Zongman: My identity is a bit too much

“Then I’ll send the original to him first?”

Machida Enko thought for a moment, and suddenly had an idea in her heart.

According to Shiwa Kasumigaokaoka at the moment, it is absolutely miraculous to want to modify the work.

But if the other party can make some comments, that’s obviously a good thing.

After all, the three comics that have just appeared not long ago have become popular, obviously going the plot direction.

Cartoonists are actually writers, except for some cartoonists who are only responsible for drawing and not responsible for the plot.

“Yes, you give it to me, I’ll send it to the teacher when the time comes!”

Otosa saw Zhang agree.

First show the original version to Yuma Mizusaki, and then let Shiwa Kasumigaoka revise it himself.

When she returned home after eating, Otosami opened her mailbox, and Machida Enko also sent her the second original manuscript of the love metronome.

After changing hands, Otosa saw that Zhang sent it directly to Mizusaki Yuma, and attached it: “Teacher, look at this is the original manuscript…”

After sending it, she actually had some bumps in her heart.

Isn’t this a little too much trouble for the other party.

I don’t know if Yuma Mizusaki will feel that he is too intense.

“Yes!”

“Trouble the teacher, I will invite the teacher to dinner when I have time later, please be sure not to refuse!”

“Yes!”

Seeing that the other party agreed, Yinsha saw that Zhang was also relieved in his heart.

She felt that the other party was helping her so much, and she definitely had to do something.

Otherwise, she herself felt a little bad.

After receiving the email, Yuma Mizusaki clicked on the first draft of the love metronome.

With the blessing of the writer’s peak, he quickly saw that there was a big problem with the plot of this book.

The characters have collapsed, and it seems that in order to integrate too many elements, there is something unusual.

I saw it late at night, and Yuma Mizusaki finally finished reading it all.

After checking the time, it was already twelve o’clock, and he sent an email to Otosa Mihan after the problem he felt before.

He turned off his computer and prepared to rest.

Early the next morning, Yuma Mizusaki yawned.

There is a friend application on the mobile phone line, and the note is Kasumi Shizi.

“Otosa saw Zhang gave it!”

Yawned, and conveniently passed her friend application.

Her main purpose is to help her modify her status, otherwise these rewards will not slip away.

You know, these novels are all books.

In other words, he can use these manuscripts to write novels while drawing comics.

While not delaying things, you can also increase your own income.

[Hello, Rainy Night Sensei! ] 】

【Uh-huh, hello! 】 】

On the other end of the phone, Shiyu Kasumigaoka bit the tip of the pen, in fact, she also didn’t know how to speak.

In the beginning, I never asked anyone.

Last night, Machida Yuma sent all the comments on many questions in his novel.

This gave Kasumigaoka Shiwa a sudden and cheerful feeling.

But more than that, there is no way to start.

He said to join a character and enter the state of love triangle.

She hadn’t experienced this before.

She couldn’t write it at all.

Even the pure love before was imagined by himself.

After all, Shiwa Kasumigaoka is a girl with no experience in love.

Some things can be imagined, but some things are simply not imagined.

[Teacher, how do you write a love triangle? ] 】

[Don’t you know how to write a love triangle?] 】

Yuma Mizusaki was a little surprised.

This can’t even write about love triangles, isn’t the female author familiar with this?

When it comes to driving and the description of love triangles, it can be said that the female author is absolutely a must.

She actually told herself that she couldn’t write love triangles.

[Uh-huh, actually, I thought about it before, but because I have no experience, I don’t dare to write …].

In fact, when writing this, Shiwa Kasumigaoka had already thought about whether to join a character into it.

But think about it and give up in the end.

Because she wouldn’t, but she also knew that if she didn’t join, the book would definitely go wrong.

If you don’t add people in terms of plot, you definitely can’t make it up, although there are some clichés, but this is the routine of love light novels.

[Well, this way… I’ll teach you…].

Mizusaki thought for a moment.

Then slowly entered a text in the chat box.

“I, have betrayed, and next, only you remain

For me, you will always be a waste; In order to make me work hard, it will become a burden for my whole life.

I like you the worst in the world, the most.

For the first time, with someone you like, and a lifelong friend, the two joys overlap each other, and this double joy brings more and more joy.

It should have been a dreamy happy time, but why, it turned out to be like this.

It’s me, it’s me first, obviously I came first, kissing, hugging, or liking that guy.

Abandon the dog… Once you open up, you become overwhelmed!

Always, always, hide everything, as long as in the end, it is me who chooses, it is enough….

It’s white album season again!

Why are you so skilled! How many times have you kissed XX!? How far are you going to throw me away before you are willing!? ”

“Got it!?”

With this passage entered, Yuma Mizusaki felt that Shiha Kasumigaoka should understand what he meant, right?

Isn’t a love triangle simple?

Isn’t it the season of white albums again, and if there are these two demonstrations of love triangles, isn’t this simple?

On the other end of the computer, Shiyu Kasumigaoka also had a sudden and cheerful feeling at this time.

It turns out that as long as the relationship between people is complicated, and then the stomach hurts.

After figuring it out, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was also in a much better mood at this time.

So he couldn’t help but joke and asked: [Teacher, why are you so skilled?] 】

This Asura Field, which has not experienced more than a dozen times, is impossible to think of this.

Or is it actually the realistic script of the rainy night teacher?

At this moment, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was also a little curious about him.

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