People are in Tokyo, there is a wishing machine

Chapter 23 Live Show
Hirozawa Higashino thinks it is not difficult to make a galgame, but of course it is not.

Abe Gao knew from the beginning that it was not easy to make a galgame, and he never planned to do it alone, but wanted to find like-minded people to work together.

He has been recruiting peers since his freshman year in high school.

In the beginning, there were indeed some people who were interested and joined the production team, but various things happened in the middle, and now he is the only one who is still persisting.

Higashino Hirosawa is a long-lost person who is interested in making galgames.

"Of course, otherwise I wouldn't have come to look for you, senior."

Higashino Hirosawa nodded affirmatively.

"Yes, that's great, what's your name?"

"My name is Hirosawa Higashino, senior Abe Gao."

"Oh, Higashino-kun. Then do you know how to make galgames? Is there anything you are good at?"

"Understood, I'm good at screenwriting and drawing."

"really?"

Abe Gao thought that it would be great if this junior could help him a little bit, as he really couldn't do it alone.

Seeing that the Tokyo Doujin Comic Expo in June is only more than a month away, no matter how hard he tries, he will barely catch up at most. If there is an accident in the middle, he will have to give up.

And he missed the Tokyo Doujin Comic Con in June, so he can only wait another four months to participate in the Tokyo Doujin Comic Con in October.

It is also a fan exhibition, but there is a big difference between the two exhibitions.

In June’s comic exhibition, most of the participants are the works of fan lovers from high school and university clubs. The scale is relatively small, but it is easier to apply for a position in the comic exhibition, and it is more suitable for newcomers.

The comic exhibition in October is the largest fan exhibition of the year, with an unprecedented scale. There are many people applying for sales positions. There are many very powerful production teams, and even some official production staff will participate in it.

If you want to apply for admission to sales, you must submit the corresponding materials. The organizer will only give you a sales position if your work has a certain quality.

As a galgame, the so-called certain quality mainly depends on Lihui illustrations.

However, this aspect is currently his disadvantage. Even if he is given another four months, unless he can replace all the illustrations he finally got together, it will be difficult to make a big difference.

As for changing illustrations, the difficulty was not the time, but that he couldn't find a better one to change.

For Abe Gao, the quality of the work will not be too bad whether it is June or October, but if you delay to participate in October, you are unlucky and may be rejected during the review.

So if he can participate in the exhibition in June, he doesn't want to delay until October.

"Are you good at drawing?"

Hearing that Hirosawa Hirosawa was good at painting at this time, Gao Abe felt hit by a huge surprise.

The whole game has been produced up to now, the most delayed progress is the illustration and vertical painting.

Add someone who is good at drawing, and the game is likely to catch up with the June comic.

There are a few low-quality illustrations among them, which can also be replaced to make the game higher quality.

"Of course, I'm very good at it. In Sakura City High School, no one is better at it than me!"

LV7's painting ability is powerful in all aspects, and it has no problem in beating the art teacher of Yingcheng High School.

"Is this...really? Is there a drawing for me to take a look at?"

But Gao Abe hesitated after hearing Higashino Hirosawa's words.

Higashino Hirosawa is really too immodest, this is not the attitude that juniors should have when speaking to seniors.

Abe Gao wondered if he was invited to tease him to watch his jokes.

"No, but I can show it live."

Higashino Hirosawa said.

live show?

Abe was taken aback.

How to show this, the lunch break is only 40 minutes in total, and now the next class is only a little over 10 minutes away.

Could it be that Mr. Dongye wants to follow his example and skip classes?

"Borrow the pen and paper from seniors."

There are pencils and manuscript paper beside Takao Abe.

When writing the script and making the game, he would conceive some necessary character scenes at the same time, draw a rough sketch on the draft paper, and then ask someone to help draw it.

"Please."

Abe Gao wanted to know how Higashino Hirosawa would show it.

Hirosawa Higashino picked up a pencil and manuscript paper, and sat down beside him.

He closed his eyes slightly, and when he opened them a few seconds later, the pencil moved quickly.

What is this doing?
Abe Gao couldn't understand.

The speed at which the pencil moves makes me feel like I am writing vigorously.

He couldn't help walking behind Hirosawa Higashino, trying to see what he was doing.

Is this really painting?
Walking behind Higashino Hirosawa, Abe Gao couldn't help but widen his eyes.

Higashino Hirosawa is not writing, but drawing at a very fast speed.

The more he looked, the more shocked Abe Taka was.

too fast!
In just over a minute, the whole painting has a rough outline.

And this painting is nothing else, Abe Gao can tell at a glance that what Hirosawa Higashino painted is the scene of him typing on the keyboard alone in the game department room.

10 minute later.

Abe Taka was completely silent.

Hirosawa Higashino's painting is fully completed.

The lines of the draft look a bit rough, but apart from the roughness, it gives people a sense of boldness and unrestrainedness.

Considering the time it takes, this isn't a disadvantage at all.

