Villain Husband,Please Let Go

She should have gone back in the summer vacation, but she couldn't make any money when she got home, so she couldn't afford the tuition. So the owner spent 500 yuan to rent a single room outside the school, hoping to make some money by coding.

Since the beginning of last semester, she has been writing and writing, but she has been able to work full time.

But the total attendance of several months is a lot for her. If she goes back to her hometown, she can't even earn hundreds of yuan a month.

In the original plot, the original owner finally had no choice but to borrow two thousand yuan from Ruan Mengmeng and add his own full attendance to make up for the tuition.

But now, of course, Tang Wan will not be as hard as the original owner.

……

After simply getting himself something to eat, Tang Wan lies on the bed, thinking about it and changing Lin Tongyin's memory.

After the change, I went to find Zhao Tong.

"Is it there?" Tang Wan asked.

Zhao Tong was sitting in front of the computer drinking animal blood.

I'm afraid it's not easy for people to smell blood, but it's hard for them to drink blood when they smell blood.

So he has been restraining his instinct, instead of drinking animal blood to maintain normal.

Seeing Tang Wan looking for him, Zhao Tong immediately replied: "yes, what's the matter?"

"Well, didn't I write about the man entering the secret place and about to recover his memory?"

"Well?"

"But I don't think the writing in the back is very smooth. I can't find the problem by changing it? Would you like to take a look at it from the reader's point of view? " Tang Wan said.

Hearing this, Zhao Tong's heart moved.

The next moment, reply: "OK, you send me."

"Mm-hmm!" Tang Wan bent his mouth.

This is not, every day intersection, not there?

Then he sent Zhao Tong the paragraph he had just made.

……

Zhao Tong quickly opened the document and quickly browsed it.

In this paragraph, Tang Wan intentionally added a paragraph of Lin Tongyin's psychological description after he found out that he was the devil. Frankly speaking, she deliberately set up the broken person written by Lin Tongyin.

After all, whether it is Lin Tongyin before the recovery of memory, or the former demon Lin Tongyin, are not the kind of people who will easily panic and be at a loss.

Even if there is, it is only for a short moment, and he will not be unable to accept his real identity as described by Tang Wan intentionally.

Zhao Tong discovered the problem quickly.

However, he is not surprised, after all, sometimes, what the author wants to express is always not successfully expressed for various reasons.

The author should want to write about Lin Tongyin's surprise when he found out his identity, but his description is so biased that he collapses Lin's calm or cold side.

So, Zhao Tong quickly began typing on the keyboard, "from this part, you've set up..." Zhao Tong circle out the problems and give the screenshots to Tang Wan, and then analyze them with her.

Seeing this, Tang Wan was smiling at the dialog box on the computer screen, then pretended to suddenly say: "yes, yes, I just feel that there is something wrong, but I still can't see it. Fortunately, I looked for you to have a look, otherwise I would have to write collapse from here."

Then he immediately said, "you are really good. You can see my problem at a glance."

……

Seeing Tang Wan's words, Zhao Tong lightly hooked his lips, "nothing, mainly because I look at it from the reader's point of view, so I can see it more clearly?"

"You're right, but you're really good at seeing! Fortunately, you are here, or I don't know how long I have to go crazy. I'll revise the draft first, and I'll send it to you after it's changed. Mojo! (* ￣ 3) (ε ￣ *) "

Zhao Tong:

Why does this sister paper like to send him kisses so much?

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