After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 97 Goldfinger in the Snow
The immortal guides the way and cuts the river.
An old Taoist with white hair and a childlike face, with a fairy-like face, stood proudly against the wind, but there was a sharp light in his somewhat cloudy eyes. In front of him was a magnificent river.

The waters of the Canglan River are turbulent, howling and roaring, like a mad beast devouring people.

The old Taoist stood silent for a long time. After a long time, he let out a light sigh, stomped his feet, and stood up in the air.

Simultaneously with fingers and swords in both hands, a whole body of big yellow court is impressively condensed on the fingertips.At this moment, the withered fingers gave people a full sense of oppression.

The old Taoist tapped his fingertips, and a sword qi shot out, piercing like a rainbow. This sword qi was like wind, like rain. It cut the river and broke the river. After the river was split, it would close again. The old Taoist The person pointed out another finger, and the Canglan River stopped flowing.

This is the picture that came to Du Huaiwen's mind. Although the novel did not describe the demeanor of the old head teacher Wang Chonglou breaking the river with two fingers, he can imagine it.

Not to mention, the immortal cut off the river with one finger, and Du Huaiwen's heart was agitated when he read the seven characters.

"Hongwen! I forgive you."

After reading this chapter, Du Huaiwen didn't call Li Daoran to tell him about the plot.Instead, he clicked on the next chapter directly, and he wanted to know the follow-up.

I would like to see Wang Chonglou, the second in the world, the veteran Taoist who even broke the river with two fingers, is behind him. I don't know what kind of demeanor and skill he has.

The plot continues to look down, the protagonist Xu Fengnian is not alone when he goes to Wudang Mountain, but also brings a maid named Jiang Ni.

Jiang Ni is not an ordinary maid, she was originally Princess Taiping of Western Chu, her mother was given a white silk by Xu Xiao to commit suicide.It can be said that he bears the hatred of the country and the family, and has always hidden a "magic charm" in his sleeve, and has always wanted to assassinate Xu Fengnian.

For this character, Du Huaiwen was very upset. He didn't understand why the author created such a character.Obviously the protagonist knows that she wants to assassinate him, so it's fine if he doesn't kill the grass and roots, and he has to take it with him.

It can only be said that Du Huaiwen was a little confused about some of the plots in the early stage of this book in Xuezhong, but he didn't care. He just went to the literature forum to read the comment posts later. Mr. Bai Yufeng will definitely explain confused.

After the plot, Princess Liyang Suizhu also came to Wudang. She came to see her fiancé, the protagonist Xu Fengnian.

In the end, there was a conflict with Jiang Ni, but Xu Fengnian was furious when he saw this. Jiang Ni bullied him so much that others could not bully him.If Wang Chonglou, the head teacher of Wudang, hadn't stopped him, he would probably call Beiliang Tieqi to step down the princess of Liyang.

"Why do I feel that this setting is so awkward!"

The Du Huaiwen I read in this passage is unclear again. One is the noble princess of Liyang, and the other is the subjugated princess who wants to assassinate him. Any fool knows how to choose, but the protagonist in the book chooses the latter .

The following plot made Du Huaiwen even more complaining. Jiang Ni wrote "Sworn to Kill at the Great Geng's Corner under the Moon" on Wudang Mountain, and the last sentence was "Jiang Ni swore to kill Xu Fengnian".

"What the hell is Hongwen writing about! And this Jiang Ni, the protagonist saved her, but made her even more murderous."

Thanks to the demeanor of the old Taoist Two Finger Duanjiang just now, otherwise Du Huaiwen would have simply abandoned the book based on this plot.

Wudang head teacher Wang Chonglou skimmed onto the boulder, sat down on his knees, looked at the bottom of the pool, and smiled.

Close your eyes.

Exhale lightly, inhale lightly.

The mist on the surface of the water rose into the air and filled the air.

With a wave of his sleeves, the Taoist robe fluttered violently, and it actually pulled the falling waterfall over.

The waterfall leans like a bridge.

From this, it can be seen that Erzhi Jiejiang is just a small example of his old age.

"Well, that's right, write more scenes like this, and don't fix those incomprehensible settings!"

