tearjerker director

Chapter 967 Director Dog, You Have Today Too

It's no wonder Li Yi was suspicious, after all, Chen Wen sprayed too hard.

And the key is that Li Yi didn't know how to refute each of them, and he asked for it himself, so he had to listen to it with tears in his eyes.

But I have to say that Chen Wen, these well-known film stars, are indeed very skilled. He can find so many detailed problems directly after reading the script. kinds of awards.

Although I don't say I can't forget it, but this memory is really outstanding.

And others, no less.

After all, such an opportunity is rare!

However, Chen Wen was obviously not completely satisfied, and quickly continued: "Not only that, but also, the mercenary boss here, I didn't know who Dr. Chen was before, but he showed his photo later, I don't know Understand, does he know or not?"

"Also, the most incomprehensible thing for me is that when the mercenary you wrote pointed a gun at Dr. Chen, the latter shook his head. I admit that survival is a human's instinctive desire. But the other party said that the target is Dr. Chen Just arrest him and leave, why are you doing so many tricks? Seeing so many patients and doctors become hostages, Dr. Chen should know that he must be arrested because he has the virus vaccine, and he will not die. Can't you stand up and go with the mercenaries? You can save so many people, and it's impossible to hide it. You really wrote this script?"

Chen Wen looked suspicious, and the others also looked at Li Yi suspiciously.

Li Yi also scratched his head a little bit, what the hell, to be honest, he didn't think about it that much before, but after such an analysis, it seems, probably, indeed, maybe, it's really a bit ridiculous.

"That's probably all. After all, I've only read it once." Chen Wen shrugged.

"Ahem, everyone speak freely, you can say anything you want." Although Li Yi was sprayed repeatedly by Chen Wen, he didn't have much reaction. After all, he really didn't write the script, it's just It can be said that popcorn movies, if you really want to go into the details, you can indeed find a lot of trouble.

One thing to say, one thing to say, it does make Li Yi also feel that there is some reason for so many people to criticize this movie as being overrated.

"Let me also talk about it. I just watched it once. Let me talk about what I don't quite understand. First of all, the scene between the sea and the pirates. You are the first time that Leng Feng jumped into the sea. I don't know much about it." I understand. The broadcast on the ship said that everyone entered the cabin to take refuge, but the protagonist Leng Feng rushed out and jumped into the sea immediately. Would it be too abrupt, as if he knew that the pirates were coming, and he was the special soldier and the savior? Is it possible? Give me a process? For example, the protagonist Leng Feng is sleeping and wakes up when he hears gunshots. He takes the weapon (rope) he used to tie up the pirates in the sea, goes out to the side of the ship to see the situation, hides the bullets, and then gives a close-up of thinking. Wouldn't it be more reasonable to jump into the water with a run-up and lay down these foreshadowings?"

Li Yi thought about it, and the scene of this movie appeared in his mind. This, it seems, is indeed a problem.

He wrote it down again in his notebook.

"Is there any more?" Li Yi asked again.

"Yes, Leng Feng and his African brothers were drinking, grilling, and playing football. Why did the rebels and machine guns come all of a sudden? Didn't the rebels fight all the way? Didn't they shoot when they came to the beach? This suddenly also set It's too sudden, okay?
Moreover, if this is a country in war, surely the rebels wouldn't start fighting from here?Then what I can't understand is, if the rebellion has already started, why can the protagonist and these people still wear shawls and eat barbecue so calmly? "

"I just think that the second-generation children of that factory have a very strange attitude. In a foreign country like Africa, when they meet an obvious Chinese like Leng Feng, not to mention that fellow villagers see fellow villagers, they have tears in their eyes, but they will not point a gun at Leng Feng. Your head?" Lin Yunbin couldn't help but ask.

"Let me just say that it's unrealistic to be shot by a poisonous arrow and fall down without being able to shoot. Although we often describe it as seeing blood seal the throat, in fact, where is there really such a thing that can kill people instantly?" Poisoned arrows? Unless it is a real physical throat seal, otherwise," military adviser Lin Jianyan couldn't help but said.

Everyone talked and pointed out what they thought was unreasonable one by one, which made Li Yi a little confused.

Is this so exaggerated?

Of course, many of them are not that important, but Li Yi knows that if a movie is to be shot well, the details are really important.

And the story also needs to follow basic logic.

Li Yi felt a little bit resigned. After all, with so many flaws, if they really changed all of them, it would definitely be a big project.

Especially if more than one Leng Feng is dispatched, then the whole movie and the plot of the whole story will have to be readjusted.

This is a personal heroism movie, if other fighters are added, it will inevitably become a group show.

Wouldn't that be "Operation Red Sea"?

Compared with "Operation Red Sea", it can be said that there is almost no drama from beginning to end. Li Yi may not be able to make this kind of movie like the original version.

After all, there is a specialization in the art industry, even if Li Yi has the original version as a reference, it is really impossible to reproduce the original version of this kind of shootout film after shooting.

"Brother Wen, since you have found so many problems, then give me some ideas to solve them." Li Yi looked at Chen Wen and said.

"I'm just an actor, okay? I'm not a screenwriter, let alone a script doctor. Are you asking Yu Blind?" Chen Wen couldn't help but rolled his eyes.

Lin Yunbin interjected and said, "You are worried that sending more people to the rescue with Leng Feng will affect the follow-up main plot and the style of the whole movie. To block the attack, so the others stay to block the pursuers and let Leng Feng go? In this case, wouldn't it be more reasonable?"

Li Yi Wenyan also began to think.

Not to mention, Lin Yunbin's suggestion is really worthwhile.

First of all, it is really unreasonable to send only one person to fight alone. People will think, what's the matter?Is there no one left in our navy?
Therefore, one more team can be sent to the rescue with Leng Feng, but as Lin Yunbin said, the film does not want to become a group play, but to highlight the leading actor Leng Feng, so it is necessary to deal with this team, such as on the way When encountering siege and interception, or knowing certain news, but must be intercepted, so he stayed behind and let Leng Feng take the first step.

In this case, the change in the main line of the plot is not particularly big.

Of course, Li Yi had to consider comprehensively how to change it.

However, to be honest, he started to retreat from the game.

(End of this chapter)