriter seems to be broken.]
It was broken by the physical attack of the fairy Ellie.
After another tug of war, Mei's exploration of Alicia came to an end, and she turned her exploration of the characters to Grayshu, Cosmo, and Aponia.
[Raiden Mei was relaxing, but ran into them at the scene of a tense situation. Then Alicia and Fairy Ali came again with the repaired typewriter. ]
[Grayshut printed out a picture, which showed a distorted Kosmo.]
Of course, Kosmo's somewhat...sultry? personality is also revealed in the typewriter.
[What Kosmo played was the scene where Alicia and Hua "transformed" together, and Kosmo saw it.]
【(......handsome.)】
Kosmo is not just a passionate young man, he also has some middle school elements in him.
In front of a huge audience, their every move can resonate with the audience.
Of course, these are just minor episodes.
What really made some things come to light was...
[“Grayshudder, do you want to go somewhere else to sketch? I just found a place with beautiful scenery.”]
[“…You and Aponya go ahead. Be safe. I have something I need to investigate.”]
Just now, when Mei Raiden came, they were on the verge of a fight, and the content was reflected in the Gray Shu chapter.
The eternal paradise is far from being as peaceful as they see it.
Chapter 66, I Can Do Anything
If Kevin's previous experience was written directly by Su Nian, it combined the timeline, events, and his personal outline.
So what Alicia shows Mei now is an event that is of great significance to her. This is Alicia's perspective.
But her situation is different from Kevin's. Kevin's image requires courage, unrivaled military force and a firm heart to fight against the collapse.
The charm of Alicia lies in all aspects.
So we need to write it in more detail.
The concepts of "outline" and "main text" are actually quite vague to Su Nian.
After all, if you want to watch both, there seems to be no difference.
If all the chapters of The Thirteen Heroes were of this length, then each of them could indeed appear once, but unfortunately, this idea does not work.
The one who carried the former civilization through to the end was Alysia, and the one who survived to the end was Kevin, the first fighting force representing the former civilization.
Apart from this, it seems that no one has spent much time and effort to shape it.
The screenwriter of Honkai Impact 3rd is good at creating characters in long plots. After Shaoji went to write Pinocchio for Honkai Impact 3rd next door, just one big version of the performance made Shajin directly a popular character.
The influence was so great that Su Nian accidentally saw fans adopting peacocks and buying aventurine.
The audience's attention is not focused on the principles of writing, but on the story.
[Looking back, Ailixia always appears unexpectedly in everyone's memories, and all the heroes' lives are inextricably linked to her. ]
【Raiden Mei has seen her stories at each stage.】
[Including the time in the Paradise Hall, she proposed to become one of the Thirteen Heroes of Chasing Fire, but the proposal was rejected by the top management of Chasing Fire Moth.]
["Not recognizing more than half of the members as heroes"]
[Alicea showed a [Lonely] smile for the first time.]
Alicia's image seems to have reversed slightly. At least for now, it seems that she has never had any bad intentions...
If he had bad intentions, then Zhuhuo Yingjie wouldn't have treated her like this, right?
Everyone pampers her, and no one can do anything to her...
So, the problem occurred when she died?
They suddenly remembered what Aponya had said before, that their fate would dissipate in ten days.
This dissipation...in what sense is it a dissipation?
And there is the word that represents "ominous" - the top management of the Fire Moth. This word appears again.
Whenever they are mentioned, absolutely nothing good happens.
They were originally thinking about the plot, but when they saw these six words, they instantly felt extremely uncomfortable.
[Fire Moth executives, you have done all kinds of bad things! 】
[What do you mean they don’t allow it? My rules are the rules. Talking to the top fighters about not allowing it, right? I’m rebelling against them.]
[The reason why there was no commotion at that time was obviously because the former civilization was already at the end of its strength. If humans don’t unite, won’t they really be doomed? ]
[A real man lives in the world, how can he be depressed and live under others for a long time! Ah... If there is no management talent, then it’s fine, it’s useless. 】
[It was not a wise move to fight among the people at that time, but those high-ranking officials were too annoying. The collapse destroyed the civilization, and the high-ranking officials took away hope! ]
[But in a sense, "Yingjie" is a kind of "privilege". Once it rises to the organizational level, it will involve many problems, right? ]
[To borrow a famous saying, I have fought wars all my life, so I can't enjoy myself? ]
They were filled with righteous indignation for no other reason than that they could not bear to see their favorite characters being wronged.
I can't stand teammates who are always holding us back.
Instantly put yourself in your own moba game, one against nine, exciting blood pressure soaring moment! Directly open the microphone with passion.
At least when it comes to raising blood pressure, the top management of Fire Moth has done a really good job.
Maybe the top management of Fire Moth does have their own considerations, but this statement is really chilling, isn't it?
They are all warriors fighting against Honkai, but they are not recognized as heroes.
It's normal to be scolded.
What Alicia wanted was only their identity, not a privilege, so in later civilizations, their successors still recognized them, thanked them, and sang their deeds.
[The story of the establishment of the Paradise of the Past has passed again, and this time it has finally arrived...the truth that Alicia promised. 】
【This is the last journey.】
[Starting from the lobby of the Paradise of the Past, she met Alysia, and got to know them in the intricate architectural scenes, followed by the big tree where Su and Eden often stayed, and Padu's shop...]
This tone is like a post-match summary...
It doesn't taste right, as if the story is going to end here.
[Quack! Stop pulling. This is not like you! ]
[No way... Such a good story ended so early. It's sad that it didn't have enough space...]
[I would rather Su Nian continue to hang me up]
[It's normal for a short story. After all, time is so tight. Su Nian will have to revise the manuscript later, right? ]
[He still has so many holes to fill! Doesn't it hurt to end it like this? ]
[From the perspectives of the heroes, they are all preparing for different things. Obviously, it won’t be over so soon. It’s just a feint. The ending of these volumes of novels is like the whole story wants to end...]
This rhythm made them realize it instantly, like a signal of the end.
Revisit the past again.
However, Su Nian had dug many holes and had not filled them yet, and was severely criticized by the resentful masses.
"Everyone, foreshadowing is a writing technique that is indeed difficult to control, and Su Nian has avoided talking about it in the future just to make you ignore it..."
Eden helped Su Nian explain that this was actually a commonly used method.
The bad parts of writing should be hidden.
As long as no one notices, it's not really a scam.
As long as it's not discovered... But now too many people have been discovered, it's hard to hide and not care, but Su Nian can't see the comments, and can't make changes in time based on readers' feedback...
It is indeed a fatal flaw.
Wrote it too quickly, so no time to think about it?
It seems that...Su Nian still has shortcomings.
Now he looks more like a human being than a robot with the world's literature in his head.
[“Look, we’ve reached the last stop of this journey.”]
[At first, Mei Raiden thought that the prison where she met Aponya was the deepest place, but when she came here, she found that this place was more like a temple. ]
......
[“Ah… We’ve come a long, long way. There are still many things worth remembering, but… we seem to have reached the end.”]
[After crossing the final door and going through this journey, Mei seems to have found the answer. ]
[“Even the people other than them have their own purposes, hide their own secrets, and even have conflicts and clashes with each other.”
"But... I can feel a common belief, or... obsession, from these people."
"——The will to fight for something."】
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