Qiankun Storyteller

Chapter 5
What Su Wen thought was right, Wu Song's arrogance made everyone's blood boil with enthusiasm, and he contributed a few more auras to him.

Su Wen also struck while the iron was hot, and continued: "Wu Song laughed loudly, and walked straight up the hill, completely ignoring the shopkeeper shouting from behind how fierce and terrifying that eye-catching white-fronted tiger is.

At that time, it was Shen time, the sun was half-set, and dusk was approaching, Wu Song strode forward. After walking for a while, he finally got drunk and became hot all over. Go to the chaotic forest. "

"Why are you still drunk?"

"Nonsense, drink eighteen bowls and see if you are drunk?"

"Ordinary people pour three bowls of this wine, but Wu Song drank eighteen bowls in a row, so it's only natural that he gets a little drunk."

"Cut, it's about to fall. How can you tell it to know Wu Song? I'm afraid it's going to be that big bug's lunch?"

Hearing Su Wen say that Wu Song was drunk, everyone in the audience immediately became dissatisfied.

Are you dissatisfied?
Not so much, right?

As for, quite as for!
Because the passage of Wu Song's drunkenness is an unusual description in the novel.

Why break the rules?

That is to say, the role setting and the actual development conflict and contradict each other, forming a plot that is difficult for the audience to accept.

For example, the opening setting of a character is a peerless expert, the kind of person who is in the air every second of every day, as strong as the positioning, as high as the force, but with the development of the plot, this peerless The strength of the expert is getting weaker and weaker. Anyone who comes out can step on him, and finally dies in the hands of some low-level players.

This is an exception. The development of the plot conflicts with the setting of the characters, contradicting itself. The character who was originally praised to the sky is trampled into the mud. How can the audience accept this?

Su Wen is okay, it's just that the drunkenness has caused the stamina to increase. Although there is a conflict with Wu Song's previous massive setting, it is not serious, and the audience in the audience is only slightly dissatisfied.

If he followed the original narration and told about the psychological change of Wu Song's bravery before timidity, the audience in the audience would definitely throw him off the table on the spot.

This kind of serious out-of-the-box description has exceeded the acceptance range of the audience.

Therefore, modification is necessary, even if it takes a lot of precious aura.

As for why you didn't delete the section about getting drunk...

The plot needs it!
Although some plots will make the audience dissatisfied, they are necessary factors for the development of the plot. They cannot be deleted, revised and discarded, but their "toxicity" can only be reduced as much as possible.

As long as it doesn't touch the bottom line of the audience, those "poisonous" plots can be reluctantly accepted.

The episode of Wu Song's drunkenness is the best example. Everyone is just dissatisfied, not really angry.

The next step is to see Su Wen's follow-up performance.

If the follow-up performance is appropriate and attracts everyone's attention, then this paragraph is not a problem.

But if the follow-up performance is not good and this dissatisfaction grows, then Su Wen will definitely be booed off stage by everyone.

Su Wen also knew the key to this matter, so he immediately quoted the following: "Wu Song suffered from alcoholism and stepped into the chaotic forest. Suddenly he saw a big shiny bluestone, so he wanted to lie down and rest for a while, and took a nap for a while. See a gust of wind howling!"

"Ok?"

"That is……?"

Su Wen's voice hung high, everyone's eyes froze, and the atmosphere suddenly became tense.

"What is that?"

Without waiting for everyone to respond, Su Wen replied: "Wu Song immediately turned over, stood on the bluestone, looked towards the source of the sound, and saw that the sky was dark, the sand was flying and the stones were flying, and a hanging bird was thrown out of the chaotic forest. Eye-catching white-fronted worm! It’s exactly:

The wind is raging at Jingyang Gang, and the sun is cloudy and hazy for thousands of miles.

The flames are all over the river, the maple leaves are red, and the grass buds are yellow everywhere.

The eye-catching sunset hangs in the forest, and invades the cold mist that fills the sky.

Suddenly there was a thunderclap, and the king of beasts flew out of the mountainside.

With their heads raised and their teeth and claws eagerly displayed, the elk in Taniguchi are all running.

Foxes and rabbits sneak in the mountains, and roe deer monkeys in the stream are frightened and panicked.

Bian Zhuang lost his soul when he saw it, but he was courageous when he was filial!
……

There was silence in the audience, and it took a moment to see a reaction.

"it is good!!!"

Everyone cheered in unison, full of applause.

"What a white-fronted bug with hanging eyes!"

"Flying sand and rolling stones, the sky is dark and the ground is dark, this tiger probably has become a spirit?"

"That Wu Song is so drunk, half-drunk, how can he defeat this eye-catching white-fronted tiger?"

"Hurry up, let's continue!"

Everyone yelled loudly, and the hooligans sitting in the front row even stood up, impatiently urging Su Wen on the stage.

Su Wen would not entertain everyone at this moment, and immediately said: "Then what the shopkeeper said is not bad, there is indeed a big white-fronted bug with eye-catching eyes on Jingyang Ridge.

