Zongman: Viewers of the world, starting from saving Yukino

Chapter 85: This world is so small, Kasumigaoka Shiwa began to listen!

Taking the wad of A4 paper from Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s hand, Nan Wusheng did not intend to say anything more, and began to flip through it quietly, while Kasumigaoka Shiyu stood next to Nan Wusheng, she did not intend to return to her place.

Because she wanted to know for the first time what Nan Wusheng would say. Yui Hihama poked his head out, looking curious about the baby.

To be honest, she was also very interested in Kasumi Shiko’s new work, but she didn’t have the guts to go over and look at it.

Yukinoshita Yukino, who had already begun to read, stretched out his hand and pulled the sleeve of Yubihama Yui’s coat, and reminded in a low voice: “Yubihama, let’s not disturb those two.” ”

“Hmm.”

Yubihama Yui was reminded by Yukinoshita Yukino, and his restless body instantly calmed down.

“By the way, is the [Love Metronome] really good-looking? I started to get a little interested in this novel.”

“up.”

“It’s good-looking” especially the heroes and heroines in it, I cried when I saw it…….

“Then [Love Metronome] should be a novel about love?”

“Well… The same can be said. ”

Hearing Yubihama Yui say this, Yukinoshita Yukinoshita’s interest decreased by half. Because she is not a person who likes to read romance novels.

But since Yui Hihama likes to watch it, she decided to contact it tonight…. The main thing is that some guy also saw it.

His gaze shifted to the figure who was reading carefully not far away, and Yukinoshita thought for two seconds, and then carefully folded a corner on the foot of the page in his hand.

This is called a chamfer.

In English, it’s “dog-ear”.

Because Yukinoshita Yukino likes cats, she will most likely say it

“It’s not dog ears, it’s folded cat ears.”

and so on.

Yukino closed her book and put it on her desk, got up and went to a corner of the classroom. Remove tea leaves and two disposable tea cups from one bag.

Then pick up the small kettle that has already boiled the water and slowly pour the boiling water into the glass teapot. The tea leaves inside slowly jumped.

The dancing scene is like snowflakes falling quietly in a snowball.

After brewing, Yukinoshita Yukino poured tea water for the two disposable teacups one after another, and then took the two teacups in both hands to Nan Wusheng and Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

I saw that she carefully placed one of the cups on the corner of Nan Wusheng’s table, and then put the other cup on the table near Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

“Senior sister, or you better sit down and drink tea and wait for him.”

Yukinoshita Yukino suggested in a low voice. Kasumi Hills Shiyu thought for a moment, and then slowly nodded and said, “Well, it’s okay.” ”

After that, she turned around and lifted her feet back to her position, then moved the chair to Nan Wusheng’s table and carefully placed it, and sat down.

Seeing this, Yukinoshita Yukino did not say anything, but gently stepped on the cat-like steps and returned to his position. In this way, except for a few subtle breathing sounds in the entire classroom, only the sound of Nan Wusheng turning the paper remained.

……

Nan Wusheng watched slowly, because he needed to think while watching. At the same time, he found that the opening plot seemed a little familiar.

At the beginning, the male protagonist took advantage of the weekend vacation to work part-time in an amusement park. I work part-time like wearing a doll’s suit.

When it was time to leave work, the male protagonist held a bouquet of flowers in his hand, stepped on a cheerful pace, and jumped around in the already sparsely populated amusement park.

He is now going back to the staff locker room to change clothes.

As for the bouquet of flowers in his hand, it was given to him by a child before.

It’s just that on the way back, the male protagonist met a girl who was crying, who looked like she should be 17 years old. The male protagonist who could not be relieved turned back, and after some inquiry, he learned that it was because the pet that the girl had kept for many years died. Next, the male protagonist made a funny action and said some comforting words, and the girl’s heart felt a lot better.

And the content of this comforting word is similar to “everything we have is stars” in the seventh volume of Nan Wusheng’s “Let’s Sink Together”, and the same is true of the pet that said the girl.

Finally, looking at the girl who was in a much better mood, the male protagonist gave her the bouquet of flowers in his hand. So the opening plot ends here.

Some of the character and personality of the male protagonist have been written, and it is indeed good from the look and feel.

As for why Nan Wusheng feels familiar, it is not the explanation similar to “everything we have is stars” mentioned in the text.

It’s the whole plot of the opening.

Coincidentally, a few days ago at this time last year, Nan Wusheng, who was still in a state of amnesia, took advantage of the holiday to run to the playground and did a part-time job in a doll costume.

As for why Nan Wusheng did this, the first reason was for the sake of the novel, and he wanted to experience firsthand the feelings of a doll costume worker.

The second reason is that it happened to be the birthday of her mother, Nobuko Minami.

So Nan Wusheng decided to use the money earned from part-time work to buy Nan Nobuko a bouquet of flowers as a birthday gift. On the way from work, the events he encountered were similar to the plot of this novel written by Shiwa Kasumigaokaoka.

It’s just that the girl he met was not crying because of the death of her pet, but because she was dumped by her boyfriend. Also after a funny gesture and comforting words, as well as giving the bouquet of flowers to the other party.

Seeing the girl who had improved her mood, Nan Wusheng left dashingly.

I didn’t expect that what he did that day was actually seen by Shiyu Kasumigaoka, and then now he wrote it into a novel, gee!

Thinking of this, Nan Wusheng couldn’t help but shake his head.

The world is so small…

“Huh? What’s wrong? Have you already discovered any problems junior? ”

And Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who had been paying attention to Nan Wusheng’s actions beside him, asked.

“Nothing, I don’t see anything wrong for the time being.”

