After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 174 The Battle Between the Two Heavens ([-])

When Wen Congwu logged on to the literature forum, he found that among the popular posts on the homepage of the forum, there were actually three posts in the martial arts group, which made him feel very energetic.

Because the popularity of martial arts novels has not been posted on the homepage of the forum for a long time, this is not to say that martial arts novels have declined, but because there are no good martial arts novels that can arouse great popularity. Open a new book.

But today is different. Not only Sima Beijie, one of the four gods, has published a new book, but even Hongwen, who has been the most popular in the literary circle recently, has also published a martial arts novel.

Based on the traffic of these two people, the hot post on the homepage of the last forum is a matter of grasping.Especially the latter, some time ago, he used his own power to send the poetry group and the fairy hero group to the homepage of the forum.

Therefore, the posts that can be ranked in the forefront of the martial arts group are all about "The Lonely Star" and "The Eight Parts of the Dragon".

After browsing for a while, Wen Congwu discovered a very interesting thing. Most book lovers spoke highly of "The Lonely Star", but the popularity was not as good as "Dragon and Ba Bu".

The evaluation of "The Lonely Star" is basically good, very good, worthy of Sima of the North. Then I will talk about the follow-up development of the plot along the way, and then it will be gone.

For "Dragon Ba Bu", there are endless quarrels, both positive and negative, from the title of the book to the title of the chapter, then the plot, the protagonists, the supporting roles...even some of the dialogues in it have been dug up and quarreled.

However, it is these debates that Wen Congwu read with great interest. In fact, he came to the forum with the intention of watching the excitement, which is also the nature of Chinese people.
As for the quarrel among the book friends, in fact, none of the comments and posts of the big bosses can satisfy everyone overall.

For some reason, almost all the readers were commenting on these two martial arts novels, but no writer came out to comment, and even Baiyu Feng Zijie, who has always been very keen on online reviews, did not post.

In fact, it's not that the writers didn't pay attention to this matter. On the contrary, everyone paid attention to it. It's just that the authors of the two works are celebrities, and who doesn't want to be an early bird.

If the comments are not good, not only will I lose face, but I will also offend these two. Sima Beijie is well-known in the industry for his bad temper. Although Hongwen has a good personality, he is a specialist in face-slapping. Can't see much.

As time went by, there was finally a comment posted as the most popular comment, mainly because the name of the post was very attractive, and the content in the post was barely acceptable to everyone.

[The battle between the two heavens, is the old man's shameful revenge, or the young man killing the god again? 】

Just seeing the title of this post, everyone knew that it was about Sima Beijie and Hongwen. "The Battle of the Two Heavens" naturally referred to their new book, because the first letter of the title of the book had the word "Heaven".

As for the subsequent avenging and killing gods, it will start a long, long time ago.

[Half a martial arts novelist]: I have a dream, to be able to post the first popular post in my lifetime, and I hope that the book friends who click in will help to make more posts.

Let me introduce myself first. I have been an old bookworm for more than ten years. I only love martial arts. Influenced by Mr. Zhao’s "Kunlun", I also wrote martial arts novels excitedly, but I just insisted on writing tens of thousands of words and then gave up. .

If it’s not this material, then just be a reader honestly.

Today our martial arts group is very lively and chaotic. I think everyone has been arguing all morning, and there is no reason for the quarrel, so I couldn’t help but post a post. I have read martial arts novels for more than ten years. I think I can still say a few words.

Many book friends clicked on this post, most of them were attracted by the post name!You can call me a title dog, but I will not talk about the grievances and stalks between Sima Beijie and Hongwen. I will mainly talk about their new book.

Let me first talk about Sima Beijie's new book "The Lonely Star of Heaven". After buying a martial arts magazine, this is the first book I read. I think everyone's choice should be the same as mine!

My feeling after reading "The Lonely Star" can be summed up in one word, good!

