After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 175
There are thousands of mansions in Guangsha, only six feet for night sleep, a lot of wealth, and only three meals for a solar eclipse.No matter how lofty the ideal, no matter how exciting the life is, it will eventually return to the ordinary, no matter how high the status of the person is, they will still be contaminated with red dust and fireworks.

As the saying goes, the fireworks in the world are the most soothing to the hearts of ordinary people. The family sits idle and the lights are friendly.

For Chinese people, eating with family is always the most warm moment.
On the small wooden dining table, there are simply two dishes and a medium-sized soup bowl.

The two dishes are very light, one is fried yam with four fungus, the other is fried tofu with eggs, the soup bowl is mung bean porridge, and the staple food is two small bowls of rice.

Sitting at the dining table were two elderly people, eating a simple lunch.

In hot summer, it is very suitable for the elderly to eat light meals, and they should not eat too much fish and meat, which will cause poor digestion
"Old man, can you read your magazine after dinner, don't you know that reading while eating is not good for your stomach?"

Seeing Feng Zijie staring at the magazine while eating, his wife said dissatisfied.

Eating and reading books can affect the digestion and absorption of the stomach. Older people have a poor digestive system, so they should pay more attention.

"It's okay. It's okay. I only drink porridge! Your mung bean porridge today is very good. It's sweet and clear."

Feng Zijie took a sip of the porridge first, and then said in feigned surprise that his eyes were still fixed on the martial arts magazine in his hand.

The name of the martial arts magazine is "Legends of Today and Ancient Times - Martial Arts Edition", so he was naturally reading Chen Tianhong's new book "The Eight Parts of the Dragon".

When he heard the news that Chen Tianhong was going to write martial arts, Feng Zijie was very happy, and even called Cao Xingkui to show off that it made Cao Xingkui feel uncomfortable, thinking that everyone wanted to steal his apprentice.

Cao Xingkui even gave Chen Tianhong a teacher's order because of this matter, let Chen Tianhong go to university, study physics knowledge hard, and must focus on writing science fiction novels, this is his right path.

And Feng Zijie has high expectations for Chen Tianhong since he finished reading "Fighting Knife in the Snow".

Although there is still a gap between this online novel and martial arts novels, it is still a bit of a taste, and trying to write martial arts will be helpful to Chen Tianhong's future writing path.

So Feng Zijie paid close attention to Chen Tianhong's martial arts novels, and made several phone calls during the period, explaining the model of martial arts novels to Chen Tianhong and imparting his own writing experience, which was very troublesome.

Today Feng Zijie went to a nearby bookstore to buy a martial arts magazine, but he only bought one, and did not buy Sima Beijie's "The Lonely Star".

Because he didn't need to read Sima Beijie's new book, they were old friends, and each of them knew the style and setting clearly.

As for whether Sima Beijie would have conflicts with Chen Tianhong, Feng Zijie was not too worried. In his opinion, Sima Beijie would not be able to save face, and that would be too disrespectful.

If Sima Beijie really dared to be shameless, then Feng Zijie would roll up his sleeves and end, and now Chen Tianhong was half an apprentice to him.

Conversely, it doesn't matter whether Chen Tianhong really challenged Sima Beijie on purpose or frivolously, this is a typical old man's mentality of protecting his calf.

He has already finished reading the two chapters of "Dragon Babu" with over 4 words. The reason why he has to read it again during lunch time is because Feng Zijie always feels that something is wrong.

His vision is naturally different from those readers in literary theory. What readers see is whether the plot is exciting or not, while Feng Zijie focuses more on the setting.

The opening chapter of "Dragon Babu" is very ordinary, there is nothing to say about it, but apart from the plot, Feng Zijie revealed the background of the story through the dialogue of the characters in the book, Dali Kingdom, various sects, etc., and he can see the general situation of a Jianghu frame.

Through the framework of this river and lake, we can see that the following chapters of the story are definitely not small. After all, the article said that Dali is just a small country in the southwest, which means that there are other countries.

