Wizardry System

Chapter 1 Changes:

Minor grammar changes. Added some new things that are extremely minor and won't change the story at all. For example, i added that Chris had his books signed by the actors and actresses. I changed the System interface a bit. I took out the info that I never really put in.

I also made it so that apostrophes are either for thoughts or using the System. I'm sure that you as smart readers know when Chris is thinking or using the System.

Chapter 2 Changes:

Once again minor grammar/flow changes. Also made it so that when the system speaks, it starts with a hyphen. I added that only money earned by Chris can be used in the System early on in this chapter. As for that I added that when creating a business, if Chris borrows money, he has to pay that money back and wait until he makes that much money in profit before using any of the profit to buy stuff from the System. For example, if he borrows 10 Galleons, he has to earn 10 galleons, pay the person back and then earn another 10 galleons. Then he can start using his profits to buy things from the System.

Changed the name of the Wizarding Book to Spell Book. I have plans for potions as well.

Mentioned that there are spells that can only be learned after Chris reaches a specific level.

I decided to stop making the System address Chris as Host, but just you.

Added some details in this chapter as well. Mostly explanations.

Chapter 3:

Increased Dumbledore and Voldemort's magical power a million each. I will be doing a lot of these number changes.

I took out the fact that Chris can use a certain amount of outside money to buy things from the System.

Added some new dialogue and etc. Once again, nothing is really that big of a change.

.