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Chapter 24 Script
"White Album II" mainly tells the love story of the hero Haruki Kitahara, the heroine Touma Kazusa, and Ogiso Yukina in high school.

As far as the story goes, a common love triangle.

However, Fumiaki Marudo’s script writes the story very well. The three protagonists, especially the heroine Touma Kazusa and Ogiso Yukina, have successfully portrayed the characters. Most of the players who have played the game will stay. It has a deep memory, and even this game has been praised by many players as "the masterpiece of stomach pain", "the masterpiece of getting rid of the house" and so on.

Many people who have never played games have also heard the name of "White Album II".

Nouns and stalks such as "Bai Xue", "Bai Xue", "Obviously I came first", "Why are you so proficient", etc., are still widely circulated on the Internet ten years after the game was released.

This shows how excellent the lines and script of "White Album II" are.

"White Album II" is Higashino Hirozawa's rare galgame that he played seriously from beginning to end. It took him several days to finish it, and then he had a stomachache for several days before he recovered.

In fact, there are not many galgames that Hirosawa can copy.

Because in most galgames, he is impatient to read all the lines, and if he can't attract him at the beginning, he will jump past with Ctrl.

There are also some that are equally famous, but he didn't play the game because of the animation he watched first.

For example, the script of the equally famous "AIR" is also very good.

But Hirosawa Higashino hadn't played it before, so he couldn't copy it even if he wanted to.

The full version of "White Album II" is very powerful.

But the full version of "White Album II" contains three big chapters: the prologue, the final chapter and the final chapter, and the content is astonishingly large.

If you want to make the complete version of "White Album II" in one go, even if you can get the script and illustrations out at the speed of Hirozawa Higashino, and do nothing else, it will take half a month.

This is of course impossible, he has many things to do.

And even if he could figure it out, the game program would still be a big problem.

Abe Takashi is the only game programmer, and God knows when the game will be produced.

And the game time of the full version of the game is too long, it is really not suitable for sale at the fan exhibition.

So Higashino Hirosawa just planned to copy a prologue.

The game time of the prologue is only 6 to 8 hours if you play it seriously, and you can get it done if you play it quickly for 4 or 5 hours.

The fan exhibition lasts for three days, which is just right for word-of-mouth fermentation.

Of course, three days is just safe insurance.

At that time, Higashino Hirosawa drew the life-like figures of Touma Kazusa and Ogiso Yukina's school concert, and placed them on both sides of the booth.

On one side is the cold and windy Hei Changzhi, and on the other side is the gentle and windy Bai Fumei.

Hirosawa Higashino tried to find a way to get the theme song of the game "Love That Can't Be Conveyed".

The broadcaster is placed in the center, which is guaranteed to be eye-catching enough.

As for dubbing, Hirozawa Higashino will not pursue it, and there is no need to be so exaggerated in the fan exhibition.

Hirozawa Higashino felt that the theme song was bursting.

Higashino Hirosawa quickly calculated, and felt that there was basically no problem.

The prologue text of "White Album II" is not too much, and the game program is even more simple, because the prologue game basically does not require players to choose a route, just watch the plot and finish.

The most difficult thing is to find someone to sing the theme song.

But if you think about it carefully, this is not a problem.

It is very difficult to find someone to sing perfectly, but after all, it is a fan work, and it does not need to be perfect, as long as the emotion of the song can be sung is enough.

All that remains is how to convince Abe Taka.

Will Abe Taka agree to change the script?
Hirosawa Higashino is really not sure.

This is a ruthless person who can insist on making games without even having a girlfriend.

Hirosawa Higashino didn't know why Abe Gao was insisting and what he was insisting on.

The script can be said to be the soul of a galgame. If he is determined to only make games with his own script, Higashino Hirozawa may not be able to persuade him to give up.

But no matter what, you still need to prepare.

He was not in a hurry to write the script. During the English class in the second class, he drew the standing paintings of Touma Kazusa and Ogiso Yukina in detail.

"Tono, what are you drawing? Wow! Who is this, so beautiful!"