The rivers and lakes where several countries coexist must be very large, and it may involve power struggles in temples.

Traditional martial arts novels also include some settings, but they are very superficial. It is nothing more than a battle between heroes and corrupt officials.Raising to the national level, conflicts between various ethnic groups, and then sublimating to war, there is no such thing, because they are martial arts novelists, not historical novelists.

Feng Zijie always felt that Chen Tianhong had this idea, and there was such a setting in the later stage of "Fighting Knife in the Snow". Fiction writes a new path.

It’s just that such a setting is difficult to write. After all, the grievances and grievances of the rivers and lakes are completely different from the disputes between the temples. .

Just relying on the foundation of "Fighting Knife in the Snow", it is still far away. Of course, Feng Zijie only has this guess.

"Is it good to drink? Drink two more bowls if it tastes good."

My wife picked up the spoon and added some more to Feng Zijie. It doesn't matter if I drink two more bowls of mung bean porridge in summer.

"Hehe, no problem."

Feng Zijie put down the magazine in his hand, he stopped guessing, he would call Chen Tianhong later to ask about the settings later, besides, with that kid's hand speed, he probably has a lot of manuscripts saved, when the time comes Come and see.

This was Feng Zijie's thoughts at the moment.

He didn't plan to go to the literature forum to comment, because there was no need to comment. Sima Beijie's new book must be the same as before.

As for Chen Tianhong's "Dragon Babu", there is no major problem, the plot is flat?

No, to say it is plain, it is better to say that the plot is beautiful.

There are two more chapters to comment on?Why are you free?
Meanwhile, another family.

On the dining table made of marble, there were also several dishes. The dishes were much richer than those of Feng Zijie and the others. There were meat and vegetables, and even the summer must-have fruit watermelon.

There are also two people at the dining table, just one old and one young.

The old man has a very characteristic appearance, with an upturned nose, giving people the feeling that he likes to see things with his nose. The person with such a face is naturally Mr. Sima Beijie, and the other is his son. King's Landing.

What's interesting is that the father and son didn't move their chopsticks. They each held a martial arts magazine in their hands, and they were both looking at it seriously.

When the magazine Junlin went out to buy watermelon, he stopped by the bookstore to buy it. At that time, there were many people who bought martial arts magazines. For this reason, he was exposed to the sun for more than an hour. When he came back, it was already noon. Dad Sima Bei Jack has lunch ready.

Now the father and father are not thinking about the food, they are all on Chen Tianhong's new book "Dragon Babu", so there is a scene just now.

In terms of reading speed, young people must be faster. Jun Lin was the first to finish reading it. After reading it, he looked up at his father, pursed his lips and wanted to say something, but held back.

Not only did Jun Lin not relax after reading it, but he became even more worried.

He is also a writer. Although he only writes online articles, he has been studying various martial arts novels and trying to write during this time. He has his own understanding of martial arts novels.

As far as the first two chapters are concerned, aside from the plot, the writing is really not bad, and the paragraph structure is clear. At first glance, it is unremarkable and dull, but it is very interesting after careful reading. There are twists and turns, behind the seemingly simple and unpretentious , Buried foreshadowing hidden clues.

Even though Duan Yu, the character who just appeared on the stage, looks dull and silly, but he is very full and vivid, with a proper structure and a strong sense of substitution.

Comparing Junlin with the martial arts novels I wrote recently, the opening plot is slightly better than "Dragon Ba Bu", but the writing style and character creation are far inferior to "Dragon Ba Bu".

"I am improving, and he is also improving! And the improvement is getting bigger and bigger, just these two chapters make me feel frustrated, sometimes I can't accept it."

Junlin sighed inwardly with some unwillingness.

Even though he has been writing novels under the guidance of his father recently, and he is studying hard, his writing ability is much better than before, but in this world, there will always be someone who goes further than you, and the distance will continue to grow.

Sima Beijie didn't know his son's inner thoughts. He was slow in reading texts, and of course he was slow in writing manuscripts. I'm an old man, so please understand.