And the black and white sketches drawn in just 10 minutes, the game department and the people bowing their heads to type in the painting reveal a sense of tranquility and loneliness.

Abe Gao was all too familiar with this feeling.

Did it really take only 10 minutes to draw?

Hadn't witnessed it with his own eyes, Abe Gao couldn't believe it at all.

"Senior Abe, what do you think?"

Higashino Hirosawa asked with a smile.

In fact, he was afraid of frightening Abe Gao, so he adopted a more normal way of painting, drawing without a single stroke, and the speed has slowed down a lot.

Otherwise, the whole painting can be completed in less than 3 minutes.

"It's amazing! It's amazing! Higashino-kun! Please join me in making galgames! With your paintings, I think we can make a very popular galgame!"

Hearing this, Abe Gao came back to his senses.

He couldn't help shouting excitedly.

With the painting speed of Hirozawa Higashino, it will not be a problem to replace all the illustrations in the game before the comic exhibition in June!
"Of course it's okay to join, but, Senior Abe, can I read the script of the game first. If the script doesn't satisfy me, I won't waste my time drawing it."

It's not that Hirozawa Higashino doesn't believe in Abe Gao, but it's too difficult to write a good script.

Before the time-traveling, there were dozens or even hundreds of galgames released in Japan every year, but after a year, not one of them may be remembered.

That's it, it's still produced by those game companies.

The quality of fan games is even more worrying.

"No problem, I have one here."

Abe Gao didn't think there was a problem with Higashino Hirosawa's words. Higashino Hirosawa proposed to read the script, which just shows that Higashino Hirosawa is not an amateur and really wants to make games.

Abe Gao took out a copy of the script from his schoolbag, a thick stack.

"Thank you senior, are you still in the club room after school, senior? I'll come back then."

Hirosawa Higashino took it.

It was almost afternoon class time, and he was going to take it back to the classroom to watch.

"Yes, I will wait here for you, Higashino-kun."

Abe Gao nodded quickly.

……

There are two classes in the afternoon, modern Chinese and English.

Higashino Hirosawa took advantage of class time to read Abe Gao's script carefully.

In this printed script, there are many traces of revisions made by Takashi Abe with his pen.

The script is about a high school male protagonist and three childhood sweetheart sisters that happened in one summer.

The family of childhood sweethearts opened a ramen shop, and their father had a car accident and was hospitalized just after the summer vacation.

At this time, a western-style restaurant was opened opposite the ramen shop, which took away most of the ramen shop's customers.

The ramen shop is facing a huge crisis of life and death.

In order to prevent the ramen shop from closing down, the hero goes to the ramen shop to help, determined to save the ramen shop.

During this period, the hero and the three sisters had various ambiguous relationships, and experienced events such as the beach return, the festival return, and a series of daily events and so on.

With the help of the male protagonist, the ramen shop not only waited until the father was discharged from the hospital, but also the ramen business improved a lot.

According to the choice, the male protagonist will eventually embark on a different strategy route.

Looking at the whole script, Higashino Hirozawa's evaluation is just that.

general!
Too ordinary!

It can be seen that Gao Abe put a lot of thought into writing this script.

But not to mention that many of the plot arrangements are inappropriate and not deep enough.

The upper limit of this script is inherently low, no matter how the plot is modified, it will be difficult to touch people.

Because of this story, it is difficult for people to empathize with it.

In particular, Abe Gao is not good at writing scripts. Although he tried his best to imitate other galgames and wrote this script, the male protagonist looks like a tool to promote the plot. If you think about it carefully, the script is unreasonable. too much.

This is one of the reasons why it is difficult to resonate.

The only workable place is that in the plot of the three sisters, it can be written and drawn more harshly.

Hirosawa Higashino is capable of doing this.

But Hirosawa Higashino does not intend to do so.

This will turn a galgame into an "excellent work", and the result of it becoming an excellent work is that other people come for the pictures, and people won't watch the plot at all.

Making such a game will not do Higashino Hirosawa any good.

Most importantly, after such an operation, it may not be possible to sell 500 copies.

If Takao Abe's wish is only to sell one or two hundred copies, Hirozawa Higashino would not bother to bother, and it would be enough to draw some high-quality illustrations for Takao Abe.

But the sales of 500 copies is not a small number.

In fan comics, unless the creator already has word-of-mouth and fame, otherwise, if the game wants to achieve this level of sales, it must quickly gain word-of-mouth on the first day after the game is sold, so that more people can reach it on the second and third day. to buy.

With the illustrations drawn by Hirosawa Higashino, using Abe Taka's script may not necessarily fail to sell, after all, Shibuto's word-of-mouth is also word-of-mouth.

But the result is not certain, just possible.

Of course, Hirosawa Higashino didn't want to gamble on luck.

He just wanted to complete the commission quickly and get the wish points.

Since Abe Gao's script is not good, then he will write one himself!
As for which one to write, Higashino Hirosawa also thought about it.

The famous "White Album II"!
(End of this chapter)