Finally saw that Wang Chonglou was going to teach martial arts to the protagonist Xu Fengnian, and Du Huaiwen felt much less discomfort just now.

I saw Wang Chonglou breathing into the dantian from the hut, closing his eyes and contemplating, submerged in concentration, full of energy, and his whole body was shining brightly like the Taoist immortal in the ancient books.

"Five-colored clouds and twilight, I closed my eyes and looked at myself, only then did I realize that my body is full of caves, and it turns out that Huang Ting is a blessed place..."

Every time he said a word, the old Taoist spit out a golden complexion from his mouth, lingering in the world.

In the end, a total of ninety-nine and 81 golden qi coiled around the water dragon of the main waterfall and blasted into the deep pool together.

This waterfall is the practice of this old Taoist all his life.

And the protagonist Xu Fengnian is in the middle of the waterfall, and has fallen into a coma at this moment.

"That's not right! This is so wrong! This is not teaching Da Huang Ting, it's teaching martial arts! I'm tricking you. Hongwen, this is a routine for martial arts novels!"

This episode made Du Huaiwen unable to sit still. If we look at the process of imparting qigong in the novel, the person who imparts qigong can spend all his cultivation at least, or die at worst.

Sure enough, the following plot is exactly this routine.

After a day and night.

The old Taoist priest in charge looked as usual, but Hong Xixiang knew very well that it was the twilight time for the elder brother to return to the light, at most two or three years.

Wang Chonglou suddenly said in a soft voice: "Junior brother, let's compete? We haven't competed for many years. Uh, it's about distance."

Hong Xixiang seemed to be facing a formidable enemy, and said nervously, "Isn't it good?"

"Don't you dare?"

"Compare to compare!"

I saw two Taoist priests of the highest seniority in Wudang do something shocking to the world on the edge of the cliff on the Xiaolianhua Peak.

pee!

The old head teacher sighed and said: "Back then, I pissed ten feet against the wind, but now I'm old and my shoes are wet. I'm old, I'm old, I can't be convinced."

So far, the updated chapter of "Fighting Knife in the Snow" is over.

The plot of peeing was originally considered funny, but Du Huaiwen felt sad watching it, especially the sentence
"Back then, I peed ten feet against the wind, but now I'm old but my shoes are wet."

This clearly pointed out the old head teacher's sunset and west mountain.

"Why on earth is this? Why didn't the protagonist come up to the mountain to learn swordsmanship? How did the plot develop like this! Such a godlike character, why is the curtain ending right after his appearance? Hongwen, you deserve it!"

After thinking about it, Du Huaiwen still couldn't figure out the development of the plot, so he opened the literature forum.

In the Xianxia group, Baiyu Feng Zijie's comment post is still the most popular.

[Not repairing]: Mr. Feng, hurry up and update the review post!I really didn't understand this wave of operations in the snow!

[Who am I]: I didn't understand it either. I was waiting for the follow-up story of this fairy character, but in the end, he was directly abolished.

[Love to watch Xianxia]: Do you think it is necessary to watch Xuezhong? I am really uncomfortable. What is the setting of the plot!Seeing people in a cloud of mist, finally there are a few exciting points, but Jian Jiuhuang is gone, Wang Xianzhi is only in the description, and the new two-finger Duanjiang fairy character is so crippled.

[Blood Sea]: Who said it wasn't that? The person who got it wanted to abandon the book, but also wanted to know the follow-up. I was so entangled in reading it, it was really uncomfortable!Wait for Mr. Feng's comment.

[Fleeing Years]: Same as above, sit and wait.

Seeing these posts, Du Huaiwen sent a post, and he was in the same mood as everyone else.

[Jianyou Dangu]: Wait!

Two hours later, Du Huaiwen and the others finally waited for the update of Baiyu Feng Zijie's post. I have to say that this old man really likes this novel. He updated his comments on Xuezhong very quickly, but he didn't comment on "Ask the Immortal" for a few days. With a review once.

"Seeing that everyone is urging me to update the post, I just finished reading the latest chapter. Don't gossip, let's go straight to the topic.

