tearjerker director

Chapter 966

"Huh!" Chen Wen let out a long breath, and then looked at Li Yi with a strange expression on his face.

"You really wrote this?" Chen Wen looked at Li Yi suspiciously.

The others also looked curious.

"Ang, what's the problem?" Li Yi asked.

"It's a big problem, okay, I always feel that this doesn't look like your handwriting." Chen Wen looked puzzled.

"What do you think?" he asked the others.

Zhou Guo and Lin Yunbin both nodded in unison and said, "It really doesn't look like Director Li's handwriting."

"Okay, I know this script is a bit rough, isn't this here for everyone to brainstorm, and you can come up with anything you want to say." Li Yi said helplessly.

"Then I'm not being polite?" Chen Wen was the first to attack.

Li Yi made a gesture of please.

"Ahem, first of all, I think it's the timeline of the background. Since you're taking the evacuation of overseas Chinese as the background, the timeline should be in the near future. But in your script, the issue of demolition, first of all, the chaos of forced demolition seems to be It happened more than ten years ago? Now when everyone thinks of demolition, the first thing that comes to mind is to send it out!
It can be said that the relocated households are almost the envy and envy of countless people nowadays, so is this plot arrangement a bit out of date?

After all, according to the plot of your story, the Leng Feng in it was imprisoned for three years because of forced demolitions and killing people, and then went out for two years, which adds up to only five years.

I'm not a professional screenwriter, but from the perspective of an ordinary audience, I would think, what time is it, does this kind of thing still exist? "

Everyone else nodded when they heard the words.

Li Yi was also a little embarrassed, not to mention, he was indeed negligent about this matter, mainly because he forgot about the timeline.

First of all, the filming time of this movie in my memory is relatively early.

Secondly, ten years earlier, forced demolitions were indeed a very serious problem, so he took it for granted that he ignored the past.

"Continue!" However, Li Yi didn't say anything, but signaled Chen Wen to continue.

After all, they were here today to discover the problem.

"Actually, I think if this plot really needs to be used, then let Leng Feng sit in prison for a few more years, so that the timeline can be pushed forward a little bit. It's not a big problem, but there is one more thing, This is actually quite sensitive. After all, the incident itself is too dark. Of course, if you are talking about it, I think it is not difficult for your work to pass the review, so let’s not talk about it.

It's still the plot of forced demolition, according to your story, the demolition gangster came up, took out a black star and put it on Leng Feng's head.

I don't know what you think, this BUG is too low-level, right?
Please, is this in the Celestial Dynasty, not in America, where there is a black star so casually?
It's fine if there is a black star, or is it just used for forced demolition?
Later, he gave Leng Feng a shit bowl and told the police, Comrade, he has a gun!
Is there such a thing as a bully?Pointing guns at active-duty soldiers in broad daylight?Turning black and white face to face?
Just go for robbery or kidnapping, anyway, you will die anyway.

What I feel here is: just like what the gangster said when he held a gun against the cold front: he really takes himself seriously, doesn't he?

I think this is too deliberate, and it gives the impression that it is entirely because the intention is to make things bigger first, which will lead to the scene of action later, but I really think this plot is a bit of a joke and broken, you just go out and ask someone People, even in the era of frequent demolition incidents, but when you take out a gun and there are so many people, you still aim at a soldier. Is this really what you wrote? "

What Chen Wen said made Li Yi feel a little ashamed, but, thinking about it carefully, it really is.

What kind of country is Huaguo?
Illegal possession of a gun is a felony, and it is almost, not almost, but absolutely zero tolerance.

Huaguo, as the safest country in the world, can be said to have a lot to do with strict control in this area. Ten or twenty years earlier, when there was no such absolute control, it was indeed not so everywhere safety.But what time is it now?

It can be said that the vast majority of people will never touch such a sharp weapon in their lifetime, at most they just look at it.

And the hooligans were indeed very arrogant in the past, but even ten years ago, no one really dared to be so arrogant, so there is indeed a bit.
"Does it feel a bit too Hollywood?" Zhou Guo couldn't help but echoed.

Li Yi came to a sudden, not to mention, the original plot, many places are indeed learned from Hollywood.

It is almost impossible to draw a gun at every turn. In China, that is almost impossible.

Unless it is a heinous criminal, no one would dare to do this.

"Continue!" Li Yi took a pen and wrote it down in his notebook.

"As for the bullet that killed Long Xiaoyun, you didn't explain why Leng Feng went to Africa to find the source of the bullet, and why he didn't go to America, Europe or other places? It seems that it was purely to connect with the incident of the African Sahara. Get up, did you deliberately plan to go to Africa to find bullets?"

"One more thing, the question of three views, Leng Feng is a soldier, at least he used to be a soldier, but Tudou stole the Moutai from Qianbida shop, what you wrote here is that Leng Feng smiled after seeing it, why do I think he seems to be encourage this behavior?
Is this retaliation for the $300 short payment by Champida?

But this is an act of stealing, isn't it too strange?Encourage stealing?Instead of severely curbing it?Even a look is fine. "

It was the first time everyone saw Chen Wen turning into a troll and spraying Li Yi with blood, so it was quite interesting.

But I have to say that this script, if you really look into it, the problem is really big.

However, Chen’s questioning was not over yet, and he seemed to enjoy the spraying, and continued: “If the previous ones are just trivial details, then the captain and Ambassador Fan are arguing behind.

The captain emphasized that combatants are prohibited from entering the combat zone, and then suddenly said that one person must complete the task alone.

I especially don't understand why it can't be 2 people?Or is it a group?
Is it just to highlight personal heroism?
It is necessary for "one person" to stand up and apply for the "impossible" task of entering the war zone.

Then, Leng Feng set off in a brand new car, and "no allies, no weapons"?
Not even giving him a bulletproof vest?Just gave him a pair of sunglasses?What if you really give him guns and ammunition?Can the United Nations follow suit?Why are our warships so picky on compatriots who voluntarily return to the war zone and bring back their compatriots?Is it to highlight the strength of the unarmed wolf warrior?But he also gave him a satellite phone, because you said later that Leng Feng used the satellite phone to contact the captain.Um, are satellite phones more sensitive? "

"And, and"

Chen Wen turned into a troll almost non-stop, and caught Li Yi in a burst of trolling.

Li Yi couldn't help but wonder, is there really so many flaws?

He suspected that Chen Wen was deliberately looking for an opportunity to spray himself?

(End of this chapter)