He had only just read Chapter 2. Unlike his son, Sima Beijie was quite relaxed. As far as the chapter just now was concerned, there was nothing special about it, and the writing was okay.

"My son is afraid of snake bites for one trick, but he is afraid of well ropes for ten years! Do you want to promise Xiao Li to beat that kid together, vent your anger for your son, and vent your anger for yourself?"

While watching Chapter 2, Sima Beijie thought about it in his heart.

Just as the balance was slowly shifting towards the side he was focusing on, a section of the book about [Beiming Divine Art] made Sima Beijie's gaze stop.

[Beiming Shengong]: Zhuangzi's "Xiaoyaoyou" says: In the north of the poor, there is a sea of ​​darkness, and Tianchi is also there.There is Yuyan, whose area is thousands of miles away, and no one knows how to cultivate it.

It is also said: Moreover, if the accumulation of water is not thick, it will be weak to carry a large boat.Cover the cup of water on the col hall, and the boat will be mustard, and the cup will be glued. The water is shallow and the boat is big.

"Who is Zhuangzi? What is "Xiaoyaoyou"? Could it be that kid compiled it himself? Not to mention, it's really good, quite ancient!"

Sima Beijie couldn't help admiring, despite his irritable personality, he usually likes to read books, especially some historical books.

Sima Beijie loves the ancient style very much, as can be seen from the chapters of "The Lonely Star of the Devil".So he likes these classical Chinese sentences written by Hongwen very much.

"That's why this school of martial arts takes accumulating internal energy as the most important thing. Since internal energy is strong, all martial arts in the world can be used by me, just like Beiming. There are all big boats and small boats, and there is no room for big fish and small fish. That's why internal energy is the foundation. trick is the end"

This sentence is the one that really explains [Beiming Shengong], but in Sima Beijie's opinion, it is far worse than the previous two sentences, but when combined together, the artistic conception is very profound.

And in this world, there has never been such an explanation of a martial arts cheat book. Like the martial arts cheat book in "The Lonely Star", it is directly mentioned, after all, the focus is not here.

"This kid has two brushes!"

At this moment, Sima Beijie paid more attention to it.

Since it is called a martial arts novel, exercises and moves naturally account for a large proportion.If this aspect can be written well, it must be a good novel. In terms of this alone, "Dragon Babu" is well written, and it can even be said to be wonderful.

Because of Zhuangzi's "Xiaoyaoyou", Sima Beijie didn't think about it carefully, and he really couldn't write such a meaningful sentence.

And if Chen Tianhong knew what Sima Beijie was thinking, he would definitely laugh his ass off.

"Xiaoyaoyou" is the masterpiece of Zhuang Zhou, a great writer in the Warring States Period in the previous life. The intercepted section of "Fish in the North" is even a Taoist classic. How could the philosophical thoughts and realms in it be written by you, a martial arts novelist, or even a martial arts novelist? The master Jin Yong can only learn from it, not write it.

As for Chen Tianhong's excerpt from the original text, it is because although there is no "Xiaoyaoyou" in this world, there are other Taoist masterpieces, and there are also "Xiaoyao" and "Wuwei", which are similar to "Xiaoyaoyou". Can also explain.

Secondly, the book only borrows a few sentences from "Xiaoyaoyou", not the whole article, and generally no one will pay attention to it.Only people like Sima Beijie who loves ancient styles and have studied historical documents will take a second look.

After another seven or eight minutes, Sima Beijie finished reading the two chapters, and after reading it again, he put away some contempt for Hongwen.

Sima Beijie's arrogance is arrogance, and that's only relatively speaking. He used to despise Hongwen because he didn't like Internet writers. Internet novels are almost all short stories. No matter how good the writing is, it doesn't matter.

But if it was really a good work, Sima Beijie would not criticize it casually.In fact, since he knew Chen Tianhong's real identity, even though he was very upset, he had to admit that this young man was indeed better than his son.

After all, "Country Teacher" and those poems are not something ordinary writers can write, which is one of the reasons why Sima Beijie can bear it until now.