The beginning of the chapter is the struggle between sects in the rivers and lakes, the battle between good and evil, with horror and blood in the lines, and the imagination is very impressive.All kinds of conspiracies and calculations are written superbly, which is really enjoyable.

It has to be said that Sima Beijie is number one when it comes to writing about world calculations.

The portrayal of the protagonist also continues his previous style, both good and evil, I can be decent or a devil, boldly predict, the protagonist in the book will definitely be a hero in the future.

I can't predict the specific follow-up plot. After all, I can't figure out the calculations written by Sima Beijie. I can only wait for the next serialization. Anyway, my current sense of anticipation is overwhelming!

I won’t elaborate on the others, a good word means everything, but it’s just good, the routine is a bit old, I still want to see something new.

Next, let’s talk about "Dragon and Babu". To be honest, before reading this book, I was really looking forward to it. I expected Hongwen to write a new style of martial arts novels, just like he wrote a new style for youth novels.

It's just that I was a little disappointed after reading the two serialized chapters of "Tian Long Ba Bu".Disappointment doesn't mean the book was bad, it's that my expectations were too high.

As far as the facts are concerned, although the first two chapters of "Tian Long Ba Bu" are dull, there are still some bright spots, and the quality is definitely high.

When I say this, many book clubs may be dissatisfied. Don't worry, I will explain the points of controversy below.

Controversial point [-]: [What does the title of the book really mean? 】

I am very sorry that book friends put a question mark on the title of "Tian Long Ba Bu", so let me talk about my personal understanding.

When I saw the title of the book for the first time, I thought it was the name of the peerless martial arts in the book, but after reading the text, I gave up this idea.

The title of the book is definitely not peerless martial arts, because the name is a bit low compared to the current martial arts in the book. Think about it, "Beiming Shengong" and "Lingbo Weibu" in Chapter 2 are not better than this name?
Later, I specifically inquired about the information, and found that this term comes from Buddhist scriptures. Many Mahayana Buddhist scriptures describe that when the Buddha preached to Bodhisattvas and monks, eight dragons and dragons often participated in listening to the Dharma.

From the point of view of Buddhism, the Eight Parts are not humans. Although they are not human, they are still one of the sentient beings.They have different personalities and abilities, and they are both gods and demons.

Buddhism defines the eight sufferings of human beings, which basically cover the beginning of all grievances and resentments in the rivers and lakes. After all, human beings are not Buddhas and cannot let go of everything. When they are crossed together, the voicing and turbidity merge, and the disputes are endless.

And Hongwen has researched Buddhism, which can be seen from the Zen in "Wukong Biography". I think he used this as the title of the book, which should reflect the rivers and lakes in the book. After all, the children of the rivers and lakes also have different personalities and abilities. Different, there are good and evil, naturally there will be kindness and resentment, thus deducing the touching story of the rivers and lakes.
So, I think everyone should stop worrying about the title of the book. Don’t you think it’s very interesting?
Argument [-]: [The title of the chapter does not match the content]

My book-reading friends are mainly talking about Chapter 1 in this debate. I personally understand that the title of the chapter and the content of the chapter can be matched.

"Blue shirt" refers to the protagonist's clothes, and everyone has no objection.

"Upright" I think the protagonist Duan Yu should be mentioned. Although his appearance is a bit silly, he is still full of justice, and his style of acting is also aboveboard.

Many book lovers of "A Journey to the Perilous Peak" understand it according to Chapter 2, Duan Yu fell off the cliff, and think that it should be placed in Chapter 2.

I don't think it's right. The plot of Chapter 1 is that Duan Yu is going to Wanchou Valley to report the letter. It is not dangerous for someone else to go to Wanchou Valley to report the letter. But it is very dangerous for the protagonist Duan Yu to go, because his surname is Duan.So it is very appropriate to call it "Xianfeng Tour"!
And don't you think that the title of the chapter is very interesting to read?The reading of the two chapters together is: the green shirt is upright and the dangerous peak is walking, the jade wall is bright and the moon is shining, which is a bit like an incomplete word.

