People are in Tokyo, there is a wishing machine

Chapter 25 Insights (recommended)

"You can't say it's unbearable, it just depends on your positioning of the script."

"If you just entertain yourself and don't care how much the game can sell, this script is completely sufficient."

"But if you want to sell well at fancomics, this script can't be done."

Higashino Hirosawa thought for a while and said.

"What if the script is revised?"

Abe Gao struggled and said.

He is not stupid, he is even quite smart, he has already completed all the courses in Yingcheng High School.

He always knew that the script was still lacking, otherwise he would not have revised the script.

It's just that he didn't expect Hirozawa Higashino to have such a low evaluation of the script.

But as Higashino Hirosawa expected, the script was Abe Gao's hard work. He spent too much time and energy on the script, and it was impossible to give up easily.

That is to say, Hirozawa Higashino's painting ability is amazing, and Gao Abe believes that Hirozawa Higashino is also good at scripts.

In other words, he wouldn't listen at all.

"Modification? A small amount of modification is meaningless. It may make the script better, but fundamentally, it makes no difference."

"And if a lot of revisions are made to the script from beginning to end, what's the difference between changing the script?"

Higashino Hirosawa shook his head.

This script needs to be overhauled. Except for the name of the protagonist, the plot basically needs to be completely changed in order to make a qualitative change in the script.

It's just so thankless, it's better to write a new script directly.

The theme of the script itself is low-level, no matter how it is modified, it is difficult to make a breakthrough.

"Senior Abe, there are always things that people are not good at. You can't think that you are better than others in everything. Just like me, although I can draw and write scripts, I can't write programs."

Hirosawa Higashino persuaded.

To be a person is to be a bit of a force, just like him, he is very forceful, and he will never compare himself with a girl to have a child.

"Mr. Higashino, make some revisions to the script, and then rely on the illustrations you drew to make the game sell [-]... no, wouldn't it be okay to have [-] copies?"

Abe Gao was still unwilling to give up.

"Two hundred copies? Of course it is possible."

"However, Abe-senpai, this is the first time I have participated in the production of a galgame. I don't want the pictures I drew to appear at the comic exhibition in an imperfect way."

"The script is your painstaking effort, Senior Abe, but the paintings I draw are also my painstaking efforts!"

"Also, Abe-senpai, what is the purpose of your making galgame? Is it just to make the game with the script you wrote sell more copies? But have you ever thought that if you rely on my illustrations, the game will sell more? More sales, what will those players who bought the game say?"

"The plot is mediocre, wasting the illustrations? Or is the plot not worthy of the illustrations?"

"Are you happy that the game finally got such a review?"

Abe-senpai, you are dishonest.

There are still 500 copies in the wish entrustment, but you only said 200 copies.

If there are only 200 copies, he will readily help with illustrations and the job will be over.

500 copies is very difficult, but if the picture of the heroine is a little rough, there is still a good chance that 200 copies will be sold.

As Higashino Hirosawa spoke, he complained fiercely in his heart.

Hirosawa Higashino's words were heartbreaking, making Abe feel as if he had fallen into an ice cave.

With the illustrations of Hirosawa Higashino, the sales of the game will definitely increase, and it will increase a lot.

But what does that have to do with the game scripts he wrote?

There is a high probability of being ridiculed for trashing scripts and wasting illustrations.

But, but, let him change all the scripts now...

Abe Gao's tangled and struggling mood appeared vividly on his face.

Higashino Hirosawa could see that Gao Abe was holding on to the last straw that would bend the camel's back, and he was only a short step away from making him give up.

However, Higashino Hirozawa couldn't say much about this last step, and besides, it didn't have much effect.

This requires Gao Abe to take time to figure out why he made the game.

"Senior Abe, you should think about it first. These are the two heroines I am going to draw. You can take a look and make a decision when you have time."

Higashino Hirosawa left behind two illustrations of Touma Kazusa and Ogiso Yukina, and turned to leave.

Walking out of the club room, Hirosawa Higashino was surprised to see that Aida-senpai was standing against the wall outside the door.

Aida-senpai should have heard everything he and Senior Abe said.

Aida-senpai quickly caught up with Higashino Hirosawa.

A faint fragrance of cosmetics hits the nostrils.

"Hi Higashino-kun, I'm Aida Katawa from Class 1 of the third year, Abe's girlfriend."

After a little distance from the game department, Kataha Aida introduced himself to Higashino Hirosawa.

"Hello, Aida-senpai, what's the matter?"

Higashino Hirosawa asked curiously.

"Higashino-kun, Abe is too pitiful, please don't give up on Abe, now only you can help Abe!"

Aida-senpai pleaded.

"Why do you say that, Aida-senpai. I just transferred here this semester, so I don't know anything about Abe-senpai."