Nan Wusheng shook his head, and at the same time noticed a cup of steaming black tea on the table, and then his gaze shifted to Yukino who was reading on the other side, and the corners of his mouth couldn’t help but subconsciously raise slightly.

Picking up the black tea and blowing it three times to his mouth, Nan Wusheng took a small sip.

Well, it’s still a little hot.

After all, he can be considered half a cat’s tongue.

Although you can eat very hot food, you can’t eat hot food.

“Then I’ll keep looking.”

“Hmm.”

After the two had a brief conversation, Nan Wusheng continued to enter the state of reading.

After another five or six minutes, Nan Wusheng’s body leaned back slightly, and then he put the manuscript in his hand on the table.

“Hmm.”

“Have you finished reading it?”

“How?”

“The look and feel is very good, there is no big problem in the plot, and the connection is very good.”

“This way.”

Hearing his evaluation, Kasumigaoka Shiwa was not too happy, because today Machida Enko also said the same thing as Minami Wusheng.

She genuinely wanted to hear something different.

Ay! Is it true that this “arrogant” junior junior can’t do it either?

Just when Kasumi Hills Shiyu was full of loss in his heart, Nan Wusheng spoke again.

“But…” Nan Wusheng muttered in a low voice, and then continued to ask, “I’d better ask first, senior sister, you don’t see anything wrong with this work now, right?” ”

“Well, yes! Could it be that junior-junior-jun can see it? ”

Shiha Kasumigaoka sat up straight and asked curiously.

She wanted to hear Nan Wusheng’s next high opinion.

At the same time, I hope it is not some rhetoric…

“Well, almost…”

Nan Wusheng picked up the black tea that had become warm and took a sip, and then continued to speak.

“Senior sister, the plot where you arrange the heroine to appear later is completely fine, but it is not very well handled in some details.”

“Huh? How to say? ”

Saying that, Kasumigaoka Shiyu subconsciously shook his toes and made a slight “click” sound.

……

Nan Wusheng put down the cup of black tea in his hand, then quickly flipped through the manuscript on the table, and pointed to the words on it and said slowly.

“You wrote in the text that the male protagonist played with a doll machine in a certain game hall in Akihabara, grabbed one by one, the level was very high, and attracted the attention of the female protagonist who was also playing with the doll machine on the side.”

“The hostess’s addiction to dishes also attracted the attention of the male protagonist, so he took the initiative to help her catch the puppet doll inside.”

“Therefore, the encounter between the male protagonist and the female protagonist began.”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu picked up the black tea in front of him and took a sip, then tilted his head and asked.

“Huh? Is there anything wrong with this arrangement in the plot? ”

“Generally speaking, there is no problem.”

Nan Wusheng said this first, and then the next second saw him turn his words,

“But no problem is the biggest problem.”

“It can be seen that Senior Sister, you want to highlight the heroine’s personality, right?”

Nan Wusheng asked again.

“Yes.”

Kasumigaoka Shiwa nodded.

“But if the plot is arranged like this, the heroine is too ordinary…”

Is it ordinary?

Hearing Nan Wusheng make such an assessment, Kasumi Hills Shiyu’s mind flashed, and she seemed to be about to grab something.

“Trouble junior-kun, you continue to talk.”

Her tone was tinged with excitement and expectation.

“Hmm…………………… Let me give you an opinion to listen to it, and swap the game technical levels of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. ”

“The male protagonist is still addicted to dishes, and he caught twenty or thirty times in the game hall without catching a puppet doll, and then the heroine on the other side was idle and bored, where she saw the end from the beginning.”

“The female protagonist who has come to be interested, especially wants to catch a doll in the doll machine, originally thought that the male protagonist would give up after using up the coins, but after she stepped forward to take a look, she found that there were almost a hundred coins placed next to her.”

“So the heroine began to secretly slander in her heart, if she waited like this, she might not be able to catch the last train home.”

“Although she can do this kind of thing at any time, but now this kind of thing she wants can’t get the first time, the feeling of humiliation makes her unable to let go.”

“In the end, after the male protagonist failed to catch the doll once, the female protagonist could no longer stand, walked directly over, stretched out her hand and poked the other party’s shoulder.”

[I said you let it go first, I’m going to catch it.] 】

[Hey, please let me know, thank you. 】

[Huh? What the? 】

“Although the male protagonist has not yet figured out the situation, he still gave up his position very well.”

So the heroine put down the sports bag, picked up the two coins on the operating table, and put them into the machine.”

“[Ahhh That’s my coin. The male protagonist reminded him loudly. ”

“It’s a pity that the heroine, who was a little anxious, ignored him, flicked her left hand back and forth expressionlessly, and pressed the grab button without hesitation after seeing the opportunity, and the whole set of actions was completed in one go, and successfully caught a five-pointed star doll.”

“The female protagonist squatted down, took out the five-pointed star doll from the drop of the machine and handed it to the male protagonist next to her.”

“[Give. The heroine cherishes her words like gold, and her words are concise and clear. ”

“Huh? The male protagonist with a dull expression did not reach out and take the doll at the first time. ”

“The heroine frowned slightly, put the doll on the operating table, and then turned away without saying a word, she just wanted to grab this doll in the machine.”

The dashing departing heroine walked out of the game hall, but found that her sports bag was still left there, and quickly turned back again, so! The male protagonist and the female protagonist soon had a second encounter…”

Nan Wusheng, who had said a long paragraph, felt a little dry mouth, and picked up the cup of brewed tea on the table and directly suffocated it in two sips.

Then looking at Shiyu Kasumigaoka who had already listened to the gods beside him, he opened his mouth and asked slowly.

“Senior sister, what do you think of this arrangement?”

“Isn’t the heroine’s personality distinct?”