June is our farewell song

Chapter 100 Youth Immortal

Perhaps there should have been no expectations in the first place.

"Hahahahahaha, what kind of boudoir resentful woman plus super ultimate persecution paranoia! You obviously have nothing, okay?"

Gu Yuan rested his chin and squinted at Qi Yu who was laughing beside him. Sure enough, after sharing his thoughts and questions with her, this guy would react like this.

Originally, he wanted to tell her about Wang Yanyi, Lu Chen, Liu Qingsi and the others, but when he saw Qi Yu's big mouth, Gu Yuan thought about it now and let it go.

If this is told to her, maybe everyone in the whole grade will know it within two days.

The first two periods in the afternoon were Chinese class, and we were talking about composition. Chen Ge distributed a few papers to everyone, each of which had a few high-scoring compositions printed on the final exam of last semester. Classes, and analyzed the advantages and disadvantages and the improvement plan according to the article.Gu Yuan saw Liu Qingsi's composition at a glance. It ranked first in the narrative, with a score of 68, only two points away from the full score. Among the people behind him, he knew Qi Yu, Chen Ying, Lu Chen and others. Squad leader, and Gao Lian.

The paper was passed from front to back, the faint scent of ink permeated the heart, and the classroom was filled with a sound like sea waves. Although Gu Yuan didn't like doing test papers very much, every time he heard this sound, he felt an inexplicable sense of peace, especially It is the fulfilling experience of being surrounded by knowledge while watching the waves slowly roll towards you.

"Hey hey hey, hey hey hey, hey hey hey."

No one paid any attention to him, and when he got the paper, Gao Lian just left it alone and giggled.

"...Not so much." Unable to stand his idiot-like laughter, Gu Yuan turned to Gao Lian and said, "Brother, didn't you just take a model essay analysis paper? You don't need to laugh at yourself Bar?"

"What do you know?" Gao Lian rolled his eyes at him, "It's not just because of this that I'm happy."

"Ah? Why else?"

"Isn't it just that the composition is closely following Chen Ying? I really don't understand." Qi Yu squeaked, "It's just printing and typesetting, and it's not a number plate for queuing up to get married. See how happy you are." , those who didn’t know thought you were going to get married today.”

"No way, is it really because of this?" Gu Yuan lowered his eyelids, scanning Gao Lian's upper body up and down, "You are too humble."

Gao Lian rolled his eyes at him, and was about to say something to counterattack, but at this moment, Chen Ge tapped on the blackboard.

He cleared his throat, followed the bell for class, and shouted:

"Attend class."

"stand up!"

The voice of the squad leader echoed in the classroom, and all the people stood up in unison at this moment, saying hello to the teacher.

"Please sit down."

When it was time to comment on the composition, Chen Ge asked everyone to read it by themselves for half an hour.Gao Lian's essay is quite satisfactory, there is nothing particularly impressive, but at least at a glance, you can understand why the marking teacher likes this essay - the format is standard, the language is cold, and the logic is strict. Reasoning where it should be reasoned, it is difficult to find out what is wrong if it is not deliberate.So the score is naturally not low, but it is not so high that it breaks through the sky, that is, it is in the early sixties, and it looks like it has just entered the first tier.

Qi Yu's essays are, as always, densely arranged, gorgeous in language, and unrestrained in style. They are not at all the six-paragraph standard argumentative essay writing format that Chen Ge taught in class, but they seem inexplicably comfortable, except that the logic is a bit jumpy, and there is also Nothing too wrong.As for the article by the squad leader, it feels like a waterfall rushing down, full of momentum and rich references, Gu Yuan can only sigh silently after reading it, he must not be able to write such an article.

As for Lu Chen's, Gu Yuan felt that it was a bit difficult to comment.

In this composition question, there are more than 200 words of material, and I talked a lot, and quoted the famous saying of Heraclitus, "A man can never step into the same river twice". It is the natural law of spring and autumn and the passage of time,
Lu Chen wrote about the change of the times. He said in the article:

"Be as strong as Cao Cao, with outstanding civil and martial arts all his life. He fought in treacherous and treacherous situations. He defeated Xianbei Karasuma and won Liu Biao and Yuan Shao. He boiled wine in spring and talked about heroes in troubled times. He wrote poems about wine as a song and wrote poems under the moonlight. Wen Kai has a style of Jian'an Whether it is a traitor or a hero, success or failure is just a few strokes on the paper of future generations, not to mention your mediocre life. So, what's wrong with going with the flow and being at peace with the situation?"

There is nothing wrong with this passage, but Gu Yuan just doesn't like it.

If you want to say the reason, you can't say it, it's just that you don't like it.