At the beginning of the dialogue practice session in English, Kinoshita Hideki turned to Higashino Hirosawa.

Higashino Hirosawa was modifying some details of Touma Kazusa, and Kinoshita Hideki couldn't help but exclaimed in a low voice when he saw that even if it was upside down in his eyes.

With the bonus of LV7 drawing ability, Higashino Hirosawa's drawing of winter horse and yarn at this time is a bit more vivid than the vertical painting in the game.

"Oh, the heroine of a galgame."

Higashino Hirosawa said calmly.

"Which game? Tell me!"

Kinoshita Hideki asked immediately.

Not to mention anything else, it is necessary to have fun just because of the heroine.

"Huh? Here's another one? This one is so pretty, is it also the heroine?"

Kinoshita Hideki then saw Ogiso Yukina standing aside.

"Yes, they are the two heroines of the game."

"Amazing! I just want to know which game they are from, give me their names!"

Kinoshita Hideki said impatiently.

Both heroines are very attractive.

"Sorry, the game hasn't started yet."

Higashino Hirosawa replied with a smile.

"Isn't it? Dongye, are you lying to me? The game hasn't been made yet, so how do you know about them?"

When Kinoshita Hideki heard this, he couldn't help but want to vomit blood, and strongly suspected that Higashino was teasing him.

"It's true that it hasn't been finished yet, but you can look forward to it. It won't be long before you can play it."

Higashino Hirosawa took the opportunity to make amends.

Judging from Kinoshita Hideki's reaction, before participating in the comic exhibition, he can play a dozen advertisements.

Although it may not be possible to get many people to participate in the art exhibition to buy, but if you can sell more copies, it is more insurance.

……

"Higashi-kun, you're here!"

In the game club room, Abe Gao is looking forward to it.

He never felt that the two classes in the afternoon would pass so slowly.

He was worried that Higashino Hiroze would never return, and he was relieved when he saw Hiroze Higashino appearing in the corridor.

"Senior Abe, I've finished reading the script."

"Really? What do you think of the script?"

Abe Takao asked hopefully.

"Senior, do you mind if I tell the truth?"

Higashino Hirosawa looked at Abe Taka.

The script was Takashi Abe's painstaking effort. He did not know how many times he revised it, and he worked hard to write the script well.

Frankly pointing out the shortcomings of the script, I don't know if he can accept it.

Many people will be immersed in their own world and will not tolerate other people's pointing.

"Higashi-kun, you... If you have any opinions, please speak directly!"

Abe Taka was silent for a while, took a deep breath, and said.

"Then I'll just say it straight, senior, please don't take offense."

"First of all, as far as the plot is concerned, the whole story is too simple and straightforward, and there are almost no twists and turns in the process of the story. The childhood sweetheart's family encountered a crisis, and the hero tried to help, and finally got through the crisis. It was intentionally too straightforward, without any waves."

"Because of the lack of story, the character creation is naturally blunt and stereotyped, which can't leave any impression on people. It feels like a character image from another game has been moved over. The male protagonist has especially failed, as soon as he is promoted in the story. The tool man of the plot."

"Overall, the script isn't bad, but it's just too ordinary to leave an impression on people."

Hirosawa Higashino said one by one.

He didn't add oil and vinegar to make Takao Abe give up his script, the actual look and feel of the script is like this.

Hiroze Higashino felt that the entire script was written after imitating the script of a certain game.

In order to make the script look different from the imitated one, Gao Abe made a lot of modifications.

And Gao Abe probably didn't even realize that what he gave up in order to make his script look different was the deepest part of his consciousness.

And this part is precisely the most essential part of the entire game.

As a result, it led to a script that looked okay, but was actually blank and hard to impress.

Of course, this is just his guess, and he doesn't know whether it is actually true.

Abe Gao was listening, the more he listened, the paler his face became.

"Higashi-kun, is this script really so unbearable?"

After a while, Abe Gao couldn't help but asked with a wry smile.

(End of this chapter)