And he rekindled his mind because Chen Tianhong dared to write martial arts novels. This is his field of expertise. Northern Sima, who is known as one of the four great martial arts gods, is not in vain.

Your kid is good at writing science fiction, and he is also good at writing poetry. Sima Beijie admits it, but he is really laughed at when he writes martial arts novels.

But after reading these two chapters, Sima Beijie also hesitated, not because he was afraid, but because he had a sense of expectation in his heart at this time, and he really wanted to see the follow-up plot of "Tian Long Ba Bu". Abnormal.

Because once you have a sense of expectation for a work, it also means that the work you watched is good.

"Dad, what do you think of Hongwen's writing?"

Finally, King's Landing couldn't help but speak.

It's just that Sima Beijie didn't hear his son's voice, he was still recalling those few passages in his mind, besides [Beiming Divine Art], there was also [Lingbo Weibu].
Hongwen's description of the secret books of martial arts made Sima Beijie even think of learning from them.

"dad?"

King's Landing yelled again.

"Huh? What's the matter, son?"

"Let me say, what do you think of the opening chapter of "Dragon Ba Bu"?"

"It's pretty good, um. Not really."

Sima Beijie couldn't react to his son's sudden question, and subconsciously expressed his true thoughts.After he reacted, he felt very embarrassed and then began to deny it. But he didn't know how to explain it.

Just when the awkward atmosphere began to pervade the dinner table, the phone rang, and it was from Sima Beijie, breaking the awkward atmosphere just right.

The call was from Li Xuekai.

"Hey, Xiao Li! What's the matter?"

"Old Duan, is the matter I told you two days ago okay? If you agree, we will inform the reporter."

"Wait a minute!"

This sentence made Li Xuekai on the other side of the phone silent for a long time.

"Old Duan, I read Hongwen's "The Eight Parts of Heaven and Dragons", and the writing is very poor."

"I said wait."

Sima Beijie's tone rose, and then he felt a little stiff. After all, he had a contract with Jincheng, and then he said something else.

"Okay, let's do this first, Xiao Li, I'm eating!"

The phone hangs up.

"Son, let's eat! If you don't eat the food, it will be cold."

Sima Beijie didn't mention the topic just now, and thoughtfully put a braised chicken nugget for his son.

"Well, Dad, you can eat too."

Jun Lin was also smart enough not to continue asking.

In fact, after such a long delay, the dishes are already cold, but does it matter?It doesn't matter at all.

Junlin has already got the answer he wanted from his father. After watching "Dragon Babu", what he worries most is that his father will do irrational things and continue to target Hongwen.But now it seems that his father will not do it unless Hongwen takes the initiative to provoke him.

Sima Beijie's thoughts are true, and what he said to Li Xuekai is also true. He also wants to see the follow-up plot. Like an old dog, it will never make a sound again in this life.

Hearing the busy tone on the phone and Sima Beijie's words echoing in his ears, Li Xuekai looked bewildered. He didn't understand why the irritable Sima Beijie could calmly say "wait a minute" in the face of provocation.

To say that he was worried about Hongwen's new book before, but now that the new book has come out, he bought it and read it immediately.

What kind of thing is that written? The plainness makes Li Xuekai feel no ups and downs in his heart. This can be compared with "The Lonely Star of the Devil", it's just a few blocks away.

At that time, he wanted to make a call the first time after reading it, but after thinking about Ding Senlei's words, Li Xuekai thought about it again, went through his mind carefully, and after making sure that his plan was foolproof, he picked up the phone.

It's just that Li Xuekai never expected that Sima Beijie would refuse again.

"What is this old man worried about? What is he afraid of? The older he gets, the less courageous he is."

Li Xuekai complained, but there was nothing he could do.This plan can only be done with the participation of Sima Beijie himself. If he doesn't come forward, this matter cannot be done.

"Could it be that this book has bright spots that I haven't discovered!"

Li Xuekai's eyes fell on his desk again, on which was the martial arts magazine of Qingcheng Publishing House.