As the saying goes, turnips and greens have their own favorites, and there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. The quality of a composition varies from person to person. For example, Qi Yu's composition may be under the hands of some old teachers with old-fashioned thinking. You will get a moderate average score, and those who are highly skilled will have a chance to be higher.

The only one who can make everyone agree on "what is a good article" is probably Liu Qingsi.

To get a high score in the composition of the college entrance examination, half depends on talent and half depends on hard work. Only by trying hard to adapt to the rules and regulations set by those marking teachers, and splashing talent in that narrow world, can you be favored.The reason why Gu Yuan's composition performance is unstable is because he always has problems understanding those rules and regulations, but his talent is not enough to support him to reach Li Taibai's state of "clear water comes out of hibiscus, natural carvings".

And Liu Qingsi... Uh, how should I put it.

It was as if everyone was racking their brains to take a stereotyped essay test, but she was writing poetry freely.

In the more than 1000 grids, other people walked cautiously, but Liu Qingsi danced briskly.Even if you can't understand the connotation of her articles, you can appreciate the beauty of those words.

She did not choose an argumentative essay that could get a stable score without a low score like most people, but chose a narrative essay that was extremely difficult and easy to collapse, but Chen Ge added a comment next to the title of that article:
"Is it a novel?"

The title of that article is called "Time Never Makes Noise"

She told a story about an unknown person in an unknown place who lived in an old house and had a goldfish that he got from nowhere.At the beginning of the story, the man is still very young, and the goldfish is also very small and vigorous. Looking out from the window of the house, you can see the sky as clean as a big tablecloth at a glance. Silhouette of bird soaring.That person sometimes jumps up, waving his arms and shouting, imagining that he is a bird with a pair of wings that can help him rush to the blue sky, but in the end he is always slapped on the head by his parents, and he hangs his hand in a desperate manner. into the house.

Later, the goldfish got old slowly. One day, the man accidentally fed too much fish food, and the goldfish died of distended belly.The man sat beside it and looked at it. Apart from it in the narrow fiberglass, it was a piece of water without ripples, calm as if it had died.The sun outside the window spreads orange-red light all around. White birds fly across the sky in groups of three and five, and the feathers that fall fly away in the direction of the wind. When you can’t see them, it’s dark .The man lit a lamp, and the dim yellow halo illuminated his face, he was no longer young.

Later, he got old and moved. The new house was very beautiful, and there was a large and beautiful fish tank in the living room, but he never raised goldfish again.I just like to move a chair and sit downstairs, looking at the sky surrounded by new high-rise buildings, waiting for the birds that will never appear.

Finally, one autumn, he received a demolition agreement for the old house. After signing, his granddaughter shouted to the passing geese downstairs. He slapped her on the head and led her back into the house.

The story ends here, and Liu Qingsi quotes a sentence from Wang Xiaobo at the end of the article as the ending.

"Everything is heading irrevocably toward vulgarity."

Just like the fledgling director Ang Lee when he saw Bergman's work "The Virgin Spring" for the first time, Gu Yuan couldn't understand it, but he was shocked.After reading it, he sat there for a long time unable to calm down, unwilling to speak, sat there and read the full text again, but still could not understand, only felt melancholy, helpless, and did not want to speak.

Chen Ge said on the podium:
"What do you guys think? These articles each have their own advantages, but many of them have obvious shortcomings. Next, I will explain to you in detail which "short" ones need to avoid in the test-oriented composition. And which "long" needs to be promoted. For most of our students, if we want to get a satisfactory score in the composition part, the most important thing is the writing standard. Well, this is the most important thing I have always emphasized to you .As for student Liu Qingsi's composition, just take a look at it, it is her own style of writing, and no one else can imitate it."

"By the way, the teaching and research team has collected a few excellent essays from our students in this year's college entrance examination, and sent them to everyone. Please remember, don't spread them. Qi Yu." Chen Ge said, and handed another stack of papers to Qi Yu, asking her to Pass it on, "Everyone should know the composition topic of this year's college entrance examination, 'Immortal', which has some similarities with our final exam questions last semester. You can refer to it for study."

Some people say that nothing is immortal, only youth is immortal; others say that young people do not believe that one day they will grow old.This kind of thinking is naive, and we delude ourselves into thinking that there are beliefs that are as immortal as nature.

Requirements: reading materials, self-selected angle, self-made topic, any genre, except poetry, and write an article of no less than 800 words.

"What an excruciating subject..."

After getting the paper, Gu Yuan couldn't help muttering.

"Last year's explorers and butterflies, the year before last's worry and love, and this year's immortality, have those people in the paper production group lost their minds because they were imprisoned for a month?" Qi Yu sat next to Gu Yuan again after handing out the papers. After getting down, he also complained, "I don't know what kind of composition questions we will take in the test, I hope it can be normal."

(End of this chapter)