You must know that Hongwen is very good at writing poems, and he is also a member of the Poetry Association. If he writes the chapter titles as poems, and then matches the content of the plot, then I really want to give him a thumbs up.

As for whether it is or not, then we have to wait for the subsequent chapters, I still have a little expectation.

Argument [-]: [The opening plot is too plain]

The opening plot of "Dragon and Babu" is flat, but it is actually just compared with "The Lonely Star", the conspiracy calculations in the opening chapter of "Dragon and Babu", the battle of exterminating the sect, the fighting moves of the characters, etc. are not inferior Less, less attractive.

However, I think that although this opening chapter is plain, it is much better than the opening chapter of "Snowy Knife". In other words, Hongwen's writing skills have been enhanced, and it can be said that he has surpassed the level of Internet writers up.

Let me just give two examples. The first one is the opening chapter "Infinity Sword". The fighting moves and fights are unremarkable, but the description of the details is very good, and the writing style is also very interesting.

The two men competed with swords and fought with all their strength, but they didn't immediately write the winner or loser. Instead, they changed their writing skills and described the expressions of everyone in the hall, especially through the dialogue between the two masters of the East and West to let everyone understand that the winner has already been decided. , this way of writing is not surprising at all.

But then I turned back and continued to describe the sword fight between the two, and the winner was determined.It was an ordinary sword competition, but with a few twists!
And when everyone was confused about the meaning of this fight, they explained the origin and rules of the sword fight again through other people's dialogues.

This kind of description is actually adding a sense of mystery. Think about it, if you directly explain the rules of the sword fight at the beginning, and then describe the sword fight in a bland manner, will it be boring to read?But if the order is reversed in this way, and the turning point turns again, isn't it more interesting to read?

And although martial arts sparring is not very unusual, the dialogue is patchwork and unsteady, and the simple sentences seem to make us feel that dozens of martial arts people are watching the battle, and the words flow smoothly, and the reading is very smooth .

The second is the adventure of the protagonist falling off a cliff. Martial arts novels actually have golden fingers, and the adventure is also an old routine, so there is nothing unusual in terms of the plot.However, Hongwen took a different approach, not focusing on describing adventures, but still focusing on details.

Originally, the main character’s falling off the cliff is very dangerous, but the author writes the scenery and people instead of the danger. The scenery is described very seriously, the novel is picturesque after reading, and the description of the characters is very vivid. It can be said that the actions are picturesque. It's lighthearted.

When writing the scenery, I also write about the people, and when I write about the people, I also write about the scenery.

As far as this writing style is concerned, it can really crush many writers, and I think "Dragon and Babu" is much better than "The Lonely Star" in terms of detailed description.

Of course, even this cannot make up for the mediocre plot of "Dragon Ba Bu".However, the future is promising, Hongwen is still young after all.

Controversy [-]: [The protagonist Duan Yu is too stupid]

The protagonist Duan Yu is quite stupid. At the beginning of the fight, he obviously pretended to fall. He just laughed when he didn't understand.

On this point, if other martial arts novels can directly persuade me to quit, it is thanks to him being Hongwen. But after reading it, I realized that Duan Yu’s laughter was not a ridicule, it was just a true thought in his heart, and it did not contain contempt .

Next, Duan Yu went to mediate the conflict between Wuliang Jianzong and the Shennong Gang beyond his capacity. He had a good heart, but he was too stupid.

People in the arena, big fists are king, and only those with strength can sit down and reason.Fortunately, he has the aura of the protagonist, otherwise he would have burped a long time ago.

Then, when we arrived at Wanqiu Valley, Zhong Ling clearly confessed that he could not mention his real surname. As a result, he said his surname was Duan as soon as they met, and he also explained his real identity to the owner of the valley, Zhong Wanchou. Relationship. Let's eat box lunch!
These two chapters are really hurt by Duan Yuqi, I have seen stupid ones, but I have never seen such stupid ones.

But after I calmed down and re-watched it a few times, I realized the reason for the character of the protagonist.