"No, I'll read it again."

Green Orange Publishing House, Office.

Li Man swiped the mouse, browsing the posts on the literature forum.Chen Tianhong didn't care about readers' reaction to "Dragon Ba Bu", that's because he had a bottom line in his heart, and Li Man was not like him.

"Sure enough, the evaluation of "The Lonely Star" is better, alas. The sales of the follow-up "Dragon Ba Bu" may be affected."

Li Man said to herself, it's not that she only cares about the sales volume of martial arts magazines, it's purely a businessman's habit.

In fact, what Li Man is most concerned about is not the sales volume, but the quality of "Dragon Ba Bu". If everyone evaluates Chen Tianhong's new book as better than Sima Beijie's, even if the sales volume is lower than expected, Li Man is still happy.

"Or give Tianhong a call to comfort him."

Li Man thought in her heart, she was worried that Chen Tianhong's comments on the forum would affect his mentality.

After hesitating for a while, Li Man still picked up the phone.However, the dialed number indicates that the call is in progress.
Jinling Community
In the bedroom, Chen Tianhong was on the phone with someone, and the person on the phone was none other than Feng Zijie.

The content of their call is about the follow-up plot setting of "Dragon Babu", which is called an outline if it is replaced by a web novel.

"Tianhong, my suggestion is to enrich the plot as much as possible, write more storylines of grievances and grievances, and focus on describing the fight scenes."

"Ummm..ummm.."

Chen Tianhong nodded, and there was no other words in his mouth, just um, um.

He didn't tell Feng Zijie the follow-up setting, he just briefly talked about the plot of the next ten chapters, but he didn't say the final setting.

Because the great man is for the country and the people, can this be said?
People are imparting experience, and Mr. Feng will be embarrassed if he directly throws out ideas that are one step ahead of the world.

"Tianhong, do you have any follow-up manuscript? I'll help you read it again."

Feng Zijie expressed his final thoughts, he wanted to see the follow-up.

"Yes, yes, I will send you an email right away."

Chen Tianhong did not refuse, and there would be no problem sending the manuscript to Feng Zijie. Given his character, it was impossible for him to leak it online.

"By the way, Tianhong, did you deliberately choose to release the book on the same day as Lao Duan?"

"No! It's really a coincidence."

Chen Tianhong said truthfully that he knew that Lao Duan was Jun Lin's father, or "Wang Teng"'s father.

"Really."

Feng Zijie raised his tone.

"Tianhong, don't worry, I'm here, you're fine even if you do it on purpose. Young man! I understand! Haha, that's it, hurry up and send me the manuscript!"

The phone hangs up.

"This old man."

Hearing this, Chen Tianhong couldn't laugh or cry, although he knew that Feng Zijie's last words were a joke, but he was quite touched in his heart, he could hear Feng Zijie's intention of defending himself.

At the same time, I felt a little embarrassed. Mr. Feng cared so much about himself, so he would be the one to take the blame.
"It should be fine! Taking the blame doesn't necessarily mean taking the blame."

Talking to himself, Chen Tianhong turned on the computer and found the manuscripts of "Tian Long Ba Bu". He didn't send all of them to Feng Zijie, but only sent the chapters of the next issue.

After sending out the manuscript, Chen Tianhong didn't turn off the computer, but turned on the computer, so let's check the news online!

Ten minutes later, Chen Tianhong closed the computer, and there was no special news. As for the question that the readers said that the beginning of "Dragon Babu" was dull, Chen Tianhong didn't even bother to respond.

This is the style of Jin Yong's martial arts novels. The leopard head and phoenix tail, just like cooking, are gradually tasted. At the beginning, you think it is bland and uninteresting, but in fact the big meal comes later.

Thinking of the big meal, Chen Tianhong felt hungry, and a strong aroma wafted over him. He sniffed it. It was the smell of pork knuckle, and it was very badly stewed pork knuckle.
Then came a voice like the sounds of nature, it was my mother's voice.

"Tianhong, come out to wash your hands and eat."

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