Warhammer Throne

Some abandoned settings (continued) and leave notice

Last night I watched "The Work of the Dragon King!" "Lead to no writing, nine-headed dragon eighty one is awesome! Empty silver matches high!

Is this the hot-blooded boy fan? Loved love.

I didn’t write it at all, so I asked for a day off. By the way, I would like to sort out the next thoughts. As everyone knows, this book is over. It is expected to be finished at the end of this year. There are still some things to be written. Not so fast, but it’s here. At the end.

Let's continue to share some abandoned settings with you here.

1. Regarding Fogen’s war to defend Costantiniye, I originally wanted to write it by referring to the battle of Sarhu, that is, no matter how many enemies come, I will only go all the way and defeat three armies one after another. Let Mortarian join, the leader of the Death Guard Corps is best at judging the war situation and choosing the timing of the attack, but the weakness lies in being overly cautious and hesitant to do big things, seeing small profits and forgetting the original purpose, so it was finally written such.

Second, the trip to Osuan originally had some additional plots behind it, such as the war between the dark elves and the high elves in the north, as well as the further battles between Ryan and Fogen, the undead pirates, and the Witch King Malekis, but apparently this One of the plots is that the protagonist is not involved enough, and the second reader is not very interested, so it ends in a hasty end.

Third, for the same reason, the Tomb King should have a whole plot of his own. I originally thought about it a lot. As we all know, the Tomb King is a very unpopular camp. If I want to write, many people probably don’t write the background in detail. I was confused, and there was suspicion of water injection in the detailed background, so in the end, the plot of the tomb king was minimized, and only a small part of Kalida was written.

Fourth, the original plan was to write that after visiting Dulong City, Ryan took the opportunity to continue to explore the Chaos Wasteland with Lilith and Mojana. The chapters were also deleted. It was unnecessary, they were all the things described.

Fifth, there are two regrets in this book. The first regret is that the relationship between the characters in the opening is not handled properly. The first is the wandering knight Ike. In fact, Ryan was a knight of the kingdom at the time, and Ike is essentially the same. For those within the system, he is inconvenient to tear his face with Ike. On the one hand, he considers his reputation. On the other hand, this wandering knight is of aristocratic origin. It also means network problems and future problems with colleagues, but I did not talk to readers. Speaking clearly, it seemed that Ryan gave in because he was afraid of things.

six. The second regret is the issue of personality. As we all know, the role of Teresa received a lot of scolding at the beginning. I have always wanted to write a personality for the Tsundere Warlock eldest, but on the one hand it is lack of experience and on the other hand it is pen power. The problem is that I only write proud but not Jiao. Moreover, this kind of personality is no longer likable, and readers can’t see the appearance of a real person. The three views are not enough to make up the five views, so I didn’t write it well. Let’s be honest here. , Ye Naifa and Beyonita, if they could not see the face, I am afraid that most readers would not have a favorable impression.

In the same way, Olica is the most distinctive and most likable person.

In the same way, as the first heroine (laugh), Su Liya's personality has not been erected, resulting in a weak sense of existence. I used a lot of pen to reluctantly establish her position in the palace. What a failure! As for the reason, it is related to Article 7 below.

Seven, in my original writing plan, the protagonist should have a story as the Holy Grail alone adventure after arriving in Barto, solving various problems for the common people. This story is the best way to establish Suria’s personality, but unfortunately due to rhythm issues It was a matter of readers' preferences, and eventually became a baron immediately, and it was difficult to write these after entering the lord mode.

8. As mentioned earlier, originally only four female protagonists were designed, namely Knight Ji Sulia, Empire Lady Emilia, Sorceress Teresa, and Dark Jing Maid Olika, but the latter one was not planned. Zhou, the second is the greedy nature of men, and the third is the trend of readers, which led to the addition of several female protagonists. As a result, the plan was broken, the pen and ink were not enough, and many problems appeared, such as Teresa’s role in Vero Nika was taken away and divided by Aurora. For example, Su Liya squeezed Sylvia’s role, for example, Morgia squeezed Su Liya’s role, and the fairy in the lake squeezed Mojana again. Squeeze one by one, and also squeeze other roles.

Nine, due to the problem of the outline and the length of the writing, some of the heroine storylines I compiled in advance have already been written, so I thought of adding one or two heroines later, and made a very detailed personality at that time. The prototype is a famous anime heroine of Jingani, and another prototype is a real character who became popular because of a video, but considering that the book is about to be completed, it will be discarded in the end, but you don’t have to worry about it. You will see them appear in this book.

10. Regarding the 40K plot, I was deliberately weakening in the later stage. The first is that too much scolding and provocations cause personal extreme irritability. The second is that the 40K plot is too grand and affects the main line. Furthermore, the complex character of the original body It is very difficult to write about the characteristics of each person. I often have to read the official novels and the evaluations of various bigwigs over and over again to figure out and study the personality. This leads to a very laborious and time-consuming writing, such as Anglang, It’s easy to write a lot of primitives with distinctive personality like Killiman and Ruth, but it is very difficult to read through the complex and profound primitives like Johnson, Faugan, and San Giles, and it is very tiring to write.

In the same way, 40k things are very tiring to write. If they are too reductive, they will be scolded and copied. Needless to say, what is the ending of too much.

What's even more funny is that some people will read the second set after other big guys have interpreted it and then use their own three sets, even four sets, and five sets to scold my second set.

Brother, it's not a thing at all, it doesn't touch it anymore.

But after the 40K content will also be written, after all, this is a chessboard where the emperor and the evil **** are fighting, and it is already entering the final game.

Eleven, I originally planned to write a short story about ten chapters~www.ltnovel.com~ It is the story of the God of War little Devonhill and his old uncle Anglang going on an adventure in the ancient ruins of Obiang, uncle and nephew The two worked together to solve the ancient secret of Orbien, but for the same reason, the plot was too long and greatly affected the rhythm of the writing, so it was finally cancelled from the plan.

Twelfth, the tiredness in the middle and late stages has tortured me a lot. If I don’t have to finish writing ET, I really want the ending. Some plots have always been a little flawed, maybe many people have not noticed , But I still have to apologize.

Thirteen, all bookings have benefits, everyone knows naturally.

14. The next book is already being conceived. Generally speaking, it is still this typical Western fantasy style and background, but I will add a little oriental element. This time, I must do a good job in the personality and outline, and no longer make the previous mistakes. So I will take a (longer) break after writing.

In the end, the emperor is here to thank you, and I would like you to accompany this book to the end of the journey.

The emperor puckered up his **** to you!

Orz.

(End of this chapter)