Duan Yu is the eldest son of Zhennan King of Dali Kingdom. He is of royal blood. Since he was a child, he loved reading and disliked martial arts.

Therefore, he treats the things that the warriors of the Jianghu care about as normal, even if he has obtained the two peerless martial arts, he does not show how happy he is, and he is not even as attractive as the statue of the fairy sister.

And because Duan Yu has a respected status in Dali Kingdom and is a scholar, so he has a peaceful mind and rarely interacts with secular warriors.

I think the author Hongwen's setting of the protagonist Duan Yu should be a man's growth and the cultivation of a man's sense of responsibility.

This is also the usual plot of martial arts novels. A rich and powerful son wanders the rivers and lakes, experiences many hardships, and finally grows into a generation of heroes. During the period, he talks about love with some women.

There is nothing wrong with this setting, but it is definitely not as good as "The Lonely Star".

I can only hope that Hongwen can write something different from the clichéd story!After all, his "Fighting Knife in the Snow" is also flat in the early stage, peak in the middle stage, and majestic in the later stage.

I think it's better for everyone not to jump to conclusions lightly, and we'll talk about it after watching a few more episodes.

It's just that as far as the protagonist is concerned, Duan Yu is not as good as Sikong Xing (the protagonist of the lonely star of Tiansha).

I won't talk about other arguments anymore, I can only see so much, and I will say one last thing, since I wrote "Double Dragon Controversy", it is natural to give points.

Now to start the review and scoring, I plan to start scoring from 6 aspects, each with a full score of 10, and a total of 60 points.In addition, there is an additional point of 1 point (the Writers Association recently pays attention to the morality of writers!)

"The Lonely Star"

Writing: 9 points (Compared with Sima Beijie's writing skills, his ability to write stories is still inferior.)
Storyline: 10 points (full of anticipation, full marks)

Characterization: 10 points (the characters are vivid, especially the character of the protagonist Sikong Xing)

Martial arts description: 9 points (the martial arts moves are very mysterious, and the sparring scenes are also very domineering, but the martial arts skills have not changed much from before)
Martial arts concept: 8 points (From the beginning, it is still a traditional martial arts routine, nothing more than revenge, grievances, and the struggle between good and evil.)
Influence: 10 points (Sima Beijie's influence in martial arts must be full marks)

Morality (additional points): 0 points (no explanation)
《天煞孤星》总得分是9+10+10+9+8+10=56分

"Dragon Babu"

Writing style: 10 points (reasonable, only essay writing at the beginning, "Dragon Ba Bu" is much better than "The Lonely Star")
Storyline: 7 points (the sense of expectation is average, I originally wanted to give 6 points as a passing score, but the chapters and chapters are written very artistically, so add 1 point)
Character portrayal: 10 points (although the protagonist is very silly, but in terms of character portrayal, it deserves full marks)

Martial arts description: 7 points (the sparring moves are unremarkable, but the name of the martial arts uniqueness is very good, 7 points overall)
Martial arts concept: 8 points (From the beginning, it is still a traditional martial arts routine, nothing more than an adventure, a dispute between martial arts schools, and a battle between good and evil.)
Influence: 8 points (Hongwen's influence on martial arts is slightly weaker, and this is the point of impression for "Fighting Knife in the Snow")
Morality (additional points): 1 point (full marks are required for this, even if the Emperor and I are here)
《天龙八部》总得分是10+7+10+7+8+8+1=51分

The scores of the last two works are 56 points to 51 points, the gap of 5 points is a bit big.However, I think it is fairly objective and fair. This is just the beginning. I will watch the progress of the plot and update it in real time.

Everyone reply to the post more, help to top up the popularity, I am very troubled.

[Jiumengtianxing]: The first in the front row, I'll warm you up.After reading it, to be reasonable, the post owner is still very attentive.Judging from the beginning, I look forward to the follow-up story of "The Lonely Star", so your score is still fair.