Hirozawa Higashino also wanted to know what made Abe Gao so insist on making games.

If you can figure it out, maybe you can have a better understanding of the wishing machine.

"Higashino-kun is a handsome man just like Abe. If you think about it, you know that while many people think you are handsome, they really want to see your jokes."

"Abe is actually very good in both sports and studies. The only bad thing is that he wants to make galgames."

Tsk, senior, what are you talking nonsense about!

However, if Gao Abe doesn't want to make galgames, he is the perfect template for ordinary high school students.

"The game department of Sakura City High School has actually had a bad reputation in the past few years. People who really like to play games basically don't enter the game department. Instead, some people have nothing to do and want to find an activity department, but they don't want to be under the supervision of teachers." Only students can enter the game department."

"Those people don't welcome Abe, because Abe's existence will prevent them from playing in the club room as they like."

"After knowing that Abe wanted to make a galgame, they all laughed at Abe."

"Abe ignored them, and found a few classmates in school who had the same idea of ​​making games as him."

"After more than half a year of hard work, they successfully produced a galgame game and participated in the fan exhibition."

"But as a result, the sales of the game were poor, and less than one hundred copies were sold in total."

"Before participating in the comic exhibition, a few people had great ambitions, and felt that even if the game didn't become a hit, it could sell a lot of copies. The students who participated in the production, before the exhibition, confidently said that the game could sell well."

"This has become the laughing stock of others. After the comic exhibition, those who don't understand Abe in the game club laughed at Abe to their heart's content, and even publicized the matter in the school, mocking Abe for being overconfident."

Aida-senpai recalled.

Go away in prosperity, but return in defeat?

It's all too true that the game sold less than a hundred copies.

But this doesn't mean that the game is necessarily bad. In fact, if you don't have a reputation, if you go to a fan show, most people will end up like this.

There are even worse ones.

"Abe didn't give up at this point. He convinced those disappointed companions that although some people left in the end, newcomers still joined in. There were two more people involved in the production than before."

"This time they worked hard again for more than half a year and participated in the fan comic exhibition in June last year."

"As a result, although the game sold more than the last one, it still failed to sell more than one hundred copies."

"The people in the game department have been waiting to see Abe's jokes for a long time. They also found comments from game buyers on the Internet. Those game buyers all said that the game is too rubbish. Although the illustrations are okay, the plot is very boring. Playing this game is a waste of life."

"Under the propaganda of those people in the game department, the matter spread all over Yingcheng High School."

"As a result, the game production team began to have infighting, accusing each other of being wrong. Although Abe begged hard, no one was willing to stay this time. Not only that, after Abe wanted to find someone else, no one was willing to pay attention to Abe. Just Even when Abe went to the members of the art department to draw some illustrations and even give some compensation, many people refused to agree due to various concerns."

For two consecutive years without grades, the producer became a joke on campus.

The production team was disbanded due to internal strife, which is completely understandable.

After all, they were originally generating electricity for love, and the games they produced didn't even have the most basic praise, and they had to be the object of others' ridicule, which was unbearable for a normal person.

However, Higashino Hirosawa smelled something strange in Aida-senpai's words.

"Senior Aida, are there many negative reviews from buyers found online?"

"At least twenty or thirty buyers said so."

Aida-senpai thought about it and said.

Twenty or thirty?

There is indeed a problem.

There are too many!
Anime fans who buy games at Doujin Comics will basically buy things with the intention of stepping on the pit.

If you buy good things, you will have a discerning eye. If you buy bad ones, you will be mentally prepared and don’t get too entangled. Just support the creators.

Unless Abe-senpai and the others made the game intentionally to deceive people, it is impossible to have so many bad reviews on the Internet if the sales volume is less than [-] copies.

Judging from Aida-senpai's words, Abe Gao's second game should be of a certain quality.

After all, I already had the experience of making a game. There were many people at that time, and the script should not be decided by Senior Abe alone.

"Abe-senpai has the script of last year's game, does Aida-senpai have it, I want to see it."

Higashino Hirosawa decided to read the script before talking.

"I have it in my laptop, wait for me for a while, and I'll get it for you."

Aida-senpai said quickly.

Soon, Aida-senpai came over with a computer bag containing a laptop.

"I also installed the game, together with the script, in the "My Favorite Games" directory on the D drive, you can find it after opening it. It will take a lot of time to read it, so you can take it back and read it slowly, Mr. Dongye. It’s not very useful, there’s no privacy inside, you don’t need to worry about anything, Higashino-kun.”

Aida-senpai handed the computer to Hirosawa Higashino, and added thoughtfully.

"Okay, I'll return it to you senior after I finish reading."

Higashino Hirozawa nodded.

The precious computer is handed over to unfamiliar people like this. Aida-senpai seems to be either very rich, or she has a deep love for Abe-senpai.

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