After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 96

"Shu Tan, the description of this fight scene is good. Although Xiang Anran's character is not good, he still has two brushes in writing. Even a supporting role has such a high force. I will recharge it later and give you a reward."

After reading the latest chapter of "Ask the Immortal", Du Huaiwen was really in a good mood.

He is a senior fan of fairy tale novels. Although he is only in his 20s, he is already an old bookworm who has read online for 10 years.

He has been obsessed with reading novels since the first day of junior high school. At the beginning, his family would take care of him, for fear that reading novels would delay his study.As a result, this guy was able to rank among the top three in the class every time he took the test, and his family didn't care about him afterwards.

Of course, this is because his family background is very good. He is the kind of person who can go home and inherit the family business even after graduation.

After watching "Ask the Immortal", Du Huaiwen found the ID of the brother called brother on the TT account, and sent him a message.

"Daoran, where have you been and when will you come back! The Chinese New Year is coming soon, and the brothers are still waiting for you to come back to Jujuna."

The message was sent successfully, but he did not receive a reply after waiting for more than ten minutes.

"Which valley did this Li Daoran go to again?"

Li Daoran in Du Huaiwen's mouth is exactly the hiking enthusiast, the young man who likes Lao Huang in "Swords in the Snow" very much.

At this moment, his mobile phone rang, showing that the number belonged to Li Daoran.

"I said yes, I sent you a message and you didn't reply, but called me, what kind of operation are you doing?"

"I'm a monkey, don't mention it. I only have 2G network here, and I can only make calls. I can send and receive messages, but I can't send them out. I'm about to die of anger. I'm reading a wonderful novel, what the hell? Clicking on the next chapter gives me a hint that it is buffering, and it has been buffering for 10 minutes.

Huaiwen, let's not talk about anything else, hurry up and help me read the latest chapter of "Swordsman in the Snow", which is Chapter 22, I am so anxious. "

"The "Fighting Knife in the Snow" has been updated? Didn't the author go to some annual ceremony for youth literature writers? Is it over?"

"Are you so behind in the news? It was over yesterday! A lot of chapters have been updated today, but I can't read them. Don't talk to me. My signal is not good. If you heard it, don't hurry up and read it. Look." Call me to tell me the latest plot progress. I'll change the place first and see if there is internet."

"Okay, okay! Got it. Didn't you get angry a while ago, saying that you would never read this novel again! Say when Lao Huang will be resurrected and when will you read it. Hey. Hey."

Before Du Huaiwen finished his sentence, he heard a beeping busy tone from the phone.

Well, it must be that Li Daoran's network has been disconnected again.

"Forget it, let him have a look."

Du Huaiwen opened the app of Qingcheng Literature Network on his mobile phone, and found the novel "Swords in the Snow" in the bookshelf, and sure enough, he saw that more than ten chapters had been updated, at least thirty to forty thousand words.

"Not to mention, Hongwen's updates have always been very powerful,"

In fact, Du Huaiwen didn't like "Fighting Knife in the Snow" very much. If Li Daoran hadn't been recommending it to him, and Hongwen's reputation was not bad, he wouldn't have read this book at all.

However, he still likes "Shading the Sky" very much, because Du Huaiwen prefers to read novels with magnificent momentum and high-quality protagonists and supporting roles.

And in "Fighting Knives in the Snow", there is only a part where Lao Huang fights with the old leader at the bottom of the lake, which makes him feel good. The scene of the fight between Lao Huang and No. I brought it along, and even wrote Lao Huang to death. At that time, I was so angry that I even posted a post on the literature forum to make a fuss.

In the next few days, Du Huaiwen was angry and stopped paying attention to "Fighting Knife in the Snow". On the contrary, Xiang Anran's "Question of the Immortals" was updated very well in the past two days. Du Huaiwen looked very comfortable.

Open the chapter text of "Fighting Knife in the Snow".

Last time he saw the protagonist Xu Fengnian started to practice martial arts because of Huang's death. The protagonist first learned the sword from Chu Kuangnu, the old leader at the bottom of the lake. endlessly.

The chapter updated this time is that the protagonist’s father Xu Xiao, the king of Beiliang, saw his son learning martial arts and practicing swords without dying. This made him make up his mind, and activated one of the backups he had already arranged for his son, asking the protagonist Xu Fengnian to go to Wudang Mountain to find Wudang Headmaster Wang Chonglou.

This is the chapter that Li Daoran wants to read. The name of this chapter is "The Old Way on the Mountain"

Seeing this name, Du Huaiwen became a little interested.

Among the people who cannot be ignored in the novel, Lao Dao can definitely be ranked first, they are all hidden masters.

"I hope it can bring me a little surprise. It's better to have scenes of masters fighting, otherwise it will be too boring."