It's your last whole moral bonus point, you really made me laugh, you are Sima Beijie in the connotation of Chiguoguo.Ha ha!
[Bronze Mirror Reflecting Beauty]: There is no explanation for the morality score of 0, there is nothing wrong with it, the sentence "My son Wang Teng has the talent of a great god", 0 is not a loss.But, let's talk about it, let's talk about it, "The Lonely Star of the Devil" is still very good.There is nothing wrong with giving Hongwen a full score for morality, and it is not too much to give 1 more point just because he helped that elder brother find his son.

【Today and Summer】: I read it carefully, this post must be upvoted.The several points of contention analyzed by the post master are in place, especially the title of the book and the artistic conception of the chapters. I really learned it.Originally, I had a poor sense of "Dragon Babu", but after your comment, I suddenly looked forward to it.

[Communication Internet Speed]: I don't know what you are arguing about?Don't you guys know Hongwen?What does a dull opening represent?
The beginning of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" was very flat, and the writing was not exciting in the middle?
I originally wanted to criticize the post owner, who asked you to give "Dragon Babu" such a low score, but for the sake of morality, forget it first.

[Cao Luo]: Upstairs, I know you're a fan of Hongwen, but we're not arguing, we're just discussing the facts, "The Lonely Star" is better than "Dragon Babu".

You feel your conscience and say, after reading the opening chapter, which one do you want to read more?
In my opinion, the post owner's score is enough to save Hongwen's face, and the moral extra is clearly added because he is afraid that the score of "Dragon Babu" will be too low, so he deliberately added it.

[Doudou is a good baby]: The big man upstairs shut up, what do you mean by saving face?
You big men know how to fight and kill, take revenge and destroy your family.

In my opinion, the storyline of "Dragon Babu" is so good, even the competition is easy to watch, two young men and women are talking about love in the rivers and lakes, how peaceful and beautiful, this is the martial arts I yearn for!I support Hongwen, the main post's score is low and must be changed.

[I haven’t seen Old Qingshan]: Doudou is a girl, right? Jianghu is not what you think. I’m not a fan of Hongwen, nor a fan of Sima Beijie, so let me be fair. "Evil Lone Star" is a bit worse, and the post owner's rating is not a problem.

[Flying Clouds and Watching the Moon]: Although I like Hongwen, the post owner's score is still a conscience.

[Write Yu Xinfeng]: I support the post owner's rating, it's very fair!
When arguing about the superiority of "The Eight Parts of the Dragon" and "The Lonely Star" in the literary forum, Chen Tianhong also felt worried at home. Of course, what he was worried about was not the low score of "The Eight Parts of the Dragon". He didn't care about that at all.

In terms of the martial arts novel model in this world, Chen Tianhong can directly confer gods with "Tian Long Ba Bu", and this conferred gods refers to standing side by side with Bai Yu and Feng Zijie.

And to be reasonable, even the martial arts novels written by them can't compare with "Dragon and Ba Bu", except of course "Kunlun".

Because of the different format of the book, "Dragon Ba Bu" is one of the pinnacle works of the former martial arts master Jin Yong, and also one of the representative works of the new school of martial arts.In the book, Qiao Feng's national righteousness and great chivalry, this kind of martial arts concept does not exist in this world, and it will definitely cause a storm in the martial arts circle.

As for whether the readers are dissatisfied now, or whether Sima Beijie will criticize him because of this, Chen Tianhong is not worried at all, readers will be satisfied as long as they read it, and Sima Beijie...if he dares to provoke him, Chen Tianhong can only beat his son. Then beat the old man.
Chen Tianhong was worried about other things. The boss Miao Mingjie called and sent an invitation card, inviting Chen Tianhong to attend his and Xin'er's wedding.

Chen Tianhong had promised the big brother Miao Mingjie a long time ago about this matter, and it was actually nothing to go, but the date made him a little sad, because he planned to go back to his hometown with his parents on that day.

"Hey, the matter of returning to my hometown can only be postponed for a while, and what I promised to others must be done."

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