Unlimited Bloodstone

1 Corrected all typos in the previously revised article.

2 The original revised content, with more words, was fixed two days ago. But after the review, I found that the writing was not good, and I have been revising it for the past two days. At least 4,000 words were deleted, and the content of more than 3,000 words was completely changed.

3. The literary technique of narrating the same thing over and over again is used, and each time the same thing is described in more depth, depicting Cang Xu's character, making his active surrender behavior natural and profound.

4. The main deletion is the battle process, which is reduced to three chapters. Such a rhythm is currently satisfactory.

5. I have tried my best to be non-hydrology. Every description is in the writing plan, and has its own goal and its own value.

6. I didn't forget to portray the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, and it fits the main plot perfectly, and I didn't deliberately write it to cause the plot to be sloppy.

7 Compared with before the revision, the development of the team has been significantly improved and accelerated a lot. Aware of the shortcomings of unintentionally deducting the development of the protagonist, and it is currently fixed well.

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