Xu Xiao withdrew his hand, took a deep breath, and slowly sold it: "Then you go to Wudang, someone is waiting for you."

Xu Fengnian was surprised and said: "Don't you want me to learn the Yuzhu mentality from Hong Xixiang? It's too embarrassing. I'd rather be scolded by the old chief and be sprayed with spittle than live under the fence of Wudang Mountain. "

Da Zhuguo smiled lightly and said: "How can a little Taoist surnamed Hong have such abilities, what you want to meet is Wang Chonglou, the head teacher of Wudang."

Xu Fengnian was surprised and said: "That old Taoist priest who hid and practiced Dahuang Tingguan? He really once split the Canglan River with a finger of an immortal? This is too magical, unbelievable, unbelievable!"

"Huh? The immortal split a river with one finger?"

Du Huaiwen was reading novels with his back leaning on the chair, but this sentence made him sit up a little bit more straight.

There is another reason why he doesn't like to read "Fighting Knives in the Snow". This novel is classified as a fairy tale novel, but none of the characters in the novel have the skills of a fairy.

Even though the amazing Jian Jiuhuang was described very powerfully, in Du Huaiwen's opinion, he didn't have the skills of a fairy. Maybe the second best in the world is the author's description, so let's not talk about it.

But this sentence gave him a picture, but he didn't know if it was true or if the author had just bluffed.Hongwen is really good at this in this book, saying that a certain supporting role is very good, but the result is all lies.

The next part of the plot is that the protagonist Xu Fengnian went to Wudang Mountain and met the legendary Wang Zhangjiao and the little Taoist Hong Xixiang who made him angry.

The old Taoist smiled kindly and said: "The world's swordsmanship is divided into standing sword, walking sword and sitting sword. The difficulty is increasing, but the height of the final achievement is uncertain. I wonder if His Royal Highness wants to learn standing sword or walking sword?"

Xu Fengnian said flatly, "I'll practice the sword."

Hong Xi who made the tea seemed to roll his eyes.

The old Taoist said kindly: "Swordsmanship and swordsmanship lead to the same goal by different routes. They all follow the way of hand-to-hand combat. Like that Mrs. Deng, who just carried a peach blossom, you can talk about swords or knives.

If you want to learn standing sword, in simple terms, you have to stop and stop more swords, and the sword is more swift and violent, like a thunderbolt in winter, and if you don't make a sound, you will already be a blockbuster.Walking with a sword is heavy walking, continuous, like the surging summer rain and splashing ink.
Du Huaiwen just rolled his eyes when he saw this plot, what ah!This is very nice to say, standing sword, walking sword and sitting sword.Why don't you write martial arts novels, you are a fairy, do you know what a fairy sword is?

Du Huaiwen is also an admirer of the sword fairy. If the sword in "The Sword in the Snow" is changed to a sword, he will be more interested.

Resisting the urge to complain, he continued to read.

Xu Fengnian hesitated for a moment, then asked in a low voice: "Sect Master Wang really split the Canglan River with one finger?"

The old Taoist shook his head and said, "No."

Xu Fengnian was relieved, since the ranking of the old man in front of him is not as good as that of Wang Xianzhi, it is always a good thing that his magical powers are weak.

"I just knew it! Hongwen, you bastard, I believe you and I'm a bastard! Every time I write about how amazing a person is in the front, the result is not so fake, or I don't focus on the description, or else Just write it to death. I won’t serve you anymore, so I don’t want to read it.”

Du Huai was so angry that he almost dropped his phone.

The most annoying thing about reading novels is that the author makes a supporting role very strong, but after meeting, it turns out that it is a waste of fame, or else it will die after seeing the protagonist, which will completely shatter the readers' sense of expectation.

This is like a short story about a girl who was worried that her breasts were not plump enough, so she was very hesitant to face her boyfriend's marriage proposal.

Boyfriend asked her if she was as big as an orange?
The girl thought for a moment, nodded very positively and said: Yes.

As a result, at the wedding night in the bridal chamber, the boyfriend rushed out of the bridal chamber and cursed: Damn it!Are kumquats considered oranges?

Du Huaiwen was about to withdraw from the text angrily, and he wanted to remove "Fighting Knife in the Snow" from the bookshelf.

At this time, he suddenly found that the page on the screen of his mobile phone showed 10/11, which meant that there was one more page, not less than this second. Du Huaiwen clicked on the screen of the mobile phone.

Then, this guy swears directly.

"Hongwen, I XXXX your uncle!"

I saw only one sentence on the next page.

Hong Xixiang muttered, "It's two fingers."

　The word count is stuck, the original text has too many dialogues, so I extracted it and changed it a little!Thank you all for your votes!
　　


(End of this chapter)