"From the current point of view, the overall setting and main line of Xuezhong are still not fully understood, and the current main line is still the growth of the protagonist.

Let me first talk about the routine and writing style of online novels.

Writing online plots is flesh and blood, writing is the bones, character creation is the soul, and golden fingers are the eyes.

At present, the plot in Xuezhong is still slightly insufficient, but there are many foreshadowings buried.For example, everyone has always disliked the setting of the character Jiang Ni.

But I said that this is definitely a big foreshadowing in the future, and it is likely to be one of the main lines in the text. It is impossible for the author to spend so much ink on a maid for no reason.

Jiang Ni's identity is the princess of the subjugated country, and she has a beautiful face. Coupled with the protagonist's attitude towards her, I think it is very likely to be one of the heroines.Of course, the plot has not really unfolded, so we have to wait until there are more words in the follow-up.

As for Xue Zhong's writing style, I won't say anymore, it's excellent, and the more you write, the better.

There is also character creation, which I will not describe in detail. From the current characters, whether it is the Beiliang king Xu Xiao, Jian Jiuhuang, the old leader Chu Kuangnu, and the Wudang head teacher Wang Chonglou who just appeared on the stage, then One is not to impress everyone.

Next, I will focus on cheating, which is what the author wants to express in the latest chapters today.

As we all know, the very important setting of online novels is the golden finger. Whether the novel can have a bright spot to attract readers, the rationalization of the plot, and even the promotion of the entire main line rely on this golden finger.

I was not optimistic about Xuezhong in the early stage because of this. Before today's chapter, the protagonist did not have a golden finger, at most he had the identity of the prince of Beiliang.But this identity is far from enough. This is not the case in historical novels where noble status and resourcefulness make one invincible.

Xianxia novels ultimately rely on the protagonist's own strength. Everyone has already seen that the protagonist in the novel is not a playboy, and he is also very smart. He is also very talented in martial arts, and he is also very hardworking.But no matter how good your talent is, you can't afford to waste it.

For the sake of his father, the protagonist in the book has never held a sword before, and only after Jian Jiuhuang died did he start practicing swords.

And the emphasis on martial arts is that it is best to practice from an early age, so the protagonist actually missed the best time to practice.But the plot always has to be promoted, which is why Xu Fengnian's trip to Wudang Mountain was said to be to practice martial arts. In fact, his father had negotiated with an old Taoist.

Wudang Mountain is in Beiliang, and the protagonist's father is the king of Beiliang.The life goal of the old Taoist is not to ascend to immortality, but to prosper Wudang.

So it should be a deal with the King of Beiliang, I will pass on my cultivation to your son, and you will protect my Wudang prosperity.

There is also a foreshadowing here, that is, the young Taoist priest Hong Xixiang, I dare say that he will definitely be an important figure in the book in the future.

The character of this little Taoist priest is a bit timid. He likes Xu Fengnian's sister very much but dare not go down the mountain. He keeps saying that the woman down the mountain is a tiger.

He is obviously very talented in cultivating Taoism, but he does not do his job properly every day.So old Taoists don't need to cultivate, and passing the position of head to this little Taoist priest is also adding a burden to him. That's what the phrase shoulders the Tao.

Speaking of which, everyone understands, the big yellow court where the old Taoist has been cultivating for decades is the golden finger for the protagonist.

Although the protagonist can't suddenly become like an old Taoist with two fingers.But this is the foundation, and it also makes up for the time wasted by the protagonist before.Everyone can understand it as giving the protagonist a pool. Even if you use up the water in the pool, the pool is still there and can be filled again.

Generally speaking, there is no problem with the setting, but it is a pity that there is an unparalleled character.

Personally, I still like the old head teacher very much. After decades of sitting and practicing, I have become a yellow court.Immortals can kneel with one finger, and cut off the river with two fingers.Not for the rivers and lakes disputes, only for my Wudang Dangxing. "

　This chapter is so tiring!The early stage in the snow is really hard to watch!I will try my best to explain it to everyone!I changed the original a lot.If you have different opinions, welcome to criticize!Thank you for recommending tickets and subscribing for support!

　　


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