Ballistic Silence of Special Years

Chapter 447 The Brigadier Came Personally

Officer Huang sat at his desk, with a small magnetic blackboard erected beside it, on which several pages of manuscripts were clamped with magnets, arranged in the order of 12345, as neat as soldiers in line.

"...the air is filled with a choking smell..."

Officer Huang read the manuscript to himself.

After reading this, I stopped.

Tilting his head and thinking for a long time, he marked this sentence with the red soldier, then turned his gaze back to the computer screen in front of him, found this sentence, and changed it.

Then read it again.

"...the narrow tunnel is filled with a pungent smell..."

After reading it three times in a row, a gratified smile appeared, and the reading continued.

This is a special habit of Huang Xianjin.

He doesn't like to proofread and revise on the computer. He likes to complete a manuscript in one go, then print it out and stick it on the small blackboard next to his desk, and then people read it while reading it, with full of voice and emotion.

In his view, every reader actually reads the text in his heart, even if he does not make a sound, he will read it.

Therefore, only by reading it once can you know how to choose words and make sentences more contagious.

Reading and studying, you must read to read the book.

This is Huang Xianjin's little trick. He thinks it is an important reason why he can write well.

When reading the third page, Xiao Tu suddenly came in.

"Officer Huang."

Huang Jinjin was intoxicated with righteous thoughts, and was suddenly interrupted by Xiao Tu. He was taken aback, turned around and looked at Xiao Tu with a sullen expression, and said, "I said Xiao Tu, can you knock on the door next time?" Calling someone? Suddenly being called out like that by you almost knocked me out of my body!"

"I'm sorry..."

Xiao Tu responded, but she was very unhappy in her heart.

The problem... really...

It's not an independent office. There are six people in this office, including Director Huang. What door does the big office knock on?

Hypocritical!

Thinking so in his heart, his mouth was still very polite: "Officer Huang, the director asked you to come over."

"The director let me go?"

Hearing that the director was looking for him, the anger on Huang Jinjin's face subsided a little.

Xiao Tu said, "Yes."

Huang Jinjin put down the manuscript in his hand, got up and put on his hat, and tidied up in front of the military mirror at the door after going out, and then walked towards the director's office.

The director's office is upstairs, take the first room on the right after going up the stairs.

Huang Jinjin was thinking all the way, is the director anxious to read the first draft of his Tiger Brigade report?

But after thinking about it, it shouldn't be, I have to read the first draft, and I will send it over immediately when I get a call, why let Xiao Tu call me to go there in person?
When he got to the door, he didn't even think about it.

tuk tuk-

Huang Xianjin knocked on the door of the office.

"Come in."

The director's voice came from inside.

Huang Jinjin pushed open the door triumphantly, and immediately burst into a smile on his face.

"Director, are you looking for..."

He had only spoken halfway, when he suddenly noticed that there were other people in the director's office.

The guest was a colonel, and there was a majestic aura at first glance, even Huang Jinjin who had just entered the door could feel it.

"You are looking for me..."

Huang Jinjin said hello and walked over.

The director didn't say anything, and directly introduced the senior guest in front of Qian.

"This is the brigade commander of the Tiger Brigade, solemn. He came today to understand something, and you can talk about it later."

"Understood the matter?" Huang Jinjin's brain suddenly heated up several degrees, feeling a little guilty for no reason.

"what's up?"

Solemnly said: "Officer Huang, right? Sit down first, and we'll talk after you sit down."

He pointed to the chair in front of him.

Huang Jinjin sat down in the chair anxiously, and quietly looked at the solemnity a few times in the process.

Seeing is better than hearing.

Sure enough, the imposing manner is compelling, especially those eyes, that kind of look...

"I came here today to correct one thing."

Solemnly took out a newspaper from the document bag in front of him, unfolded it, put it on the table, and tapped it with two fingers.

"Is this report written by Officer Huang?"

In fact, at a glance, Huang Xianjin knew which newspaper and which report it was.

Isn't it the report that was published in the military newspaper?
The article about Li Zheng.

I'm really afraid of what's coming.

Huang Xianjin pretended to be calm, picked up the newspaper and pretended to read it, and then said calmly: "Yes, I wrote this report. Is there any problem with Brigadier Zhuang?"

The solemn face seemed to be even colder, and he said lightly: "Do you think there is nothing wrong?"

Huang Jinjin suddenly felt a burning sensation on his face. Of course he knew where the problem was, but in front of the director, he couldn't just say that he was writing nonsense. Wouldn't it be fatal?
If the director really got angry, the idea of ​​staying behind would be soap bubbles blown in the sun, which would burst with a snap.

He swallowed and said, "Brigade Commander Zhuang, my level is limited, and I really don't see any problems. Can you give me some pointers?"

Zhuang Yan probably had already anticipated Huang Jinjin's reaction. Of course, he didn't want to scold people face to face. After all, cursing people because of this kind of thing made him look like a member of the Tiger Brigade. It was not his solemn style.

However, since you want to give pointers, then you can give him pointers.

So he pointed to the above text and pointed out sentence by sentence, exactly the same places and details as what Li Zheng pointed out at that time.

At the end, Zhuang Yan summed it up: "When writing a report, you should not write indiscriminately, and you must respect the facts. Officer Huang, you may think that this is not a big deal, but it is very unfair to the parties involved, and it may even cause some unnecessary troubles. "

Huang Jinjin's face turned red long ago, but he was still struggling, pretending to be very sincere but still unwilling to admit any mistakes, he said: "Thank you very much for Brigadier Zhuang who personally pointed out my problems in the propaganda department, but I wrote In this report, the details were indeed somewhat artistic, but they were all well-intentioned. There was no negative comment on your Tiger Brigade comrades in the entire text, and they were all words of praise. If you say I'm not satisfied, it's just a matter of the characters. I admit that I think Li Zheng, a recruit, is more newsworthy, while Hou Jun doesn't have so many bright spots. The bright spots are the key to writing. Only by grasping them can the whole report be sublimated ..."

"Shit Sublimation!"

bang——

Solemn finally couldn't hold back.

After Huang Jinjin made a lot of nonsense, the fire in his heart finally came up.

"It's just a matter of ink!? Do you know, what kind of harm will you bring to Hou Jun when you write like this?! Do you know that because of your scribbles, the army sent the report to the military area for Li Zheng and Hou Jun's light work?" Already stuck at the Political Department?! Do you want to know the reason? The Political Department stated the reason for the refusal—the details of the story are doubtful! This is your 'inking' problem?!"

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(End of this chapter)