Seeing the ferocious claws and fangs of the tiger, Wu Song felt awe-inspiring. Most of his drunkenness disappeared immediately, and he confronted the fierce tiger standing on the bluestone. "

"I know this trick, call it, what is it called putting on airs?"

"When you encounter a tiger in the mountains, you must not run away. Only by threatening it can you have a chance!"

"Fart's lifeline, can you scare that big bug?"

"that is!"

"Shut up, listen to you or listen to Mr."

Everyone was discussing in the audience.

Su Wen, who entered the rhythm, didn't care, and said directly: "As the saying goes, dragons are born from clouds, tigers are born from wind, and fierce tigers are vigorous and unmatched by humans. If an ordinary person encounters a tiger in the mountains, he must not turn around and run away, because you Turn around and the tiger's minions will come with the strong wind, throw you to the ground, and eat you alive!"

"How about that?"

Hearing what Su Wen said, the audience responded with admiration.

Su Wen smiled lightly: "Only by bluffing the tiger, can there be a chance of survival!"

Everyone was curious: "Can it be cheated?"

Su Wen smiled lightly as before: "It all depends on the guts and capacity of the big bug. If the big bug is timid and full, there is still a little chance of being able to cheat. If the big bug is cruel, hungry and thirsty, So……"

"So how?"

Everyone followed curiously.

Su Wen jokingly smiled: "You can die a hero."

"..."

"Hahaha!"

Everyone was startled when they heard this, and then they realized that they couldn't help laughing, and even laughed out loud.

Such a reaction is no exaggeration.

Entertainment in this world is extremely scarce, and those bad jokes on the Internet in the previous life can make the audience in this world feel novelty and greatly benefit.

If it wasn't for the rigid requirement that the collection of books in the sea of ​​books should be used as the foundation to obtain the aura of everyone, Su Wen wouldn't need to take the risk of talking about anti-books such as Water Margin, but just telling jokes would be able to gain a foothold in the bookstore, and even serve as a The "commercial star" made his debut and became a hot and popular celebrity.

Telling jokes is much safer than telling stories.

Unfortunately, if this is not true, Su Wen can only return to the subject amidst the laughter of the crowd: "But ordinary people are ordinary people, and Wu Song is Wu Song. Although the eye-catching white-fronted tiger is fierce, it can't scare heroes like Wu Erlang. heroes.

Wu Song stood on top of the bluestone, his body like a bow string full of the moon, he was ready to fight this eye-catching white-fronted tiger to the death.

Wu Song is majestic and intimidating, but the eye-catching white-fronted tiger is a vicious beast in the mountains, with a ferocious nature. He has not eaten today, is hungry and thirsty, and is even more crazy. He immediately jumped up and flew towards Wu Song on the bluestone. go! "

At this point, Su Wen paused suddenly, raised everyone's hearts in an instant, and then hammered down again: "That big worm is vigorous and extremely fast, if it flies through the forest one by one, ordinary people don't even have time to react!"

"hiss!"

Everyone in the audience gasped, looking nervously at Su Wen on the stage.

Naturally, Su Wen would not spoil the mood of the audience at this time, and immediately said: "Pi Lian flew by, and there was no one on the bluestone, but I saw a colorful big insect falling to the ground in the bushes, and the roar was raging, it was extremely frightening !"

"Where is Wu Song going?"

"Could it be hit by that big worm?"

"Don't make any noise, let the gentleman continue talking!"

Everyone was nervous, staring at the high platform.

Su Wen, however, smiled: "The tiger just landed, and before turning around, he saw a person flying down, like Mount Tai pressing down on the tiger's back, it was Wu Song, as fast and fierce as that tiger, even less powerful than him!"

"call!"

Hearing this, everyone breathed a sigh of relief.

Unexpectedly, Su Wen said again: "The tiger's back was pressed down by Wu Song, and it became even more fierce. It roared like a thunderbolt from the blue sky, shaking the hills, and the tail of the tiger stood up, and it swept across like an iron bar. The crackling smashed the surrounding trees into pieces!"

"Huh!"

"This big bug is so fierce!"

"It must have become a spirit monster (Liao third sound)!"

"Is this the legendary riding a tiger?"

Everyone spoke in succession, all of them were frightened by the ferocious power of the tiger.

It's not that Su Wen intentionally added drama to the white-fronted tiger with dangling eyes, but that the white-fronted tiger with dangling eyes is so fierce in the original novel of the Water Margin, far surpassing the other tigers that appeared on the stage.

It is also because of the ferociousness of this eye-catching white-fronted tiger that Wu Song's reputation for fighting tigers in Jingyanggang is so prominent, and it can even be said that he became a god in one battle.

There are many characters who have fought tigers in Water Margin. For example, Li Kui killed four tigers in anger, two big and small. The number is much larger than Wu Song, but the reputation is far less than Wu Song.

Because the performance of the four tigers that Li Kui beheaded and the eye-catching white-fronted tiger that was killed by Wu Song on Jingyang Ridge were not at the same level.

Of course, this is not important, what is important is that Su Wen's way of talking about the eye-catching white-fronted worm is "respecting the original" and will not consume any aura.

Then Wu Song's performance was different.

(End of this chapter)